广西示范性高中2026 届高三上学期9 月联合调研测试英语试卷
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文。
The heavy rain continued for several days, causing
the river near the village
to rise rapidly(现在分词短语做结果状语). The floodwaters spread quickly(伏笔), sweeping
through the whole village(现在分词做结果状语). Debris piled up in front of every home, and
the water washed over the roads, spreading
mud and sand
(现在分词做结果状语). The paths
that were once passable were now completely blocked, and even the road to the
hospital was completely submerged.(交代背景) The lives of the villagers were disrupted,
and there were no safe roads to travel(伏笔，为后文刻画人物做铺垫). Most of the villagers stayed
indoors, waiting
for the rain to stop
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), hoping(现在分词短语做伴随动作) the water
would go down.
However, for one father, this could not stop him from taking action. His six-
month-old daughter, Ruby, had a high fever that wouldn’t go down, and she had
been crying all night, growing
weaker and
weaker
(现在分词短语做结果状语). The family
didn’t have enough medicine to relieve her pain(进一步刻画冲突). The father watched her
anxiously, filled
with fear and uncertainty
(过去分词做主语补语). He knew he had to get
Ruby to the hospital as quickly as possible to get proper treatment, but the road to
the hospital was completely blocked by the flood, and there were no other choices
available.(刻画冲突，铺垫)
“Ruby, Daddy’s going to take you to the hospital. Hold on,” he said softly,
knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) she couldn’t understand him yet. Her tiny face turned red
from the fever, and she weakly rested in his arms. The father’s heart ached with
worry,(刻画人物心理 ) feeling helpless(现在分词短语做刻画人物). There was no time to waste; Ruby’s
life was more important than anything else. The father decided to walk through the
water to get to the hospital. The water outside had risen to his calves , and the flood
had covered the streets, completely submerging
the nearby paths
(现在分词短语做结果状语，塑造困
境).
He could only move slowly through the water. The water flowed fast, and the
mud was dangerous, with every step feeling like a fight against the water’s force, but
the father’s determination didn’t weaken.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Carrying Ruby on his back, the father carefully made his way through
the flooded streets.
Paragraph 2: Finally, after a long and difficult journey, the father reached the hospital.
广西示范性高中2026 届高三上学期9 月联合调研测试英语试卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The heavy rain continued for several days, causing the river near the village to
rise rapidly. The floodwaters spread quickly, sweeping through the whole village.
Debris piled up (瓦砾堆积) in front of every home, and the water washed over the
roads, spreading mud (泥) and sand. The paths that were once passable were now
completely blocked, and even the road to the hospital was completely submerged (淹
没). The lives of the villagers were disrupted (打乱), and there were no safe roads to
travel. Most of the villagers stayed indoors, waiting for the rain to stop, hoping the
water would go down.
However, for one father, this could not stop him from taking action. His six-
month-old daughter, Ruby, had a high fever that wouldn’t go down, and she had been
crying all night, growing weaker and weaker. The family didn’t have enough
medicine to relieve her pain. The father watched her
anxiously, filled with fear and uncertainty. He knew he had to get Ruby to the hospital
as quickly as possible to get proper treatment, but the road to the hospital was
completely blocked by the flood, and there were no other choices available.
“Ruby, Daddy’s going to take you to the hospital. Hold on,” he said softly,
knowing she couldn’t understand him yet. Her tiny face turned red from the fever,
and she weakly rested in his arms. The father’s heart ached with worry, feeling
helpless. There was no time to waste; Ruby’s life was more important than anything
else. The father decided to walk through the water to get to the hospital. The water
outside had risen to his calves (小腿肚), and the flood had covered the streets,
completely submerging the nearby paths.
He could only move slowly through the water. The water flowed fast, and the
mud was dangerous, with every step feeling like a fight against the water’s force, but
the father’s determination didn’t weaken.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Carrying Ruby on his back, the father carefully made his way through
the flooded streets.
Paragraph 2: Finally, after a long and difficult journey, the father reached the hospital.
1. 读后续写类型分析与构思框架
类型分类：遇险救险 +家庭亲情救援类 - 属于"人与自然抗争+亲情奉献"的复
合型读后续写。
构思思路与布局
构思要素
具体内容
整体布局
第一段：路途艰辛与父爱坚持 → 第二段：到达医院与救援成功
情感走向
焦虑担忧 → 艰难挣扎 → 希望出现 → 成功救援
冲突设置
人与自然冲突(洪水) + 时间冲突(病情紧急)
主题升华
父爱的伟大、生命的价值、人性的光辉
续写框架设计
第一段框架：
环境描写：洪水险境加剧
动作描写：父亲艰难前行
心理描写：对女儿的担忧与自我鼓励
转折设置：遇到新的困难或帮助
第二段框架：
到达描写：医院的场景
救援过程：医生的救治
情感释放：父亲的欣慰
主题升华：爱的力量
承接原文注意事项
必须承接的内容：
父亲背着的姿势("Carrying Ruby on his back")
洪水的危险环境("flooded streets")
女儿的病情("high fever", "growing weaker")
父亲的决定("walk through the water")
整体注意事项：
保持时态一致(一般过去时)
延续原文语言风格(简洁有力)
合理控制情节发展节奏
确保人物性格一致性
巧妙设计技巧
细节呼应：使用原文出现的"calf-deep water"、"mud"等元素
象征手法：用洪水象征困境，用父亲象征希望
对比手法：外在环境恶劣vs 内在意志坚定
悬念设置：在危急时刻制造转机
2. 故事山模式与文本分析
开端：洪水围村，女儿病重
/
发展：父亲决定冒险涉水
高潮：路途艰难，危机四伏
下降：看到希望，接近目标
结局：到达医院，得到救治
伏笔与冲突分析
伏笔处："road to the hospital was completely submerged"
"water flowed fast, and the mud was dangerous"
"no other choices available"
冲突点：主要冲突：父亲vs 洪水自然灾害 次要冲突：时间vs 女儿病情恶化
内在冲突：恐惧vs 责任
隐含线索：父亲的身份背景(可能是普通村民)
村庄的孤立无援状态
药品资源的匮乏
解决方案：
通过父亲的个人勇气和毅力，克服自然障碍，完成救援任务。
3. 文本分析表格
分析角度
内容要点
原文反应句
人物刻画
父亲：坚毅、焦虑、勇敢；
Ruby：脆弱、病重，象征希
望与牵挂。
“His six-month-old daughter, Ruby, had a high
fever…” / “The father’s heart ached with worry.”
情感层次
父亲：焦虑 → 决心 → 艰
难 → 坚持 → 希望。
“The father watched her anxiously, filled with fear
and uncertainty.”
关键情节点
Ruby 发烧急需救治；道路被
洪水阻隔；父亲决定涉水；
医院成为希望的方向。
“The road to the hospital was completely blocked by
the flood…”
语言特色
大量环境描写+动作描写+心
理渲染，突出紧张氛围与父
爱无私。
“The water flowed fast, and the mud was
dangerous…”
关键词分析
flood, blocked, hospital,
determination, fear, weak,
hold on
“There was no time to waste; Ruby’s life was more
important than anything else.”
分析角度
内容要点
原文反应句
心理描写
父亲的担忧、不安、害怕
Ruby 失去生命；同时有强烈
的信念与坚持。
“His heart ached with worry, feeling helpless.”
动作描写
背女儿、涉水、挣扎、与急
流对抗、一步步前进。
“He could only move slowly through the water.”
环境描写
洪水、泥沙、道路淹没、湍
急水流，构成外部阻力。
“The flood had covered the streets, completely
submerging the nearby paths.”
隐含主题
父爱无私、生命至上、人类
在灾难中的坚持与勇气。
暗线：Ruby 的病象征父亲必须坚持下去的理
由。
情感转折
从无助与担忧 → 到行动的
坚定 → 到抵达医院的释
然。
“There was no time to waste… The father decided to
walk through the water.”
空间转换
从家中 → 洪水街道 → 医
院。
“The water outside had risen to his calves…” →
“Finally… the hospital.”
时间过渡
从连日大雨 → 当下的冒险
→ 终于抵达 → 获救。
“The heavy rain continued for several days…” /
“Finally, after a long and difficult journey…”
4. 续写衔接点总结
父亲背着Ruby 的姿势
洪水淹没街道的环境
女儿持续高烧的状态
父亲坚定不移的决心
通往医院的道路被淹
建议拓展方向：
增加路途中的具体困难细节
描写父亲的心理变化过程
设置小的转机增强故事层次
突出到达医院时的情感释放
3. 动作、环境、心理描写
动作描写
He waded through the chest-deep water, each step a battle against the current.
（他在齐胸深的水中艰难前行，每一步都是与急流的抗争。）
With one arm securing Ruby, he used the other to grab onto a protruding fence
for support.
（他用一只手臂牢牢护住鲁比，另一只手抓住一根突出的栅栏来支撑身体。）
A sudden surge of water almost knocked him off his feet, but he managed to
steady himself.
（一股突然涌来的水流几乎将他冲倒，但他设法稳住了身形。）
He trudged through the thick mud, his legs feeling like lead.
（他在厚厚的泥泞中艰难跋涉，双腿沉重如铅。）
Gritting his teeth, he pressed on, ignoring the numbness in his limbs.
（他咬紧牙关，无视四肢的麻木，继续前进。）
He shielded Ruby's face from the relentless rain with his own body.
（他用自己的身体为鲁比挡住无情的雨水。）
His feet stumbled over hidden debris beneath the murky water.
（他的脚在浑浊的水下被隐藏的碎片绊了一下。）
With a final burst of strength, he hauled himself onto the dry steps of the
hospital.
（凭着最后一股力气，他把自己拖上了医院干燥的台阶。）
He burst through the hospital doors, his voice hoarse as he called for help.
（他冲开医院的门，用嘶哑的声音呼救。）
A doctor gently took the limp child from his trembling arms.
（医生轻轻地从他颤抖的双臂中接过了虚弱无力的孩子。）
心理描写
A wave of panic threatened to overwhelm him, but the thought of Ruby fueled
his resolve.
（一阵恐慌几乎要将他淹没，但对鲁比的牵挂点燃了他的决心。）
He fought back the despair, whispering assurances to both himself and the baby.
（他击退了绝望，低声向孩子也向自己保证一切都会好起来。）
Every second felt like an eternity, stretching before him in an agonizing wait.
（每一秒都像一个永恒，在他面前延长成痛苦的等待。）
A sliver of hope sparked in his chest as he spotted the distant glow of the
hospital.
（当他看到远处医院发出的灯光时，一丝希望在他心中燃起。）
The fear of losing her was a cold knot tightening in his stomach.
（害怕失去她的恐惧像一个冰冷的结，在他的胃里收紧。）
He pushed the nagging voice of doubt aside, focusing solely on the path ahead.
（他将那个令人不安的怀疑之声推到一边，只专注于前方的路。）
A profound sense of helplessness washed over him as he looked at the endless
water.
（当他望着无边无际的洪水时，一种深深的无力感席卷了他。）
His love for his daughter became a tangible force, pushing him forward.
（他对女儿的爱化成了一种实实在在的力量，推动他前行。）
His mind raced, calculating risks and searching for the safest route.
（他的大脑飞速运转，评估着风险，寻找最安全的路线。）
An overwhelming relief rendered him speechless when he heard the doctor say,
"She'll be fine."
（当听到医生说“她会好起来的”时，一种如释重负的感觉让他说不出话
来。）
环境描写
The murky water, choked with mud and branches, swirled ominously around
him.
（浑浊的水，夹杂着泥浆和树枝，不祥地在他周围打着旋。）
The relentless rain stung his face like a thousand icy needles.
（无情的雨水像无数冰冷的针，刺痛他的脸。）
The once-familiar street had transformed into a treacherous river.
（曾经熟悉的街道已经变成了一条危险的河流。）
Darkness was beginning to fall, adding another layer of peril to their journey.
（夜幕开始降临，给他们的旅程又增添了一层危险。）
The howling wind drowned out all other sounds, creating an eerie isolation.
（呼啸的风淹没了所有其他声音，制造出一种可怕的孤立感。）
A lone streetlamp flickered weakly in the distance, a beacon of hope.
（一盏孤独的路灯在远处微弱地闪烁，像一个希望的灯塔。）
The air was thick with the smell of damp earth and decay.
（空气中弥漫着潮湿的泥土和腐烂物的气味。）
Floating debris clattered against each other, creating a discordant symphony of
destruction.
（漂浮的碎片相互碰撞，奏响了一曲不和谐的毁灭交响乐。）
The cold seeped through his clothes, chilling him to the bone.
（寒气渗透他的衣服，冷彻骨髓。）
The silent, submerged houses stood as ghostly sentinels on their path.
（沉默的、被淹没的房屋像幽灵哨兵一样立在他们的路途两旁。）
常见单词高级替换与场景总结
场景
基础词汇
高级替换词 (及细微差别)
艰难行走
walk
difficultly
trudge (沉重疲惫地走); wade (特指涉水而行); plod
(缓慢费力地走)
决定/决心
determinati
on
resolve (更坚定的决心); fortitude (在痛苦前的坚毅)
害怕/担心
worry/fear
apprehension (对未来的忧虑); trepidation (激动的颤
抖的恐惧)
场景
基础词汇
高级替换词 (及细微差别)
非常累
very tired
exhausted (精疲力尽); fatigued (身体或精神极度疲
劳)
快
quickly
rapidly (速度快); promptly (立即、及时地，含"不拖
延"之意)
4. 语言点深度解析
sweeping through:
解析：sweep through 是一个动词短语，形象地描绘了洪水如扫帚般"席卷"整个
村庄的动作，势不可挡。这种搭配比 flooding 更具动态感和破坏力。
相关搭配：sweep away (冲走)，sweep over (掠过，席卷)。
piled up:
解析：pile up 表示"(东西)堆积起来"，生动地写出了瓦砾等杂物在洪水作用下不
断累积的状态。
相关搭配：work pile up (工作堆积)，debts pile up (债务堆积)。
were disrupted:
解析：disrupt 比 break 或 stop 更正式、有力，强调正常秩序被"打断、扰乱"，
常用于描述生活、交通、计划等。
相关搭配：disrupt the peace (破坏和平)，disrupt a meeting (打断会议)。
filled with fear and uncertainty:
解析：be filled with 是一个经典的表语结构，后接抽象名词，比 feel 更书面
化，描绘了一种充满内心的、强烈的情绪状态。
相关搭配：be filled with joy/confidence (充满喜悦/信心)。
feeling like a fight against the water's force:
解析：feel like + 名词是一种非常地道的表达方式，将主观感受比喻成具体的物
或事。这里把"每一步"比作"一场战斗"，极具表现力。
可积累语料与生词短语
1. debris
词意：n. 碎片，残骸
词性：名词 (不可数)
近义词：rubble, wreckage, fragments, remains
反义词：whole, entirety
例句：
After the earthquake, the streets were littered with debris. (地震后，街道上散落着
瓦砾。)
He cleared the debris from the drain to allow the water to flow. (他清除了排水沟里
的杂物让水流通。)
2. submerge 词意：v. 淹没，浸没
词性：动词
近义词：flood, immerse, inundate, engulf
反义词：surface, emerge, uncover
例句：
The rising tide submerged the small island. (涨潮淹没了小岛。)
She submerged herself in her work to forget her troubles. (她沉浸在工作中以忘记
烦恼。)
3. disrupt
词意：v. 打断，扰乱，中断
词性：动词
近义词：disturb, interrupt, upset, interfere with
反义词：organize, arrange, maintain, continue
例句：
The loud noise disrupted our conversation. (巨大的噪音打断了我们的谈话。)
The strike severely disrupted the city's transportation system. (罢工严重扰乱了城市
的交通系统。)
4. relieve
词意：v. 缓解，减轻；解除
词性：动词
近义词：alleviate, ease, soothe, mitigate
反义词：aggravate, intensify, worsen
例句：
This medicine can help relieve the pain. (这种药有助于缓解疼痛。)
He was relieved of his duty after the incident. (那次事件后，他被解除了职务。)
5. determination
词意：n. 决心，果断
词性：名词
近义词：resolution, resolve, perseverance, willpower
反义词：indecision, hesitation, weakness
例句：
Her determination to succeed inspired everyone around her. (她成功的决心激励了
她身边的每一个人。)
With great determination, he finished the marathon despite his injury. (凭着巨大的
决心，他带着伤跑完了马拉松。)
5. Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1
Carrying Ruby on his back, the father carefully made his way through the
flooded streets. Each step sank deep into the mud(无灵主语句), pulling
at his legs
(现在分词短语做
伴随动作) as if to drag him down. The cold water bit into his skin(无灵主语句), yet his arms
tightened around his daughter’s fragile body, whispering
promises
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
that she would be safe. At times the current almost knocked him off balance, and he
staggered forward, heart racing with fear(独立主格). Ruby gave a faint cry, which
pierced through the storm, reminding
him that
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)giving up was not an
option. He fixed his eyes on the distant lights, praying(现在分词做伴随动作) they belonged to
the hospital. With his strength fading and hope flickering like a candle in the wind(with
复合结构), he pressed on through the darkness, determined
not to fall before reaching
help(过去分词做adj 做主语补语).
Paragraph 2
Finally, after a long and difficult journey, the father reached the hospital.
Exhausted(过去分词做adj 主语补语), he collapsed onto the steps, gasping
for breath
(现在分词短语做伴随
动作)while holding Ruby tightly. Nurses rushed forward, guiding
him inside
(现在分词做伴随动
作), and the warmth of the building felt like the embrace of safety. As the doctors
took Ruby from his trembling arms, tears welled in his eyes—tears of both fear and
relief. He whispered a silent prayer, thanking
fate for granting him the courage
to fight the flood(现在分词短语做伴随动作). When the doctor assured him that Ruby would
recover with treatment, the father’s shoulders shook with uncontrollable sobs. At
that moment, he realized that even the fiercest storm could not break the bond
between a father and his child.
Version 2
Paragraph 1
Carrying Ruby on his back, the father carefully made his way through the
flooded streets. The wind howled in his ears,(环境描写) splashing
water into his eyes
(现在
分词短语做伴随动作), but he dared not slow down. The memory of her weak breath and
burning forehead drove him forward like an invisible force. The road was filled
with broken branches and floating debris, and several times he almost slipped. His
arms ached, yet he adjusted Ruby gently, murmuring
words of comfort
(现在分词短语做伴随
动作) although she could barely hear. Every heartbeat echoed with urgency, and
every minute felt like a lifetime. Just as despair threatened to take over(无灵主语句), a
faint light flickered far ahead—it was the hope he had been clinging to.
Paragraph 2
Finally, after a long and difficult journey, the father reached the hospital. His
legs trembled uncontrollably, but he refused to fall until Ruby was safe. The sight
of doctors rushing toward them melted the wall of fear he had carried along the
way. Placing Ruby into their hands was the hardest and yet the most relieving
moment of his life. As she was taken into the emergency room, the father leaned
against the wall, drenched and shaking(非谓语动词做主语补语), replaying
the perilous walk
in his mind(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Moments later, hearing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that Ruby’s fever
was under control, his eyes closed in gratitude. He knew that this battle against the
flood had carved a memory that neither time nor water could ever wash away.
Version 3
Paragraph 1
Carrying Ruby on his back, the father carefully made his way through the
flooded streets. Darkness wrapped the village, and the rushing water roared like
a wild beast(无灵主语句，环境描写). He tightened his grip, refusing
to surrender to the fear
(现
在分词短语做伴随动作) that clawed at his heart. Each step forward was a painful struggle, his
breath short and shallow(独立主格刻画人物), his body trembling under the weight of
exhaustion.(独立主格) Ruby stirred slightly, her burning cheek brushing against his
neck(独立主格刻画人物), igniting
a flame of determination within him
(现在分词短语做结果状语).
Though the storm raged on, he pictured her smile when she was healthy again, and
that vision became his anchor. At last, through the curtain of rain, a building
slowly took shape—their final chance of survival.
Paragraph 2
Finally, after a long and difficult journey, the father reached the hospital. The
door opened(主动表被动，刻画状态), flooding
him with light and hope
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He
stumbled inside, nearly collapsing(现在分词做伴随动作) as relief washed over him. Ruby was
swiftly carried to the treatment room, leaving
him standing breathless
(现在分词做结果状语),
water dripping onto the floor(独立主格). For the first time that night, he allowed himself
to cry—not from weakness but from the overwhelming release of tension. When
the doctor informed him that Ruby would recover soon, gratitude surged through
him like a tide.(无灵主语句) Looking
at the storm outside
(现在分词做伴随动作), he knew the world
could collapse around him, yet as long as Ruby was safe, he had already won the
fiercest battle of his life.
1. 地道搭配
hold on tight 紧紧抓住
press on / push forward 坚持前行
cling to hope 紧抓希望
whisper promises 轻声安慰
collapse with relief 因释然而瘫倒
2. 情绪描写亮点词汇
heart racing 心跳加速
tears welled in his eyes 热泪盈眶
shoulders shook with sobs 肩膀因抽泣颤抖
breath short and shallow 呼吸急促
fear clawed at his heart 恐惧抓挠着心脏
3. 动作描写亮点短语
stagger forward 踉跄前行
tighten his grip 紧握
adjust Ruby gently 轻轻调整Ruby
lean against the wall 靠着墙
nearly collapse 几乎倒下
4. 同义替换/升级词汇
坚持：persist in / persevere / carry on / endure
恐惧：panic / dread / terror / anxiety
虚弱：feeble / fragile / faint / powerless
挣扎：struggle / wrestle / battle / fight against
希望：aspiration / light / faith / dream
5. 例句积累
He pressed on despite the storm, clinging to the faint light ahead.
Fear clawed at his heart, yet determination burned brighter.
She lay fragile and feeble in his arms, every breath a silent plea for help.
At last, gratitude surged through him, washing away the night’s dread.
困难 struggle → hardship / obstacle / ordeal / adversity / trial
害怕 fear → dread / panic / terror / horror / anxiety
疲惫 tired → exhausted / drained / weary / fatigued / worn-out
坚持 insist → persist / persevere / endure / carry on / press on
希望 hope → faith / aspiration / expectation / promise / prospect
常见搭配
make one’s way through 穿过（困难环境）
cling to hope 紧抓希望
collapse with relief 因释然而瘫倒
fight against the current 与水流抗争
heart pounding / racing 心跳加快
语料解析
stagger forward
词义：蹒跚前行（动词短语）
近义词：struggle forward, stumble along
反义词：march confidently, stride forward
例句1：He staggered forward through the mud, unwilling to give up.
例句2：The injured man staggered forward until he finally collapsed.
生词短语推荐
buckled knees 膝盖发软（动作描写常用）
overwhelmed by relief 被释然感淹没
grim determination 坚定的决心
pressing urgency 紧迫感
haunting fear 揪心的恐惧
官方One possible version:
Carrying Ruby on his back, the father carefully made his way through the
flooded streets. The rain poured heavily, the fierce wind almost blowing him
away(独立主格刻画环境). With every step, the water level rose higher, until it was over
his
knees. The sight of the surrounding area, covered in water(过去分词做后置定语), may have
made others feel hopeless, but he didn’t stop. He knew Ruby’s life was in danger,
and he had to get her to the hospital no matter what. As time passed, the father
became tired, almost losing
his balance
(现在分词做伴随动作). But he held Ruby closely, with
only one thought in his mind: he had to keep going.
Finally, after a long and difficult journey, the father reached the hospital.
When he entered the hospital with
Ruby,
the medical workers quickly took her and
began treatment. After a while, Ruby’s fever went down. The color returned to her
face, and her breathing became calmer. The father sat down in a chair in the hospital,
very tired, but he felt a deep sense of relief. He knew that although the journey had
been hard, he had succeeded in getting his daughter the help she needed. No matter
how difficult the situation was, he would always do anything for Ruby.
