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作文课程补充说明最近有老师咨询作文课程,例如是否批改,是否适合自己等等。1.作文教学我是按照能审对、能写出、能写好三个部分展开。那天讲单招的作文,侧重的是能审对。每次作文之后,不要求写完整的文章,只写片段。例如,讲完审题(概念分析)之后,就要练习审题,只要能审对就是合格。讲开头的时候,这个要审对并按照要求写出开头即可;我觉得大部分人的作文水平都不是很好,每个板块都要细致讲。2.审对题目是前提,前期多讲这种。审题时候把论点带出来,既然带出中心论点,必然就要讲开头段的写法。审题之后是搭建框架,这个时候要带出分论点。。。每个部分都会细致讲。其实,作文的难点在于思维,不独语言。很多人听懂了,写不出来;就是不会语言技术,这个时候需要语言支架;所以在能写出的这个过程,要练习语言,无论是模仿句式还是训练复句,都是拓展思维。我上次讲完论据之后,我看到好多老师把文章发给我,里面的摆论据明显进步很大,其实这些内容只要点出来,就非常简单。我始终坚信,很多人只要经过训练,认真训练,基本上能写出一篇比较不错的文章。前提还是认真听课,认真学习,需要背诵的句式都能完成。
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