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【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练10

【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练10

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Warmth in the Heavy Snow
Last Saturday, a record-breaking blizzard swept across New York City without warning. The wind howled like a wounded beast, its icy breath tearing through the streets and rattling every windowpane. Snowflakes poured down like a white curtain from the leaden sky, blurring the familiar skyscraper into a ghostly haze. Visibility dropped to nearly zero. The city that never sleeps fell into an icy silence — every street, sidewalk and rooftop all buried under a thick, unbroken blanket of snow that glinted like crushed diamonds in the faint gray light. 
I woke up with a growling stomach, only to find the refrigerator completely empty: no milk for coffee, no bread for toast, not an even single egg left. When I checked the cupboard, the shelves were just as bare; there were no daily necessities left at home. I knew I had to go out to buy some urgently, or I’d be stuck without basic supplies for the rest of the storm. But when I tried to open the front door, my hand froze on the handle. It wouldn’t move even an inch. Heavy snow had piled up tightly against the door all night, forming a solid wall that locked me inside. I pushed and pulled again and again. My shoulders ached and my breath came in gasps. But all my efforts were in vain. The snow held firm, a silent, unyielding barrier between me and the outside world. 
Staring out of the window helplessly, I watched the snow swirling wildly in the bone-chilling wind. Travel bans had shut down almost all traffic across the city, and there was no sign of people on the street. A wave of fear and anxiety swept over me, cold and sharp as the wind outside. My parents were working far away in another state, and the phone lines had gone dead hours ago, so I had no way to reach anyone for help. Just as I sank to the floor, desperate and alone, a faint but firm knock on the door broke the terrible silence. 
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Hello? Is anybody in?” It was Mrs. Wilson, my next-door neighbor. 
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After twenty minutes of hard work, the door was finally opened. 
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【参考答案】范文
“Hello? Is anybody in?” It was Mrs. Wilson, my next-door neighbor. I yelled at the top of my lungs to tell her I was trapped inside. Hearing my cry for help, she comforted me and told me to stay calm. Then she promised to ask more neighbors for help at once. It was only a few minutes, but it felt like centuries. Finally, several kind neighbors rushed over with shovels, brooms and brushes. Despite the biting cold, they worked together to clear the snow beside my door bit by bit. Even Mr. Thompson, who had difficulty walking, came over to help with a small brush. 
After twenty minutes of hard work, the door was finally opened. I stepped out with tears of gratitude rolling down my cheeks. Their faces were red with cold, but gentle smiles were on their lips. Mrs. Wilson handed me a cup of steaming tea, warming my hand and heart instantly. Some neighbors also offered to clean my yard and share daily supplies with me. On that freezing snowy day in New York, I truly felt the warmth of the neighborhood. The heavy snow could freeze the whole city, but it could never freeze the kindness between people, reminding me that love and care are always around us.
【解析】
【导语】本文以暴雪为背景展开,讲述了作者在纽约遭遇特大暴雪,被积雪困在家中、孤立无援时,邻居们纷纷伸出援手,帮助作者打开房门、分享物资,让作者在严寒中感受到邻里温暖的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“‘喂?有人在家吗?’是我的邻居威尔逊太太。”可知,第一段可描写邻居们听到呼救后赶来帮忙清理积雪的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“经过二十分钟的努力,门终于被打开了。”可知,第二段可描写作者走出家门,对邻居们表示感谢并感悟到邻里之间的温暖。
2.续写线索:呼救——邻居赶来——清理积雪——门被打开——表示感谢——感悟温暖
3.词汇激活
行为类
①一起清理积雪:work together to clear the snow together/collaborate to remove the snow
②递给我热茶:hand me a cup of steaming tea/pass me a cup of hot tea
③分享日用品:share daily supplies/offer daily necessities/provide household items
情绪类
①感激的眼泪顺着脸颊流下来:with tears of gratitude rolling down my cheeks/with tears of appreciation streaming down my face
②感受到邻里间的温暖:feel the warmth of the neighborhood/experience the kindness between neighbors
【点睛】【高分句型1】Even Mr. Thompson, who had difficulty walking, came over to help with a small brush.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The heavy snow could freeze the whole city, but it could never freeze the kindness between people, reminding me that love and care are always around us.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
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