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每天一个英语高考写作高分句型|what句型高分写法(应用文+读后续写全覆盖)

每天一个英语高考写作高分句型|what句型高分写法(应用文+读后续写全覆盖)

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每天一个英语高考写作高分句型|what句型高分写法(应用文+读后续写全覆盖)

很多同学写作文,表达“最打动我的是……”“最重要的是……”只会用简单句 The most important thing is…,句式平淡,很难拿到高分档。

what名词性从句句型,是高考写作性价比极高的得分句式,高频出现在真题读后续写范文、书信应用文里。适合用来表达感悟、突出核心、升华主旨,替换千篇一律的简单句,瞬间提升文采。

💡核心说明:what引导名词性从句,what在从句内部充当主语或者宾语,翻译为“……的事物/……的地方/……的经历”。 考场两大王牌框架: ① What +从句 + be + 表语 (……的是……) ② What +从句 + 实义动词 (……的东西/事情做了……)

一、两大考场万能公式

公式1:What + 主语+谓语 + be + 名词/形容词(最常考!)

What moved me most was… 最打动我的是…… What matters most is… 最重要的是……

公式2:What seemed / felt like +名词(续写时间感受专用)

After what seemed like endless waiting…仿佛无尽的等待过后……

⚠️避坑小提示:what本身在从句要充当成分,不要和that混淆;what不引导定语从句。

二、what句型|应用文专属(书信、倡议、演讲稿、活动反馈)

应用文适合用what句型表达观点、抒发感受、总结活动意义,多用于段落中间或者文末收尾。

普通低分句:The real value is friendship. 高分改写:What really counts is friendship. 真正重要的是友谊。

应用文满分例句(直接背诵套用)

  1. What impresses me most is your sincere attitude towards life. 最让我印象深刻的是你对待生活真诚的态度。
  2. What matters most in communication is mutual respect and understanding. 交流之中最重要的是互相尊重与理解。
  3. What we should value is the spirit of persistence rather than temporary success. 我们应当珍视的是坚持的精神,而非一时的成功。
  4. What makes this volunteer activity meaningful is everyone’s joint efforts. 让这次志愿活动富有意义的,是所有人的共同努力。
  5. What we expect from this cultural exchange is better mutual understanding. 我们期待从这次文化交流中收获更好的相互理解。

三、what句型|读后续写专属(心理描写、场景过渡、结尾升华)

读后续写中what句型两大用途:

  1. What moved / touched / surprised sb most was…
     人物内心感悟,结尾升华主题(真题范文高频)
  2. after what seemed like…
     描写漫长等待,做时间过渡,衔接情节。

✅感悟升华类(结尾绝杀,常和not…but…搭配)

普通句:The kindness rather than the prize touched me deeply. 高分改写:What touched me most was not the prize, but his self‑sacrificing kindness.最打动我的不是这份奖品,而是他无私的善意。

续写高分例句

  1. What moved me most was not the reward, but the warmth he offered to strangers. 最打动我的不是回报,而是他给予陌生人的那份温暖。
  2. What surprised me greatly was that the shy boy dared to speak in front of the crowd. 让我大为意外的是,这个内向的男孩敢于在众人面前发言。
  3. What kept me going in those hard days was the faith deep in my heart. 那些艰难日子里支撑我走下去的,是我内心深处的信念。
  4. What stood before us was not a defeated girl, but a brave fighter full of hope. 站在我们面前的,不是一个受挫的女孩,而是一名满怀希望的勇敢斗士。

✅时间过渡句型 after what seemed like…(情节衔接神器)

专门用来写:煎熬等待、漫长的时光,放在段首衔接情节

  1. After what seemed like hours of waiting, the door was finally pushed open. 仿佛经过数小时的等待之后,门终于被推开。
  2. After what felt like a long night, the first ray of sunlight appeared over the horizon. 仿佛度过漫漫长夜,第一缕阳光出现在地平线上。

✨高分组合:what句型 + 独立主格 + 强调句(真题同款)

Tears welling up in my eyes, I thanked him. What impressed me most was not the gift, but his help. It was his kindness that gave me courage. 泪水在眼眶中打转,我向他道谢。令我印象最深的不是礼物,而是他的帮助。正是他的善意给予了我勇气。

四、高考黄金搭配

  1. What matters most is not A but B
     最重要的不是A而是B(应用文+续写通用) What matters most is not result but the process of striving. 最重要的不是结果,而是奋斗的过程。
  2. What sb need most is…
     某人最需要的是…… What they needed most was trust and encouragement. 他们最需要的是信任与鼓励。

五、考场避坑4条

  1. 数量控制:一篇作文1‑2处what句型即可,用于观点或者结尾,不要每句都用。
  2. what seemed like
     固定搭配,专门描写主观感受上的时间,续写情节过渡非常好用。
  3. be动词单复数:后面表语是复数,前面be动词依旧用was/is。 ✅ What I need is friends.(正确)
  4. 不要混淆what和that:what在从句里面要做成分;that不充当句子成分。

六、今日打卡仿写练习

  1. 真正重要的是彼此之间的真诚。(应用文 what句型)
  2. 仿佛经过漫长的等待之后,他终于出现了。(读后续写 after what seemed like…)

参考答案:

  1. What really matters most is the sincerity between each other.
  2. After what seemed like a long wait, he finally turned up.

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