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小学英语短文范文 15 篇,适合三到六年级仿写练习

小学英语短文范文 15 篇,适合三到六年级仿写练习

孩子单词认得不少,一到写句子就卡住——这是三到六年级最普遍的"输出断层"。原因很简单:输入和输出之间缺了一座桥。背单词是往仓库进货,写句子是把货搬出来用,中间那步"怎么组织"没人教。

仿写就是这座桥。它不等于抄写:仿的是结构和句式,换的是内容和词。给一篇 5 句话的范文,孩子把里面的"人物、颜色、活动"换成自己的,一篇新短文就出来了。练上十几篇,骨架自然长在脑子里,到时候不用仿也能写。

下面 15 篇按年级递进:三年级以简单句为主,四年级加入 there be 和进行时,五年级引入过去时、将来时和比较级,六年级过渡到叙事、梦想和书信。每篇都标了可以换的地方,直接照着练就行。

一、三年级 · 简单句起步(3 篇)

三年级 · 一句话说清楚一件事
1. My Family(我的家人)
I have a happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is tall. My mother is kind. I love my family.
换着练:人数(three→four)、家人称呼、形容父母的词(tall / kind / funny / busy)
2. My School Bag(我的书包)
This is my school bag. It is blue and red. I have a book, a pencil and a ruler in it. The book is new. I like my school bag.
换着练:颜色(blue and red→yellow and green)、里面的东西(pencil / eraser / sharpener)
3. My Pet(我的宠物)
I have a pet. It is a small cat. Its name is Mimi. It is white. It likes fish. I play with Mimi every day.
换着练:宠物(cat→dog / rabbit / bird)、名字、喜好(fish→bones / carrots)

二、四年级 · 加入句式(4 篇)

四年级 · 用固定句式搭段落
4. My Room(我的房间 · there be)
This is my room. There is a bed and a desk in it. There are many books on the desk. The wall is white. I clean my room every day.
换着练:房间里的东西(chair / clock / ball)、位置(on / under / near)
5. My Day(我的一天 · 一般现在)
I get up at seven. I go to school at eight. I have four classes in the morning. I play football in the afternoon. I do my homework in the evening. I go to bed at nine.
换着练:时间点、做的事(read books / draw pictures / ride a bike)
6. My Favorite Animal(最爱的动物 · 喜好)
My favorite animal is the panda. It is black and white. It is cute. It likes bamboo. It lives in China. I love pandas very much.
换着练:动物(panda→rabbit / tiger / dolphin)、食物和住地
7. In the Park(在公园 · 现在进行时)
It is Sunday. I am in the park. Look! A boy is flying a kite. Two girls are dancing. An old man is reading a book. We are all happy.
换着练:人物和正在做的事(running / singing / riding a bike)

三、五年级 · 时态与比较(4 篇)

五年级 · 把时间说清楚
8. My Weekend(我的周末 · 过去时)
I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework. In the afternoon, I visited my grandma. On Sunday, I went to the zoo with my parents. We saw many animals. I was tired but happy.
换着练:周末活动用过去式(cleaned / watched / played / cooked)
9. My Holiday Plan(假期计划 · 将来时)
Summer holiday is coming. I am going to visit Beijing. I will see the Great Wall. I will eat Beijing duck. I will take many photos. I think it will be fun.
换着练:目的地和活动,用 be going to / will 两种将来表达
10. My Friend and I(朋友和我 · 比较级)
Lucy is my good friend. She is taller than me. But I am stronger than her. She likes singing. I like drawing. We are different, but we are happy together.
换着练:比较的方面(older / younger / faster / better at...)
11. My Favorite Season(最爱的季节 · 理由)
My favorite season is spring. It is warm and windy. Trees turn green. I can fly a kite in the park. I can plant flowers, too. Spring makes me happy.
换着练:季节(summer / autumn / winter)和对应的活动

四、六年级 · 叙事与表达(4 篇)

六年级 · 写出过程和感受
12. A Happy Day(快乐的一天 · 叙事)
Yesterday was a happy day. My class went to the farm. We picked apples and fed the animals. At noon we had a picnic. I made a new friend there. It was a day to remember.
换着练:地点和活动,结尾加一句感受(a day to remember / the best day)
13. My Dream(我的梦想 · 愿望)
When I grow up, I want to be a teacher. I like children. I will work in a school. I will help my students learn. It is a hard job, but I will try my best.
换着练:职业(doctor / scientist / artist)和对应的理由
14. My Hometown(我的家乡 · 介绍)
My hometown is a small town. It is quiet and beautiful. There is a river near my house. People are friendly. The food is delicious. I love my hometown and its people.
换着练:家乡的特点(big / clean / modern / old)
15. A Letter to My Friend(给朋友的一封信 · 书信)
Dear Tom, How are you? I am fine. School is busy but fun. I joined the art club this term. We paint every Friday. I made a nice picture for you. Hope to see you soon. Yours, Lily
换着练:加入的社团(music / football / reading club)和内容,注意书信格式(Dear / Yours)

五、仿写三步法

第一步 · 选骨架
挑一篇和孩子生活接近的,先读熟、读懂。不急着写,把"这篇先说啥、再说啥"的脉络摸清楚。
第二步 · 换内容
照着每篇下面的"换着练"提示,把人物、东西、活动替换成自己的。开头句和连接词原样保留,只动实词。
第三步 · 连成段
换好的句子连起来读一遍,改掉不顺的地方。读顺了,就是一篇属于孩子自己的短文。

六、家长怎么陪(三个原则)

仿写 ≠ 抄写
抄写练的是"手",仿写练的是"脑"。要求孩子先盖住范文、凭记忆和骨架写一遍,写不出再看——这个"想"的过程才是长本事的地方。
别逼逐字翻译
孩子容易先想中文再逐字翻英文,结果全是中式句子。范文给的是现成英文骨架,直接换词、整句套用,比翻译靠谱得多。
先求对,再求好
刚开始能换对词、时态不错就很好。等十几篇练完,再鼓励孩子加一句自己的话——那时骨架已经稳了,加什么都站得住。
别用范文当听写范本硬背
这 15 篇的价值在"结构可复用",不在"文章要背下"。背下一篇只会一篇,学会骨架能写出无数篇。把范文当模板,不当课文。

七、仿写起步自检

孩子可以开始仿写了吗?
  • 能独立读懂一篇范文的大意,不卡生词 ✅

  • 能照"换着练"提示,把内容换成自己的 ✅

  • 换完后句子通顺、主谓基本对齐 ✅

  • 过去时 / 将来时 / 比较级 三类至少各练过 1 篇 ✅

  • 能盖住范文凭骨架写一遍,不全程照抄 ✅

  • 写完愿意读出来,不抵触 ✅

六条全中,说明仿写已经走上正轨;做不到的,退回对应年级那几篇多模两遍,别急着跳级。

写作不是天赋,是练出来的肌肉。这 15 篇范文建议打印出来装订成小册,每周仿两到三篇,一个学期下来,三到六年级最常见的题材孩子都能自己动手写。它不靠聪明,靠的是把骨架一遍遍写进手里。

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