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期中测试 (限时:60分钟 满分:120分) INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\\初中英语\\典中点八英R\\二 维码期中.tif" \* MERGEFORMATINET 听力部分(20分) 一、 听句子, 选择与句意相符的图片, 每个句子读一遍(每小题1分, 共5分) 1. A. B. C. INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\\初中英语\\典中点八英 R\\爬山 1.C.TIF" \* MERGEFORMATINET 2. A. B. C. INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\\初中英语\\典中点八英R\\英语书 2.c.TIF" \* MERGEFORMATINET 3. A. B. C. INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\\初中英语\\典中点八英 R\\老虎 3.C.TIF" \* MERGEFORMATINET 4. A. B. C. INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\\初中英语\\典中点八英R\\男消防 员 4.C.TIF" \* MERGEFORMATINET5. A. B. C. INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\\初中英语\\典中点八英R\\5.C 男孩 看轮船和小船.TIF" \* MERGEFORMATINET 二、听五段对话, 选出能回答所给问题的最佳答案, 每段对话读两遍(每小题1分, 共5分) 6. How often does the boy drink milk? A. Once a day. B. Once a week. C. Twice a day. 7. What does the girl usually do at night? A. She usually watches TV. B. She usually does her homework. C. She usually helps with the housework. 8. What program does the girl's father like best? A. The news. B. Sports shows. C. Talent shows. 9. Who is the tallest? A. Jenny. B. Lily. C. Lucy. 10. How many people will go to the movies? A. Forty. B. Fortyone. C. Fortytwo. 三、听对话和问题, 选择正确答案, 每段对话读两遍(每小题1分, 共5分) 听第一段对话, 回答第11至12小题。 11. A. The boy's father. B. The boy's mother. C. The boy. 12. A. He cooks breakfast. B. He cleans the room. C. He exercises. 听第二段对话, 回答第13至15小题。 13. A. A weekend student helper. B. Primary school students. C. Teachers. 14. A. Jenny. B. Jack. C. Joy. 15. A. On weekends. B. On school days. C. Not mentioned. 四、听力填词, 请听下面一段独白, 写出适当单词, 每空限填一词(每小题1分, 共5分) Nancy is my cousin. She is ________(16). She has a warm ________(17). She is always ready to help others. She is ________(18) in dancing. She is a good ________(19). She won many prizes. Maybe one day she will be a ________(20) person.笔试部分(100分) 五、单项选择(每小题1分, 共10分) 21. The boy didn't find much ________ about the topic on that website. A. report B. article C. information D. story 22. There is ________ in the program, so ________ is interested in it. A. nothing interesting; no one B. something interested; anyone C. interesting anything; someone D. nothing interesting; someone 23. —China is over 5, 000 years old. It's one of ________countries in the world. —Yes. It has much ________history than the USA. A. old; long B. older; longer C. older; the longest D. the oldest; longer 24. —________ does Tom go to the swimming club? —Once a week. A. How often B. How long C. How soon D. How much 25. My mother expects ________ around the world. A. to go B. going C. goes D. went 26. It was raining too ________, so we could ________ see anything below. A. hard; hard B. hard; hardly C. hardly; hardly D. hardly; hard 27. Amanda read the article ________, and found something important in it. (2017·黔南州) A. enough careful B. carefully enough C. enough carefully D. careful enough 28. ________ great news that we will watch the action movie! A. How B. What C. What a D. What an 29. ________the player tried his best, he lost the game at last. A. Also B. But C. Although D. However30. —I got an “A”in my math test. —________ A. Long time no see. B. You did a good job. C. Thank you. D. It doesn't matter. 六、完形填空(每小题1. 5分, 共15分) A lot of people play sports, but very________31people become sports professionals(专业人 员). If sports aren't going to be your future, then why should you play them? Why should you train every day? Why should you work hard and feel sore( 酸 痛 的 )the next day? Wouldn't it be________32to forget sports and only pay attention to your lessons? There are actually a lot of good________33to play sports. First of all, sports are a great way to exercise. Exercising keeps you________34and strong. It also helps you stay in a good state. When you exercise, your body produces endorphins(内啡肽). Endorphins give you more energy and make you feel happier. Sports are important for everyone, but they are________35important for young people. They teach young people about winning and losing. ________36,__they teach young people how to talk and work as a team. ________37,__when you play football, you must learn________38to talk with your teammates and work together. Sports teach young people to respect their coaches, teammates, and people they fight against as well. Many reports say that sports help young people stay out of trouble. If a young person plays sports, he or she is________39likely to have problems. This is because sports teach people about rules. They also teach people that if they work hard, they might________40. Sports will help you become a better and happier person. Sports will help you make friends and stay healthy. Here is another good reason to play sports: Sports are fun. 31. A. a few B. few C. a little D. little 32. A. better B. best C. worse D. worst 33. A. results B. ways C. reasons D. differences 34. A. healthy B. tall C. necessary D. simple 35. A. especially B. seriously C. exactly D. finally 36. A. Too B. Nearly C. Also D. Only 37. A. Such as B. At all C. As well D. For example 38. A. when B. how C. what D. why39. A. less B. least C. more D. most 40. A. drop B. succeed C. pass D. miss 七、阅读理解(每小题2分, 共30分) A About 10 years ago, Wu Lei was just a child star. He was in many advertisements and TV dramas. Born in 1999, Wu has turned into a real actor in recent years. He plays the leading role in the movie Asura (《阿修罗》). He works with big names including Liang Jiahui and Liu Jialing. In Wu's own words, he is a “hot” person. Indeed, with shiny eyes and a big smile, he looks youthful and energetic. Though he has acted in more than 40 TV dramas since 2005, he keeps his playful side. When he acted in Tornado Girl 《( 旋风少女》), he played with the props (道具) in his free time. His coworkers all saw him as an “active” guy. In his free time, he loves playing basketball. He loves acting. “When I finish a shot well, it's just like making a threepoint shot on the basketball court. It's so cool. ” he told sohu. com. Hu Ge, 36, who worked with him in Nirvana in Fire (《琅琊榜》), praised him for his “talented” acting. However, Wu is not simply an actor. He seems to be an example for the post1995 generation (95 后). Even he himself actively speaks for his generation. “I feel we are more independent and creative. We are not afraid to express our own ideas, ” he told thepaper. cn. “The bad thing is that we don't often talk with our family. ” This opinion wins people's hearts. 41. Wu Lei has acted in more than________TV dramas since 2005. A. 10 B. 20 C. 30 D. 40 42. Wu Lei plays the leading role in the movie________. A. Nirvana in Fire B. Tornado Girl C. Asura D. The Legend of the Condor Heroes 43. According to the passage, we know________. A. Wu Lei is afraid of something B. Wu Lei is talented C. Wu Lei doesn't talk with his family D. Wu Lei wants to be more independent and creative 44. Which of the following is right?A. Wu Lei was just a child star. B. Wu Lei is over 20 years old. C. Wu Lei has worked with famous actors/actress. D. Wu Lei likes playing football. 45. By reading the passage we can know Hu Ge may be a(n)________. A. actor B. director C. basketball player D. teacher B Films in UME Cinema this week INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\ \初中英语\\典中点八英R\\YA6.tif" \* MERGEFORMATINET Name: Wolf Warriors 2(《战狼2》) Director: Wu Jing Main actor: Wu Jing, Lu Jingshan (Celina Jade) Time: From Monday to Wednesday at 8:00 p. m. Type: War and action Ticket price: ¥50 INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\ \初中英语\\典中点八英R\\YA7.tif" \* MERGEFORMATINET Name: The Founding of An Army(《建军大业》) Director: Liu Weiqiang Main actor: Liu Ye, Zhu Yawen Time: From Wednesday to Friday at 8:00 p. m. Type: History Ticket price: ¥40 INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\ \初中英语\\典中点八英R\\YA8.tif" \* MERGEFORMATINET Name: The Son of Bigfoot (《我的爸 爸是森林之王》) Director: Ben Stassen Main actor: Christopher L. Parson, Joe Thomas, Cinda Adams Time: From Friday to Sunday at 7:30 p. m. Type: Comedy Ticket price: ¥30 (Half on Sunday for children)INCLUDEPICTURE \d "C:\\Users\\Administrator\\Desktop\ \初中英语\\典中点八英R\\YA9.tif" \* MERGEFORMATINET Name: The Fate of the Furious (《速 度与激情:宿命》) Director: F. Gary Gray Main actor: Vin Diesel, Dwayne Johnson, Charlize Theron Time: From Tuesday to Thursday at 8:00 p. m. Type: Action Ticket price: ¥45 46. How many films are put on on Wednesday? A. Four. B. Three. C. Two. D. One. 47. The director of Wolf Warriors 2 is________. A. Wu Jing B. Liu Weiqiang C. Ben Stassen D. F. Gary Gray 48. Mrs. Green wants to watch The Son of Bigfoot with her tenyearold son on Sunday. She should pay________. A. 30 yuan B. 35 yuan C. 40 yuan D. 45 yuan 49. Which of the films is about history? A. Wolf Warriors 2 B. The Founding of An Army C. The Son of Bigfoot D. The Fate of the Furious 50. Three main actors are mentioned in the films________. A. Wolf Warriors 2 and The Founding of An Army B. Wolf Warriors 2 and The Son of Bigfoot C. The Son of Bigfoot and The Fate of the Furious D. The Founding of An Army and The Fate of the Furious C Work is helpful to health. Scientists find that the hardworking people live longer than those who have no jobs. Studies show that the jobless are in poorer health than jobholders. Career(职业) women are healthier than housewives.Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness (孤独). Researches show that people feel unhappy and worried when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest people are those who are busy. Many high achievers who love their careers feel they are the happiest when they are working hard. They work as a bridge between dream and reality, so they have energy every day. By work, people get to know each other. By taking part in all kinds of activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss(丧失) of work means the loss of everything. __It__ affects man's spirit and it will cause more illnesses. Besides, work gives one a sense of hope and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status(形象)in society. When a writer finishes his writing or a doctor successfully operates on a patient or a teacher sees his students grow, they are very happy. From the above, we can come to a conclusion: the more you work, the happier and healthier you will be. 51. How will people feel when they have nothing to do from the passage? A. Relaxed and excited. B. Happy but bored. C. Worried and unhappy. D. Relaxed but unhappy. 52. Who are the real happiest people? A. Those who are rich. B. Those who are friendly. C. Those who are famous. D. Those who are busy. 53. The underlined word “It” in the passage means ________. A. the loss of happiness B. the loss of work C. the loss of energy D. the loss of health 54. What's the main idea of this passage? A. If you are happy, you will have more work to do. B. If you are healthy, you will have more work to do. C. The more you work, the happier you will be. D. The more work you do, the more money you will have. 55. Maybe the passage is from________. A. a magazine B. a story C. a song D. a TV show 八、词汇运用(每小题1分, 共10分) A)用所给词的正确形式填空56. Mo Yan is a ________ (write). He is the first to win the Nobel Prize in China. 57. In the singing competition, he didn't sing so ________ (clear) as Bob. 58. Yang Jiang, a famous writer, ________ (die) at the age of 105. 59. Elsa is ________ (talent) than her twin sister Anna. She is often praised by the teacher. 60. ________ (build) like the Palace Museum are famous around the world. B)根据汉语提示填空 61. My sister plays sports ________ (两次) a week. 62. Tom is a ________(有创造力的) student and he can solve the problems quickly. 63. Tom and Peter are good friends. They can talk about and ________(分享) everything. 64. In the 1930s, Walt Disney made 87 cartoons________(成功地). 65. We had a ________(讨论)about our trip yesterday. 九、补全对话(其中有两项为多余选项)(每小题2分, 共10分) M: Hi, I'm a reporter from the radio station. I'm making a survey. ________66 W: Sure. M: Do you like watching movies? W: ________67 M: So which do you think is the best cinema in the town? W: Rose Cinema, I think. M: ________68 W: Because Rose Cinema has the biggest screens and the most comfortable seats. M: ________69 W: Yes, it is far from my home. But it is convenient(方便的)to take the subway(地铁). M: OK, that's all. Thank you. W: ________70 A. You're welcome. B. Why do you think it is the best cinema? C. Yes, I do. D. How far is it from your home? E. It is the best cinema in the town. F. Could I ask you some questions? G. Is it far from your home? 十、任务型阅读(每小题2分, 共10分) My family went to Boston last fall. One night we were watching TV in our pajamas (睡衣)at the hotel and heard a loud noise. The fire alarm (火情警报) was ringing. My sister called the front desk and they asked us to quickly get out of the building. We put on our clothes and went downstairs. It was just like a fire drill (消防演习) at school, but there was no real fire. We could not use the elevator (电梯). We were on the fourth floor, so it took us some time. When we got down, three fire trucks were waiting outside. Everyone came down. Many people wore their pajamas. Some people were not even wearing shoes! After the fire trucks left, people told us that there was a gas leak (煤气泄漏). Everyone went back to the hotel later. I still learned one thing, even though there wasn't a real fire. Safety first! 71. When did the story happen? It happened_____________________________________________________________________. 72. What were the speaker's family doing when they heard a loud noise? They were______________________________________________________________________. 73. Who called the front desk? The speaker's_________________________________________________________________did. 74. How many fire trucks did the speaker see when getting down? There were_____________________________________________________________________. 75. What did the speaker learn from the story? He/She learned that______________________________________________________________. 十一、书面表达(15分) 古人云:“言传不如身教。”国外也有一句谚语:“Like father, like son. ”你和你的父母 在哪些方面相同或不同呢?请根据以下要点完成作文。内容包括: 1. 相同点和不同点(如:外貌、性格、爱好、习惯等)。 2. 你父母对你的影响让你和过去相比发生了哪些变化? 3. 你想对父母说点什么? 要求:1. 词数:80左右。 2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 3. 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 As an old saying goes, “Like father, like son. ”________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________期中测试 听力材料: 一、1. Mary went climbing last summer. 2. Tom likes English best of all his subjects. 3. The monkey is smarter than the other animals. 4. My uncle is a math teacher in a middle school. 5. I like playing computer games on weekends. 二、6. W: How often do you drink milk? M: Once a day. 7.M: What do you usually do at night? W: I usually do my homework after supper. 8.W: What is your father's favourite program? M: He likes the news best. But sometimes he watches sports. 9.W: Who is the tallest, Lucy, Lily or Jenny? M: Lucy is, although she is the youngest. 10.W: How many people will go to the movies? M: Forty students and one teacher. 三、Text 1 W: Who gets up early in your family? M: My mother. Then my father. W: What does your mother do after getting up? M: She cooks breakfast. And my father cleans the room. Qs:11. Who gets up earlier, the boy's father or mother? 12. What does the boy's father do after getting up? Text 2 W: The English Study Center needs a weekend student helper for primary school students. M: I think Jenny should get the job, because she is smarter than others. W: But I think Jack is more outgoing. M: Yes. But Jenny has better grades than Jack. She is better with children than him, too. W: OK. Jenny is the best for the job. Qs:13. What does the center need?14. Which student is more outgoing? 15. When can Jenny do the job? 四、Nancy is my cousin. She is outgoing. She has a warm heart. She is always ready to help others. She is talented in dancing. She is a good performer. She won many prizes. Maybe one day she will be a successful person. 听力答案: 一、1~5 CCABB 二、6~10 ABACB 三、11~15 BBABA 四、16.outgoing 17.heart 18.talented 19.performer 20.successful 五、 21. C 22. A 23. D 24. A 25. A 点拨:用固定搭配法。expect to do sth.期盼做某事。 26. B 27.B 点拨:修饰动词read要用副词,排除A、D,enough放在形容词或副词之后,排除 C。故选B。 28. B 点拨:用结构辨析法。news是不可数名词,所以用“What+ adj. +不可数名词 +…”结构。 29. C 30. B 六、31.B 点拨:句意:很多人做运动,但是很少人成为专业运动人员。修饰可数名词且表示 否定概念,用few。故选B。 32.A 33.C 点拨:用上下文联系法。由First of all…also helps…可知是在列举运动的各种好 处。句意:事实上有很多做运动的好理由。故选C。 34.A 35.A 点拨:句意:运动对于每个人都很重要,而对于年轻人尤为重要。especially尤其, 故选A。 36.C 37.D 38.B 39.A 40.B 七、A 41.D 点拨:细节理解题。根据第三段中 Though he has acted in more than 40 TV dramas since 2005…,可知吴磊从2005年以来演过40多部电视剧,故选D。 42.C 点拨:细节理解题。根据第二段中He plays the leading role in the movie Asura (《阿修罗》). 可知选C。 43.B 点拨:细节理解题。根据最后一段中I feel we are more independent and creative.We are not afraid to express our own ideas…及…we don't often talk with our family可排 除A、C、D项。 44.C 点拨:细节理解题。根据第二段中的 He works with big names including Liang Jiahui and Liu Jialing.可知他与有名气的梁家辉和刘嘉玲合作过。故选C。 45.A 点拨:细节理解题。根据第四段中的Hu Ge, 36, who worked with him in Nirvana in Fire (《琅琊榜》)…可知胡歌是一位演员。故选A。 B 46.B 点拨:细节理解题。根据关键词on Wednesday,可从列表中找到《战狼2》、《建 军大业》和《速度与激情:宿命》。这三部电影符合条件,故应选B。 47.A 点拨:细节理解题。由第一则信息可知《战狼2》的导演是吴京,故选A。 48.D 点拨:细节理解题。由第三则信息找到关于票价的信息:¥30 (Half on Sunday for children)。票价是30元,周日的时候,孩子半价,因此格林夫人和她的儿子一共需要 支付45元,故选D。 49.B 点拨:细节理解题。根据提供的信息可知《建军大业》是有关历史方面的电影,故 选B。 50.C 点拨:细节理解题。提到三个主演的影片有《我的爸爸是森林之王》和《速度与激 情:宿命》,故选C。 C 51.C 点拨:细节理解题。根据文章第二段中第三句Researches show that people feel unhappy and worried when they have nothing to do.可知,调查表明当人们无事可做的 时候,人们感觉不快乐和担心。故选C。 52.D 点拨:细节理解题。根据文章第二段中第四句 Instead, the happiest people are those who are busy.可知,最快乐的人是那些繁忙的人。故选D。 53.B 点拨:推理判断题。根据It前面的句子The loss(丧失) of work means the loss of everything.可知工作的丧失意味着一切的丧失。这句话的主语是工作的丧失,所以这 就是It指代的内容。故选B。 54.C 点拨:主旨大意题。根据文章的最后一段From the above, we can come to a conclusion: the more you work, the happier and healthier you will be.可知作者通过前三 段的介绍得出一个结论:你工作得越多,你将会越快乐和越健康。故选C。 55.A 点拨:用择优法。a magazine杂志;a story故事;a song歌曲;a TV show电视节目。 根据选项并结合全文可知选A。 八、A) 56. writer 57. clearly 58. died 59. more talented 60. BuildingsB)61. twice 62. creative 63.share 64. successfully 65. discussion 九、66. F 67. C 68. B 69. G 70. A 十、71. last fall 72.watching TV 73.sister 74.three 75.safety first 十一、 范文: As an old saying goes, “Like father, like son.” In__some__ways,__I am the__same__as my parents.We all have straight black hair. And we all love movies. In some ways, we are different. I am more outgoing and I like making friends. But my parents are quieter. I usually stay at home to surf the Internet when I am free. But my parents like going__out to exercise. But now, I begin to exercise with my parents because it is good for my health. I love my parents and I want to say thanks to them. 点评:本文运用了“总—分—总”的写法比较人物。比较我与父母在相貌、性格、喜好方 面的差异:第1句是文章的中心句。第2~4句写相貌、喜好方面的相同之处;第5~9句写性 格、习惯方面的不同;第10句写父母对我的影响;第11句写总结。写作思路清晰,语句连贯, 行文流畅。 添彩点:in some ways,the same as,go out等短语的使用,为文章增色不少。