夜雨聆风参考范文在后面🥳
第1套：
Intern Feedback(实习反馈)
You are a student intern at a marketing firm, and you need to provide feedback to your fellow intern, Alex, on a market research presentation he gave recently. While the presentation was generally good, there are a few areas that could be improved.
Write an email to Alex. In your email, do the following:
· Commend him by mentioning specific aspects of the presentation that were effective.
· Describe the areas that were not as successful.
· Suggest ways to enhance future presentations.
第2套：
Feedback to The Resort Manager(住宿反馈）
You recently stayed at a resort during your semester break and enjoyed the overall experience. However, you encountered some issues with your stay. You want to provide feedback to the resort manager, Ms. Garcia, to address these concerns.
Write an email to Ms. Garcia. In your email, do the following:.
Mention what you enjoyed about your stay at the resort.
Describe the issues you had with your stay.
Suggest ways to improve the service.
第3套:
Travel Package（ 旅行计划）
You and your friend Alex have been talking about taking a trip during spring break. You recently found a travel package to a nearby city and think it would be perfect for both of you. Write an email to Alex.
In your email, you should:
·Explain why you think this travel package is a good choice for your trip.
·Describe what the travel package includes
·Invite Alex to join you on the trip.
第4套：
Advice for A Cafe（给咖啡馆的建议）
You recently visited a new cafe that opened near your campus called Sunny cafe. Although you generally enjoyed the cafe, you were disappointed with some issues.
Write an email to Ms. Garcia. In your email, do the following:
Describe what you liked about your visit to the cafe.
Explain why you were disappointed with the limited selection of pastries.
Suggest a few types of pastries that could be added to the menu to improve the selection.
Write as much as you can and in complete sentences.
第5套：
Advice for A Park（给公园的建议）
给公园管理员 Harris 女士的写一封邮件，包括以下内容：
肯定：山景公园风景优美，步行道维护得很好，适合市民休闲。
现存问题：步道到处散落垃圾；园内缺少饮水设施，游客只能自带大量水。
改进建议：沿路增设垃圾桶、增加保洁巡逻；安装公共直饮水设备。
目的：希望帮助改善公园环境。
第6套：
Request for Apartment Repairs（公寓维修请求）
You are a university student who has recently moved into a new apartment. You have noticed some issues with the apartment. You want to inform your landlord, Mr. Thompson, about these problems.
Write an email to Mr. Thompson. In your email, do the following:
Describe the issues you have encountered in the apartment.
Explain how conditions negatively affect your studies.
Request that he make arrangements to address these issues soon.
Write as much as you can and in complete sentences.
第7套：
Feedback on Recent Stay in Resort（给度假区的建议）
You recently stayed at a resort during your semester break and enjoyed the overall experience. However, you encountered some issues with your stay. You want to provide feedback to the resort manager, Ms. Garcia, to address these concerns.
Write an email to Ms. Garcia. In your email, do the following:
Mention what you enjoyed about your stay at the resort.
Describe the issues you had with your stay.
Suggest ways to improve the service.
Write as much as you can and in complete sentences.
学术讨论写作
第1套：
Remote Work（远程工作）
Dr. Gupta:
We've been discussing the impact of remote work on productivity and employee well-being. Remote work can have many significant advantages, but it may also lead to some unintended problems. Do you think remote work has a positive or negative impact?
Paul
Remote work can have a positive impact on both productivity and employees' wellbeing. The flexibility helps employees manage their worklife balance better and the reduction in commuting time can lead to increase productivity and less stress.
Claire
While remote work offers flexibility, it can negatively impact employees. Isolation and lack of facetoface interaction can hinder teamwork and lead to feelings of loneliness, affecting overall job performance.
第2套：
The Influence of Social Media on Modern Society（社交媒体对现代社会的影响）
Dr. Diaz
We often discuss the influence of social media on modern society. Social media platforms can connect people globally and promote the exchange of ideas. However, they can also lead to misinformation and negatively impact mental health. Do you think social media has a more positive or negative impact on society? Why?
Kelly
I believe social media has a positive impact on society. It allows people to stay connected with friends and family, share experiences, and access information quickly. Social media can also be a powerful tool for raising awareness about important issues.
Paul
In my opinion, social media has a negative impact on society. It can spread misinformation quickly and contribute to mental health problems like anxiety and depression. People often compare themselves to others on social media, which can lead to feelings of inadequacy.
第3套：
Public Art（公共艺术）
Public art, such as murals, sculptures, and installations, is often placed in shared community spaces. Do you think public art can shape a community's identity? Why or why not？
Claire
Public art plays a significant role in shaping community identity. It reflects the values and culture of the community, promotes local artists, and provides a sense of pride and unity among residents.
Paul
While public art can enhance a community’s aesthetic appeal, its role in shaping community identity may be limited. Other factors, such as social programs and community events, have a more substantial impact on fostering a shared identity.
第4套：
The Function of Art（艺术的功能）
Dr. Gupta:
We've been discussing how different art forms affect people and communities. Consider these specific examples: protest songs that motivate people to join movements, murals that bring communities together, or movie that change how people think about important issues. Some people argue that art creates change by making people aware of problems and motivating them to act. Others believe art simply shows what already exists in society without actually changing anything. Which view do you agree with? Why?
第5套：
Online Learning (在线学习）
Dr. Gupta:
Today we'll discuss the benefits and drawbacks of online learning. Supporters of online learning believe that it offers flexibility and access to a wide range of courses. Critics, on the other hand, believe that online learning lacks the personal interaction and structure of traditional classrooms. In your opinion, which of these factors do you believe plays a larger role in the effectiveness of online learning? Why?
Andrew:
I think the flexibility and access to diverse courses would remove a significant barrier that often prevents students from furthering their education. That barrier is location. Online learning enables potential learners to explore specialized fields and skills that might not otherwise be available where they live.
Claire:
I believe that the lack of personal interaction during online learning sessions can be detrimental to true learning. Traditional classrooms provide direct and immediate support from teachers that students don't receive during online learning classes. A classroom teacher can respond to students and answer their questions right away, as soon as confusion arises.
第6套：
Permanent Public Art and Temporary Cultural Activities（永久公共艺术和临时文化活动）
We've been discussing the role of public art like painted murals on building walls, statues in parks, and sculptures in city squares. Some people believe that these permanent artistic installations enhance neighborhoods and provide spaces for local artists to showcase their talents. Others argue that communities benefit more from funding temporary art events like outdoor concerts, theater performances, and art festivals that gather people together. What is your view? Should communities prioritize permanent public art or temporary cultural events?
第7套：
Integration of Technology in Education（技术与教育的融合）
Dr. Gupta:
We have been discussing the integration of technology in educational settings. Some educators believe that digital tools enhance student learning by providing interactive and engaging experiences. Others are
concerned that too much technology in the classroom can be distracting and may negatively impact learning outcomes. Do you think the use of technology in education is beneficial or harmful to students?
Kelly:
I believe that technology in education is beneficial for students. It provides interactive learning experiences that can make complex topics easier to understand. Additionally, digital tools can cater to various learning styles, making education more accessible.
Paul:
In my opinion, excessive use of technology in the classroom can be harmful. It can distract students from their studies and reduce face-to-face interactions with teachers and peers. A balanced approach is necessary to ensure that technology enhances, rather than hinders, learning.
参考范文：（由 ChatGPT 生成，仅供参考）
第一部分｜邮件写作
第1套 Intern Feedback｜实习反馈
Dear Alex,
I really enjoyed your market research presentation yesterday. Overall, I think you did a great job. Your slides were clear and well organized, and I especially liked the charts you used to show customer preferences. They made the data much easier to understand.
However, I noticed a few things that could be improved. You spoke a little too quickly during the second half of the presentation, so it was sometimes difficult to follow your main points. Also, some of the slides contained too much text, which made them difficult to read in a short time.
For your next presentation, perhaps you could speak more slowly and use fewer words on each slide. You could also practice the presentation several times beforehand. This would help you feel more confident and make your presentation even more effective.
I hope you find these suggestions helpful.
Best,
[Your Name]
可以积累的表达
* Overall, I think you did a great job. 总体来说，我觉得你做得很好。
* well organized 组织得很好
* make the data easier to understand 让数据更容易理解
* speak a little too quickly 说得有点太快
* be difficult to follow 难以跟上/理解
* practice beforehand 提前练习
第2套 Feedback to the Resort Manager｜住宿反馈
Dear Ms. Garcia,
I recently stayed at your resort during my semester break. Overall, I really enjoyed my stay. The room was clean and comfortable, and the view from my window was beautiful. I was also impressed by the friendly staff, who were always willing to help.
However, there were a few problems. The Wi-Fi connection in my room was very slow and sometimes did not work at all. In addition, I had to wait a long time for breakfast because there were not enough staff members in the restaurant.
I hope you could improve the Wi-Fi service so that guests can use the Internet more easily. It might also be helpful to have more staff working in the restaurant during busy hours. I believe these changes would make the experience much better for future guests.
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
好用表达
* Overall, I really enjoyed my stay.
* I was impressed by… ……给我留下了很好的印象
* There were a few problems.
* during busy hours 在繁忙时段
* make the experience much better 大大改善体验
第3套 Travel Package｜旅行计划
Dear Alex,
I recently found a travel package to a nearby city for spring break, and I think it would be a great choice for us. The price is quite reasonable, and the city is only about two hours away, so we would not have to spend too much time traveling.
The package includes round-trip bus tickets, two nights at a hotel, and breakfast each morning. It also includes a guided tour of several popular attractions in the city. Since transportation and accommodation are already included, we would not need to spend much time planning everything ourselves.
I remember that we have been talking about taking a trip together for a long time, so I think this would be a perfect opportunity. Would you like to join me? If you are interested, we could book the package this week.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best,
[Your Name]
好用表达
* a great choice for us
* The price is quite reasonable. 价格很合理
* round-trip bus tickets 往返汽车票
* a guided tour 导览游
* transportation and accommodation 交通和住宿
* a perfect opportunity 一个绝佳机会
第4套 Advice for a Cafe｜给咖啡馆的建议
Dear Ms. Garcia,
I recently visited Sunny Cafe near our campus and generally enjoyed my experience there. The cafe had a relaxing atmosphere, and the staff were friendly and helpful. I especially liked the coffee, which was fresh and reasonably priced.
However, I was a little disappointed with the limited selection of pastries. When I visited, there were only a few choices available. Since many students like to have something sweet with their coffee, I think a wider selection would make the cafe more attractive.
Perhaps you could add some popular pastries such as chocolate muffins, croissants, and fruit pies to the menu. It might also be a good idea to offer a few healthier choices, such as whole-grain bread or low-sugar cakes.
I really like Sunny Cafe, and I hope these suggestions can help make it even better.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
好用表达
* a relaxing atmosphere 轻松的氛围
* reasonably priced 价格合理的
* a limited selection of… ……选择有限
* a wider selection 更多样的选择
* add … to the menu 把……加入菜单
第5套 Advice for a Park｜给公园的建议
Dear Ms. Harris,
I often visit Mountain View Park and really enjoy spending time there. The park has beautiful scenery, and the walking paths are very well maintained. It is a wonderful place for local residents to walk, exercise, and relax.
However, I have noticed a few problems recently. There is quite a lot of trash along the walking paths, which makes some areas of the park look unpleasant. In addition, there are not enough drinking-water facilities, so visitors have to bring a large amount of water with them.
Perhaps you could place more trash cans along the paths and arrange for staff to clean the park more frequently. It would also be helpful to install public drinking-water stations in several areas.
I hope these suggestions can help improve the park and make it more enjoyable for everyone.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
这一篇建议重点背
* beautiful scenery 优美的景色
* walking paths 步行道
* well maintained 维护良好
* There is quite a lot of trash along…
* place more trash cans along the paths
* install public drinking-water stations
* make it more enjoyable for everyone
第6套 Request for Apartment Repairs｜公寓维修请求
Dear Mr. Thompson,
I recently moved into the apartment and am writing to inform you about several problems that need to be repaired. The heater in my bedroom does not work properly, and there is also a problem with the light above my desk. In addition, the window in my room does not close completely, so the room becomes very cold at night.
These problems have begun to affect my studies. Since the room is often cold, it is difficult for me to concentrate on my schoolwork. The broken light also makes it difficult to read and study at my desk in the evening.
I would really appreciate it if you could arrange for someone to repair these problems as soon as possible. If necessary, I can be at home when the repair person comes.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
第7套 Feedback on Recent Stay in Resort｜度假区建议
这道题和第2套几乎完全相同，考试时其实可以直接套同一套框架。但为了让你多准备一种问题，我换成另外两个住宿问题。
Dear Ms. Garcia,
I recently stayed at your resort during my semester break and would like to share some feedback about my experience. Overall, I had a very enjoyable stay. The resort was in a beautiful location, and I especially enjoyed the swimming pool and the outdoor areas. The staff at the front desk were also very friendly.
However, there were a couple of problems. My room was sometimes quite noisy at night because I could hear people talking in the hallway. In addition, the housekeeping service was not always on time, and my room was not cleaned until late in the afternoon on one day.
Perhaps you could remind guests to keep their voices down at night. It might also be helpful to improve the housekeeping schedule so that rooms can be cleaned earlier.
I hope these suggestions will help improve the experience for future guests.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
第二部分｜学术讨论写作
第1套 Remote Work｜远程工作
观点：同意 Paul，positive impact
I agree with Paul that remote work has a positive impact on employees because it can save commuting time and help people become more productive. Many workers spend one or even two hours traveling between their homes and offices every day. This can make them feel tired before they even start working. By working from home, they can use this extra time to rest or finish important tasks. For example, my cousin works for a technology company and is allowed to work from home three days a week. In the past, he had to get up very early and spend almost two hours commuting every day. Now, he can start his work with more energy and usually finishes his tasks earlier. Therefore, although remote work may reduce face-to-face communication, I believe its flexibility and time-saving benefits can improve both productivity and employees’ well-being.
第2套 Social Media｜社交媒体
观点：同意 Kelly，positive impact
I agree with Kelly that social media has a more positive impact on society because it gives people quick access to useful information. Today, people can use platforms such as TikTok and other online services to find explanations, videos, and useful information whenever they need them. For example, when I have difficulty understanding a chemistry problem, I can search for a short video explaining the concept. Instead of waiting until the next class to ask my teacher, I can often find an explanation immediately and continue studying. Social media can also help people learn practical skills, such as cooking, using computer programs, or learning a foreign language.Although Paul is right that false information can spread online, users can check information from reliable sources. Therefore, I believe the easy access to knowledge provided by social media brings more benefits than disadvantages.
第3套 Public Art｜公共艺术
观点：同意 Claire
I agree with Claire that public art can play an important role in shaping a community’s identity. This is because public art can show the history and culture of a place in a way that people can easily see and remember. For example, a city could invite local artists to paint murals showing important historical events, traditional food, or famous local buildings. Residents who see these murals every day may develop a stronger connection with their community. At the same time, visitors can learn something about the city simply by looking at the artwork. Over time, some murals or sculptures may even become symbols of the community and attract tourists. Paul is right that community events can also bring people together. However, these events usually last for only a short time, while public art can remain for years. Therefore, I believe public art can strongly shape community identity.
第4套 The Function of Art｜艺术的功能
观点：Art can create change
I believe art can create real social change because it can attract people’s attention to problems and encourage them to take action. Compared with reports or long articles, songs, movies, and paintings can often communicate ideas in a more interesting and emotional way. For example, a movie about environmental pollution may show how plastic waste harms animals in the ocean. After watching the movie, some viewers may start using fewer plastic bags or reusable bottles. They may also share the movie with their friends, allowing more people to learn about the problem. In this way, art does not simply describe an existing problem; it can actually influence people’s behavior. Of course, a single movie or song cannot solve a major social problem by itself. However, by changing people’s attitudes and encouraging action, art can become an important force for social change.
第5套 Online Learning｜在线学习
观点：支持 Andrew，flexibility/access 更重要
I agree with Andrew that flexibility and access to different courses play a larger role in making online learning effective. The main reason is that students are no longer limited by where they live. They can study subjects that may not be offered at their own schools. For example, suppose a student is interested in computer programming, but his university does not offer an advanced programming course. Through online learning, he can take a course taught by an experienced professor from another university without moving to another city. He can also watch recorded lessons again when he does not understand a difficult concept. Claire is right that students may receive less face-to-face support online. However, many online courses provide discussion boards and online meetings where students can ask questions. Therefore, I think greater flexibility and access to more courses make online learning highly valuable.
第6套 Permanent Public Art vs. Temporary Cultural Activities
观点：支持 temporary cultural events
I believe communities should prioritize temporary cultural events, such as concerts, theater performances, and art festivals. The main reason is that these activities encourage people to participate instead of simply looking at art. For example, an outdoor music festival can bring hundreds of local residents together. People can listen to music, talk with their neighbors, buy food from local businesses, and enjoy activities with their families. This creates opportunities for people who normally do not know each other to communicate and develop stronger relationships. In addition, different events can be organized throughout the year, so residents can enjoy new experiences regularly. Permanent murals and sculptures can certainly make neighborhoods more attractive. However, people may stop paying attention to them after seeing them every day. Therefore, I believe temporary cultural activities are more effective because they actively bring community members together.
第7套 Integration of Technology in Education｜技术与教育
观点：同意 Kelly，beneficial
I agree with Kelly that technology is beneficial to students because it can make difficult subjects easier to understand. Traditional textbooks usually explain ideas through words and pictures, while digital tools can provide videos, animations, and interactive activities. For example, in a chemistry class, students may find it difficult to understand how molecules interact because they cannot directly see the process. A teacher can use an animation or a computer model to show how molecules move and react with each other. Students can watch the process several times, which can help them understand the concept more clearly. Paul is right that technology may distract students if they use their devices for games or social media. However, teachers can set clear rules about when devices should be used. Therefore, when used properly, technology can make learning more effective and engaging.
最值得背的是图片范文体现出来的几个“骨架句”。比如投诉/反馈类几乎都可以这样变：
① 开头说明身份/经历
I recently visited/stayed at…
I am writing to provide some feedback about…
② 先肯定
Overall, I really enjoyed…
I was especially impressed by…
③ 转折提出问题
However, I noticed a few problems.
However, I was a little disappointed with…
④ 图片范文里非常好用的委婉建议
If it is more convenient for you, perhaps you could…
或者简单一点：
Perhaps you could…
It might also be helpful to…
⑤ 解释建议的效果
This would solve the problem…
This would make the experience much better for…
⑥ 结尾
I hope you find these suggestions helpful.
Looking forward to hearing from you.