读后续写—高级句型—提分神器

一. A wave/sense of + 情绪名词 +有灵动词（washed over/swept through/struck）+ sb, when/as/the moment …

A wave of joy washed over her when she heard the good news.

当听到这个好消息时，一阵喜悦涌上了她的心头。

【举一反三练一练】

（1）当看到久别重逢的朋友时，一股喜悦之情涌上了她的心头。

（2）当电影里的主角牺牲时，一阵悲伤涌上了在场的每位观众。

（3）收到父母寄来的包裹，一种温暖的感觉席卷了远在他乡的她。

（4）看到考试成绩单上的高分，一阵满足感突然击中了努力的学生。

（5）得知团队项目成功的消息，一阵自豪之情席卷了全体成员。

（6）当看到流浪猫被细心照顾时，一阵欣慰之感涌上了善良的女孩。

（7）那一刻听到熟悉的童年歌曲，一种怀念感突然击中了这位老人。

参考答案：

1. A sense of joy washed over her when she saw her friend who she hadn’t met for a long time.

2. A wave of sadness washed over every member of the audience present as the hero in the film sacrificed himself.

3. A sense of warmth swept through her, who lived far away from home, when she received the package from her parents.

4. A sense of satisfaction struck the hardworking student the moment he saw the high score on the exam report.

5. A sense of pride swept through all team members as they learned the news of the project’s success.

6. A sense of pleasure washed over the kind girl when she saw the stray cat being taken good care of.

7. A sense of nostalgia struck the old man the moment he heard the familiar childhood song.

二. The sight/thought of sth + made sb + 情感形容词 / filled sb with + 情感名词

The sight of the poor homeless little dog filled her with deep sympathy.看到流浪小狗可怜的样子，她心生怜悯。

【举一反三练一练】

（1）想到即将到来的暑假和海边旅行，他变得无比兴奋。

（2）看到山区孩子渴望知识的眼睛，志愿者心中充满了责任感。

（3）想到父母默默的付出和支持，他心中充满了无尽的感激。

（4）看到自己亲手种的花终于绽放，小女孩变得非常开心。

（5）想到要在全班同学面前演讲，内向的男孩感到有些紧张。

（6）看到运动员们奋力拼搏的样子，在场观众都充满了敬意。

（7）想到奶奶做的家常菜，身在外地的她感到格外思念。

参考答案：

1.The thought of the coming summer vacation and the beach trip made him extremely excited.

1.The sight of the mountain children’s eyes longing for knowledge filled the volunteers with a sense of responsibility.

2.The thought of his parents’ silent dedication and support filled him with endless gratitude.

3.The sight of the flowers she planted herself finally blooming made the little girl very happy.

4.The thought of giving a speech in front of the whole class made the shy boy a bit nervous.

5.The sight of the athletes striving hard filled all the spectators present with admiration.

6.The thought of the home-cooked meals made by her grandma made her feel especially nostalgic.

三. One’s heart pounded / thumped / raced with + 情绪名词（excitement / nervousness / fear / terror …）

When taking a plane alone for the first time, his heart pounded with unease.第一次独自坐飞机时，他的心因不安而咚咚作响。

【举一反三练一练】

（1）当听到自己赢得比赛的消息时，她的心因兴奋而怦怦直跳。

（2）站在演讲台中央准备开口时，他的心因紧张而咚咚作响。

（3）等待高考成绩公布的那几分钟，他的心因焦虑而怦怦直跳。

（4）想到即将和偶像见面，她的心因激动而快速跳动。

（5）听到窗外奇怪的声响，老人的心因担忧而急速跳动。

（6）即将上台表演节目时，所有演员的心都因紧张而跳动。

（7）面对台下数百名观众的目光，她的心因紧张而急速跳动。

参考答案：

1.When she heard the news that she had won the competition, her heart pounded with excitement.

2.Standing in the middle of the stage ready to speak, his heart thumped with nervousness.

3.During the minutes waiting for the college entrance exam results, his heart thumped with anxiety.

4.When she thought about meeting her idol soon, her heart raced with excitement the whole morning.

5.Hearing the strange noise outside the window, the old man’s heart thumped with worry.

6.Before going on stage to perform the show, all actors’ hearts pounded with nervousness.

7.Facing the eyes of hundreds of audiences off the stage, her heart raced with nervousness.

四. There was apparent + 情绪名词 + in sb’s voice / eyes / expression / behavior

There was apparent shyness in the girl’s voice when she was asked if she liked that boy.女孩声音中有着明显的害羞，当被问到是否喜欢那个男孩时。

【举一反三练一练】

（1）她声音里带着明显的喜悦，因为终于收到了期待已久的录取通知书。

（2）他眼神中有着明显的困惑，完全没明白老师刚才讲解的知识点。

（3）妈妈表情里带着明显的担忧，一直牵挂着在外求学的弟弟。

（4）爸爸行为里带着明显的疲惫，工作了一整天后还要做家务。

（5）老师声音里带着明显的耐心，一遍遍解答学生们重复的问题。

（6）男孩表情中有着明显的失望，没能买到心仪已久的篮球鞋。

（7）奶奶行为里带着明显的欣慰，看着孙子在学校获得了优秀奖项。

参考答案：

1.There was apparent joy in her voice as she finally received the long-awaited admission notice.

2.There was apparent confusion in his eyes as he totally didn’t understand the knowledge the teacher explained.

3.There was apparent worry in Mom’s expression as she always cared about my brother studying abroad.

4.There was apparent tiredness in Dad’s behavior as he had to do housework after working all day.

5.There was apparent patience in the teacher’s voice as she answered students’ repeated questions again and again.

6.There was apparent disappointment in the boy’s expression as he couldn’t buy the long-desired basketball shoes.

7.There was apparent pride in Grandma’s actions as she saw her grandson win an excellent award at school.

五. 情绪 adj1 + and / but + 情绪 adj2, sb did sth

Happy and relaxed, we spent a peaceful afternoon by the small river in the countryside.开心又放松，我们在乡村的小河边度过了一个宁静的下午。

【举一反三练一练】

（1）既兴奋又紧张，这个女孩在全校师生面前做了第一次演讲。

（2）既惊讶又感动，他收到了来自远方朋友的意外礼物和祝福。

（3）焦虑又期待，所有考生都在等待高考成绩的公布结果。

（4）疲惫但满足，她花了三个小时终于完成了手工制作的礼物。

（5）既好奇又胆怯，小男孩慢慢走近那只温顺的流浪猫想要抚摸它。

（6）激动又自豪，他在学校运动会上赢得了100米跑的第一名。

（7）既失望又无奈，他们因为天气不好不得不取消周末的野餐计划。

参考答案：

1.Excited and nervous, the girl gave her first speech in front of all the teachers and students at school.

2.Surprised and moved, he received an unexpected gift and blessings from his friend far away.

3.Anxious and expectant, all the candidates were waiting for the release of the college entrance exam results.

4.Tired but satisfied, she spent three hours and finally finished the hand-made gift for her mother.

5.Curious and timid, the little boy slowly approached the gentle stray cat and wanted to stroke it.

6.Excited and proud, he won the first prize in the 100-meter race at the school sports meeting.