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写作规范练(十五)
Ⅰ.应用文写作——询问信
假定你是Jack，来自新西兰，今年寒假期间将到中国希望中学学习两周，并将寄宿在中
国学生李华家中。请写一封电子邮件，向李华介绍自己，并询问在中国学习期间的四个问题：
1．住宿方式；
2．能否上网；
3．饮食方式；
4．到校的交通。
注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua，
I am Jack，a high school student from New Zealand and I am going to study in Xi Wang High
School for two weeks during the winter vacation.
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I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Jack
参考范文
Dear Li Hua ，
I am Jack, a high school student from New Zealand and I am going to study in Xi Wang High
School for two weeks during the winter vacation. What excites me most is that I will stay in your
home.I’d like to know more information about my stay there.
First and foremost，will I have my own room or share one with someone? And it would be
great if I can have access to the Internet.In addition，I want to taste some Chinese food，and I’m
wondering if I can learn to cook some Chinese dishes at your convenience.Last but not least，I’d
like to know if there’s a school bus between your house and the school.
I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours ，
Jack
Ⅱ.读后续写
(2022·福建漳州一中期中)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Mommy，don’t go，” my threeyearold son screamed as I walked to the door.Myfifteenyearold son leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms folded across his chest，not
screaming，but glaring at me as I pulled his little brother off my leg.
“Are you mad at me，too？”
“You spend all your time taking care of other people’s kids，but what about us？” Dylan
left angrily.
I was shocked and a little hurt.How could my own child not understand that the work I was
doing was saving lives? Then the answer hit me.He didn’t know because he had never seen what
Healing the Children actually did.Dylan had heard the sores of sick children，but had never once
looked into the eyes of a child and understood the hard truth that without our help，the child would
likely die.
“Get dressed.You are going with me，” I said.
I spend the drive explaining the case of Hector to my son，who pretended to ignore me the
entire time.“He’s seven，only weighs thirty pounds and is very sick.He has a heart condition
called Tetralogy of Fallot，which could kill him.It is a miracle that he is still alive.”
I went on to explain that it took a team of volunteer medical staff to get Hector to the hospital
from his remote village and care for him while he was there.Still，Dylan seemed unimpressed.
We stopped at a convenience store for water and snacks.Dylan had one large and one small
Slurpee(思乐冰饮料)．He said the small one was for Hector.I doubted whether the little guy
would be able to drink it，but remained silent.This was the first interest Dylan had shown in being
there.I wasn’t about to ruin it.
I stopped at the nurse’s station to check on Hector’s progress while Dylan went to his
room.Our patient was recovering physically ，but the nurse was concerned that Hector was
struggling emotionally.She said，“Kids usually bounce back fast，but he hardly speaks and never
smiles.”
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Imagine my surprise when I heard laughter from Hector’s room. _____________________
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On the way home that night，Dylan asked me several times whether Hector would be okay.
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Imagine my surprise when I heard laughter from Hector’s room.I entered and found Dylan
sitting on the edge of Hector’s bed wiping pieces of frozen drink from Hector’s mouth.Both
boys were giggling and Hector was apparently enjoying the company.I spent the rest of the day
speaking to doctors and watching my son playing with the special little boy.It was truly amazing to
watch them interact，as if it were the most natural thing in the world.Perhaps to the two of them itwas.
On the way home that night，Dylan asked me several times whether Hector would be okay.I
told him this boy would get well but he had a hard road ahead of him.My son seemed to be lost in
thought for a while.Then he declared his decision to join Healing the Children as a volunteer to
help Hector and other children.I never thought that a moody teenager would take up the volunteer
work and never again complain about his mother’s crazy work schedule.
