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In this letter, the author claims that
To substantiate his idea, the author demonstrates that
In addition, the author indicates that
Furthermore,the author cites a resent survey to support his idea that
However, the argument rests on a series of unsubstantiated assumptions and is therefore
unpersuasive as it stands.
结尾
To sum up, the author fails to claim that XXX, because the evidence cited in the analysis do not
lend strong support to what the author maintains.
To persuade me better, the author should provide more information regard to XXX.
Additionally, the author must illustrate that XXX.
Therefore, if the argument have included these given points above, the argument would have been
more persuasive and logically acceptable.
理由
1.One problem with the argument is that it fails to establish the causal relationship between A and
B. Perhaps B results XXX.
The argument is unacceptable unless there is compelling evidence to support the connection
between A and B.
2.The argument observes a correlation between A and B and claims that the former is the cause of
the latter. However, the argument fails to rule out other possible explantations for B. For example,
XXX.
Any of these factors may lead to B
3.The author claims that XXX, because XXX.
The argument assumes without justification that the background conditions such as XXX, remain
the same at different time. The assumption is unwarranted that things rarely remain the same over
the extended periods of time. Many differences may exist between A and B. For example, A xxx ;
however, B xxx. Any of these scenarios, if true, would serve to undermine the claim that XXX.
4.Citing surveys that
The scope and validity of the survey are both equivocal. For instance, the survey only put focus on
Unless the survey is fully representative, valid and reliable, it cannot be used to effectively back the
author’s argument.
5.One problem with the argument is that it assumes the nationwide statistics about XXX applied
equally to the individuals in XXX. Yet this might not be the case, for a variety of reasons. Perhaps,
XXX; or perhaps, XXX. Without ruling out such possibilities, the author cannot justifiably conclude
that ….
句型积累
1.It is presumptuous to judge …according to
Eg. It is presumptuous to judge his popularity to the sales of his albums.
2.share a belief that
Eg. We all share a belief that that
3.At the even worse, 更糟的是
4.This is not to say ….让步Eg.
5.Deep down 深⼊入地说
6.Providing that 假使
7.While…, we should not lose sight of the fact that 虽然…,但我们不能⽆无视
8.I follow the reasoning that …. 我的理由是
9.If we cast a look back at ….若我们回顾
10. Again, there are parallels with
11.Moving on to a wilder theme ….
12.Pose a threat to
13.exert a negative influence/impact on
14. A constitute a menace to B
15.With A, xxx; Without, xxx.
16.The statement attempts to bridge XX to XX.
17.Be fraught with
18. Paragons, such as A, come immediately to my mind that
19.Such is the remark of XXX, one of the best known scientists/politicians
