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►专题 19 读后续写高分技巧（上）
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考点难点精
【题型解读】
读后续写是要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上，充分调动想象创新思维，大胆预测文章缺失
部分的内容走势，进行充满个性色彩的设计，并用英语进行续写表达。多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹
叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
1.创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造；
2.逻辑性：即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；
3.丰富性：即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更
加立体饱满。
【写作特点】
①重在描述
读后续写的重点在于情节描述。描述过程中应加入更多的具体动作和情感描写。同学们往往比较
擅长写"结论性"语言，而没有"画面感"、不会给读者留下深刻的印象。所以，同"们在进行读后续写时，
一定要注重描述，讲究生动和画面感。
②关注语言
在高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构在一定程度上会影响阅卷老师对考生写作水平的判断。
考生尤其应该避免句型单一化、如通篇使用定语从句，因为这样会让阅卷老师觉得考生对各种句型掌
握得不够充分。考生在进行读后续写时应该有意识地多使用不同的句型结构和语法点，比如非谓语、
形容词作状语、虚拟语气等。
③注意衔接
由于阅卷老师的阅卷时间十分有限，所以考生一定要在作文中使用清晰的逻辑衔接词，这样可以
帮助老师快速抓住文章结构，促使老师更好地理解文章主旨，同时也可以显示出考生写作时严谨的逻
辑。在读后续写当中，时间线索串联最为重要，例如upon one's arrival、then、however、besides、while
等衔接词，能够为文章提供明确的时间线索，很好地承接上下文，同学们在日常学习中应该多多积累。④正向结局
从情节上来看，历年真题多以户外经历为主。考生需要注意设计的结局应是正向的化险为夷。例
如，2018年6月的高考读后续写真题中讲述了作者和父亲去西部荒原度假时骑马游玩、却在途中迷路
的故事，结局应是作者和父亲平安找到了路。同学们在写作时一定要抓住文中线索，把握好故事发展
方向。
对于读后续写这样的写作题型，同学们平时一定要多积累好词好句，进行大量的句子翻译练习，
并且找到合适的写作步骤，这样才能在考场上有限的时间内完成一篇高分作文。
【应试技巧】
技巧一：精读原文，理解文章要表达的主旨和思想
文字是为思想服务的，表达特定的思想需要相对应的有情感特色的文字。如果作者要褒扬特定的
人或事，那么他就会用积极的文字。如果是贬低一个人或一件事，那么他就会用消极的文字。理解文
章的主旨，对我们在续写中使用合适的语言有很大的指导意义。
技巧二：细品原文，分析原文的用词风格
要想对续写的文字有准确的把握，就要对原文的文字有非常准确的理解。要想准确理解原文文字
的特点，就要在文章主旨的指导下，对原文的文字进行仔细的分析。对原文文字特点的分析包括：
（1）对原文人物的动作和心理描写的分析。（2）对原文对话的话语特点的分析。（3）对原文场景的
描写的分析。
技巧三：有机地组织自己的语言，保持和原文风格的一致
通过对原文主旨的理解和对语言的准确分析之后，我们就会对原文的语言特点有比较准确的把握，
然后就可以使用和原文特点一致的文字来进行续写。
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练
好题优选演【典例剖析】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight
by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started
to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going
to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a
high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest
and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,
but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane
was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to
be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)
somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also
saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything
better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to
the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?
Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,
another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to
an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Para.1 ：But no more helicopters came and it was dark.
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Para.2 ：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
_________________________________________【写作构思】
1.浏览所给信息，确定主题大意。
Who: Jane, Tom
What:Jane was lost
When:One weekend in July
Where: In a forest
Why: A quarrel with Tom, her husband
The main idea:Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end. Jane learned how to control
emotions and deal with conflicts.
2.确定主要情节所用关键词和段落开头语
开头：start to quarrel
发展：kept moving...; had to stop for the night...；heard a helicopter
结尾：待定
Para.1 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(Jane是如何熬过那一晚的)
Para 2. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. (Jane是如何获救的）
3.添加细节
扩大Jane在夜晚内心的冲突和Jane当晚与次日与环境之间的冲突。
4.结构完整，收尾呼应。为了做到首尾呼应，使文章结构更加完整，考生可以在第二段的结尾回扣文章开头Jane与丈夫的争吵
和冲突，充分体现本次经历后二人的感受。
【佳作赏析】
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute
darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her familyat
a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled
with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place,
confronted with the danger of dying." She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep
with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing
searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again.
Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract
others' attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter. There,
she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible,
she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again,
determining to live the life to the fullest.
【写作思路】
首先，在逻辑上，要做到了合理合情：起初，主人公身陷森林，内心充满了悔恨，在面对困难时
焦虑、畏惧；之后，主人公努力求生，最终获救，并且领悟到了一定的人生道理。纵观整个故事，情
节发展不仅符合两段给出的开头所限定的情景要求，而且还设置了一定的悬念，增强了故事的可读性。
文章第一句 "an absolute darkness ruled the forest" 中， "rule" 一词就使用了拟人的修辞手法，让
森林阴森黑暗的一面展露无遗，同时描绘出主人公身处绝境的紧迫性。在 "Eager and excited, she
flagged her yellow blouse…" 一句中，直接将情绪形容词放在句首，使用了非谓语动词的语法，表达精
练。
此外， "There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief." 一句中，使
用了几个短句，却包含了两处非谓语动词语法，同时活用了 "wear" 一词，把两个人相见时的场景生动
地描绘了出来。【词汇拓展】
1） 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or ，Not only … but also
2） 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however , although , though …
3） 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at
that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
【举一反三】
2021年6月新高考卷（母亲节的惊喜）
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning
for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in
bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother
in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly
to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water
and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added
in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned
on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff
started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna
threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned
down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next
minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed
calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it
up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot
burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught
the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Paragraph1
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Paragraph 2
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
“Don’t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess
quickly. After that, Jeff stammered out their plan, his face flushing. However, Father laughed,
“Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.” At this, Jenna and Jef almost jumped to their feet, joy
in eyes. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken
porridge were ready. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
Paragraph 2:
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confused until they presented the breakfast and
said “Happy Mother’s Day”. Mother gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! It’s
the biggest surprise I have received.” Her face lit up with happiness. “They have known how to
take care of others.” Father said in response to her excitement, winking at Jenna and Jef. They
couldn’t help giggling. It was a secret only shared between them. （150 words)
2021年6月浙江卷（第一份工资）
My dad , George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand
my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked . And his dad, Albert, took the money
my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I
would surpass（超过） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at
high school graduation.
Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or
throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor
weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a
neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up
and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a
short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again.
This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,
lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work,
but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing
to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do
with as wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I
wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.
Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last.
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard
for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about
how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already wornout. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my
dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something
unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?". asked my mother.
Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”
Paragraph 2:
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad
drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to
buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping
forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.”
A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l
thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.
2021年1月八省联考（好心的墨西哥一家）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I
was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the
road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A
JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a
small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through
her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it.
Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We
rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries:
He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was
back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands.
I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck
and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said.They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then
they would go home.
注意：
续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
Paragraph 2
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
Possible version 1:
Paragraph 1:
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shook my head and said no,
wondering why she asked such a question — was she going to treat me to lunch or something? “Wait
a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back to the truck. After a few minutes she came back with
a paper bag. “Here are some Mexican snacks and you can have some when you are hungry,” the girl
smiled. I was so surprised and touched that words almost failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead of a
“Thank you!” when I took the bag.
Paragraph2:
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. When I saw what was in the bag, I
was overcome with a mixture of respect and gratefulness. In addition to the snacks, there was the $20
bill. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example of what kindness really means.
And I’m sure I will pay it forward. （145）
Possible version 2:
Paragraph 1:
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. Of course not, for I had been
trapped there for quite a few hours. She then had a word with her parents and went back to their truck.
A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “That’s Mommy’s hand-made taco,” explained
the girl. “It’s so yummy that you must love it.” I was starving to death after all that exhausting workso I took the Mexico-originated food, grateful and deeply moved. Then we waved goodbye to each
other.
Paragraph 2:
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken taco.
The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It
was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-
hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never
escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world. （163）
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测
名校真题必
1.【辽宁六校2022~2023学年上高三初考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had never been more anxious in my life. I had just spent the last three endless hours trying to get to the
airport so that I could travel home. Now, as I watched the bus driver set my luggage on the airport sidewalk, I
realized that my anxiety had only just begun.
This was my first visit alone to the international terminal (航站楼) of the airport, and nothing was familiar.
I couldn’t make sense of any of the signs. Where was the check-in counter? Where should I take my luggage? I
had no idea where to go, feeling as if I were deaf and blind and stupid. I began to panic. What time was it?
Where was my plane? I had to find help because I couldn’t be late.
I tried to ask a passing businessman for help, but my words all came out wrong. He just frowned (皱眉)
and walked away. What had happened? I had been in this country for a whole semester, and I couldn’t even
remember how to ask for directions. This was awful! Another bus arrived at the terminal, and the passengers
came out carrying all sorts of luggage. Here was my chance! I could follow them to the right place, and I would
not have to say a word.
I carried my heavy suitcase behind me and followed the group. We finally reached the elevators. Oh, no!
They all fit in it, but there was not enough room for me. I watched in despair as the elevator doors closed. I was
abandoned again! I had no idea what to do next. I got on the elevator when it returned and stared at all the
buttons. Which one could it be? I pressed button 3, because I thought I saw those passengers pressed 3, though
it was no more than a quick glance. The elevator slowly climbed up to the third floor and came to a stop. Therewere no check-in counters! I looked around shyly, only to find an elderly man standing at the corner. He was an
airport employee.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane.
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When I turned to thank him for all his help, he was gone.
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【答案】参考范文：
Paragraph 1:
Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane. Just then the
elderly airport employee walked towards me from the corner. He saw that I was lost and asked if he could help
in any way. He gave me his handkerchief to dry my tears. He smiled kindly. He patted my shoulder to ease my
anxiety before leading me down a long hallway. We walked up some stairs, turned a corner, and at last, there
was the check-in counter! He led me past all the lines of people and pushed my luggage to the inspection
counter.
Paragraph 2:
When I turned to thank him for all his help, he was gone. I never got an opportunity to know that kind
man’s name, but I would always remember his unexpected kindness. He helped me when I needed it most.
Without his timely help, I would have certainly missed my plane. I can only hope that one day I will be able to
do the same for another traveler who is suffering a terrible journey.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者要赶飞机，一生中从未如此焦虑过，这是作者第一次独自来到机场的国际航站楼，一切都不熟悉，为了能够找到办理登机手续的柜台，作者跟着一群人上了
三楼，停了下来，没有登记柜台！作者害羞地环顾四周，却发现一个老人站在角落里，他是机场的工
作人员。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我看到空空如也的大厅，意识到我将赶不上飞机时，我眼中涌出了泪水。”
可知，第一段可描写那位老人如何帮助作者。
②由第二段首句内容“当我转身感谢他的帮助时，他已经走了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在那位老
人走后的心理活动。
2.续写线索：接近作者——安慰作者——带到柜台——感激——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①问：ask/inquire
②缓解：ease/relieve
③带领：lead/guide
情绪类
①友善地：kindly/genially
②忧虑：anxiety/worry
【点睛】[高分句型1]He saw that I was lost and asked if he could help in any way.(由that引导的宾语从句
和if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I can only hope that one day I will be able to do the same for another traveler who is suffering a
terrible journey.(由that引导的宾语从句和关系代词who引导的定语从句)
2.【湖南省岳阳县第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月考】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语编写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment,
struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat
was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name
carved.
On impulse(冲动) I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and
thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, I found it
immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered."Yes, “she said in surprise, with extreme excitement." It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year
ago.”
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house.
She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her
parents, now dead, Her happiness at retrieving(找回)this special possession was such that to have accepted her
reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was
worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I
would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no
answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of
the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn’t control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my
little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding
desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.
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Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
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Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
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【答案】Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I
heard man talking heartily to her and went to the door, He was a delivery man, and his arms were full of
parcels. “This is a mistake, " I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had
gone, I didn't know what to do. Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other. What a surprise! I
looked for the name of the sender.
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. I picked up the note, which read "Thanks for
returning of the umbrella. Merry Christmas! ""It was sent by the lady. Holding the note tightly, I was on the
verge of tears, with a stream of warmth spreading through my body. On that cold Christmas, I forgot I had nomoney for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just sat in our small apartment unwrapping the
gifts one by one in happiness. A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个30多岁的单身母亲，在去面试路上的电车里捡到一把伞，
并根据伞上信息，找到伞的而主人，将伞物归原主并且拒绝了酬谢。接下来，这位母亲在穷困潦倒的
生活中迎来了圣诞节，却苦于没有钱付房租以及买食物、送礼物给女儿的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，门铃响了，佩吉急忙去开门，说一定是圣诞老人。”可知，第一段可先
描写门打开后，这位母亲看到的确有送包裹之人后的疑惑以及她和女儿确定包裹是给她们时的惊喜。
②由第二段首句内容“突然，贴在一个包裹上的一张纸条吸引了我的目光”可知，第二段可描写这位
母亲发现这个包裹的寄送人是其之前所归还伞的主人，以及这个人的此番举动为这对母女在寒冷的圣
诞节带来的温暖和希望。
2.续写线索：收到包裹——感到困惑和惊喜——发现纸条——感到温暖和希望
3.词汇激活
动作类
①收到礼物：heard man talking heartily to her/went to the door
②读便条：pick up the note/read
情绪类
①.热情：heartily/ kindly
②.幸福：satisfaction/ contentment/ happiness/ fulfilment/ happiness
【点睛】
[高分句型]. Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa
Claus.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句作非谓语动词calling的宾语）
[高分句型2]. A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
（由关系代词which引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]. Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other.
（非谓语之现在分词 熟的练运用）
3【河北省唐山市2022-2023学年上学期高三年级摸底演练考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Now that Emily was 12, she could walk to school without her parents. And even better, she could go with
her best friend, Heidi, who lived on the same street as her.The only problem was that Emily had to walk the long way round, which took them a good 15 minutes
longer. She just could not take the shortcut through the park.
But Heidi never complained. They had been hanging out at each other’s houses for as long as they could
remember. The best times were when they had sleepovers and could sit up late talking about anything and
everything and everyone.
So if anyone understood why Emily could not walk through the park, it was Heidi.
Emily was a sweet girl except that she was frightened at dogs! So she had to avoid certain places where
they might be. She was always conscious of where she went and got quite good at finding ways to avoid
encountering any of them. She planned ahead good and proper before she headed outdoors or to a friend’s
home. She could even spot one a mile away!
But the strange thing was, she didn’t dislike dogs. In fact she was quite fond of the idea of them. She was
feeling that her fear was preventing her from living life to the full. She was starting to become tired of
constantly avoiding her big fear. She wanted so badly to be able to pet a dog like “normal” people did. She tried
to overcome her fear, but it usually ended in tears and a feeling of disappointment.
As her best friend, Heidi couldn’t stand by. She believed that power of friendship could help Emily
overcome the fear.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day Heidi got a dog.
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After several restless nights, Emily went to Heidi’s house and rang the bell.
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【答案】One possible version:
One day Heidi got a dog. When Heidi broke the news, Emily knew she would never be able to come to
Heidi’s house again! And the next day she walked to school on her own. That evening, she went back home
alone, thinking if she would avoid Heidi forever. And then she thought about how they had played together
since they were just three years old. Heidi had been very supportive to her and she realised she couldn’t lose
her best friend.
After several restless nights, Emily went to Heidi’s house and rang the bell. The first thing she heard was a
little dog’s cry. She shuddered. Even though she could tell from the sound that it was only a tiny little thing that
made it, it didn’t help. She felt a familiar foreboding. Soon she was facing her fear! Heidi’s dad opened the
door. Heidi’s dog was about ten inches long. Now he tried to come near enough to greet her. She cautiously pet
the little wriggling bag of fluff for at least ten seconds. It wasn’t long. But it was a start.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了主人公Emily非常怕狗，竭尽所能避开与狗的接触，好友Heidi为
了帮助她克服怕狗的恐惧，收养了一只小狗，希望通过友谊的力量帮助 Emily，最终Emily迈出了克服
怕狗的恐惧的第一步。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天Heidi得到了一只狗。”可知，第一段可描写Heidi家有了狗，Emily不敢
再去Heidi家，她只能独自上下学，以及Emily的心理变化。
②由第二段首句内容“过了几个不安的夜晚，Emily来到Heidi家，按响了门铃。”可知，第二段可描
写Emily鼓起勇气来到Heidi家的行为变化以及最终克服恐惧抚摸了小狗，迈出了第一步。
2.续写线索：独自上下学——心理变化——不愿意失去朋友——去Heidi家——见到小狗——迈出了第
一步
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回家：go back home/return home
②.支持：be supportive/be in support of
情绪类
①.烦恼的：restless/uneasy/annoyed
②. 颤抖：shudder/tremble
【点睛】【高分句型1】And then she thought about how they had played together since they were just threeyears old.（运用了how引导宾语从句，since引导状语从句）
【高分句型 2】Even though she could tell from the sound that it was only a tiny little thing that made it, it
didn’t help.（运用even though引导的状语从句，that引导宾语从句和that引导的定语从句）
4.【广东省2023届高三九月联考】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
l knew this dreaded day would come sooner or later. It came too fast and there I was, in the waiting room
of the dental clinic, miserable with butterflies in my stomach.
My parents told me to sit up，stop wringing(拧) my hands，and take deep breaths to keep calm. It
worked. l was calm for maybe two seconds when I heard my name being called. l pretended to be deaf but my
mother touched me to get up. l forced myself to step forward and immediately stumbled(绊) over a toy and the
boy who was playing with it. My clumsiness got me the attention of everyone in the room. Being stared at by
so many pairs of eyes was too much and I hurried to the consultation room as fast as I could，leaving the boy
crying for his broken toy.
l had refused my parents’ offer to accompany me. I meant to show them that I was brave enough to face
the treatment on my own. I regretted it right now. Thankfully, I forgot my anxiety as I looked around the
dentist's room. Tools of different sizes were arranged neatly in a plate on the tiny table which was connected to
a chair with buttons and a light hanging right over it. I avoided looking at my dentist in the eye as I took my
seat on the chair shakily.
l tried to calm myself down, imaging how brave I would be. After a while, I was taken by great surprise
when all of a sudden the chair moved and I was lying down facing the bright yellow light. When I caught sight
of the dental drill on the plate，panic related to a bad childhood experience involving the drill kicked into me.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I cried out and almost jumped out of the seat.
My parents were waiting at the door anxiously when I ran out excitedly.读后续写范文
I cried out and almost jumped out of the seat. Watching my frightened look, the dentist asked me what
was the matter in a soothing voice behind her mask. I felt embarrassed and ashamed for my rude behavior and
explained the bad experience in the past to the dentist. After hearing my story, the dentist smiled and
encouraged me to forget the past and face the challenge bravely. I felt eased with the dentist's comfort and care.
Everything was going smoothly and I was grateful to the dentist.
My parents were waiting at the door anxiously when ran out excitedly. I knew they would find it hard to
believe what just happened. I was about to describe the process of treatment when I saw the boy whose toy I
just broke. I went up to the boy and his parents and apologized for my misbehavior. All the people sang high
praise for my honesty. After that, I followed my parents to the exit to tell them the most proud experience I ever
had.
5【湖北省“宜荆荆恩”2023届高三起点考试】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Catherine was the coolest kid in her class. Whenever she went, she was in the spotlight, with a bunch of
kids following her and doing everything she did.
Her deskmate, Landy, however, was not in the cool kids’ group. Being the tallest kid in her class, she was
teased by her classmates, who were always chanting “Landy, Landy, long as spaghetti (意大利面)”. Every time
Landy heard those silly chants, she could feel her face burst into flames. God knew how she wished the ground
to crack and swallow her!
Catherine didn’t really like it when the kids chanted “Landy, Landy, long as spaghetti”. But she never told
them to stop either, and nor did she ever talk to her. She liked being popular.
One weekend, Catherine went over to her grandfather for Thanksgiving. Her grandfather lives on a farm at
the opposite end of town, where he keeps chickens. While helping to feed the chickens, Catherine noticed a
peculiar one. Curling in the corner, it looked smaller than the others and was almost half-bare!
“What’s the matter with it?” She asked her grandfather, with a puzzled frown on her face. Her grandfathertold her how chickens could act. “They have a pecking (啄) order,” he explained, wrinkles of concern spreading
around his forehead. “If one chicken is different, the others will push it away and keep pecking it. Sometimes
they peck it so much that it dies.”
“Oh, what a poor little thing!” Catherine let out a sigh as she scooped the frightened chicken up in her
arms, whose heart was beating fast in the bony little body. Suddenly, she thought of Landy, the girl being
“pecked” by her classmates. “I’m going to take it home and take good care of it,” she said with a determined
look.
Back in school, Catherine told the cool kids about the chicken. “It’s looking healthy,” she said proudly.
“It’s fatter and its feathers are growing. Even the cat likes it. She carries it around the garden, and...” Everyone
was entertained by Catherine’s story of her lovely chicken, laughter lingering around the classroom.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then Catherine spotted Landy sitting by herself in a corner.
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【答案】Possible version：
Then Catherine spotted Landy sitting by herself in a corner. She kept her head down with her eyes fixed
on the floor as usual. It hit Catherine that the pecking order worked in school, too. Landy was just like the poor
little chicken, being teased and ignored by her classmates, merely due to her special height. “It’s time for me to
make an apology to Landy.” Catherine thought to herself. No sooner had she made up her mind than she
announced it to the cool kids surrounding her. Astonished at what she said, all the kids burst out screaming,“Talking to the long spaghetti? Are you crazy?”
But Catherine walked directly toward Landy, regardless of what they said. “Hi, Landy. I’m sorry about the
spaghetti thing.” Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening. “I know it hurts you. Can you forgive
us?” She figured Landy might just walk away. But she lifted her misty eyes and nodded yes. Catherine wiped
away her tears, giving her a warm hug. Moved by the scene, the other kids also came to offer their sincere
apologies to Landy. From that day on, no one made up silly chants about Landy, and Catherine also gained an
important life lesson that everyone should be treated equally no matter how special he or she was.
【解析】
【导语】本文以班里同学关系为线索展开，讲述了班里最酷的孩子 Catherine受到同学众星捧月般的欢
迎，而她的同桌Landy却受到冷落，因为她个头最高，同学们给她起了侮辱性的外号“意大利面条”。
Catherine在农场发现一只被其它的鸡欺负的可怜的小鸡，深感同情，从而联想到Landy，意识到大家
不应该欺负她，Catherine回到学校后，号召大家团结Landy的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后Catherine发现Landy独自坐在角落里。”可知，第一段可描写Catherine发
现Landy被冷落的样子而产生的联想，Catherine准备道歉，引起其他同学的惊讶。
②由第二段首句内容“可是Catherine不顾他们说什么，径直朝Landy走去。”可知，第二段可描写
Catherine主动找Landy道歉，Landy和其他同学深受感动。
2.续写线索：意识到——思想——惊讶——道歉——拥抱——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.意识到：be aware of/realize/it hit sb that
②.道歉：murmur an apology/say sorry to/make an apology
情绪类
①.惊讶的：astonished/surprised
②.感动的：moved/touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Landy was just like the poor little chicken, being teased and ignored by her classmates, merely
due to her special height. (非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
[高分句型 2]. From that day on, no one made up silly chants about Landy, and Catherine also gained an
important life lesson that everyone should be treated equally no matter how special he or she was. (由that引导
的同位语从句以及no matter how引导的让步状语从句)
