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专题 38 读后续写 09 脱险类（火灾、洪水、迷路篇）（原卷版）
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专题38 读后续写09 脱险类（火灾、洪水、迷路篇）（原卷版）.......................1
Part 1命题解读...............................................................1
Part 2思维导图...............................................................2
Part 3 第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）.................................2
Part 4 第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）............................3
Part 5 第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）.........................................5
Part 6 模拟演练..............................................................5
1． （2022·全国·信宜市信宜中学模拟预测）................................5
2． （2022·广东广东·一模）..............................................6
3． （2022·广东·深圳外国语学校模拟预测）................................8
4． （2022·湖南·模拟预测）..............................................9
5． （2022·重庆市天星桥中学一模）......................................10
6． （2022·辽宁·东北育才学校模拟预测）.................................11
7． 读后续写模拟专练01................................................12
8． 读后续写模拟专练02................................................15
9． 读后续写模拟专练03................................................18
Part 7 精讲精练.............................................................21
01----野外遇蛇..........................................................21
02 ---洞穴探险..........................................................23Part 1命题解读
读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情
节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；
父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。
Part 2思维导图
Part 3 第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）1、恶劣环境
（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。In late
summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong,
unpleasant smell rose from it.
（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack.
（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning smell filled the air.
2、负面情绪：害怕
(1) Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless(无力的) as if we were
broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.
(2) Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my
mind，
which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地
发抖)
(4) Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body (在身体涌动)
Part 4 第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）
1、.挣扎努力
(1) Tom looked thoughtful(若有所思)
(2) “We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)
(3) ...,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地).
2. 救人有关的惊险场面描写
(1) The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From
my shoulders down I hung in icy water.
(2) I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass(像玻璃一样破裂).
（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
(3)As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down(把我拖下水). I was tired of the struggle and rested
with my arms stretched out on the ice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）3.实施救援的过程
(1) “帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联
盟）
“Help me get Simmons out of the car!” Norwood yelled loudly to her friends, who were left in a panic. 诺伍德和
朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。
(2) 尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东新高考质量测评
联盟）
Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons.
诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
4、如释重负
(1) Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge of triumph .(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)
(2) Hearing the news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
(3) It thrilled us to hear the good news (听到新消息很高兴).
(4) On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each
other.Part 5 第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）
1、感激
(1) “If I had not been given first aid, I would have dead.” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully. Simmons showed
her gratitude to Norwood, saying “It was you who came to my aid and saved my life.” 如果我没有得到急救，我
就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一
命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
(2) “Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.” Simmons
whispered to Norwood. “谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。” 西蒙斯对诺伍德说。
（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
2、升华句
(1) 花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。
Take some time to learn the knowledge of first aid. It saves lives, and it works.
(2) 这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。
The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
(3) 每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
Everyone should learn something about first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.
(4) 了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowing basic first-aid techniques will help
you respond quickly to emergencies.
Part 6 模拟演练
1．（2022·全国·信宜市信宜中学模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据为内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Aladdin and his mother lived a poor life in Arabia. One day, he got an old lamp under a tree. WHOOSH!
When he rubbed it, noise, fire and red smoke came from the lamp, and out of the smoke came a very big jinnee
（神仙）. “ I’ am slave of the lamp. What is your wish,master?” Cried the jinnee.
With this magic lamp, Aladdin and his mother became rich and he even married the princess. He owned all the
happiness. Meanwhile, he was respected by people around for his kindness to the poor. However, he was envied by
Abanazar a magician from Morocco who wanted Aladdin’s magic lamp very much but he didn’t know where thelamp was hidden. So he got out his seven black stones which were magic too, and put them in water. Then he was
informed that the lamp was in a palace in Arabia.
Abanazar flew to the palace and plotted his dirty plans. For the next week Abanazar watched Aladdin’s palace
until Aladdin and his friends left the palace to go hunting in the hills one day.
Abanazar passed off himself as an old man, selling lamps in the street. “But not for money.” a slave-girl
reported to the princess, “the old man said, ‘New lamps for old. Give me an old lamp and you can have a new one’.
So every body’s getting a new lamp.”
“Yes, my husband’s old lamp! Go and give it to the old man”, the princess knew nothing about the lamp and
its magic, “ Aladdin will be happy to have a nice new lamp!”
The old man(it was Abanazar ,of course) fled into the hills with the magic lamp in such a hurry that his magic
stones were left on the floor in front of the palace.
Para 1. Abanazar just couldn’t wait to rub the lamp.
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Para 2. It was many,many miles from Arabia to Morocco,but Aladdin was there in a second.
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2．（2022·广东广东·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Probably, most of you had the feeling before, at least once—you had been waiting for a long time, yet being
afraid of getting. It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college. I had been working hard to pass the
necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved. And when the
time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study,I couldn't sleep all night because of beinganxious about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter. However,the
positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning. Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college half an hour earlier
for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway. About 15 minutes after I came, the hallway
started to be full of students. Professors who walked on their business probably didn't pay attention to me. I knew
which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open. However,I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there
alone. People were moving around me as if they hadn't seen me. I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody
to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me. He introduced himself as
Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation,I realized it
was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before, but then I
was too nervous for a friendly chat. As a result, instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first
acquaintance （相识）, I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of
finding my class without anybody's assistance.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily,the man didn't seem to be angry.
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Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.
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3．（2022·广东·深圳外国语学校模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Even before I reached the tent, I knew there would be trouble. My little brother Andy was following me, with
a sleeping bag, a flashlight, and his stuffed bear. My friends Wade and Bred think Andy would ruin everything. He
would get scared in the middle of the night and have to be taken back to the house. They complained so much you'd
think they were hospital patients instead of kids I'd invited for an outdoor sleepover.
Andy promised that he wouldn't ruin anything. He wormed his way into the tent and settled in the far corner.
Night was settling in, too, with the woods around us fading toward black. The house, with its porch light, seemed a
long way from us.
“Time for ghost stories!” Brad announced as soon as I'd closed the tent. He told a story about vampires （吸
血鬼）, but it only made us fall over laughing. When it was Wade's turn, he told a story of three guys who were
camping in a tent. He described our situation exactly-except for Andy. When he was describing a terrifying
creature, somewhere outside, a branch snapped （发出咔嚓声）。The hairs on my arms shot straight up. “These
guys were crawling into their sleeping bags, right?” Wade continued. “When out of the darkness rang this terrible
cry.” And out of the woods behind us there was a cry! High-pitched, frightening, and strange. The hairs on my head
shot straight up!
“What was that?” Bred asked as the cry came again. We all looked at each other in horror, speechless. Wade
suggested someone should go out to check, but no one dared. “What if it's something trapped or hurt?” Andy said
anxiously. We focused our flashlights on Andy, whom we'd forgotten, sitting in the corner with his arms around his
bear. Andy would adopt every lost or hurt animal in the world if Mom would let him.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
“I'm going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darkness.
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Andy said it was a baby monkey caught between branches, and it was crying for its mama.
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4．（2022·湖南·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其情节和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the
forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they
reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp” and
walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she
turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped
mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she
walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the
night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and
tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a
distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank
and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better.
Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to' the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately,the
trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.
Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3)请在答题卡的相应位置作答；
4)字体端正，格式规范，卷面整洁。Paragraph l:
But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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5．（2022·重庆市天星桥中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
The five children in Larrane Leech’s day care group were outdoors early, painting landscapes under the dizzy
sun. By 10 a. m., it was time to find shade, so Larrane decided they would walk down to the river.
“We’re going to pick berries now, ” she announced. A nature lover, Larrane insisted they spend as much time
as possible outdoors.
Larrane handed each child an empty jar and called for Pal, her one-year-old German shepherd (德国牧羊犬).
The group made its way over the dusty road and then onto a dirt path through the trees. They stopped at the first
berry bush and got busy picking berries, cheering and talking excitedly.
A young cougar (美洲狮)cocked an ear toward the birdlike chatter and sniffed the air. Stepping over the thick
carpet of pine needles, the cougar moved quietly toward the children.
Larrane sensed the children suddenly go quiet. She looked up to see the back end of a cougar, the size of Pal,
standing over one child, Mikey. The sight of the cougar near her kids immediately froze Larrane. Larrane couldn’t
tell whether Mikey had been bitten. Her mind racing wildly, she darted toward the cougar. Desperately intending to
grab its tail, she shifted aim at the last minute and seized the cougar by the neck. She shook it from side to side.Instantly, the cougar wheeled toward Larrane. Growling and hissing, it stretched up high and brought its paws
down upon the head of the woman. Although still in its youth, it had all the teeth and muscle a cougar needs to pull
down a victim three times its size. This animal was capable of killing her.
注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane.
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Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground.
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6．（2022·辽宁·东北育才学校模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An Act of Neighborliness
The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard, cutting my face like a sharp knife. Rain fell in big
drops and thunder and lightning flashed across the skies. I shook with cold and fear as I walked home, through the
streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by, completely wet in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren holding their heavy schoolbags tightly and rushing home, I also
saw that some road repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, the workers had left in a hurry because
of the storm. There were few signs and it was hard to see what was on the road. There were pieces of wood and
metal and it looked like a hole had been dug and hurriedly covered with boards.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard some sounds. It sounded like children crying. I quickly turned
back and went back to the place from where the sounds came. I was frightened! To my sadness, I found that a small
child had fallen into the hole on the road. The boards had moved away with the force of the rushing water. I couldhardly see the child as it was dark all around me. I told he that I was going to look for help. I knew the neighbors
well, and they all shared a sense of neighborliness, willing to give a hand.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help.
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work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened.
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7．读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane andher husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight bya lake in the
forest. Unfortunately ,on the way an unpleasantsubject came up and they started to quarrel .By the time they
reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“I’m going to find a better spot for usto camp”
and walked away.With no path to follow ,Jane just walked onfor quite a long time .After she had climbed to a high
place ,sheturned around ,hoping to see the lake .To her surprise ,she saw nothing butforest and ,far beyond ,a
snowcapped mountain top .She suddenly realizedthat she was lost.“Tom! ” she cried. “Help! ”No reply .If only she
had not left hermobile phone in that bag with Tom .Jane kept moving ,but the farther she walked,the more confused
she became .As night was beginning to fall ,Jane was sotired that she had to stop for the night .Lying awake in the
dark ,Jane wantedvery much to be with Tom and her family .She wanted to hold him and tell him howmuch she
loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry andthirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a
distance. Quicklyshe followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, shealso saw some berry bushes. She drank
and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk
alongthe stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along thestream, Jane hearda helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, thetrees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few
minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.
Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back
again.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
But no more helicopters came and it wasgetting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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翻译小练习：
1. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。
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2. 简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。
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3. 所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会
被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”
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5. 尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
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6. 令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。
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7. 她又急又兴奋，把自己的黄色上衣挂在旗子上，不遗余力地大叫，以吸引别人的注意。
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8. 幸运的是，她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。
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9. 在那里，她看到了她的丈夫，一个男人盯着她，脸上带着宽慰的表情。
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10．她尽可能紧紧地抱住他，激动得说不出话来。
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11. 此外，他们同意不再吵架，决定过上最充实的生活。
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8．读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Rebecca stretched her tired back. “That’s the last seedling(种树苗)，Pa. Have we planted enough?”Pa walked to
the end of the row of cottonwood seedlings. “No,” he said. “We have to plant trees all the way to that rock over
there. We’ll need about twenty more seedlings.”“I’ll get the seedlings.” offered Rebecca. She longed to cool her feet in the shallow river running through the
cotton field. “You’d better let me go, Miss Petticoats,” teased her twin brother, William. “There are dangers all
over this prairie(牧场/草原）“You may both go,” said Pa. “But hurry back. I’d like to finish before sundown.”
They went across the shallow river to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings grew.Gently, they pulled the
seedlings from the sand.“There! That’s twenty, with a few to spare.” said Rebecca.“OK，” said William. He led
the way to the riverbank, then stopped.
“Look! There’s the dugout(防空壕）we lived in when we moved here last year.” He pointed to a hole in the
grassy river bank.“Come on, let’s go inside.”“No，” Rebecca said, “Pa is waiting. Besides, it’s hard telling
what’s in there.”“Then you start back.” said William, handing the seedlings to Rebecca. I’ll catch up.” He ran to the
dugout and stepped inside.
Rebecca tied the seedlings into her long apron(围裙）and began to walk. Suddenly she froze in her tracks.A
huge prairie rattlesnake(响尾蛇）moved along the river bank.It stopped right in front of the dugout and lay still,
coiled up on the warm sunny bank.“William!” Rebecca shouted. “Don’t come out!”
“Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny window beside the door of the dugout. Rebecca pointed toward the
rattler. William's face paled when he saw the snake blocking the doorway. He turned desperate eyes toward
Rebecca, then he glanced behind himself. Rebecca knew what he was thinking: “Were there more snakes waiting in
the shadowy corners of the dugout?”
Rebecca’s mind raced, trying to think of a way to get William out of there. An idea poppedinto her head. It was
their only hope. It was risky, but it was the only hope.“Don’t move,” she said to William in a soft voice. “When r
say NOW, you run out of there as fast as you can.”Rebecca removed the skirt-like petticoat(衬裙）from beneath
her dress, then dipped it into the river. She squeezed out some of the water, then climbed to the top of the bank,
directly above the dugout’s opening.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Paragraph 2: Are you OK?he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded.
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翻译小练习：
1. 丽贝卡尽可能地打开滴水的衬裙（被水打湿了）。
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2. 她靠在岸边时双手颤抖。
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3. 她一个快速的动作，把厚重的衣服扔到响尾蛇身上。
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4. “现在！”当蛇开始在衬裙下移动时，她对威廉喊道。
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5. 威廉跳过那条被盖住的蛇，跑得很快，然后停下来转过身来。丽贝卡就在他后面。
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6. 她很高兴他们设法逃走了。他们花了五分钟才喘口气，使自己平静下来。
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7. 丽贝卡检查了一下，以确保幼苗还是完整的。
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9. 丽贝卡笑着说。“你不可能，因为你不穿衬裙！”他们笑着跑回了树林。
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9．读后续写模拟专练03
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A young man went to visit the oldest and wisest man in the village for some advice on how he could
become rich.
“Treasure is yours to be had at the top of Yonder Mountain,” advised the wise old man as he pointed
to a tall mountain in the distance. “You must travel on foot to the top of the mountain. There you will
find riches beyond your belief. Once you leave the top of the mountain, whatever remains will be lost
forever.”
The young man could hardly wait until the morning when he was to meet with the wise old man for
final instructions. When he arrived at thewise old man's home, he saw a long, thick log lying on the
ground in front of the house.
“You must carry this log on your journey to the top of the mountain, and it is a necessary part of
your journey. Youmust take it with you to the top of the mountain to claim your treasure,”explained the
wise old man.
The young man was not pleased with this sudden surprise, but he respected the wise old man and as
he lifted the long, heavy log onto his shoulders and struggled down the road towards themountain, he
realized that the trip would not be as easy as he thought.
After he was walking for a while, a woodsman cameup to him and said, “It looks like that log is
pretty heavy. Would you like meto cut some of it off to make it lighter?”
The young man was exhausted, so he said, “Isuppose that a little bit cut off the end wouldn't hurt.”
And the woods man cut two inches off the end.A while later the young man met a farmer on hisway back from the fields. And the farmer helped him
cut two inches off the end.
At the bottom of the mountain, the young man metup with a trapper who helped him cut four more
inches off the log.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The young man continued tostruggle to climb the mountain.
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The excited young man laythe log across the gap and discoveredthat it.
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翻译小练习：
1. 原木仍然很重，但他觉得轻松多了。幸运的是，当他几乎筋疲力尽时，他看到了山顶。
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2. 围绕着山顶，宝藏闪闪发光。
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4. 但走近一点，他发现路的尽头有一个巨大的缺口，越过缺口似乎是找到宝藏的唯一途径。
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5. “我怎么能到那里？”他看了看日志，想起了那位睿智的老人所说的话。
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6. 兴奋的年轻人把原木放在缺口上，发现它太短了，走不过去。
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7. 他看到了无法够到的宝藏，多么后悔让原木被砍掉！
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8. 经过多次徒劳的尝试，他不得不离开顶端。
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9. 他真后悔！他明白了这位聪明的老人想教给他什么，那就是，当我们努力取得成功时，决不应耍花
招欺骗自己。
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Part 7 精讲精练
01----野外遇蛇
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rebecca stretched her tired back. “That’s the last seedling(种树苗)，Pa. Have we planted enough?” Pa
walked to the end of the row of cottonwood seedlings. “No,” he said. “We have to plant trees all the way to that
rock over there. We’ll need about twenty more seedlings.”“I’ll get the seedlings.” offered Rebecca. She longed to cool her feet in the shallow river running through the
cotton field. “You’d better let me go, Miss Petticoats,” teased her twin brother, William. “There are dangers all
over this prairie(牧场/草原）“You may both go,” said Pa. “But hurry back. I’d like to finish before sundown.”
They went across the shallow river to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings grew. Gently, they pulled
the seedlings from the sand. “There! That’s twenty, with a few to spare.” said Rebecca. “OK，” said William.
He led the way to the riverbank, then stopped.
“Look! There’s the dugout(防空壕）we lived in when we moved here last year.” He pointed to a hole in the
grassy river bank. “Come on, let’s go inside.” “No，” Rebecca said, “Pa is waiting. Besides, it’s hard telling
what’s in there.” “Then you start back.” said William, handing the seedlings to Rebecca. I’ll catch up.” He ran to
the dugout and stepped inside.
Rebecca tied the seedlings into her long apron(围裙）and began to walk. Suddenly she froze in her tracks. A
huge prairie rattlesnake(响尾蛇）moved along the river bank. It stopped right in front of the dugout and lay still,
coiled up on the warm sunny bank. “William!” Rebecca shouted. “Don’t come out!”
“Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny window beside the door of the dugout. Rebecca pointed toward the
rattler. William's face paled when he saw the snake blocking the doorway. He turned desperate eyes toward
Rebecca, then he glanced behind himself. Rebecca knew what he was thinking: “Were there more snakes waiting in
the shadowy corners of the dugout?”
Rebecca’s mind raced, trying to think of a way to get William out of there. An idea popped into her head. It
was their only hope. It was risky, but it was the only hope. “Don’t move,” she said to William in a soft voice.
“When r say NOW, you run out of there as fast as you can.” Rebecca removed the skirt-like petticoat(衬裙）from
beneath her dress, then dipped it into the river. She squeezed out some of the water, then climbed to the top of the
bank, directly above the dugout’s opening.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1:“Get ready to run, William,” she said, keeping an eye on the motionless snake.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(她渴望在浅水中凉快一下) running through the cotton field.
2. ______________________________(他们穿过那条浅河) to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings
grew.
3. Suddenly ______________________________(她在路上僵住了).
4. “Huh?” ______________________________(威廉姆斯的脸出现在一扇小窗户前) beside the door of
the dugout.
5. ______________________________(威廉脸色苍白) when he saw the snake blocking the doorway.
6. ______________________________(丽贝卡的大脑飞速转动), trying to think of a way to get William out
of there. ______________________________(她突然想到一个主意).
7. ______________________________(迅速地), she dropped the heavy garment on top of the rattlesnake.
8. It took them five minutes to _____________________________(找到呼吸，让自己冷静下来).
02 ---洞穴探险
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks.
The rain came down steady and hard. Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day
of caving with five friends in a remote spot 80 miles northwest of his home in Duncan, on Canada’s
Vancouver Island.
It was 6 a.m. on December 5, 2015. As a newcomer to the sport, Jason had gone caving only four
times. This would be his toughest outing yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerous enough that the
entrance was blocked by a locked metal door to keep the casual cavers out. About a mile long and 338
feet deep, Cascade was full of tums and barely passable tight squeezes.
Jason was new among the group, with the least experience and, at 43, older by a decade or more. It
was his friend Andrew Munoz, 33, who introduced him to the sport. Unlike Jason, Andrew was an expert
caver-a former caving guide, actually.
They hiked a bit before coming to the door, which sat in the ground—you’d miss it if you weren’t
looking for it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage
studded with sharp rocks. The silence was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above. Soon the drip turned
into a light but steady flow, and they were wading in water up to their ankles, then to their shins.
Two hours later, they approached one of the features that made the cave unique: a narrow passage
not big enough to stand up in that led into a short, tight downhill. This had a name: Bastard’s Crawl. Four
streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly. The sound of the water had turned
into a roar. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left
between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe. They came to
terrifying realization that they were in danger！
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue.
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Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(他们的路被前照灯照亮了) , they walked down a narrow passage
studded with sharp rocks.
2. ______________________________(沉默被打破了) a drip-drip-drip from above.
3. Four streams met here, and indeed, ______________________________(水流得更快了).
4. ______________________________(当他们最终接近Crawl的顶端时), there were barely four inches
of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe.
5. The water kept rising, and ______________________________(没有营救的希望).
6. They dozed off and then ______________________________(猛然醒来).
7. Over the next 90 minutes, ______________________________(他们朝入口走去), at times in chest-
high water.
8. _____________________________(杰森的情绪控制了他) and tears trickled down his cheeks.
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