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考向 36 读后续写之如何续写故事开头
一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下
去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶
有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。可见，写好一个好故事的好开
头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以
从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。
1.开端布局方法1：副词突显动作等
【典例赏析】
Carefully , he stepped over all the broken glass.
Joyfully he skipped up the street.
【真题再现】
Para 1： (2016. 10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But no more helicopters came and it was
getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. （时间副词衔接+环境描写）
2.开端布局方法2：形容词短语表明心态
【典例赏析】
Curious to know what was inside , he tiptoed into the dark cave.
Unable to say a word , he was rooted to the spot.
【真题再现】
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark
again. Desperate and hopeless , Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face. （并列情绪形容词）
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was , she
struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句）
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my
horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature , I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. (情绪形
容词+从句)
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and
hungry , I wondered if we could find our way back.
3.开端布局方法3：非谓语动词的烘托
【典例赏析】Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.
Exhausted , he was glad the race was finally over.
【真题再现】
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark
again. Feeling disappointed , Jane had to stay alone for another night. （现在分词+情绪形容词）
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed , she
continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词）
4.开端布局方法4：使用从句
【典例赏析】
As he walked, he whistled
Although he was afraid , he jumped right in.
5.开端布局方法5：使用介词短语
【典例赏析】
At the end of the lane he suddenly stopped.
At the sight of the snake , the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.
6.开端布局方法6：对话或独白
【典例赏析】
“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
“Hold on tight!” My father yelled. We just finished bucking in as the coaster jerked into motion.
This was my first roller coaster ride.
【真题再现】
(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get
into the car." Paul shouted at Mac.
7.开端布局方法7：介绍人物身份
【典例赏析】
Mark is a studious boy who loves reading. His classmates often tease him for being too
hardworking and they call him Mr. Smart. One afternoon, while studying at home…
8.开端布局方法8：情绪烘托
【典例赏析】
The moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tina’s eyes and falling down
her cheeks.9.开端布局方法9：背景烘托
【典例赏析】
I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves . Gently opening my eyes, I
saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach.
The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldn’t even see my hand in front of my face. I knew this
adventure was going to be something that I would never forget.
【真题再现】
(2017.11 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great
sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep
valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）
10.开端布局方法10：人物动作特写
【典例赏析】
Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from
the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.
【真题再现】
(2017.11 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had
brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? （动作描写+问句衔接）
11.开端布局方法11：声音效果传情
【典例赏析】
BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was
very scared.
12.开端布局方法12：设问激发思考
【典例赏析】
Have you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer.
Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a "kick me" sign on my back or something?
fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）
【检测训练】
1. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Boys like to be considered to be brave, but what kind of things can be considered to be brave? It is not a question
that can be answered by words, but by the actual deed. A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example. Ronny and
Henry were two friends in the same class. They always played together and went home together. One day as Ronny andHenry were going home after school, they saw some people fighting in the street corner. Ronny said excitedly, “Some
people are fighting! Let’s go and have a look!” But Henry refused, “It’s none of our business. We’d better go home and
don’t get close to them. Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don’t want them to
worry about me.”
“You are a coward, and afraid to go,” said Ronny, and off he ran to the spot with some other boys. Henry had to go
home alone and didn't think about it anymore.
But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that. They laughed at him a great deal. From then on,
they looked down upon Henry and didn’t want to play with him.
Henry was sad but he wasn’t angry with Ronny for his rude behavior, because he had learned that true courage was
shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing
wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys’ laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as
well. However, Ronny didn’t invite Henry to go home with him anymore. Instead, he had his new friends who also
thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to
play games and had lots of fun.
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1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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A few days later, something terrible happened to Ronny.
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At that moment, Henry happened to pass by.
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A few days later, something terrible happened to Ronny. That afternoon after school, Ronny was bathing with some
of his new friends in the river happily. Suddenly, he was stuck in the mud and couldn’t get out. He struggled hard but he
was still trapped. He screamed for help, but all in vain. The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as
fast as they could. They were so scared and did not even try to help him.
At that moment, Henry happened to pass by. He heard the screams and ran to the river as soon as possible. Seeing
Ronny was almost drowned, Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water without any hesitation.
He reached Ronny just as he was sinking the last time. With great effort, and with much danger to himself, he brought
Ronny to the shore in time. Henry was happy to help his friend, though he was extremely tired.
【写作分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章中的男孩亨利因为没有和朋友罗尼一起去凑热闹看别人打架，而被罗尼叫
做懦夫并且受到了排挤，但亨利知道真正的勇气体现在容忍不该容忍的误解，罗尼的新朋友们也都觉得亨利是
个懦夫。几天后，罗尼和新朋友们在河里洗澡时，不小心陷在泥里，他的新朋友们没有帮助他，而亨利在路过
时听到了求救声后用尽他的力气帮助了罗尼。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几天后，在罗尼身上发生了可怕的事情”可知，第一段可描写罗尼遇到的可怕事情，同
时承接上文中罗尼交往了一些新朋友的剧情，描写罗尼的新朋友在他遇到可怕事情时候的反应，如新朋友们看
到罗尼陷入困境时一个个都赶紧离开。
②由第二段首句内容“就在那时，亨利碰巧经过。”可知，第二段可描写亨利在看到罗尼遭到不好事情时的反
应。前文提到罗尼嘲笑亨利是个懦夫，但在这一段可描写亨利的勇敢救人的行为，以形成情节上的转折。
2.续写线索：罗尼陷入困境——朋友逃离现场——亨利及时出手相助——帮助罗尼非常高兴
3.词汇激活
行为类
①困住；陷入：be stuck in/ be trapped in/ get stuck
②尽快：as soon as possible/ as quickly as possible/ at the first opportunity
③挣扎；奋斗；努力：struggle/ strive/ conflict
情绪类
①开心地：happily/with pleasure
②徒然；无效：in vain/ for nothing/of no effect③非常；极其；极端地：extremely/ badly/highly/greatly
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could. （who引导的定语从
句）
[高分句型 2] Seeing Ronny was almost drowned, Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water
without any hesitation.（现在分词作状语）
2. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I took a job as a receptionist for a veterinarian weeks ago. As an enthusiastic animal lover, I accepted the position on
the condition that I wouldn’t have to assist with any wounded animals. I couldn’t bear to see any creature in pain.
At the end of my first week, we were about to close the office for the day when a young man in his thirties ran up to
us holding a severely injured Doberman pinscher puppy in his arms and begging us to save his life. The four-month-old
pup had been hit by a car.
The doctor and I rushed back into the operating room immediately. The poor creature was in critical condition. The
only place the skin was still attached to this poor little animal’s body was around one shoulder. The vet worked tirelessly
for what seemed like hours, stitching him back together again. That was the easy part. The puppy had broken multiple
bones, including his spine. If he was lucky enough to survive the next few days, we were quite sure he would never walk
again.
The day forever changed my life. The veterinarian instructed me, and I became his assistant in all things medical.
One of my first jobs was to give that Doberman puppy daily physical therapy. I moved his tiny legs on a regular basis to
keep his muscles from weakening.
Weeks went by until one day, I felt this little fighter push back ever so slightly. And he continued to push back till he
could finally use his legs. What a miracle!
Day by day, the little fighter made a little bit progress until the vet called his owner telling him that his puppy was
ready to go home. Having accompanied the puppy for several months, I could imagine how excited and relieved the
young man was. And I was sure he would took good care of. Two days later, the puppy was taken away by his owner.
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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About a year passed, I walked into the clinic’s crowded waiting room.
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About a year passed, I walked into the clinic’s crowded waiting room. I called the name of the next client.
Suddenly, a huge Doberman who had been standing quietly with his owner on the opposite side of the room broke loose
and rushed toward me. I found myself pinned against the wall with this magnificent dog standing on his hind legs, his
front paws on my shoulders, washing my face with abundant and joyful kisses!
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I went on to be a vet tech for 14 years, and since retirement, I’ve volunteered at a no-kill animal shelter. Being a vet
technician and volunteer at a no-kill animal shelter, I succeeded in saving more animals, which often made me think of
the grateful huge Doberman. Although many years have passed, I still shed tears in amazement at the display of love and
gratitude the dog had for me. All the dogs knew they had been rescued by me and they were grateful to me.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家兽医那里找了一份前台接待员的工作，在作者工作的
第一个星期结束的时候，诊所里来了一只受重伤的杜宾犬小狗，作者成为了兽医的助手，照顾好了小狗。一年
后杜宾犬再次来到诊所，热情地亲吻作者，作者退休后仍然在一家不猎杀动物的收容所做志愿者，仍然为这只
狗对自己的爱和感激而流泪。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大约一年过去了，我走进诊所拥挤的候诊室。”可知，第一段可描写被作者救治过的杜
宾犬再次回到诊所的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“我做了14年的兽医技师，退休后，我在一家不猎杀动物的收容所做志愿者。”可知，第
二段可描写作者成为志愿者后的所作所为以及感悟2.续写线索：作者走进候诊室——杜宾犬向作者表示感激——作者退休成为志愿者——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
走进：walk into/step into
继续：go on/continue to
时间逝去：pass/ go by
情绪类
感谢：gratitude/be grateful/ appreciation
快乐：joyful /happy
【写作亮点】
[高分句型 1] Suddenly, a huge Doberman who had been standing quietly with his owner on the opposite side of the
room broke loose and rushed toward me. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Being a vet technician and volunteer at a no-kill animal shelter, I succeeded in saving more animals, which
often made me think of the grateful huge Doberman. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket (the school colors),
was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forwards very much to owning that jacket. My
father was a farm laborer who couldn't earn enough money to feed five children. I was given to my grandparents to raise.
There would never be a school sports jacket for us. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math
teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it! I don't care who her father is；her grades can't match Martha's at all. I won't
lie or falsify (伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.
But Mr. Boone's voice sounded calm. “Joann's father is not only on the Board (董事会), he owns the only store in
town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
Shaking and sad, I, waited a few minutes and walked away.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There's been a change in policy this
year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won't cover
the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in
line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said，“I'll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know
tomorrow.” I cried on the way home.注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed.
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. Sensing something
wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, a surge of regret gnawing at
my heart. I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Grandpa’s eyes rounded in disbelief. Time
ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But
who knew how reluctant and bitter I was?
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. My head still lifted with dignity, I tried to
fight back the tears, stammering, “I cannot…afford the jacket, sir.” Staring into my eyes, the principal suddenly grinned,
“I have good news for you.” I looked at him in confusion. “The board decided that an award cannot be bought just for
the sake of winners’ dignity.” His eyes brimmed with smiles. I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming. Only at
that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought. (162
words)
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的学校在九年级的毕业典礼上会奖励一件漂亮的金绿色的夹克给9年来成绩最好的学生，作者一直是优等生，渴望得到那件夹克，但是偶然听到Mr. Schmidt老师和校长争
论夹克到底给她还是Joann。后来祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫奖。校长最后也把夹克奖给了作者。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“当我回到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆地里找到了祖父。”可知，第一段可描写作
者告诉了祖父发生的一切，祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫奖。
②.由第二段首句内容“第二天，我拖着沉重的脚步走进校长办公室，既伤心又失望。”可知，第二段可描写作
者伤心地告诉校长自己买不起夹克，但是校长最后还是把夹克奖给了作者。
2.续写线索：找到祖父——告诉发生的事——作者心理情绪——祖父叹息感慨——走到校长办公室——告诉校
长买不起——校长更改主意——作者得到夹克
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.低声说：murmur/ say in a low voice/ mutter
②.看着：stare into/ look at/ watch
情绪类
①.难以置信：in disbelief/ incredibly/ unbelievably
②.失望：disappointment/ despair/ frustration
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. （运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作find的宾
语）
[高分句型 3]. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be
falsified or bought.（运用了部分倒装句和由that引导的宾语从句作believe的宾语）
4. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In our kitchen, there was a wooden table and three chairs — one for Dad, one for Mom, and one for me. In the
cellar (地窖), the very last jar of apple jam lay quietly on the shelf, waiting to be turned into an apple pie when Dad came
back. Mom sat at one end of the table. I sat in the middle between her and Dad. I tried not to look at Dad’s empty place.
Dad had gone to the city to look for work for a long time.
Every night, I lay awake in bed and waited for the train to stop. Waited to hear the creaky (嘎吱作响的) gate Dad’s
going to fix when he came home. Waited to hear the sound of his work boots dropping on the step by the kitchen door,
and his voice calling, “I’m home!”
Every night, as I lay there, I stared at the window and the curtains Mom made from empty flour sacks (麻布袋).Every night, Mom came to kiss me good-night — after the train’s gone by. She had been listening, too. “Go to
sleep. Your dad will be home soon. Maybe for Thanksgiving.”
Time dragging by, it finally came the day before Thanksgiving. I went to sleep with the sound of train wheels in my
head, whispering, “Maybe tomorrow, maybe tomorrow.”
Early the next morning, the smell of coffee woke me. I ran into the kitchen. There he was! Dad lifted me onto his
shoulders and pretended to stagger from my weight. “How’s my boy? You’ve gotten so big that I can barely lift you up
anymore.”
He put me down, and I stared at the two sacks on the table. One said FLOUR — I knew that word. I tried reading
the other: S-U-G-A-R. Dad whistled admiringly and winked at me. Mom and I had been practicing my letters most days.
I could see that Mom was pleased with me. “I’m going to bake a pie for your dad’s homecoming dinner. Jimmy, bring
me that jar of apple jam from the shelf in the cellar.” Mom smiled at me.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar.
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“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears.
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Possible version 1:
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar. The next second I was in front of the shelf. I stood on tiptoeand took down the jar carefully. I could hear Dad and Mom laughing upstairs and Mom’s hands slapping the dough.
Wanting to join them, I hurried up the steps, and my foot caught on the middle one. I put out my hand to steady myself,
but I tumbled down. The jar slipped through my fingers and smashed on the floor. The jam we’d been saving and saving
flew everywhere. Wrong-footed, I burst into tears and heard Dad’s footsteps closer and closer.
“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears. These words seemed to have magic and
gradually I settled down. Through the shirt, I could smell the dust of the train and the city as well as that of Dad’s. How I
wished I hadn’t hurried. “Next time I will be more careful,” I thought to myself. Having swiftly dealt with the mess, Dad
lifted me onto his shoulder and went back to Mom. “Now out of the kitchen, you two,” Mom said, “I'm going to bake my
mama’s sugar pie, without apple jam!” I followed Dad out and helped him fix that old creaking gate until Ma called us in
for Thanksgiving dinner.
Possible version 2:
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar. “No problem.” I jumped at the request and rushed
downstairs. The jar just stood quietly on the shelf, but it seemed a bit high. I climbed up the chair nearby and extended
my arms as long as possible. When I just grasped the jar, I lost my balance and fell down. I couldn’t help crying. What
made me sad was not the pain but the jam — now scattered everywhere. There came Dad’s footsteps and Mom’s voice,
“Are you hurt?” I shook my head slightly. She helped me up and asked me to go upstairs. With heavy footsteps, I moved
slowly and tears welled up in my eyes.
“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears. “But I ruined your homecoming dinner.”
Sorrow overwhelmed me and I kept sobbing. “No, my son,” Dad smiled gently, “My homecoming dinner is not about
pies, but about you and Mom.” Hearing this, I stopped sobbing, “But what can we eat tonight?” “How about an apple pie
without apple jam?” Mom came upstairs and cut in. Dad and I exchanged a glance and nodded. After a while, I found
myself sitting in the chair, but this time, I sat in the middle between Dad and Mom.
(We can go without apple jam. Why not make a pie with apple jam?)
(…but this time, I sat with Dad on the left and Mom on the right.)
Possible version 3:
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar. “Yes! Madam.” I saluted, acting as if I were a solider. I ran
downstairs as fast as my legs could carry me. After a while, I jumped upstairs with the jar in both hands, humming a
joyful tune. But after I handed the jar to Mom, things went crazy. Mom was busy slapping the dough and asked me to
pass her the sugar. Instead of scooping a bowl of it, I held the sack up. Just at that very moment, the sugar sack slipped
away and all the sugar ended up on the mud floor. Realizing I spoiled Dad’s homecoming dinner, I burst into tears.
“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears. “I meant to help,” I whimpered, “but... I shouldhave scooped some of it...” Dad squatted down and brushed the hair out of my eyes. “Next time it will just be fine.” I
looked into Dad’s eyes and nodded. Dad lifted me onto his shoulder and turned to Mom, “Dear, can we make a sugar-
free apple pie?” Mom, who had been watching us lovingly, replied “Of course!” and began to work on it. On that
Thanksgiving evening, beside the wooden table sat three of us, I myself between Mom and Dad. Though sugar-free, the
apple pie tasted sweeter than ever before.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。所给文章为记叙文，以苹果酱和苹果派为线索。作者家的厨房中有一
张木桌和三把椅子，分别是爸爸的妈妈的和作者的。爸爸出门务工，每当地窖中的最后一瓶苹果酱被放到桌上，
等待被做成苹果派的时候，就是爸爸回家的时候。作者和妈妈每个晚上都在等爸爸回家。感恩节的时候爸爸终
于回家了，妈妈要给爸爸做苹果派，并让作者去把地窖的苹果酱拿出来。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写
第一段首句内容为“听到这话，我一两步走到地窖”。可知，第一段可描写作者听了母亲话后去地窖拿苹
果酱的经历。
第二点首句内容为“没关系，孩子，意外总会发生的，”爸爸说着擦干了我的眼泪。可知，第二段可能描
写作者在拿苹果酱时发生了意外后，爸爸妈妈给作者的安慰。
2.续写线索：急匆匆拿果酱——摔了一跤——爸爸安慰——妈妈接着做水果派
3.词汇激活：
行为类：
①形容加快步伐/步伐很快：take the steps two at a time/hurry up the steps
②突然…起来：burst into tears/ burst into laughter
情感类
平静下来：settle down/calm down
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] How I wished I hadn’t hurried.（用虚拟语气表达后悔，惋惜的情绪）
[高分句型2] Having swiftly dealt with the mess, Dad lifted me onto his shoulder and went back to Mom.（分词短语作
状语，可模仿性高）
[高分句型3] I followed Dad out and helped him fix that old creaking gate until Ma called us in for Thanksgiving dinner.
（until引导的时间状语从句）
5. 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an Art lesson. Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints. She
understood why Mrs. Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for her. It was always a disaster
when Rachel tried to do Art!Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and—oh, no! She knocked over the jar. The
water spread across the desk and drowned the paper. Lisa called Mrs. Weston to see what Rachel had done. Rachel went
red in the face. She jumped to her feet to get a cloth. Her chair fell over backwards. She turned round and her paintbrush
caught Lisa across the face, giving her a black moustache. Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire
bookstand. It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor.
How clumsy (笨拙的)! Rachel thought as she went home on the bus. The bus stopped outside her house. She
jumped up and her elbow (肘部) knocked a woman’s hat right over her eyes. Oh, no! Rachel said sorry, got off and ran
indoors. Mum wasn’t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold. Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but
Mum would rather wait for Dad. Rachel sighed. She understood Mum was afraid she would spill (溅出) it.
“But would you go to Mrs. Willow for some cold cure?” asked Mum. Rachel turned to the door at once. “But
Rachel, Mrs. Willow’s house is full of beautiful things, so if she asks you to come in, you’d better say no.” Rachel sighed
and ran out.
Mrs. Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house. She opened the door and
invited her in. Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mother’s warning. Mrs.
Willow insisted Rachel come inside. Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in. She looked round Mrs. Willow’s sitting
room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.
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There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures(瓷雕) and delicate vases.
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With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before.
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Possible Version One:
There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. Rachel stood very still, afraid of
knocking something over. Mrs. Willow handed Rachel a small brown bottle. Rachel couldn’t wait to get away, feeling
any minute there would be a disaster. She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg.
Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards. It was a cat! But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor, broken.
How awkward!
With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. “I did,
when I was young. You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was,” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. “Keep
telling yourself you are a swan and it will work.” Rachel doubtfully said that several times. After they cleared up the
vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing. It was a kind
of magic. Rachel smiled.
Possible Version Two:
There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. All the treasures seemed to boast a
long history and thus priceless. “Wow, it is really a land of wonder.” Rachel couldn’t help admiring the elegance of the
china figures and vases. Mom’s words echoing(重复) in her mind, curiosity still got the upper hand(占上风). She
reached for one of them, but unfortunately, the vase slipped off her hand and lay in pieces on the floor. Her heart missing
a beat, she felt terribly worried.
With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. “No
worry at all. It’ll be perfect after being mended,” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. “Nobody grows up
without being clumsy.” Rachel let out a long sigh and for the first time she felt good about her clumsy self. She believed
what Mrs. Willow said must have the same magic as her special cold cure. To her amazement, she returned home with
the bottle of medicine safe and sound.
【写作分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rachel是一个笨拙的人，总是会破坏周围的东西，一天Rachel的
妈妈生病了，妈妈想让她去Mrs. Willow家要一些感冒药，并嘱咐她Mrs. Willow家里有很多精致的东西，最好
不要进她的家门。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“到处都是美丽的东西——漂亮的瓷器和精致的花瓶。”可知，第一段可描写Rachel进了Mrs. Willow家门后，行为举止很拘束，最后还是打碎了一个瓶子。
②由第二段首句内容“威洛太太微笑着安慰她说，它以前也坏过。”可知，第二段可描写 Mrs. Willow安慰了
Rachel并很好地招待了她。
2.续写线索：Rachel害怕打碎东西——迫不及待想离开——感谢 Mrs. Willow——撞到了花瓶，花瓶碎了——
Mrs. Willow安慰Rachel——打扫花瓶——享受好的食物
3.词汇激活：
行为类：
①迫不及待：can’t wait to do sth./be eager to do sth.
②打扫：clean up/sweep up
情绪类：
①害怕的：afraid/frightened
②感谢：thank/be grateful
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]
After they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break
another thing.（after引导时间状语从句）
6. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment. With COVID-19
sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible they can. However, pregnant women still need to
come into the hospital. Babies still need to be born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightened. Their
families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always provided physical support, but now we are doing
so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the
women have caught corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we have
full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t know if someone is carrying
corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to them. As a single
parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I had to make a very tough decision about my
family’s safety when the country went into lockdown. Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able tolook after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to
my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them up. When I explained the situation
to my angels and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On
the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
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2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill. We had to work double shifts and my life
was dedicated to nothing but work. Every day I came back home completely exhausted and fell asleep. As soon as I
woke up, I needed to go to the hospital. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. However, it
troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. Xiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soon. I had to do
something to make up for him.
A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday. I made a video call to them from the hospital. I greeted them on the
screen with my mask and goggles on, they recognized me at once, shouting excitedly. I took the phone to the hall where
my coworkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong!” They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his
face. My children’s understanding and my coworker’s support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever
truly separate me and my beloved ones. We are sure to win.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一位有两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位助产士，在新冠疫
情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给前夫照顾。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“之后，我的工作量增加了，因为我的一些同事生病了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在医
院的工作越来越忙，没时间照顾孩子，作者想要在孩子生日的时候弥补孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，到了小勇的生日。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事一起在医院祝孩子生日快
乐，孩子很开兴。
2.续写线索：工作——烦恼——弥补——庆生——鼓励——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①致力于：was dedicated to / was devoted to
②回家：came back home / returned home
③打视频电话：made a video call / video-called
情绪类
①烦恼：trouble / worry
②兴奋地：excitedly / with excitement
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. (由关系代词which引导非限制性定
语从句)
[高分句型2]. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. (由that引导主语从句)
