It was hard not to notice an 8-year-old kid storming in and out of his own house.“He doesn’t have a father,” said his neighbor, William Dunn. “I can probably do something for him.”That something was fishing, a passion Dunn’s father had shared with him. “It brought me peace and taught me how to be patient,” he said. He then took the kid fishing every weekend. Gradually he took groups of kids out to fish. Most didn’t have father figures. “They’d been through a lot, and their lives were difficult,” said Dunn. “But when they were fishing, all of that disappeared. On the boat, they’d be laughing and making new friends. They just appreciated the moment.”Inspired by this scene, Dunn started the nonprofit Take a Kid Fishing. He and the volunteers have introduced 2,500 kids — most without fathers around — to the calming peace found on the water and the excitement of catching a fish.Just as important as the fishing are the relationships Dunn forms with those kids. When they have a rough time, Dunn will talk with them, emphasizing self-respect and mental toughness. One of the kids, Bella Smith, said she would forget about the past while fishing and concentrate on something positive. “Fishing is learning,” she said. “I’ve learned I deserve a better life than what I had. Whenever I feel down, I know it’s time to go fishing.”Dunn’s father passed away this year, so fishing has taken on new meaning for him. “I have a stronger liking for it because now I’m fatherless too. There’s nothing like feeling that first pull on the line and seeing a kid light up with a smile,” said Dunn.
续写两段开头
Paragraph 1: One cold autumn morning, Bella arrived at the dock alone, her eyes red and swollen.Paragraph 2: After that fishing trip, Bella volunteered to help organize the activity for younger fatherless kids.
写作要求
1.两段续写，词数150词左右；
参考范文
Paragraph 1: One cold autumn morning, Bella arrived at the dock alone, her eyes red and swollen. She had just quarreled with her relatives and felt hopeless about her life. Noticing her gloomy look, Dunn walked over and handed her a warm cup of hot cocoa. He didn’t push her to talk, just led her onto the boat quietly. As they floated on the smooth water, the gentle wind swept away her anxiety. Soon, a strong pull came from her fishing line. When she pulled the small fish out, her face lit up with a bright smile, all sadness fading away. She appreciated this peaceful moment more than ever before.Paragraph 2: After that fishing trip, Bella volunteered to help organize the activity for younger fatherless kids. She patiently taught shy children how to cast fishing lines and comforted those who felt down. She told them they all deserved a warm and bright future, just as Dunn had told her. Watching the kids laugh loudly on the boat every weekend, Dunn felt extremely lucky to witness such warm changes. For both Bella and Dunn, fishing had taken on a special meaning — it was not only a hobby, but a bridge connecting broken hearts and delivering hope.
作文语料分类整理
第一部分：北京卷应用文（书信/倡议书/活动介绍）
话题1：公益活动、志愿者服务（推荐用于倡议、活动告知信）
start a nonprofit 创办非营利公益组织
groups of volunteers 一群志愿者
introduce sb to sth 带某人体验/接触某物
deliver peace and comfort to people in need 为有需要的人带去平静与慰藉
form close relationships with participants 与参与者建立亲密联结
emphasize the importance of self-respect 强调自尊的重要性
help people build mental toughness 帮助人们塑造强大的心理韧性
concentrate on positive things 专注积极美好的事物
offer comfort to those who have been through a lot 安抚历经磨难的人
witness warm touching moments 见证温暖动人的瞬间
话题2：爱好、个人成长类书信（分享爱好、给建议）
a passion shared with family 与家人传承的热爱
bring inner peace and teach us patience 带来内心平静，教会我们忍耐
take on new meaning for sb 对某人而言被赋予全新意义
have a strong liking for sth 由衷喜爱某物
appreciate the quiet moment 珍惜静谧美好的瞬间
lift one’s spirits when feeling down 在情绪低落时治愈心情
高级句型（北京卷书信提分句式）
Just as important as A are B. 和A同等重要的是B（倒装高级句式）
There’s nothing like doing sth to do sth. 没有什么比做某事更能……
Whenever I feel down, I turn to … for comfort. 每当我情绪低落，我都会通过……寻求慰藉。
第二部分：读后续写语料（情绪、动作、环境、升华）
1. 情绪神态描写（高频用于人物心理刻画）
storm in and out of somewhere 怒气冲冲地冲进冲出（烦躁、难过）
feel down 情绪低落、沮丧
light up with a smile 脸上绽放笑容，喜上眉梢（由难过转为开心）
eyes red and swollen 双眼红肿（哭过、伤心）
gloomy look 阴郁低落的神情
hopeless about one’s life 对生活感到绝望
2. 动作&互动描写（人物相处、治愈情节）
hand sb a warm cup of hot drink 递给某人一杯热饮（温柔安抚）
not push sb to talk 不强迫对方倾诉（温柔包容）
sweep away anxiety 吹散心中焦虑
cast fishing lines 抛鱼线
comfort those in pain 安慰痛苦的人
patiently teach sb to do sth 耐心教某人做某事
3. 环境治愈类描写（水面、自然场景）
calming peace found on the water 水面独有的安宁平和
smooth water 平静的湖面/海面
gentle wind 轻柔的微风
the first pull on the line 鱼线第一次被拉扯（惊喜瞬间）
4. 结尾升华金句（读后续写收尾万能）
It took on a special meaning, far beyond a simple hobby. 这件事被赋予特殊意义，早已不止是一项爱好。
It serves as a bridge connecting broken hearts and delivering hope. 它如同桥梁，联结破碎的心灵，传递希望。
We all deserve a better life full of warmth and joy. 我们都值得拥有充满温暖与快乐的更好生活。
I feel lucky to witness such warm changes in people. 能见证人们身上这些温暖的改变，我倍感幸运。
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