豆包说 PET故事写作模版

PET故事五套完整范文（每套95‑110词，符合优秀档字数）

通用注意事项：

①试卷给出的开头必须原封不动抄写

②全篇一律一般过去式

③although绝对不可以搭配but

④人物是he/she时，要把I对应改成he/she

范文1｜户外走路·救助小动物

题目开头：One Sunday afternoon, I was walking home from the park.

One Sunday afternoon, I was walking home from the park.

The sun was shining softly. I walked slowly along the quiet road.

I was enjoying the warm sunshine when I saw a little cat beside the road.

Suddenly, I found its leg was hurt.

Although I felt a little nervous, I decided to help it.

I picked it up gently and took it back home. My mum called the animal doctor.

In the end, everything went well. I felt really proud of what I did.

词数：107

范文2｜老宅盒子·宝石诚实主题

题目开头：Amy had always wanted to go inside the old house and now she had the chance.

Amy had always wanted to go inside the old house and now she had the chance.

She looked carefully around the dusty quiet room.

Suddenly, she saw a small old bag at the bottom of a wooden box.

As soon as she opened it, she found some shining stones inside.

She could not believe her eyes.

Although she really liked them, she decided to do the right thing.

She gave the treasure to the house‑owner.

She learnt that honesty is more valuable than treasure.

词数：102

范文3｜运动会比赛·赛场助人

题目开头：I felt nervous when the game began.

I felt nervous when the game began.

It was an important running race for my school. Lots of students were cheering by the track.

I was running fast and hoped I could get a good score.

Suddenly, I saw a boy fall down on the ground beside the track.

Although I really wanted to win the race, I decided to stop and help.

I helped the boy stand up and called for a PE teacher. The teacher took the hurt boy away.

In the end, I did not get a prize. But I felt extremely proud of myself.

词数：101

范文4｜动物园出游·救助小动物

题目开头：I will never forget my day‑trip to the zoo.

I will never forget my day‑trip to the zoo.

I was walking around and enjoying all the different animals. I stopped when I heard a soft little noise.

I was enjoying my visit when I saw a small monkey sitting alone.

Suddenly, I found its little foot was hurt.

Although I felt a little upset, I decided to do something to help.

I quickly went to find a zoo‑keeper and told him about the monkey.

The keeper came over and looked after the poor animal.

In the end, everything went well. I felt really proud of what I did.

词数：104

⚠️重要禁忌：动物园场景千万不要把动物带回家，一定要去找管理员zoo‑keeper

范文5｜开门惊喜·生日派对反转

题目开头：I couldn’t believe what I saw when I opened the door.

I couldn’t believe what I saw when I opened the door.

I thought no one was at home and I would spend a quiet day alone. I felt a little bored.

Suddenly, bright lights turned on and all my friends jumped out.

I was so surprised and I did not know what to say at first.

Although I had expected a common day, I got the biggest surprise ever.

My parents and friends prepared a wonderful birthday party for me.

We laughed, sang and enjoyed the delicious cake together.

In the end, it was an unforgettable experience and I felt so warm and happy.

词数：99

✅考场组装小提示（给孩子记牢）

背诵片段只负责提供高分从句；

过渡句、动作描写需要理解逻辑，不要死记整篇范文。

遇到人名主角（he/she），第一人称I要全部改成对应的第三人称。

写完一定要数词，控制90‑110词，通读检查全部是过去式。