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专题 09 读后续写关爱动物类话题（测试）解析版
目 录
【关爱动物话题情节构建】 P 1
【关爱动物主题语境满分语料】 P 2
【关爱动物话题精彩片段欣赏】 P 4
【片段01】以爱为翼：流浪狗救助背后的蜕变与希望
【片段02】邂逅松鼠开启友谊：一场奇妙的动物救助之旅
【关爱动物话题名校好题调研】 P 5
【调研1】小松鼠斯奎特的成长蜕变：从依赖到独立
[调研02] 危急时刻！狗狗以命护主，吓退蝎子英勇负伤
[调研03] 小鸭冻僵命悬一线，群鸭救援谱写温情
[调研04] 突发状况！孩子被困，巧用企鹅战术成功自救
[调研05] 车胎无故漏气，竟是乌鸦为求清凉 “作案”
[调研06] 圣诞惊喜降临！小狗 “闯入” 生活，孤独从此退场
[调研07] 奇迹降临：圣诞前夕，走失猫咪跨越艰难终回家
[调研08] “丁丁” 来信！邮差善意之举，治愈女孩丧猫之痛
[调研09] 爱犬出走引发危机，父女齐心终迎团圆
[调研10] 狗狗独特 “方言” 立功！助迷路小主人成功回家
[调研11] 偶遇野生萌宝海豹，忍痛送归背后的暖心行动
[调研12] 暖心便签牵邻里，狗狗结缘情谊长
【关爱动物故事情节构建】
情节发展 情绪刻画 主题升华句
可爱型动物故 可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助 陪伴、珍爱生命、自
事情节 动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情 然和谐、忠诚等。
节。
凶猛型动物故 凶猛的动物，如狼、熊、蛇等，一般会给人造成生命 难忘的经历、获得教
事情节 威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。 训、感谢他人救助
等。
【关爱动物主题语境满分语料】
一、初识动物类
1. Its gentle eyes seemed to speak, drawing him closer.
它温柔的眼神仿佛在诉说，吸引着他靠近。
2. Curiosity sparkled in her eyes as she reached out her hand tentatively.她眼中闪烁着好奇，小心翼翼地伸出手。
3. Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动。
4. He approached the animal cautiously, his heart racing with both excitement and uncertainty.
他小心翼翼地靠近那只动物，心中既兴奋又忐忑。
二、陪伴动物类
1. Through countless days and nights, it stood by him, a silent companion.
在无数个日夜，它默默陪伴在他身边。
2. They shared an unspoken understanding, bound by loyalty and trust.
他们心有灵犀，由忠诚和信任维系着彼此。
3. In its presence, he found solace, as if the world was a little kinder.
在它的陪伴下，他找到了慰藉，仿佛世界也温柔了许多。
三、危机反应类
1. With a fierce loyalty, it stood between him and danger, unwavering.
它充满忠诚地站在他和危险之间，毫不动摇。
2. In that critical moment, it was his silent protector, guarding him at all costs.
在那关键时刻，它成了他的无言守护者，竭尽全力守护他。
3. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard.
我的妻子抓住我的衣服，手颤抖着，使劲吞着口水。
4. Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright.
一想到狼的血淋淋的嘴，麦克吓得差点死了。
5. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly, screaming, “Help!”
看到它，艾莉疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着：“救命！”
6. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free.
我用一块石头作为支撑点，解开了链子，把狼放了出来。
7. When danger struck, the animal acted without hesitation, shielding him from harm.
危险来临时，那只动物毫不犹豫地保护他免受伤害。
8. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds and then gave him careful
treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf together with Brian.
从树桩中拔出巨大的尸体后，布莱恩清理了伤口，然后对他进行了仔细的治疗。贝基跪下来，和布莱恩一
起照顾狼。
四、不舍告别类
1. As he bid farewell, he realized how deeply it had touched his life.
在道别时，他意识到它对他生命的深刻影响。
2. Their parting was bittersweet, leaving him grateful for every moment shared.
他们的离别苦乐参半，他感激每一个共同度过的瞬间。
3. With a heavy heart, he watched it disappear into the horizon, memories flooding his mind.
他心情沉重地注视着它消失在地平线，回忆涌上心头。五、主旨升华类
1. Cats may have nine lives, but they give us a lifetime of love.
猫可能有九条命，但它们给了我们一生的爱。
2. Cats are like little furry miracles that bring joy to our lives.
猫就像小小的毛茸茸的奇迹，给我们的生活带来欢乐。
3. A dog's happy face is a reminder of the simple joy in life.
狗快乐的脸是对生活中简单快乐的提醒。
4. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.
尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家里却充满了爱和团聚的温暖。
5. The rain that came that day was a miracle, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.
那天的雨是一个奇迹，拯救了我们的农场，就像我的儿子拯救了一条生命一样。
6. It is through this silent companionship that he came to understand the depth of loyalty and devotion, a
bond that went beyond words and gestures.
正是通过这种无言的陪伴，他才领悟了忠诚与奉献的深邃，那是一种超越言语与行动的纽带。
7. The bond between human and animal revealed to him the profound, often unspoken, beauty of
unconditional love, a connection resilient enough to withstand both time and trials.
人与动物之间的联系让他领悟到那种深邃却无言的无条件之爱，一种足以承受时间与考验的坚韧情感。
8. Not until the moment of parting did he grasp the intensity of the connection they shared, an attachment
woven quietly into the fabric of his life.
直到离别的瞬间，他才真正明白他们之间那份无声无息融入他生命的深切联结。
9. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if
to express thanks. What a warm scene!
狼似乎感觉好多了，慢慢地抬起头，温柔地吻了吻贝基的手，好像在表示感谢。多么温暖的场景啊！
【读后续写关爱动物话题优秀片段欣赏】
【片段01】《以爱为翼：流浪狗救助背后的蜕变与希望》
Our efforts began to produce positive results. The community took notice of our work, and more people
joined in to lend a helping hand. Slowly but surely, the situation began to change. More homeless dogs were
rescued, and eventually adopted into caring families. Our small acts of kindness created a good effect that
reached far beyond that neighborhood. We may not have been able to save every homeless dog, but the ones
we did rescue inspired hope and sympathy.
Looking back on the summer, I am filled with a sense of pride and contentment. Rescuing homeless dogs
taught me the value of selflessness and perseverance. Now, I know there are many creatures in this world
that need our love, and that we humans should learn to live in harmony with them. I appreciate these
beautiful creatures because of their remarkable adaptability. It is an experience that changes my life forever
and serves as a reminder that we all have the power to make a difference to the world.
【范文翻译】我们的努力开始产生积极成果。社区注意到了我们的工作，更多的人加入进来伸出援手。慢慢地但肯
定地，情况开始发生变化。更多的流浪狗被救出，并最终被收养到有爱心的家庭中。我们小小的善举产生
了良好的影响，远远超出了那个社区。我们可能无法拯救每一只无家可归的狗，但我们拯救的狗激发了人
们的希望和同情。
回首夏天，我心中充满了自豪和满足。救助流浪狗教会了我无私和毅力的价值。现在，我知道这个世
界上有很多生物需要我们的爱，我们人类应该学会与它们和谐相处。我欣赏这些美丽的生物，因为它们具
有非凡的适应性。这是一次永远改变我生活的经历，提醒我们都有能力改变世界。
【片段02】《邂逅松鼠开启友谊：一场奇妙的动物救助之旅》
When John opened the cage, the squirrel inside suddenly jumped out. Amy remained calm, held out her
hand, made quiet sounds, and then quickly got it. “Wow!” Janet said. “You' re always so quiet. I thought you
were afraid of everything, but you are brave.” “I know that when animals are frightened or excited, you
have to stay calm. The keeper nodded in agreement and asked Amy, “Would you be interested in
volunteering to help out with the animals at the center?” “Interested?”“I would love to work here! What an
opportunity!”Amy was excited.
On the way back that afternoon, Janet sat next to Amy, looking at her admiringly. A rush of newfound
happiness washed over her. After this experience, they became good friends, getting on well with each other.
At weekends, they would go to the nature center and took care of the animals together. Janet learnt from
Amy about how to look after animals, which made Janet pleased.
【范文翻译】
当约翰打开笼子时，里面的松鼠突然跳了出来。艾米保持冷静，伸出手，发出安静的声音，然后很快
就抓住了。“哇！”珍妮特说。“你总是那么安静。我以为你什么都害怕，但你很勇敢。”“我知道当动
物害怕或兴奋时，你必须保持冷静。饲养员点头表示同意，问艾米：“你有兴趣自愿帮助中心的动物
吗？”“有兴趣？”“我很想在这里工作！多么好的机会！”艾米很兴奋。
那天下午在回家的路上，珍妮特坐在艾米旁边，赞赏地看着她。一股新的幸福感涌上她的心头。经过
这次经历，他们成了好朋友，相处得很好。周末，他们会去自然中心一起照顾动物。珍妮特从艾米那里学
会了如何照顾动物，这让珍妮特很高兴。
【遇困脱险话题名校好题调研】
【调研1】（2023·安徽云南吉林黑龙江·四省联考）小松鼠斯奎特的成长蜕变：从依赖到独立
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover
their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the
doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait—and
looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother—we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and
Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded
that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store formilk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and
when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to
eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would
chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long
before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then
run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
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One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard.
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One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. Squirt cautiously approached
them, his tiny body initially trembling but soon filled with growing curiosity. After observing their
movements, he hesitated only a moment before attempting to mimic their nimble climbs and swift jumps. Bit
by bit, he joined in their play, darting through leaves and weaving around branches as though discovering a
whole new world. Watching him embrace his surroundings so naturally, we felt a familiar sense of joy, much
like seeing life through the eyes of our children as they explore the unknown. Each day, Squirt ventured a
little farther from the safety of our house, and we could see his budding confidence, the sure sign of his
readiness for independence.
One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. Concerned, we grabbed our
raincoats and braved the storm, calling his name into the dark, our voices barely carrying over the sound of
the downpour. As lightning flashed across the sky, we scoured the wet branches and shadows until, at last, we
spotted him nestled safely in a tree hollow, huddled close with his new squirrel family, warm and content.
Relief and bittersweet pride washed over us as we realized he had found his own place in the world. Walking
back home, we felt the quiet fulfillment of letting go, knowing he was free, thriving under the sheltering trees
in the life he had chosen for himself.
【满分范文】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他们决定收养它，看
着这只小松鼠从瘦弱幼小，慢慢变的健康活泼，让作者一家感觉既有趣又温暖。【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天，在树林里，Squirt遇到了一个灰色松鼠家庭。”可知，第一段可描写Squirt
遇到这一家灰松鼠的情况，Squirt如何与灰松鼠一家交往。
②由第二段首句内容“一天晚上，Squirt没有回到我们家，下起了大雨。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家
的担心，和最后的结果，以及作者的感悟。
2. 续写线索：遇到灰松鼠——与灰松鼠一家交往——没有回家，担心它——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①责骂：scold/blame/rebuke
②拍打：swat/slap/hit
③寻找：seek/find/look for/search for
④阻止：prevent/put a stop to/head off
情绪类
①高兴的：happy/delighted
②有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrossing
【点睛】[高分句型1]At first Squirt was so unhappy that he avoided them.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]But when the sun rose the next day, there was Squirt, begging for food.(when引导的时间状语从
句和现在分词作状语)
[调研02] （24-25高三上·云南昆明·阶段练习）《危急时刻！狗狗以命护主，吓退蝎子英勇负伤》
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Just as many families do at some point, Catherine and her husband chose to add a pet to their family, which
also consisted of their17-month-old daughter Kate. Catherine wanted a dog with which Kate could have a close
bond. So she called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the animals available,
she chose one. Once they signed the adoption papers, they named the dog Khan.
Catherine hoped having a dog would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as sharing, learning to love
and responsibility through caring for an animal. She was looking forward to having the dog join the family.
When the dog was brought to her family, Catherine was overjoyed. Of course, she realized there were risks
involved. Well, the most obvious one was bringing a large, potentially dangerous animal home to her young baby,
but Catherine pushed these risks aside.
Everything began smoothly. They trained Khan during the first few days. And Khan seemed to have already
decided that Kate was his No.1 girl. The dog seldom left her side after arriving at his new home. However,
everything changed on the fourth day when the dog acted completely out of character.
The day began with the usual playtime in the yard. Watching from a distance, Kate’s parents did not notice
anything out of the ordinary. Kate and the new dog had made a habit of playing outside like this. However, things
were different that day.
So what was actually happening out there? The two were not being loud or crazy. Then they began running
through the backyard grass together. Again, Catherine watched the two closely. Surprisingly, things changed in an
instant!注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden.
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Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes.
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Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden. He started barking ferociously and running in circles
around Kate. His hair stood on end and his eyes were wide with a sense of urgency. Catherine and her
husband were shocked and immediately ran towards them. Khan then pushed Kate gently but firmly behind
him, still barking and showing his teeth. Just then, they saw a scorpion crawling near Kate’s feet. Khan had
sensed the danger and was trying to protect her.
Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes.
Catherine and her husband were horrified. They quickly picked up Khan and rushed him to the vet. On the
way, they were filled with gratitude and worry. At the vet’s, Khan was given immediate treatment.
Thankfully, after a tense few hours, Khan started to recover. From that day on, Khan became an even more
cherished member of the family. His heroic act had shown them the true meaning of loyalty and love, and
they would always be grateful for his presence and protection.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，以狗Khan为线索。Catherine想要养一只狗作为女儿Kate的玩伴。她选了
一只作为他们的新成员，并给他取名Khan。刚开始一切都进行得很顺利。Khan来的第四天，他像往常一
样正在院子里陪Kate玩耍，Catherine夫妇在不远处看着，这时发生了意外。Khan突然失控，他拖着
Kate，把她放到院子外面，原来是院子里有一条毒蛇。Khan保护了Kate，但自己却受伤了。Catherine送
他就医，最终他活了过来。
【详解】1. 续写线索：
由续写第一段首句内容“Khan的行为突然变得疯狂起来。”可知，第一段可描写Khan行为突然异常的表
现和背后的原因。
由续写第二段首句内容“显然，是Khan救了她的孩子，但他虚弱地叫了一声，然后倒在地上，睁着垂死
的眼睛。”可知，第二段可描写Khan在救了Kate之后受伤了，他可能有生命危险，Catherine急忙送他
就医，最终他活了过来。
2. 段落续写：Khan突然行为疯狂——把Kate拖到院外——救下Kate——奄奄一息——送医——救活
Khan
3. 词汇激活
行为类①开始：start/begin
②看见：see/spot
③保护：protect/defend/guard
情绪类
①惊讶的：shocked/astonished
②感激的：grateful/thankful
【点睛】【高分句型1】Khan then pushed Kate gently but firmly behind him, still barking and showing his
teeth. （运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Just then, they saw a scorpion crawling near Kate’s feet. （运用了现在分词作宾补）
[调研03]（22-23高一下·云南昭通·期末）小鸭冻僵命悬一线，群鸭救援谱写温情
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Nothing is so beautiful as spring—When weeds, in wheels, shoot long and lovely and lush.” However, there
is no denying that early spring can be a tough time in the Midwest. It can take both people and animals by surprise
with its unexpected snowstorms.
My house is built in a high position so that my backyard overlooks a large pond. Every spring, flocks of
migratory birds (候鸟) chose to root in the pond on the way to their summer homes. They had a rest in the pond,
looked for food to feed their baby birds and played with each other casually. This year, among others, hundreds of
scaups, a type of diving duck, spent several days hanging out there, diving for food. Life was peaceful and warm
for them. They spent hours swimming with each other. The older ones would run after the younger after they
finished their breakfast. Every time the little ducks would spare no effort to escape and the open water around them
would get bigger and bigger.
Then the snowstorm hit followed by a very cold night. The temperature dropped sharply. As the open water
of the pond shrank into icy desolation (荒凉) the scaups took off for a more livable habitat (栖息地).
The next morning, I found that all birds had disappeared overnight except one lo ne female, who was diving
energetically in her little circle of open water. Her movements and body heat had kept the ice from coming close.
She bravely swam around as I watched her from the comfort of my warm home.
As time passed, the open water around the duck got smaller and smaller, and her movements slowed.
Obviously, she was in danger. I watched with anxiety as she eventually stopped moving, and I feared she was dead.
I decided to go out to have a look.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then it happened.
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Then it happened. Two more ducks suddenly appeared, determined and energetic, landing next to her
still body. And then more ducks came, and the circle of water came alive with their swimming and diving.
Within minutes, the lone female, too, was swimming and diving happily, returning to consciousness by her
friends’ presence. A wave of great joy swallowed the lively ducks and they enjoyed themselves excitedly.
This little duck’s friends probably saved her life. She wouldn’t have lasted another night in the frozen
pond. And she, in turn, had done them a favor by keeping that small area of water open, so they had a place
to stop and refresh themselves. It made me consider how we could have a deep effect on the people around
us. A look, an action, a few words even our mere presence—might brighten someone’s day. It might change
one’s path, or even save one’s life.
【导语】本文以斑背潜鸭为线索展开，讲述了作者生活的中西部地区，早春可能是一个艰难的时期。它突
如其来的暴风雪会让人和动物大吃一惊。作者后院可以俯瞰一个大池塘。每年春天，成群的斑背潜鸭在飞
往避暑家园的途中都会选择在池塘里扎根和嬉戏。一天，暴风雪来了，接着是一个非常寒冷的夜晚。气温
急剧下降。第二天坐着发现所有的鸟都在一夜之间消失了，只有一只斑背潜鸭在她的小圈开阔水域里精力
充沛地潜水。周围的开阔水域越来越小，她的行动也越来越慢。显然，她有危险。作者焦虑地看着她最终
停止了移动，作何担心她已经死了。决定出去看一看。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后事情发生了。”可知，第一段可描写有更多的斑背潜鸭出现，在朋友们的陪伴
下，这只孤独的斑背潜鸭恢复了意识，并且开心的一起玩耍。
②由第二段首句内容“这只小鸭子的朋友可能救了她的命。”可知，第二段可描写斑背潜鸭得救的原因以
及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：更多的斑背潜鸭出现——孤独的斑背潜鸭恢复了意识——分析了原因——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①停止：stop /pause
②改变：change/alter
③思考：consider /ponder
④出现：appear/emerge
情绪类
①兴奋地：excitedly/in excitement
②精力充沛的：energetic/full of energy
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I came out, I dragged my legs towards the finish line. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] With a glow rekindled in my mind, I outran the runners in sight. (运用了with的复合结构)
[调研04]（23-24高二下·广东梅州·期末）突发状况！孩子被困，巧用企鹅战术成功自救
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Upon her arrival at the South Pole Penguin Research Lab, Mary observed her friend Tom tenderly caressing
a penguin cradled in his arms. As the offspring of the lab’s scientific staff, Mary and Tom were frequently in the
presence of emperor penguins, which were under scrutiny to discern how they coped with the harsh climatic
conditions — a knowledge that could be instrumental in enhancing human endurance in extreme environments.
“We’re thirteen, Tom. It’s the age to mature and cease interacting with the lab’s penguins as if they were
playmates,” Mary remarked, commencing her cleaning duties. “These creatures are subjects of research, not
domestic animals.”
“But these avians are responsive to my touch!” Tom defended, his exhalation manifesting as a mist in the icy
atmosphere. “You’re merely attempting to become a penguin whisperer once more,” Mary retorted, a soft grin
playing on her lips as she shook her head. The penguins exhibited a playful demeanor as they strolled, plunged,
swam, and frolicked in pursuit of their live piscine quarry before partaking in their meal.
A sudden blare of an alarm, accompanied by the flashing of red lights, interrupted the scene, indicating an
issue at hand. The siblings hastened to investigate. “The temperature has plummeted further — there’s ice
crystallizing on the water’s surface,” Tom observed. Despite the perpetual cold, Mary had never witnessed ice
forming in that location before. Upon inspecting the habitat monitor, she realized that the temperature had dipped
significantly. “The heating system must have malfunctioned!”
Promptly, Mary dispatched a message to their parents' research team, who were immersed in field studies
outside. With the adults indisposed, the children were left to manage the plummeting temperatures until
reinforcements arrived.
As they waited apprehensively, time seemed to dawdle, and the escalating cold induced shivers. “I ponder
what emperor penguins accomplish amidst such frigid conditions, considering they remain at the Pole throughout
the winter rather than migrating to warmer climates,” Mary mused. “They huddle,” Tom replied. “They cluster so
closely that those in the core remain sufficiently warm.” “What occurs with the ones on the periphery?” Mary
inquired. “They press inward toward the center, then subsequently migrate back to the periphery, and once again
grapple against the flow of their peers to regain the warmth of the huddle’s heart. This behavior was documented by
scientists in the early 21st century,” he stated, his gaze fixed on the sizable assembly of penguins within the lab.
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“I have an idea to stay warm!” Tom shouted excitedly.
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“I have an idea to stay warm!” Tom shouted excitedly. “We can mimic the emperor penguins’ behavior.
Let’s huddle together for warmth, just like they do in the harsh conditions of the Pole.” So, they began to
implement Tom’s idea. They found a spot in the lab that was relatively sheltered from the wind and started
to huddle close to each other, sharing body heat. Time seemed to slow down as they waited for help to arrive,
but their shared warmth made the wait more bearable.
Two and a half hours later, the parents returned with help. Upon seeing their children huddling
together, they were relieved to find them safe and warm. The quick thinking of Tom and Mary had not only
kept them comfortable but also given them a firsthand lesson in the survival tactics of the emperor penguins.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作为实验室科研人员后代的Mary和Tom在南极企鹅研究实验室
观察企鹅，突然警报响起，供暖系统出现故障，Mary立刻通知在外埋头研究的父母研究小组，在焦急地
等待中，他们看到企鹅挤在一起取暖，它们向内挤向中心，然后又移回外围，再次与同伴的流动作斗争，
以重新获得群体内心的温暖。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘我有一个保暖的主意！’Tom兴奋地喊道。”可知，第一段可描写Tom和Mary
模仿企鹅的行为，和企鹅一起取暖。
②由第二段首句内容“两个半小时后，父母带着救援人员回来了。”可知，第二段可描写大人们惊讶地发
现孩子们和企鹅团在一起从而保持温暖活了下来。
2.续写线索：想出办法——实施——共同取暖——大人返回——感到松了口气
3.词汇激活
行为类
①模仿：mimic/imitate
②实施：implement/carry out
③给某人上了一课：give sb a lesson/teach sb a lesson
情绪类
①兴奋：excitedly/with excitement
②松了口气：be relieved/sigh with relief
【点睛】[高分句型1] They found a spot in the lab that was relatively sheltered from the wind and started to
huddle close to each other, sharing body heat.（由关系词that引导定语从句）
[高分句型2] Time seemed to slow down as they waited for help to arrive, but their shared warmth made the
wait more bearable.（由连词as引导时间状语从句）[调研05]（2024·福建泉州·三模）车胎无故漏气，竟是乌鸦为求清凉 “作案”
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My Uncle Joe had a farmland in the countryside. Every summer, I would spend a few weeks there, playjing
around and doing some help. his farmland is often visited by crows (乌鸦). I discovered that they were so
intelligent. They would drop nuts onto roads to be broken open by passing cars and even could use their sharp
beaks (鸟喙) to open cups of bottles.
That day was the hottest day of the year. Even the birds would rest in the shades of our yard to cool
themselves. Uncle Joe was wiping sweat off his face when he came into the house. “Ken, did you let the air out of
two tyres on my old truck?” he asked me. And I denied.
“I guess I must have run over some nails,” Uncle Joe said. I helped him pump (打气)some air into the tyres
so we could drive to the garage. The garage man couldn’t find any nails, It seemed it was due to the opening of the
tyre valves (阀门).
“Maybe, Ken, here, was playing a trick,” he told Uncle Joe.
“I wouldn’t do that!” I said with red face, “Flattyres aren’t funny.”
“But there are only three others who live nearby, and they’re on vacation,” Uncle Joe said. “It’s a mystery.”
The next morning was even hotter. Uncle Joe stormed into the house, shouting at me, “Now three tyres are
flat! Who else could be pulling such a trick?”
We pumped up the tyres again. When Uncle Joe went back inside, I decided to solve this mystery myself. I
hid behind a bush, keeping an eye on the truck. Maybe some kid who is visiting one of our neighbors is doing it, I
thought.
The sun got hotter and hotter. I got sleepier and sleepier. Suddenly I heard a ssst, ssst hissing sound. My eyes
flew open, and I stared at the strangest sight I’d ever seen.
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I noticed a crow standing beside Uncle Joe’s back tyre.
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【满分范文】I noticed a crow standing beside Uncle Joe’s back tyre. Swiftly hopping around the valve, it was
occupied in some work. Full of curiosity, I covered myself behind the branches, trying not to make a sound.
What did it try to do? Then, my question was answered as it pressed against the tyre with its sharp yellow
beak. Sssst! The valve was loosened and my jaw nearly dropped. The key was the air, which was immediately
released and rushed to the clever creature. Its rolling eyes and flapping wings seemed to indicate its pleasure.
Seeing the crow cooling from tyre’s air, I rushed to find Uncle Joe. Without hesitation, I told him what
I discovered. Following me, Uncle Joe came to the spot, where only some black feathers were left. The
“criminal” seemed to have escaped. Uncle Joe smiled and patted me on the shoulder, apologizing for his
previous misunderstanding. I waved my hands, saying it was OK and truly excited about solving the
mystery. Later, we decided to place an electric fan outside the yard, not only to protect the truck but also to
bring coolness to the intelligent visitor.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在乡下叔叔的农场度假时，发现叔叔的卡车轮胎莫名其妙地
瘪了。经过观察，作者发现是一只乌鸦利用其锋利的喙打开轮胎的气阀，释放出气体来给自己降温。最后，
作者和叔叔决定在院子里放置一个电风扇，既保护卡车，又给聪明的乌鸦带去凉爽。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我注意到一只乌鸦站在乔叔叔的后轮旁边。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现的真相
即乌鸦用其锋利的喙打开轮胎的气阀，释放出气体来给自己降温。
②由第二段首句内容“看到乌鸦从轮胎的空气中冷却下来，我冲去找乔叔叔。”可知，第二段可描写作者
找到乔叔叔，让叔叔来到现场别发现真相，叔叔因为自己的误会向作者道歉，定在院子里放置一个电风扇，
既保护卡车，又给聪明的乌鸦带去凉爽。
2.续写线索：作者躲在树丛后面——发现真相——告诉乔叔叔事实——叔叔来到现场发现真相并向作者道
歉——最终解决谜题——在院中安装电风扇
3.词汇激活
行为类
①躲藏树枝后：cover/hide oneself behind the branches
②.释放：release/set off
③.表明：indicate/show
情绪类
①.感到惊讶：my jaw nearly dropped/felt extremely shocked
②.感到激动的：feel excited/thrilled/exhilarated
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Full of curiosity, I covered myself behind the branches, trying not to make a sound.
（使用现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型2]. Following me, Uncle Joe came to the spot, where only some black feathers were left. （由
where引导非限制性定语从句）
[调研06]（23-24高一下·河北张家口·期中）圣诞惊喜降临！小狗 “闯入” 生活，孤独从此退场
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A Pleasant Surprise
It was one week before Christmas and my house was filled with festive cheer. The only thing I hoped to getfrom my Christmas wish list was a puppy (小狗). I had always dreamed of having a puppy, as I was the only child,
and it could be quite lonely at times. However, I did not want to get my hopes up, as I knew neither of my parents
liked the thought of having a puppy around the house and all that came with it.
Every time I begged for a puppy, my parents would say, “It is a lot of responsibilities, and you will have to
clean up after it, give it baths, feed it regularly and walk it.”
I knew the responsibilities and was ready to take them on. Unfortunately, even with my enthusiasm (热情)
and determination, my parents still disagreed to get me a puppy. There were very few chances of getting it, but I
still tried asking them again that week.
“Oh honey, pick something else instead. There are so many toys that you can pick,” my parents responded as
usual. As expected, I thought, giving a resigned sigh (无奈的叹息). For the rest of the evening, I decorated the
Christmas tree as my parents hung some stockings. That night, I went to sleep with the hope that my dream would
ever come true.
My alarm clock woke me up. “Oh my goodness, it is finally Christmas day!” I shouted excitedly and rushed
down the stairs to the living room.
“Good morning, Bella!” both my parents chatted with huge smiles on their faces that were brighter than
usual. My curiosity was inspired and many questions rushed into my mind. They played Christmas carols, and they
sang along to the merry tunes. Just then, I caught my father smiling at my mother as if they had a secret plan and
walking out of the door. When I asked my mother where my father had gone, she simply said that he had gone to
pick something up. I grew confused.
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I wondered what they could be hiding from me.
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I wondered what they could be hiding from me. As the morning unfolded, my anticipation grew, and I
couldn’t shake the feeling that something extraordinary was about to happen. Moments later, the front door
creaked open, and in walked my father, his arms cradling a small, wriggling bundle of fur. My eyes widened
in disbelief as he presented the adorable puppy to me, and my heart swelled with joy. Overwhelmed byemotion, I gathered the little creature into my arms and felt an instant connection.
I fell in love with the puppy at first sight and named her Daisy. Her playful energy and endearing nature
quickly won over my parents, and soon, our home was filled with laughter and warmth. With Daisy by my
side, I found a constant source of companionship and love. My once lonely days were a thing of the past, and
I reveled in the newfound happiness that she brought into our lives. Christmas had indeed granted my
dearest wish, and the arrival of Daisy made it a holiday season to remember.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文，按照事情发展的先后顺序讲述了小女孩贝拉在圣诞节前夕希望得到一只小狗作
为礼物。尽管她的父母认为养狗责任重大，多次拒绝了她的请求，贝拉仍抱有一丝希望。圣诞节早上，贝
拉看到父亲神秘地走出门，让她充满了好奇和疑问的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我想知道他们会对我隐瞒什么。”可知，第一段可描写“我有一种感觉似乎爸爸要
为我买一只小狗，梦想实现时，我的心充满了喜悦”的相关细节。
②由第二段首句内容“我对这只小狗一见钟情，给它取名为黛西。”可知，第二段可描写“黛西的到来给
我们的生活带来的幸福，圣诞节成为了一个值得纪念的节日”的相关细节。
2.续写线索：我感觉到有事情要发生——父亲带回一只小狗——我的心充了喜悦之情——小狗带来笑声和
温暖——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①变宽： widen/broaden
②发生：happen/occur/take place
情绪类
①开心：joy/delight/happiness/pleasure
②怀疑：disbelief/suspicion
【点睛】【高分句型1】My eyes widened in disbelief as he presented the adorable puppy to me, and my
heart swelled with joy. (使用了as引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】My once lonely days were a thing of the past, and I reveled in the newfound happiness that
she brought into our lives. (使用了that引导的定语从句)
[调研07]（2024·江西鹰潭·二模）奇迹降临：圣诞前夕，走失猫咪跨越艰难终回家
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The Making of a Believer
It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Baby-Girl, who is chubby
and cute, fond of sitting in her one-and-only spot near the nearth (壁炉). AS I got ready, I could hear icy rain
pouring down. I said a quick prayer for Baby-Girl. She was out there somewhere in the storm, I could just feel it.
Sure, it had been six months since she’d gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles, after all.
That summer, my sweet cat had disappeared from my parents’ house in Indiana. Baby-Girl had been staying
with them. At the time, I lived and worked in Washington, D．C．Baby-Girl had gotten out of my parents’ house
three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up.
My dad and I spent that entire visit searching for her. Dad was the family’s resident “realistic”, which meanthe spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. She’s either been hit by a car or been taken in by
someone who found her” he said. I rolled my eyes. Dad always supported me, but he was so skepticat. He could do
with a little more faith!
Besides, though I couldn’t explain it, I knew I’d see her Baby-Girl again. If any cat could do the impossible,
it was my Baby-Girl. Even after T returned to D．C． without her and the weeks stretched into months, deep
down I had this feeling that we’d be reunited.
How, home again for the holidays, I was de tem mined to pick up my search. I grabbed Baby-Girl’s cat
carrier and loaded it into the car, then persuaded Dad to drive me to the shelter, hoping she’d been found.
“Sharon, you have to be realistic,” my dad said as we headed to the garage. “She’s been gone too long.
You’re not going to find her.”
“Well, I just have a feeling,” I said
Dad raised an eyebrow a she climbed into the driver’s seat to take me to the shelter.
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We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.
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We were led to the room where the abandoned cat lived. I tiptoed into the room with a strong feeling of
anticipation. Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my prompt attention suddenly. My
eyes zeroed in on a little cat caged in the corner. She was skinnier than I remember, but it was my Baby-Girl
all right! Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight, I opened the cage door. Baby-Girl practically
jumped into my arms. I held her close, with my eye swelling up tears, as my Dad looked on, his jaw dropping
wide with shock.
Soon after, my shocked Dad drove us back home. The instant we dropped Baby-Girl off, freeing her
from the carrier, she immediately dashed to the hearth, seeking her favourite spot. On seeing this scene, we
all roared with laughter, signaling that my Dad’s doubts were removed as well. Against all odds, my cat was
home again, right before Christmas. It was such a miracle that my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling
blessed with Baby-Girl’s long-awaited companion. As for my dear father who always support me, it turnedout that Baby-Girl’s return made him a man of a believer.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者寻找失踪猫咪Baby-Gir的经历。在圣诞节前夜，作者醒来
时决心要找到失踪的猫咪，相信它仍在暴风雨中的某个地方。虽然已经过去了几周，但作者仍然有信心。
在之前的探访中，作者和父亲一起寻找Baby-Girl。但父亲是一个“现实主义者”，他试图让作者为最坏
的情况做好准备。作者深信，如果有任何一只猫咪能够完成不可能的任务，那就是她的Baby-Girl。尽管
作者未能在动物收容所中找到她，但她仍然相信她们将有一天能与所爱的宠物重聚。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们被带到了被遗弃的猫住的房间。”可知，第一段可描写作者进入一所房子，听
到了熟悉的猫叫声，找到了她的Baby-Girl
②由第二段首句内容“不久之后，我震惊的爸爸开车送我们回家。”可知，第二段可描写作者和父亲一起
把猫咪带回家，猫咪非常开心，作者心中充满感激。
2.续写线索：走进房间——听到猫叫声——找到猫咪——喜悦——回家——开心——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①吸引：absorbed/captivated/engrossed/immersed
②专注于：zeroed in on/focused/concentrated/fixed
③冲向：dashed/rushed/sprinted/bolted
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/thrill/exhilaration/elation
②感激：gratitude/thankfulness/appreciation/indebtedness
【点睛】[高分句型1]Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my prompt attention
suddenly.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was such a miracle that my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling blessed with Baby-Girl’s
long-awaited companion. (运用了such…that引导的结果状语从句)
[调研08]（23-24高二下·江苏扬州·阶段练习）《“丁丁” 来信！邮差善意之举，治愈女孩丧宠之痛》
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It was hard to say goodbye to a pet, especially for children. Nancy Lowe. 5, from Walton-on Thames,
England, experienced the loss of her beloved cat, Tintin, earlier this year. She died from heart failure and Nancy
had been struggling to adjust to life without her best friend. Concerned and anxious, Nancy’s mom, Tamara, said,
“Nancy and Tintin were best friends, and they had a really close bond, Whenever they saw each other, the two of
them were so happy.”
Nancy desperately missed Tintin and she was worried the cat would be lonely, so she decided to write a letter
to her cat up in heaven. She was warned by her mother, who told her that heaven might be too far away and that
Tintin might have found a new friend, but Nancy insisted on writing the letter. When she was asked what she had
written, she showed the letter to her mother generously. It read, “Dear Tintin, I miss you. Have you found a new
friend in heaven?” Tamara was touched by her daughter’s sincere love and kindness. She didn’t want to disappoint
her daughter so they posted the letter together.
Before they put the letter in a post box, once again Tamara tried to let her know she probably wouldn’treceive a reply, but Nancy addressed the envelope to “heaven” and mail edit off anyway.
Tamara said, “When we sent the letter I didn’t expect anything to comeback and I don’t think Nancy did,
either. But it was important for her to say a proper goodbye. Getting a response was the last thing we expected.”
Tamara and Nancy didn’t know a postman named Clive Edwards was on duty that day and he saw the letter
addressed to heaven and wanted to help Nancy find some comfort in her loss.
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To their surprise, they received a letter from “Tintin” just a week later!
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To their surprise, they received a letter from “Tintin” just a week later! Of course, it wasn’t true Tintin
who had written back. Clive wrote the letter as if he were Tintin. It read, “Dear Nancy, thank you for
sending me your letter. I’m OK in heaven and being looked after well by the angels. I know you are sad that
I’m not there with you but please don’t be...” Nancy finished reading the comforting words, tears welling up
in her eyes. Seeing the happy smile back on her daughter’s face, Tamara felt a huge burden lifted from her
shoulders.
Tamara shared the story on the Internet hoping to find the sender. The heartwarming story soon went
viral online, and thanks to the efforts of those sharing her post, she got in touch with Clive. Tamara conveyed
sincere thanks to him for that valuable letter. “Nancy really needed one final goodbye. When she learned that
Tintin was OK without her being there to look after her, she started to get over the loss,” Tamara said.
Relieved and delighted, the kind-hearted postman Clive responded that he just did what anyone else would
have done.
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Nancy Lowe心爱的猫，Tintin，死于心力衰竭。Nancy非常想念
Tintin，她担心这只猫会很孤独，所以她决定给她在天堂的猫写封信。妈妈Tamara看到Nancy写信的内
容，被女儿真诚的爱和善良感动了。她不想让女儿失望，所以他们一起把信寄了出去。这封寄往天堂的信，
被邮递员Clive Edwards看到了，他想帮助南希在失去亲人的痛苦中找到一些安慰。
【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“令他们惊讶的是，仅仅一周后，他们就收到了“Tintin”的来信！”可知，第一段可
描写回信的内容和Nancy以及Tamara的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“Tamara在网上分享了这个故事，希望能找到寄件人。”可知，第二段可描写
Tamara找到Clive Edwards的过程并向他表示感谢。
2.续写线索：看回信——Nancy感动——找到寄件人——表示感谢
3.词汇激活
行文类
照顾：look after/take care of
完成：finish/complete
取得联系：get in touch with/establish contact with
情绪类
感谢：thank/appreciate
难过的：sad/upset
高兴的：delighted/pleased
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Nancy finished reading the comforting words, tears welling up in her eyes.（运用了独立主格结构）
[高分句型2]
Relieved and delighted, the kind-hearted postman Clive responded that he just did what anyone else would
have done.（运用了that和what引导宾语从句）
[调研09]（2024·河南·模拟预测）爱犬出走引发危机，父女齐心终迎团圆
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our family has two dogs, Cady and Casey. We took in both the mixed breed dogs after they were abandoned
in the country. We live in an area between city and country. This area is rich with farmland, woods and various
animals. Both of our dogs constantly want to run and will do so at any given opportunity. I have to keep them
chained, even though my yard is fenced, so that I do not have to pay any fines for recovering them from the city
pound (流浪狗收留所).
This morning I made the silly mistake of waiting until the last possible minute to put the dogs out. As I was
walking the first one out, the second ran past me in a surprisingly fast move and she was gone. I called for her to
return, but she chose to ignore my commands and headed off for a day of joy. Having a disobedient dog really upset
me. I said goodbye to the dog and went about my business. Anyway, when I picked my daughter up from school, I
just happened to mention that Cady might be missing. “I’ll tell you this! If she has been caught by the K9 cops (警
察), I will not be paying her fines this time,” I said.
I noticed that my daughter had her head turned away from me and was silent for over 5 minutes. I asked,
“Are you mad at me?” “Yes, I am,” she replied, now looking at me calmly. “Why does this upset you so much?” I
wondered out loud. “Cady obviously does not care for her living arrangements here, or she would not runoff every
time she has a chance, would she?” I cleverly remarked.
I have never noticed my daughter spending much time with this dog, so I could not imagine that the thoughtof losing her would be so painful. In my mind I have given Cady a nice home. If she is silly enough to leave all that
behind to chase some neighbor’s cows, then “goodbye” is my attitude.
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I saw tear swelling up in my daughter’s eyes.
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I saw tear swelling up in my daughter’s eyes. She explained that Cady was not only a pet to her, but also
a friend. She talked about how Cady would greet her everyday afterschool and even how she would comfort
her when she was feeling sad. I had never realized that Cady had such a deep connection with my daughter.
Then she said, “Dad, you just don’t understand. If Cady is at the pound, no one will adopt her. Who would
pick her? She is three years old and not even house-trained. She is not even pretty like Casey. No one would
pick her and that means they will kill her.” My heart softened on hearing my daughter’s words. So we
decided to look for Cady, but in vain.
After along and stressful night, we finally got a call from the city pound. Cady had been found
wandering in a nearby neighborhood. We rushed to the city pound and were reunited with her. As we walked
out of the pound with Cady, my daughter hugged me tightly and thanked me for not giving up her friend.
That day, as we sat on the porch with Cady curled up at our feet, I realized the true value of pets in our lives.
I am glad that we found Cady and that my daughter was able to keep her friend. I resolved to repair my
fence in an effort to prevent any future escapes. Mostly, however, I was determined to consider my
daughter’s feelings with a little more compassion before making some anger-based remarks.
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了两只被遗弃的狗，Cady和Casey。但是这两只狗总是
想跑，一有机会就会跑。一天，作者放狗时，Cady冲了出去，并且失踪了。作者不以为意的告诉女儿这
件事，结果女儿却因为Cady的失踪很痛苦。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“我看到我女儿的眼里充满了泪水。”可知，第一段可描写女儿跟作者描述自己与
Cady的友谊并表示对Cady的担忧，作者决定和女儿一起出去寻找Cady。
②由第二段首句内容“经过漫长而紧张的一夜，我们终于接到了城市收容所的电话。”可知，第二段可描写找到Cady的过程以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：女儿解释和Cady的友谊——表示担忧——决定找Cady——找到Cady——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
解释：explain/account for
意识到：realize/be aware of
决定做某事：decide to do sth./be determined to do sth.
拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
难过的：sad/sorrowful
高兴的：glad/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]
She talked about how Cady would greet her everyday afterschool and even how she would comfort her when
she was feeling sad.（运用了how引导宾语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]
I am glad that we found Cady and that my daughter was able to keep her friend.（运用了that引导宾语从
句）
[调研10]（2024·浙江宁波·二模）狗狗独特 “方言” 立功！助迷路小主人成功回家
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There once was a stray dog (流浪狗) named Rufus who was the most amazing dog on Kumquat Street. He
could hear a ladybug blowing its nose. He could see a pill bug eating a black licorice candy at midnight. Rufus
could even smell a caterpillar that hadn’t washed its feet.
You would think that Rufus, being so amazing, was also happy. But he wasn’t. You see, there was one thing
that kept Rufus from being adopted by his favorite human. And that was ...Rufus barked backward. Here’s what he
sounded like: “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!”
Rufus could stand being laughed at by every squirrel and cat in the neighborhood. What he couldn't stand
was that his bark kept him from living with Janie Johnson.
Janie never laughed at Rufus when he barked. More than anything else, Rufus wanted to be her pet. He
wanted to play catch in her yard every day and sleep at the foot of her bed each night.
But Janie’s father, Mr. Johnson, wouldn’t hear of it. “What? A dog that barks backward? Wed be the
laughingstocks of Kumquat Street! we Johnsons didn't get where we are today by adopting dogs that bark
backward. No, Janie. It’s out of the question.”
“I’m sorry,” Janie told Rufus one morning as they sat on her front porch. “I keep telling Daddy how great
you are. He just won’t listen.”
“Krab-krab!” said Rufus.
“Yes, sometimes he is bad-tempered,” said Janie “I’ll keep trying, though. Don’t worry.”
But Rufus did worry. That evening he talked it over with his friend Bill Bulldog. “I don’t think Mr Johnson
will ever like me,” Rufus said. “As long as I bark backward, he’ll never let me live in his home.”“Have you tried treatment?” asked Bill.
Rufus said, “I’ve tried everything. Nothing helps. It’s just the way I bark.”
“You’re a great dog Roof. Anyone can see that,” said Bill. “It just takes some humans longer to figure it out,
that’s all. Hey, want to go with me to Succotash Street? I’ve heard that their garbage is fantastic.”
Rufus yawned. “No, thanks,” he said. “I’ll take a nap.”
When Rufus woke up, it was late afternoon. As he was lying there, his sharp ears heard Mr. Johnson saying,
“It’s almost suppertime. ls Janie still roller-skating? We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by being late for
supper.”
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Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie.
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Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie. He listened for the clickety-click of Janie’s skates. He
sniffed for her special bubble-gum-and-peaches scent. He looked for her sky-blue helmet. But he didn’t hear,
smell, or see her anywhere. Rufus started baking as loud as he could. “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra!
Krab-krab!” A squirrel giggled in a tree, “I’ve never heard anything so silly in my life!” “You don’t even
sound like a dog!”, yowled a cat. Rusfus ignored them all and kept on barking. Soon all you heard in the
neighborhood was his bark. Suddenly, Janie skated up to Rufus. “Oh, Rufus, I knew I heard you!” cried
Janie.
At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up. “Janie,” he said. “Where on earth have you
been?” Janie explained, “I took wrong turn and got lost, Daddy! Then all of a sudden, I heard ‘Wob-wow,
fra-fra-fra.’ It was Rufus! I knew if I followed the sound of his bark, I’d find my way back home.” Mr.
Johnson knelt in front of Rufus and held out his hand. “Rufus, I owe you an apology,” he said. “We Johnsons
didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re wrong. I’d like to shake your paw and invite you
to come live with us.” Rufus happily gave Mr. Johnson his paw and licked his cheek. “We Johnsons didn’t
get where we are today by letting dogs lick us on the cheek.” said Mr. Johnson. “Hmph! Well, I guess thatwasn’t so bad!”
【导语】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了一只名叫Rufus的流浪狗未能获得主人Mr. Johnson
的喜爱，从而不能和家人生活在一起。最终，当Janie迷路时，Rufus用他特有的吠叫引导她回家，打动了
Janie的父亲，最终获得了这一家人的认可的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Rufus沿着金桔街跑去找Janie。”可知，第一段可描写Rufus跑去找Janie时，他
即听又闻又看，却没能找到Janie，他便开始大声地像以前一样叫出来，却被树上的一只松鼠嘲笑了，但
Rufus继续吠叫使得Janie来到了Rufus面前的经过及相关细节。
②由第二段首句内容“看到Janie和Rufus，Mr. Johnson跑了上来。”可知，第二段可描写Mr. Johnson
看到Janie后询问女儿去了哪里，Janie说自己迷路了，多亏Rufus的叫声才找到回家的路，Mr. Johnson
决定向Rufus道歉并邀请他和家人一起住，Rufus高兴地与Mr. Johnson互动的过程及相关细节。
2.续写线索：Rufus努力寻找Janie——Rufus大声吠叫——Janie闻声前来——一起回到家中——Mr.
Johnson向Rufus道歉——Rufus和家人一起居住
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 寻找：look for/hunt for/seek for
② 看见：see/observe
③ 叫喊：cry/scream
情绪类
① 快乐地：happily/merrily
② 糟糕的：bad/awful/terrible
【点睛】[高分句型1] Soon all you heard in the neighborhood was his bark. (使用了that引导的定语从句修
饰先行词all，that已经省略)
[高分句型2] We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re wrong. (前面使用了
where引导的地点状语从句，admitting 后接when引导的宾语从句)
[调研11]（2024·湖南长沙·一模）偶遇野生萌宝海豹，忍痛送归背后的暖心行动
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We moved to a small seaside community in New Zealand 10 years ago, because my husband Phil worked as
a biologist and he had to do research near the sea. I had seen seals (海豚) around Pilot Bay, which is near here.
Sometimes you see them out on the rocks, sunning themselves or playing-but usually in their own territory. They
never thought about disturbing their neighbors.
It was a dark winter morning in August this year when a seal came. At 5:50 a.m., I left the house to go fitness
training. I went down to the car parked in the driveway and heard a growl (咆哮). I thought our cat, Coco, must
have chased a dog under the car. I jumped into the car to avoid getting my ankles bitten, and moved slowly, but
then I felt the car hit something. When I got out to have a look, I couldn’t see anything and thought it must have
moved on. Then when I got back into my seat, I saw a baby seal in the headlights.
I thought, Oh, my God, “but didn’t panic—the ocean is just down the driveway and I thought it would findits way back. Off I went to the training center and gave everyone there a laugh when I said, “Sorry I’m late; there
was a seal under the car.” I didn’t think about it again until I got home. As I walked through the garage (车库), I
noticed our baskets had been moved. I wondered if it was the seal, but then I guessed it could not be the seal
because I didn’t think it could fit through the cat door, which was the only way into the garage. But I was wrong. As
I opened the door to the house, I brushed something and heard this flip-flip-flip-flip sound, and thought, “My God,
that is the seal.”
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It was so cute like a lovely soft toy.
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It was so cute like a lovely soft toy. It had watery eyes and looked at me like a chi id, which made me
desperate to keep it secretly. But I knew it was a wild animal and it should be back to its home, because wild
animals belong to the wild. With a deep sigh, I phone d Phil, who was on his way home from a work trip. He
told me that wild animals smelled bad and I probably never knew how sharp their teeth were. On Phil’s
arriving home, we immediately looked for the contact information.
We called Animal Protection Station, and a worker came over. It was sad to see the little lovely wild
creature wrapped up in a net to be taken away, but a great relief lifted from my inner heart when the worker
said it would be released into the sea after being checked. Experiencing this fortuitous encounter with the
seal reminded me that we should help raise awareness of protecting seals. So, I together with Phil, posted the
photos on the social media and it snowballed. For us, it was pretty good to see so many people care for our
lovely wild neighbors: seals.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家搬到了新西兰的一个海边小社区，某天作者发现一只海
豹出现在自家门前。作者给丈夫打了电话，丈夫联系了动物保护站，最后工作人员把这只海豹带走了。这
次与海豹的偶遇提醒了作者，我们应该帮助提高保护海豹的意识。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“它是如此可爱，像一个可爱的软玩具”可知，第一段可描写作者想让海豹回归自己
的家园，于是和丈夫一起找保护站的联系方式。②由第二段首句内容“我们打电话给动物保护站，一个工作人员过来了”可知，第二段可描写工作人员把
海豹带走了，这次与海豹的偶遇提醒了作者，我们应该帮助提高保护海豹的意识。
2.续写线索：发现海豹——联系丈夫——打电话给动物保护站——工作人员带走海豹——认识到应该提高
保护海豹意识
3.词汇激活
行为类
①提高：raise/promote
②返回：be back to/return
③释放：release/free
情绪类
①可爱：lovely/adorable
②意外：fortuitous/unexpected
【点睛】[高分句型1] But I knew it was a wild animal and it should be back to its home, because wild
animals belong to the wild. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Experiencing this fortuitous encounter with the seal reminded me that we should help raise
awareness of protecting seals. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[调研12]（23-24高一上·山西朔州·期末）暖心便签牵邻里，狗狗结缘情谊长
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For most people, adopting (收养) a pet is one of the best decisions that they can ever make in their lives. In
addition to giving an animal a home and a loving family, the owner will find the company of a pet brings more
happiness than expected.
For someone like Maria, having a pet was very suitable. She was all alone after moving to a new apartment
in Brazil, which made her feel lonely.
So when she found a cute black puppy named Chips, she knew she had to take him home. Maria thought that
Chips would be able to fill the emptiness that she had been experiencing from living all alone.
Maria was right. Once she took the puppy home, they immediately bonded. However, as Maria had to work
during the day, she was worried about leaving Chips home alone in her apartment. She was also worried that his
crying would upset her neighbors.
One night, when she returned home, outside her door was a package with a folded note attached to it. Maria
knew that she was in trouble. She hoped that she would not be evicted (驱逐) from her new apartment because of
Chips. She loved Chips so much, and she was afraid that she might have to get rid of him because he made too
much noise whenever she was away. Maria was frightened and wondered who could have left it at the door because
she had little contact with the people in the building except her neighbor, Angelia. In fact, they only said hello few
times.
However, when she noticed the names on the folded note, she found that it wasn’t addressed to her but to her
dog, Chips, and that it was “written” by another dog named Corote. Maria opened the package first and found a few
toys for pets.
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Curious, Maria opened the note and started reading it. The note, which was actually written by her
neighbor Angelia in Corote’s voice, said she’d noticed Chips crying a lot. She wanted to give Chips some toys
to play with so that he wouldn’t feel alone when Maria was away. Besides, Chips was invited to play with
Corote. Maria was deeply moved and felt relieved after reading the note. Instead of expressing discontent,
her kind neighbor was really understanding and tried to offer support. Maria felt she needed to meet Angelia
and her dog.
With Chips following her, Maria knocked at Angelia’s door. The door opened and Maria saw Angelia,
smiling at her. Corote, Angelia’s dog, followed her and stared at Chips happily. The two dogs immediately hit
it off. A pleasant atmosphere was created when Maria and Angelia were chatting. After that, the two pairs
regularly played together. In the process, Maria also got valuable advice from Angelia. Through their shared
experiences and the joy their pets brought them, Maria and her neighbor formed a deep connection and
their lives became very colorful and meaningful.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Maria搬进新公寓后收养了狗狗Chips，Chips填补了她独自生
活的空虚，但Maria白天要工作，她担心狗狗会吵到邻居，一天晚上Maria发现门外有个包裹和纸条，打
开纸条后发现是写给Chips的，包裹里也放了一些玩具。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“好奇的Maria打开纸条，开始读起来。”可知，第一段可描写Maria读纸条内容，
收到同样养狗的邻居Angelia的邀请。
②由第二段首句内容“Chips跟在她后面，Maria敲了敲Angelia的门”可知，第二段可描写Maria带着狗
狗和邻居Angelia见面，并建立了深厚的友谊。
2.续写线索：读纸条——感动——和邻居见面——愉快——两人建立深厚的联系
3.词汇激活
行为类
①表达：express/voice
②提供：offer/provide
③盯着……看：stare at/look at…for a long time
情绪类①感动：moved/touched
②高兴：happily/pleasantly/delightedly
【点睛】[高分句型1] The note, which was actually written by her neighbor Angelia in Corote’s voice, said
she’d noticed Chips crying a lot.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] She wanted to give Chips some toys to play with so that he wouldn’t feel alone when Maria was
away.（由so that引导目的状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）
