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他们可能是朝夕相处的同桌，悉心教诲的老师，或是时刻牵挂我们、默默奉献的父母...
今天我们一起来表达对于他们的感谢吧！
26年浙江中考英语-杭州市上城区一模
A Person I Want to Thank
我要感谢的一个人
一.审题
A person 一个人只能写一位，不能同时写老师 + 父母 + 同学，全程只能围绕一个人写。
感谢核心不是单纯写这个人，而是写：他做了什么事、为什么值得我感谢、带给我什么改变。
二、选材
优先选身边小事，越真实越好写：
- 老师：失落时鼓励我、耐心辅导我、包容我的缺点
- 父母 / 长辈：默默照顾我、包容我的任性、在我难过时陪伴
- 同学 / 同桌：我遇到困难帮忙、考试失利安慰我、包容我的小脾气
- 小众高分：门卫爷爷、保洁阿姨、陌生好心人（立意新颖）
三、结构 （总分总）
开头：（点题 + 引入人物）你要感谢的那个人
中间：写一件具体小事。
- 铺垫困境：写我当时的难处、难过、自卑、犯错、遇到麻烦（例：考试考砸、和同学吵架、做题不会、生病难受、自卑胆小）
- 经过细节：这个人怎么做的？写动作、语言、眼神、神态（细节越多越加分）
- 我的变化：因为他的帮助 / 安慰，我慢慢振作、进步、学会懂事
记住：一件事写详细，比写十件小事都管用
结尾：（升华 + 扣题）
总结收获，直白表达感谢，升华成长！
A Person I Want to Thank .
In my growing-up days, my family has always been with me, bringing me care and help all the time. My mother is the person I want to thank the most . She is not only my parent but also my best friend.(点题）
I still remember when I failed (不及格) my math exam last month. I felt so sad that I didn't want to talk to anyone. Seeing this (看到这种情况), my mother came and sat beside me. She didn't get angry. Instead (相反), she cheered me up softly and said, "It's OK to fail. The most important thing is to learn from it." Then, she patiently guided me to solve the difficult problems until I understood them. It was (正是… 让我意识到) my mother's words that made me realize I could do it.
With her help, I have made great progress (取得很大进步). In the following exam, I got a much better grade. More importantly, her encouragement made it easier for me to face the challenge bravely. I am really thankful to have such a wonderful mother.
2. 不同主题的通用模板
模板 1：感谢老师
A Person I Want to Thank .
In my school life, my English teacher Ms. Li is the person I want to thank the most. She is not only my teacher but also my guide.
I still remember the time when I was afraid to speak English in class. I was so shy that I always hid behind my textbook. Noticing this, Ms. Li didn’t push me. Instead, she called my name gently and asked me to answer questions in class . She praised every small effort and progress I made. She also encouraged me to join the school English corner in my free time . Gradually, I became more interested in English and finally got good grades in my final exam. It was her constant support and selfless devotion that made me realize I could learn English well.
With her help, I have become more confident in English. Now, I even enjoy speaking in front of the class. I am truly thankful to Ms. Li for bringing out the best in me.
模板 2：感谢朋友
A Person I Want to Thank .
There are a lot of people around me in my growing-up life, but I would like to say thanks to my best friend John, not only for his help but also for his selfless devotion(无私付出）.
Last year, I failed a math exam and felt really upset. When John found out, he invited me to play tennis after school to cheer me up. While we were playing, he encouraged me to stay strong and offered to help me with my studies. The next day, he handed me a detailed study plan and promised to study with me every day. Since then, he has always checked my homework carefully and patiently explained every problem I struggled with. With his constant help and encouragement, I have become one of the top students in my class. I am deeply moved by John not only because he went out of his way to support me, but also because he always kept his word. He is exactly the kind of friend I will always be thankful for.
这里的模版，改写下可以写成最难忘的一次经历。 上文模版也是选自我之前写的素材。
句型积累 ：
句型 1：not only…but also… 不但…… 而且……
作文原句 1（妈妈）She is not onlymy parent but alsomy best friend.
作文原句 2（朋友）I am deeply moved by John not onlybecause he went out of his way to support me, but alsobecause he always kept his word.
句型 2：强调句 It was … that … 正是……
作文原句 1（妈妈）It wasmy mother's words thatmade me realize I could do it.
作文原句 2（老师）It was her constant support thatmade me realize I could speak English well.
句型 3：it 作形式宾语
结构：make it + 形容词 + for sb. to do sth.真正宾语：后面的动词不定式（to do）
作文原句（妈妈）Her encouragement made iteasier for me to facethe challenge bravely.
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