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►专题 21 读后续写高分技巧（下）
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考点难点精
【读后续写易错类型】
【01内容】
段首第一句话实际限制了续写的主题，续写的内容不要与段首出现行文逻辑上的冲突。读不懂原文，
如不认识bear spray, 不理解a bright cloud enveloped the animal, 没有理清任务关系，由于阅读能力直接
影响到续写的发挥。还有的考试大面积抄写试卷中的阅读理解或完型填空等处的语句；还有一些考生
描写心理活动和场景过多，缺乏具体描写，导致故事内容不连贯，不完整。
【02语言】
考生偏向于刻意追求高级，新颖的词汇，强行运用复杂句型等语法结构，而忽略了与原文语言环境的
符合度和连贯度。同时出现拼写错误等，不能结合原文给出漂亮的转折，起伏和故事性结尾，与读后
续写的全新创作宗旨相违背。
【03篇章结构】
读后续写评分标准：先根据整体情况对文章进行定档，然后依据该档的相应要求来确定或调节档次，
最后打分。打分主要从续写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。
【读后续写考查重点】
1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
2.内容的丰富性；
3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
4.上下文的连贯性。【读后续写解题步骤】
1.仔细审题，字数限制，使用关键词语，续写段落的首句提示，做到“心中有数”。
2.精读文章，确定文章线索。如：who, when, where, why, what, how.
3.回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。确定续写段落的内容。
4.拟写草稿，修改错词病句。注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确
使用，使上下文连贯。
5.最后，务必做到“字迹工整，清晰，卷面美观”。
【读后续写技巧解读】
策划矛盾，预设问题，攻破读后续写难点
读后续写作文是可以通过一定的写作技巧拿到你想象不到的高分的。但是“技巧”这个词似乎
不太走运，在很多人眼里，“技巧”意味着琐碎、空洞、僵化。但事实上，那些口口声声说写
作没有技巧的人，往往自己经过了严格的技巧练习。请记住：好的写作技巧跟文学并不违背；
技巧是供你选择，而不是逼你使用的。
如何通过矛盾设计来写好读后续写作文？ 矛盾冲突有哪两种主要形式？一是外部冲突，包括人
与人、人与周围环境的矛盾；二是内部冲突，指的是特定环境下人物自身的矛盾。 如何设计矛
盾冲突？从大的方向上说，它包括三个方面：人与人、人与周围环境、人物内心。从内容方面来
说，这种矛盾冲突，是现实生活里由于人们的立场、观点、思想感情、理想愿望的不同而产生的
矛盾斗争，是人们的主观与客观、正确与错误、先进与落后等种种矛盾斗争的反映。 在构思作
文时，一般都会想到哪些矛盾冲突呢？从立意的角度来说，矛盾冲突要指向人们的价值取向。比
如生与死、是与非、成与败、诚与伪、忠与奸、善与恶、荣与辱、得与失、乐与苦、爱与恨、兴
与衰、小我与大我、主观与客观……这是需要我们在写作之前想清楚的。
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【典例剖析】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
There Are No Vans
To me, what Thanksgiving really means is giving good thanks, not eating turkey. By the time I was 18 I
had created my Thanksgiving ritual (惯例). I would go out shopping and buy enough food for one or two
families. Then I would dress like a delivery boy, go to the poorest neighborhood and just knock on a door, and
would always include a note saying “All that I ask in return is that you take good enough care of yourself so
that someday you can do the same thing for someone else.” I have received more from this annual ritual than I
have from any amount of money I've ever earned, especially one such experience in New York City.
Several years ago I was in New York City with my newly married wife during Thanksgiving. She was sad
because we were not with our family. Normally she would be home decorating the house for Christmas, but we
were stuck here in a hotel room. I said, “Honey, look, why don't we decorate some lives today instead of some
trees?” When I told her what I always do on Thanksgiving, she got excited. I said, “Let's go someplace where
we can really appreciate who we are, what we are able to do and what we can really give. Let's go to the poor
neighborhood Harlem and feed some people there in need. We'll go buy enough food for six or seven families
for 30 days. We've got enough. Let's go do it!”
We started by getting a van (货车), but there seemed no vans in all of New York City. The rent-a-car
places were all out of vans. My wife was disappointed, and I said, “Look, the bottom line is that if we want
something, we can make it happen! All we have to do is take action. There are plenty of vans here in New York
City. Look down at the street. Do you see all those vans? Let's go get one!” My wife agreed and we took action.
Paragraph 1:
We tried stopping vans as they were driving down the street.
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Eventually a van drove up and the driver said yes.
思路解析：
Paragraph 1:
We tried stopping vans as they were driving down the street.
1.（写drivers的反应）（三选一） However, they came, they saw and they sped up, only to leave ash and dirt dancing in the air.
Yet the drivers either give a cold shoulder to our frantically-waving hand（疯狂挥手）, or sped past
us, drowning our hope in the deafening（震耳欲聋的） roar of engines.
However, as if exerted a curse, welcoming us were either vans zooming away with thunderous roars,
some drivers' scornful words, or others' loudly and impatiently pressing their horns, leaving
us dumbfounded（目瞪口呆的）.
2.（我和妻子的情绪）（二选一）
Fingers numbed（麻木，此处为动词）by the chilly（刺骨的）wind, throat choked by dusty air,
we felt ever so alone on the crowded streets of New York — “Who can we turn to?” my wife
murmured with a fierce frown.
Hours creeping by, what I could do was waving my fatigued arms and opening my thirsty throat
automatically.
3. (突然有了想法)
Staring into my wife's red-rimmed（满眼通红的）eyes, we found ourselves on the verge(边缘) of giving
up, until it suddenly dawned on me — Hope always fell at the last minute and patience was the
touchstone.
4.（开始做）
The nearly-extinguished（快要熄灭的）sparks of hope were instantly rekindled（点燃）, encouraging
us to go on with the search for a van that could deliver the goodwill brimming in us.
Paragraph 2: Eventually a van drove up and the driver said yes. 1.（我们的心情）
Hearing the simple yes, we all jumped with joy.
2.（更加意外的是）
To our big surprise, the driver even offered to join us.
3.（开始做）
Showering him in a string of thanks, we immediately set out to purchase, and then headed for Harlem.
4. （具象或抽象写故事过程都可以，根据学生写作水平而定，抽象稳妥些）
原文用抽象：Together we packed them up, carried them onto the van and went to buildings where there
were even people living without electricity.
可以用具象：That night, we witnessed the other side of the seemingly glamorous(耀眼的)city —
families struggling desperately on the edge of poverty, orphans without a roof over their heads... Yet when
we gave them food, heart-felt appreciation could be seen on all those pale and weather-beaten faces,
radiating enough warmth to melt the coldest winter.
5. (我们的心情)
Tears turned into frost, covering our faces, yet we felt our inner world flaming hot.
6. 照应主旨（尤其是标题）的写法
It was the worst of times, but it was also the best of times. We cannot change this unfair world that make
the rich and poor divide, but at least we can offer our kindness, for the helpless souls — even in a city
where “there are no vans.”
原文：It was a truly fulfilling experience to make even a small difference. You see, you can make
anything happen if you commit to it and take action. Miracles like this happen every day — even in a city
where “there are no vans.”
文章大意：感恩节到了，我继续和往年一样，这一天会开车送礼物如食物给穷人。但是有一年，
我和妻子待在纽约的旅馆里，不能回家团圆，我告诉妻子我往年的做法，妻子非常开心。但我们
需要货车（van）才能购物。于是我们准备在街头拦一辆车，妻子同意了。
文章凭什么吸引阅卷者，从而拿到高分？一句话：矛盾设计精巧。首先，是人与周围环境的矛盾。
环境的恶劣：chilly wind，我们却在拦车，突出艰难。（环境描写，可以力求一个渐变的技巧，譬
如在小说 I survive 里有一句：The wind moaned at first. Then it started to howl, and finally it was
shrieking so loudly Dad had to turn up the TV.）
其次，是人与人的矛盾。
纽约的街头，无人同情我们，更无人对我们道一声辛苦，大家似乎什么也没有看到。但最后我们
还是看到了热心人，并且他们和我们一起去帮助他人。
最后，是人的内心冲突。
从开始的充满希望到绝望：“Who can we turn to?” my wife murmured with a fierce frown... we found
ourselves on the verge（边缘）of giving up. 到重新充满期待：The nearly-extinguished（快要熄灭
的）sparks of hope were instantly rekindled（点燃）. 虽然读后续写无非是简单的故事讲述，但我们
还是可以融入一点儿人文主义情怀，这就是美学价值了。如在文章中用到了：However, they came,
they saw and they sped up, only to leave ash and dirt dancing in the air. 和It was the worst of times, but it
was also the best of times. 当然，这不是必需的，而需要平时的积累和一点点文学灵感。
【举一反三】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight
by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started
to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going
to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a
high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest
and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,
but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane
was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to
be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）
somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also
saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything
better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to
the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?
Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,
another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to
an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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【范文赏析】
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute
darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family
at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I
quarreled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this
awful place, confronted with the danger of dying." She regretted with endless anxiety, and then
became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing
searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again.Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract
others' attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter. There,
she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible,
she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again,
determining to live the life to the fullest.
【写作思路】
首先，在逻辑上，要做到了合理合情：起初，主人公身陷森林，内心充满了悔恨，在面对困难时
焦虑、畏惧；之后，主人公努力求生，最终获救，并且领悟到了一定的人生道理。纵观整个故事，情
节发展不仅符合两段给出的开头所限定的情景要求，而且还设置了一定的悬念，增强了故事的可读性。
文章第一句 "an absolute darkness ruled the forest" 中， "rule" 一词就使用了拟人的修辞手法，让
森林阴森黑暗的一面展露无遗，同时描绘出主人公身处绝境的紧迫性。在 "Eager and excited, she
flagged her yellow blouse…" 一句中，直接将情绪形容词放在句首，使用了非谓语动词的语法，表达精
练。
此外， "There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief." 一句中，使
用了几个短句，却包含了两处非谓语动词语法，同时活用了 "wear" 一词，把两个人相见时的场景生
动地描绘了出来。
【词汇拓展】
1） 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or ，Not only … but also
2） 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however , although , though …
3） 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at
that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
(2022年全国高考新高考II卷)It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in
and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen
forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a
fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over
and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided
not to run.
What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I
was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave
him the choice to run or not, and let him decide. ”
I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the
right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming
towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children,
but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of
his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that
David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer—that’s all. David had
not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children,
he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the
challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.
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【范文赏析】
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. I said gently and quietly,
“No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is
nothing to do with others’ thoughts. ” He sat still with a deep breath. “You have a full preparation
before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a
sincere tone. Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his
eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. His coach
heard what David said
and gave me a look—the kind that was more determined than anyone else’s.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It
seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a
heart disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was
tripped over within the a few kilometers. It didn’t take long before he picked himself up again
and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him. “Come
on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically. To everyone’s joy, he
reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first
place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen
finally.
（2022年1月浙江卷读后续写）
When Dr. Henderson was assigning（指定） project mates for his psychology class, I
secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun
with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive,
extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to
match. As fate （命运）would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in
class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself. He looked at me as though I weren't
there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an
A in the course. He wasn't mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression he could do whatever
project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.
Needless to say, I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to
make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse.
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis （假说）, set up an experiment to
test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team
received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging
student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me. I
was outmatched. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I
didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter
what.
After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of
teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 结部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好；
Para 1. We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
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Para 2. One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.
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【范文赏析】We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. Though I wanted to share my ideas with
him fully, I failed to do so for fear that I would hold him back. I just kept nodding when he asked
me whether it is ok to do this way or that way. I thought it was impossible to persuade him into
accepting my views, so I didn’t want to waste our time to discuss. I started to wait to leave
immediately we arrived at the place, and so did he. I just hoped that the presentation day could
come earlier.
One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to
hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I
stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of
our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and
finally finished our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson’s was very
satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance
of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel
farther.
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1.【浙江省2023届A9协作体暑假返校联考高三英语试题】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment,
struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat
was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name
carved.
On impulse I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully
opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name. I found it immediately
and called it,waiting patiently,and then a lady answered.
"Yes," she said in surprise, with extreme excitement. "It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year
ago."
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house.She took the umbrella.with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her
parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrieving (找回) this special possession was such that to have accepted her
reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was
worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I
would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no
answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of
the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this,I couldn't control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so I could greet my
little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding
desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen overwhelmed by misery.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答，
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy ran fleetly to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
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Abruptly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
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读后续写范文:Suddenly, the doorbell rang and ran fleetly to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I
heard a man's hearty voice coming and went to the door. He was a delivery man with his arms full of parcels.
"This is a mistake”, I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had gone, I
didn't know what to do. Subsequently, Peggy and I sat on the floor, looking at each other unbelievably. What a
surprise! I searched for the name of the sender.
Abruptly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. I picked up the note, which read "Thanks for
your returning the umbrella. Merry Christmas!” It was the lady who sent us these parcels. Holding the note
tightly, I was on the verge of tears, with a stream of warmth spreading across my body. On the chilly
Christmas, I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just sat in our small
apartment unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness. A sweet peace flooded into me like a blessing, which
made me hopeful again.
2.【浙江省七彩阳光新高考研究联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期9月返校联考】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Radzi was the first out of the plane. He collected his luggage and quickly made his way to the arrival,
hardly able to contain his excitement at meeting his family after six years abroad. He looked around
expectantly, hoping to hear his voice being called out but he heard no sweet voices. He turned around and saw
his parents, their dear faces shining with pride and pleasure but of his teenage twin sisters—none. There was
no sign of them.
“They must be hiding somewhere—they love to play hide and seek.”. His father smiled but said nothing.
His mother kept on hugging him not allowing him to say anything. His father murmured, “Let's get home.
They're waiting for us at home.” Radzi smiled, relieved to know they were at home. He kept on talking about
how he toured Europe as Wani asked him to in her letter and he was rather puzzled whenever his parents
exchanged glances.
Reaching home, he spied a lone figure at the door. “Why one? There should be two.” The twins were
inseparable but it could be that six years had made all the difference. As that lone figure rushed towards him,
he thought it was Wani but she said she was Wati. So it must be. He really could not differentiate between the
two of them and they had fun deceiving him all the time. And they really had a lot of laughter over his
mistaking one for the other.
“Where's Wani?”“In your bedroom.”
“Wani, Bang's home.”
He walked into his room and read the words ‘Welcome Home, Dr. Radzi!’ He trusted his twin sisters to be
so dramatic! He was studying medicine as a doctor and he had been focusing on his final examinations which
needed much concentration. Wati invited him to go downstream to their favorite hideout. “Bang, I wish to be
alone with you without Wani. Wani can wait her turn.”
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2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
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In a quiet sad and serious tone, she related what had happened to Wani. A year ago, Wani fell seriously ill
and was diagnosed with cancer. Everyone wanted to tell Radzi but Wani begged them not to as he was sitting
for his finals and she did not want him to lose all concentration and be so upset. Everyone had to promise andeven after his finals, she wrote him to tour Europe before coming home. She sent him photos of her with Wati,
smiling, cheerful, and healthy. Radzi was stunned and asked in agony, “How could she? Why did you let her do
it? Why? Why? ” Wati kept silent. All she could do was to hug her brother, comforting him as he sobbed his
heart out. When the tears dried up, Wati held out a letter. Radzi recognized the handwriting.
He took the letter and walked to the graveyard. Wati went with him, then left him to read the letter and to
be alone in spirit with his beloved sister. “Bang, please don’t grieve. Remember me as the healthy, cheerful,
fun-loving sister. Treasure our past moments and keep me always in your heart. Wati is with you. In her, you
see me. I want to be a doctor like you. I can’t but you are one now. Be the best doctor I know. I am proud of
you. ” As he read her letter, a strange peace fell on him. It was as though she was beside him, comforting him
and holding his hand. He looked around, saw Wati and she smiled. In Wati, he saw Wani. He walked up to Wati,
took her hand. Together, the brother and sister walked home in the silence of the quiet evening.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Radzi时隔六年回国，在机场的时候特别期待见到亲人，看到
了父母但是没有瞧见两个双胞胎妹妹的踪影，回家后也只看到Wati，没有见到另一个妹妹Wani的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她以一种平静、悲伤和严肃的语气讲述了发生在 Wani身上的事情。”和第二段
首句关键词“ 墓地”可知，Wani去世了，所以第一段可描述在Radzi出国期间，妹妹Wani生病了但
隐瞒了哥哥的故事。
②由第二段首句内容“他接过信，走向墓地。”可知，第二段可描写 Wani写的信的具体内容以及哥哥
读完信后的感受。
2.续写线索：Wati讲述事情真相——Wani身患重病——祈求隐瞒——得知真相痛哭——读信——情绪
缓解
3.词汇激活
行为类
①讲述：relate/narrate/tell
②拥抱：hug/embrace/give sb a hug
③想要做：want to do/desire to do/be eager to do
情绪类
①震惊的：stunned/shocked
②沮丧的：upset/depressed
③高兴地：cheerful /delightful【点睛】[高分句型1]Everyone wanted to tell Radzi but Wani begged them not to as he was sitting for his
finals and she did not want him to lose all concentration and be so upset. (as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]It was as though she was beside him, comforting him and holding his hand. (as though引导表语
从句；现在分词做伴随状语)
3.【江苏省南通市通州、兴化、泗洪2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次质量监测考试】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Here is a secret that everyone knows: I don’t like to ask for help. Of course, my disability means that I
need assistance when I get dressed and have to be driven everywhere, but that is precisely my point.
One night a few years ago, after my caregiver helped me to bed, I enjoyed my favorite part of my routine
— playing with my service dog Marshall. When the rest of the world made me feel “lacking”, Marshall made
me feel like “enough” .
As usual, he jumped off the bed after a few minutes, but the pain in his eyes told me something was
wrong. A few days later, a trip to the vet confirmed my worst fears. Dr Tom said, “I must perform an operation
to treat him.”“Is he in pain?”I held my breath. Then I got the answer “Yes.”
I felt heartbroken. I couldn’t remember talking about the details. I had one huge question:“How much
would the operation cost?”“About$2, 500. It might as well have been a million.” I couldn’t afford it. Each day,
I searched for ways to raise money for this operation.
A beautiful bike trail was close to the apartment where we lived. On most of the days of our eight years
together, Marshall and I used it. I loved the trees, the fresh air and being outside. Over the years, many of the
neighbors got familiar with us. Everyone loved Marshall.
Then one day, an idea occurred to me. Could I ask these people to contribute to the cost of Marshall’s
operation? If I could push my wheelchair a certain number of laps (圈) and get money for every lap that I
completed, might I raise enough money for Marshall to have his operation? Our regular route was a mile and a
half long. My goal was to push my wheelchair ten laps, a total of fifteen miles. Next, feeling very bold and a
little nervous, I set a date. Then I made posters and posted them around my apartment and all over the bike trail.
My neighbors were concerned for Marshall.
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With hope, I started to train myself.
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With hope, I started to train myself. For the first few days, I nearly gave up. Pushing my wheelchair made
me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my love for Marshall kept me going. Instead of listening to
my body, I focused on the voice in my heart. When I was training, I thought to myself. “One more lap. You can
do this. Don’t stop. Marshall needs you.” After weeks of daily training, I could finish all fifteen miles.
The big day finally came and I went out at 6: 30 a.m. The first few laps were long and lonely. Slowly the
donors and neighbors came to watch. Some even cheered as I passed them. With every mile, more people came
and donated money. There was hope after all. Donations from the neighbors continued. Many hours passed, and
I finished all fifteen miles. I succeeded in raising enough money for Marshall’s operation. I could never have
made it without these kind people’s support.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了身患残疾的作者并不喜欢寻求帮助。然而当他的爱犬Marshall
身患重病需要大笔钱做手术时，作者想到一个主意：推动轮椅15英里去筹钱。作者战胜身体的疼痛，
刻苦训练，最终实现了自己的既定目标。在好心人的帮助下，成功筹到钱的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“带着希望，我开始训练自己。”可知，第一段可描写作者战胜疼痛刻苦训练。
②由第二段首句内容“重要的一天终于来了，我在早上6:30出门。”可知，第二段可描写作者成功跑
完了15英里，为马歇尔的手术筹集了足够的资金。
2.续写线索：训练——疼痛——战胜疼痛——出发——捐款——筹款成功3.词汇激活
行为类
①关注：focus on/center on/pay attention to
②完成：finish/complete
③捐赠：donate/contribute
情绪类
①爱：love/affection
②欢呼：cheer /be in high spirits/acclaim
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Pushing my wheelchair made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my
love for Marshall kept me going.(运用动名词作主语和现在分词作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2]. I could never have made it without these kind people’s support.(运用了without含蓄条件句的
虚拟语气)
4.【Z20名校联盟（浙江省名校新高考研宄联盟）2022-2023学年髙三第一次联考】
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had a dream from primary school: to work in television. My parents owned a little grocery store, so we
were definitely not fancy people. Thankfully, my dad had raised me to have a lot of confidence. He often said,
“You can do anything you want to do.” My dad was particularly supportive. He was my steady rock — always
there for me.
With his help and encouragement, I was admitted to the radio and television arts program at Ryerson in
Toronto. I really loved the program and worked hard and I was named the most outstanding graduate. I felt like
I was already living my dream. I began to think that maybe I could apply for an internship in CBC or CTV.
Luckily, Global Television had just started broadcasting in Canada that year. I thought to myself: I’m new
and they're new, so if Fm going to get to know one person at Global, it might as well be the president. I was
scared, but I knew deep down inside that this was what I wanted. When I called my dad and told him my plan,
he said, “Good, Faye. That’s exactly what you should do.”
With my heart just about pounding out of my body, I called up the president of Global Television.
Suddenly Mr. Slaight was on the phone. “I’ve heard that your studio facilities are amazing. I could come at
eleven o’clock on Monday or eleven o’clock on Sunday for a tour. What would suit you better?” I caught him
totally off guard. He stuttered a bit, and then picked a day. When I hung up, I was scared but excited.
I arrived at the studio on the appointed day. When Mr. Slaight took me around, he looked at me and said，
“What do you want?” He sounded furious but curious. “All I want is a chance to audition. I just want you toknow my face. That’s all I’m asking.”
I didn’t know whether I’d ever hear from him again, but two weeks later, his secretary called, “Mr. Slaight
wants to know if you’d like to come and audition for a new school life show.” I immediately
answered，“Sure!”
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When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. With
boldness, I finished my performance relatively smoothly though palms were sweating. Never in my wildest
dream did I imagine that I was indeed assigned the intern job to act on a school life show and my first public
appearance on TV was in five days. After sharing the thrilling news with my dad, I received the warmest
congratulations and expectations from my family. Picturing my families eagerly waiting for my performance, I
worked day and night as busy as a bee for fear that I would make a fool of myself live on TV.
Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.
Wearing fancy dress and delicate make up, I was so proud but nervous that my show would be watched by so
many audience. My mind suddenly went blank as I was immersed in my thoughts and totally forgot my lines.
Deep frowns gradually climbed on my partners' face, with whose sudden vigorous pull, I was driven back to thereality. I soon came up with a little trick to make up for the embarrassing blank. As the show went on, so
concentrated was I that I hardly dared to even blink my eyes. After my debut, I rang my dad with frustration
and disappointment, only to reap his trust and encouragement again. It was literally dad's love that supported
me along my way to be an outstanding actor.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者从小梦想在电视上表演，在父亲的帮助和鼓励下，作者
被多伦多瑞尔森学院的广播电视艺术专业录取。最终作者凭借努力和勇敢，赢得了上电视的机会，感
悟到是爸爸的爱支持着自己成为一名出色的演员。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我到达车站，我直接进入试镜，并开始我的短表演。”可知，第一段可描写
作者表演的经过以及心情。
②由第二段首句内容“终于有一天，我第一次在电视直播中公开露面，我的父母在家里看着我。”可
知，第二段可描写直播时作者的感受以及感悟。
2.续写线索：试镜——表演——分享消息——直播露面——进行直播——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
到达：arrive at/get to
完成：finish/complete
出丑：make a fool of oneself / become a laughing stock
情绪类
急切：eagerly / urgently
紧张：nervous / stressful
【点睛】[高分句型1] Never in my wildest dream did I imagine that I was indeed assigned the intern job to
act on a school life show and my first public appearance on TV was in five days. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] As the show went on, so concentrated was I that I hardly dared to even blink my eyes. (运用了as
引导的时间状语从句以及so...that引导的结果状语从句的倒装)
5.【湖北省高中名校联盟2023届新高三第一次联合测评】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Go back, Mom! Go back!” shouted my six-year-old daughter, June. I quickly turned around to cast my
doubtful eyes on the back seat, worried I had forgotten her younger sister. I was relieved to see the girls safe
and sit in their car seats, but June’s expression was one of pure anxiety. “Mom, we have to go back,” she
insisted. “Someone needs our help!”As I looked back from the driver’s seat, I spotted a young man in rags playing his guitar. His skinny, poor-
looking dog rested next to his feet near an old, worn cardboard sign that read, “Homeless, please help.”
We’d come across homeless people before and had talked about their needs and struggle. I should seize
the chance to set a good example for my daughters to give a helping hand. So I searched for some cash, only
to find I had nothing but credit cards. “I’m sorry, sweetheart, but I don’t have any cash,” I said. “I have some,
Mom!” June replied. She opened her little pink purse and pulled out a five-dollar bill. “Oh, good. I’ll pay you
back when we get home,” I responded with a sigh of relief. “No, Mom,” she insisted, “I want to help him. I
don’t want you to pay me back. I want to give him my money.” 江苏省海安高级中学 景苏华 QQ:771515126
As we drove down the crowded rows of the parking lot, I reassured her that we would get to him. When
we got there, I called out, “Excuse me, sir!” He cautiously walked toward our car and answered, “Yes,
ma’am?” “Here you go, sir. ”June stretched out her entire body to hand him her five-dollar bill through the
window and explained, “I want you to have this.” He smiled and hesitatingly asked, “This was your money?”
“Yes! I want you to have it,” she proudly answered. “Thank you,” he said, touched by her thoughtfulness
We exchanged a smile, and as we drove away, my younger daughter Scarlett began to cry. I hadn’t noticed
that she had emptied her purse and was holding two quarters in her tiny hands.
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“Mom, I wanted to help, too,” she sobbed. She felt like she had missed out. I didn’t know how to let her
understand that two quarters was too little. But before I could make up a suitable explanation, she announced,
“Mom, he needs help!” I sighed and turned around. Seeing us again, the gentleman looked confused. I
awkwardly explained that my other daughter wanted to give him her money just as her elder sister had just
done. He peered into the van window to see my pig-tailed four-year-old grinning from ear to ear. “I want to
help you!” she declared proudly.
Now with tears in his eyes, he said in disbelief, “You want to help me?” She nodded firmly and happily.
Then June proudly handed him Scarlett’s coins. He tightly clutched them in his dirt-stained hand and showered
us with sincere blessings. Two quarters wasn’t much, even to the man, but what mattered to him and us was the
loving gesture my girls made. On our way back home, June put her hand on her heart, closed her eyes, and told
her little sister, “It feels so good to help someone, doesn’t it, Sisterbaby?” Scarlett agreed. With big smiles, they
sank back into their seats.
