高考作文精讲(09) | 吃透热点主题,打开写作高分思路(附高分范文)

假定你是李华，新学期开始后，学习负担加重，没有时间和朋友们一起踢足球，压力越来越大。请给你的英国笔友Henry写一封邮件，询问他如何平衡学习任务和兴趣爱好之间的关系，内容包括：

1. 写邮件的目的；

2. 询问如何处理学习任务与兴趣爱好的关系；

3. 寻求建议。

注意：写作词数应为80个左右。

此题属于半开放提纲类作文，要求考生根据要点提示，合理添加细节，进行适当拓展。此题写作要点和拓展可以归纳为：(1)简述自己的苦恼——课业繁重，压力大，没有时间和朋友一起娱乐；(2)询问如何处理学习任务与兴趣爱好的关系；(3)寻求建议；(4)希望得到好友帮助；(5)表示感谢。写作过程中避免使用冗长繁杂句式；要点要全面，表达要准确，适当发挥拓展；句、段之间的衔接要自然，尽可能使用多样化的句式。

根据题目要求及要点提示，正文可分为三段。第一段表明写作目的；第二段简述自己的烦恼，询问好友解决办法；第三段说明希望得到帮助并表示感谢。

Dear Henry,

How’s everything going? Since I became a Senior Three student, the pressure has been keeping striking me. In this case, I’m writing to ask you for help.

As you know, I’m an enthusiastic soccer fan. But these days so engaged am I in making preparations for the final examination that I find it impossible to be available on the football field. What a frustration! It occurs to me that you are the friend who can give me some suggestions. To 

be exact, could you please share with me your way to handle the dilemma?

How I long for your timely help! Thank you so much!

Yours,

Li Hua

1. As you know, I am crazy about football. However, with the pressure, now I have no time to play football with my friends, which makes me so upset, so I long for your help.

2. As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. However, I am struggling to squeeze out enough time to enjoy my favorite hobby—football, which drives me crazy.

3. You are my first choice to turn to for advice. Could you tell me about your experience in balancing the relationship between your study and hobby?

4. As for how to reduce the pressure, I am eager for your valuable experience on it. 

5. I will appreciate it if you could share your story with me, which will encourage me a lot.