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专题 19 应用文写作（新课标）
考点 五年考情（2021-2025） 命题趋势
2025全国一卷--告知信；
1.最近五年新课标卷应用文写作以书信类为
2025全国二卷—咨询信；
主。
考点1 书信体 2025八省联考卷—推荐信；
2024新课标I&II卷—告知信；
2.浙江1月卷应用文写作倾向于非书信体。
（5年7考）
2023新课标I&II卷—建议信； 3.应用文写作渗透“德智体美劳”理念，尤
2022新课标I&II卷—邀请信；
其是体育健身、美育教育、劳动意识。
2021新课标I&II卷—投稿信。
4.写作字数应为80个左右，实际需要120
2025浙江1月卷—演讲稿；
2024浙江1月卷—短文投稿； 词左右。
考点2 非书信体
2024九省联考卷—活动通知； 5.重视材料审题能力、核心素养主题把握能
（5年6考） 2023浙江1月卷—活动报道；
力以及综合运用高级词汇和复杂句式表达
2023四省联考卷—音乐评论；
能力。
2020新课标卷—活动报道。
考点01 书信体（邀请信、建议信、告知信……）
【2025全国一卷--告知信】
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I
am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)你的选择；
(2)说明理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my
predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost
academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even
aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to
others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will
be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious
atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Fun at my
school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express → convey
利用：capitalize on → use
担当：serve as → act as
注意：pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to
others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句：Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone
to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which
capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，which引导的
定语从句）
【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend
someone on the same wavelength.（运用了since引导的状语从句）
【2025全国二卷—咨询信】假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris
写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)询问进展；
(2)提醒交稿时间。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
,
Dear Chris
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
Hope this email finds you well! Last month, you kindly agreed to write an article about sports in
Canada, and we’re all looking forward to reading it.
I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article. Would you mind letting me know how
it’s going? Also, could I remind you that the deadline for submission is this Friday, June 14th? Your insights
into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers’ understanding of global sports culture, which will be of
benefit to us.
Thank you again for your support!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教 Chris写一封邮件，询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍
加拿大体育运动的文章的进展，并提醒交稿时间。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
询问：inquire →ask
理解：understanding →comprehension
此外：also →besides
肯定地：surely →certainly
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.
拓展句：As you know, I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Would you mind letting me know how it’s going?（运用了how引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2】Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers’ understanding of global
sports culture, which will be of benefit to us. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【2025八省联考卷—推荐信】
假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）推荐教练。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. It’s a fun and exciting sport! I highly support
your decision, as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make new friends.
I recommend you take lessons from Coach Zhang. He is an experienced coach who has trained many
players at different levels. His classes are engaging and tailored to each student’s needs. You can find him at
the local sports center.
Let me know if you need more information. Enjoy your training!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的留学生朋友 Beth想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教
这一情况，给她回封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强烈地：highly→ strongly
提高，增强：improve → enhance
引人入胜的：engaging→ attractive
有趣的：fun→ interesting2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His classes are engaging and tailored to each student’s needs.
拓展句：His classes are engaging, which are tailored to each student’s needs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】He is an experienced coach who has trained many players at different levels.(运用
了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I highly support your decision, as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make
new friends.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句以及not only…but also…的固定句型)
【2024新课标I&II卷--告知信】
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经
历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I
decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming
flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my
creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep
sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
整个的：entire→whole
提供：offer→provide
总之：in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over
the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the
small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语
从句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
【2023新课标I&II卷—建议信】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在
问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议 。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken
English training after class. The reasons are as follows.To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the
groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation,
leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less
motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English
together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
.
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their
own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving
little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along
with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
【2022新课标I&II卷—邀请信】
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访
谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since
Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.
As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday,
I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline
写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型 1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了
where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal
with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
【2021新课标I&II卷—投稿信】
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
第一节 这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行
展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办 10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主
体，主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。
Dear Editor-in-Chief，
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth.
I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue
from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of
contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture
and strengthens our cultural confidence.
As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign
teens and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on
the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH.
Since it was founded, YOUTH has been popular with many students including me, a regular reader of
YOUTH. Thepaper’s broad content and rich knowledge have not only widened my horizons but also given
me much enjoyment. I am fond of all its columns, but what impressed me most is culture, where I can read
humorous stories, poems, fictions and so on to improve my oral English.
Please accept my sincere congratulations again and I best wish that YOUTH could achieve greater
success and gain more popularity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：depressed→upset
此外：besides→what’s more
得到：receive→obtain2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of
imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a
writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
考点02 非书信体（发言稿、书面通知、短文投稿……）
【2025浙江1月卷—演讲稿】
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一
篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述看法；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My views on filming short videos on campus
One possible version:
My views on filming short videos on campus
Good morning, everyone! I’ve recently noticed a growing trend of students filming short videos on
campus with their mobile phones.
While I appreciate the enthusiasm for sharing creative content, we must also consider the potential
drawbacks. Filming can disrupt the learning environment by interrupting classes or study sessions, making
it difficult for others to concentrate. Additionally, not everyone is comfortable being recorded. Capturing
someone without their permission can lead to discomfort or conflict.
To create a more harmonious atmosphere, I’d like to offer several practical tips. First, respect our
shared study time by avoiding filming in quiet areas or during class. Second, always ask permission from
anyone featured in your videos. Lastly, follow the school rules regarding filming on campus.
Thank you for considering my suggestions!
【2024浙江1月卷—短文投稿】请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内
容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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【答案】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity
into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine
involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s
a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is
recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness.
Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it
promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change
that can make a big difference in your day.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同
学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with
首先：first→above all
减轻：combat→relieve
提高：improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and
taking a few deep breaths.
拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs andback, and taking a few deep breaths.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-
being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back,
and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【2024九省联考卷—活动通知】
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
(1)介绍活动目的；
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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【答案】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand
in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing,
focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your
entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文
比赛写一则活动通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
集中：focus on→concentrate on
鼓励：encourage→hearten
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed
“Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
拓展句：Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose
theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了
动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and
showing how we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
【2023浙江1月卷—活动报道】
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around US
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our
Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics
and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different
plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and
learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for
animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our
ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我
们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our
Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by
our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the
different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world
and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter
for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
【2023安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷—音乐评论】
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内
容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【满分作文一】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after
another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a
live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain
started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart
and gave me a feeling of connection.I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to
learn about and from each other.
【满分作文二】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The joint performance organized by our school and a friendly school in the UK showcased a variety of
musical styles from different cultures. As an audience member, I was deeply impressed by the talented
musicians and singers who performed flawlessly. The concert created a sense of unity and connection among the
viewers, despite the distance between us. However, I think it would have been better if there were subtitles or
translations for the lyrics of the songs to make it more accessible for international viewers.
Overall, it was an amazing event, and I look forward to more such collaborations in the future.
【满分作文三】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
With top-quality sound and video production, it created an immersive and unforgettable viewing
experience. What kept me utterly spellbound were the sheer brilliance of the performers and seamless
transition between each song. It is not hard to see that each music piece was carefully selected and each
performance was filled with extraordinary/remarkable passion and professionalism. The only drawback is that
information about the performers and their backgrounds, particularly for those who are not familiar to the
audience, is not provided enough.
It would be better to know more about their experiences and how they honed their musical skills to reach
this level of excellence, enhancing the audience’s appreciation of their artistry.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在
线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different
from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no
different from a live one.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert
almost no different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls
from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从
句）
【2020年新课标卷—活动报道】
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员；
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下；
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of
every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers,
from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with
their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners
managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also
made us more cohesive.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of
every student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary
help as well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes
us more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running
race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定
语从句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also
makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。
