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考点 43 读后续写 08 脱
险类（火灾、洪水、迷路
篇）（解析版）
【命题解读】
读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一
定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就
考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。
【思维导图】救人之前（恶劣环境 + 负面情绪）
1 、恶劣环境
（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的
味道。In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）.
Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it.
（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack.
（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning smell filled the air.
2 、 负面情绪 ：害怕
(1) Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless(无力的) as if we were broken tiny boats at
the mercy of strong waves.
(2) Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind，
which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)
(4) Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body (在身体涌动)救人之中（努力 + 救人动作 + 如释重负）
1 、 . 挣扎努力
(1) Tom looked thoughtful(若有所思)
(2) “We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)
(3) ...,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地).
2. 救人有关的惊险场面描写
(1) The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on
the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water.
(2) I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass(像
玻璃一样破裂). （浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
(3)As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down(把我拖下水). I was tired of the struggle
and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
3 . 实施救援的过程
(1) “帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高
考质量测评联盟）
“Help me get Simmons out of the car!” Norwood yelled loudly to her friends, who were left in a
panic. 诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地
方。
(2) 尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东
新高考质量测评联盟）
Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to
Simmons.
诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考
质量测评联盟）
4 、如释重负
(1) Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge of triumph .(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)(2) Hearing the news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
(3) It thrilled us to hear the good news (听到新消息很高兴).
(4) On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning
merrily at each other.
救人之后（感激 + 升华）
1 、感激
(1) “If I had not been given first aid, I would have dead.” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully.
Simmons showed her gratitude to Norwood, saying “It was you who came to my aid and saved my l.i”fe
如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感
谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
(2) “Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.”
Simmons whispered to Norwood. “谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。” 西
蒙斯对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
2 、升华句
(1) 花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。
Take some time to learn the knowledge of first aid. It saves lives, and it works.
(2) 这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。
The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
(3) 每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
Everyone should learn something about first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.
(4) 了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowing basic first-aid
techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.【模拟题 1】（2022·全国·信宜市信宜中学模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据为内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Aladdin and his mother lived a poor life in Arabia. One day, he got an old lamp under a tree.
WHOOSH! When he rubbed it, noise, fire and red smoke came from the lamp, and out of the
smoke came a very big jinnee（神仙）. “ I’ am slave of the lamp. What is your wish,master?”
Cried the jinnee.
With this magic lamp, Aladdin and his mother became rich and he even married the princess.
He owned all the happiness. Meanwhile, he was respected by people around for his kindness to the
poor. However, he was envied by Abanazar a magician from Morocco who wanted Aladdin’s
magic lamp very much but he didn’t know where the lamp was hidden. So he got out his seven
black stones which were magic too, and put them in water. Then he was informed that the lamp
was in a palace in Arabia.
Abanazar flew to the palace and plotted his dirty plans. For the next week Abanazar watched
Aladdin’s palace until Aladdin and his friends left the palace to go hunting in the hills one day.
Abanazar passed off himself as an old man, selling lamps in the street. “But not for money.” a
slave-girl reported to the princess, “the old man said, ‘New lamps for old. Give me an old lamp
and you can have a new one’. So every body’s getting a new lamp.”
“Yes, my husband’s old lamp! Go and give it to the old man”, the princess knew nothing
about the lamp and its magic, “ Aladdin will be happy to have a nice new lamp!”
The old man(it was Abanazar ,of course) fled into the hills with the magic lamp in such a
hurry that his magic stones were left on the floor in front of the palace.
Para 1. Abanazar just couldn’t wait to rub the lamp.
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Para 2. It was many,many miles from Arabia to Morocco,but Aladdin was there in a second.
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参考答案：
Abanazar just couldn’t wait to rub the lamp. Just in a flash, the ginnee appeared, “What’s your
wish,my master?”. Envied Aladdin for so long, Abanazar was desperate to take everything from
him, including his wealth, the grand palace, his wife and even his life. “But I shall not kill
people,” the jinnee refused. With some dissatisfaction, Abanazar ordered the jinnee to carry all
back to Morocco. Soon, when Aladdin was back home from hunting, he was too shocked to utter a
word at the sight. His happiness was stolen! Annoyed, his mind was in chaos.His tears were
welling up and dropped down on the floor,coinciddently on the magic seven black stones. The
stones informed Aladdin of the truth and only if he found the magic lamp was he able to get
everything back to Arabia. Aladdin got on the journey to Morocco, avenging.（142）
It was many,many miles from Arabia to Morocco,but Aladdin was there in a second. With the
help of the seven black stones, Aladdin not only found his palace but also the princess soon. “I
apologized for my ignorant, but Abanazar always carries the lamp with himself.”the guilty
princess was crying. Aladdin comforted her and gave her some sleeping- powder from the magic
stones, telling her to do as she was told and slid to hide in another room. Minutes later,
Abanazar was in. The princess pretended to be happy to see him and suggested a drink with him.
Abanazar accepted it with pleasure and fell into sleep, forever. From Abanazar’s pocket,Aladdin
found the magic lamp and rubbed it. Noise, fire and red smoke came out, and happiness came
back to Aladdin again. （125）
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了阿拉丁偶然得到了一盏神灯，有了这盏神灯，阿拉丁和他
的母亲变得富有，他甚至娶了公主，魔术师阿巴那扎尔想得到这盏神灯，冒充一个老人，
欺骗了公主，用一盏新灯骗走了旧灯。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“阿巴那扎尔迫不及待地擦拭着灯。”可知，第一段可描写阿巴那扎
尔唤来了神灵，夺走了阿拉丁的一切，阿拉丁踏上复仇之旅。
②由第二段首句内容“从阿拉伯到摩洛哥有很多很多英里，但阿拉丁马上就到了。”可知，第二段可描写阿拉丁如何复仇。
2.续写线索：夺走——命令——眼泪涌出——安慰——回来
3.词汇激活
行为类
①夺走：take...from sb./deprive...of sb.
②命令：order/command
③眼泪涌出：tears well up/tears gush out
④安慰：comfort/console
⑤回来：come back/return
情绪类
①震惊：shocked/astonished
②内疚：guilty/compunctious
③愉快地：with pleasure/delightedly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The stones informed Aladdin of the truth and only if he found the magic lamp was he
able to get everything back to Arabia. （由only修饰if引导的条件状语从句，位于句首引起
的部分倒装句）
[高分句型2]Aladdin comforted her and gave her some sleeping- powder from the magic stones,
telling her to do as she was told and slid to hide in another room.（由现在分词作状语）
【模拟题 2】（2022·广东广东·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Probably, most of you had the feeling before, at least once—you had been waiting for a long
time, yet being afraid of getting. It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college. I
had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate
programme in management approved. And when the time had come for me to visit the college for
the first day of the study,I couldn't sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look
good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter. However,the positive
attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning. Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college
half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway. About 15minutes after I came, the hallway started to be full of students. Professors who walked on their
business probably didn't pay attention to me. I knew which hall to go to and had already checked
that it was open. However,I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone. People were moving
around me as if they hadn't seen me. I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in
the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me. He
introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with
anything.In that situation,I realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I
wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before, but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat. As a
result, instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance （相识）, I told the
man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class
without anybody's assistance.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily,the man didn't seem to be angry.
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Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.
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参考答案：
Luckily, the man didn't seem to be angry. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room
where my first lecture was about to take place. Quite a lot of people had entered the room, so I
didn't care about having an unhappy experience with one of my future peers. I was embarrassed,
however, when I finally learned that the man to whom I had been rude minutes before was our
professor of the first lecture.
Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well. After theclass was dismissed, I came to him to apologize for my bad manners earlier in the day. Professor
Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college, he was
afraid and nervous, too. The incident helped me realize that I should not let emotional strain and
anxiety prevent me from communicating with people openly and pleasantly.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开。作者在大学第一天时很紧张，当天去听讲座时迷了路。一位好心
的教授想要帮助他却被作者粗鲁地拒绝了。后来，他发现原来想要帮助他的人就是当天讲
座的老师。最后作者向那位教授道了歉并且明白了不应该让情绪紧张和焦虑阻碍自己与人
开诚布公、愉快地交流。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“幸运的是，这个男人似乎并不生气。”可知，第一段可描写作者听
讲座的时候发现了做讲座的教授正是想要帮助他的人，感到很尴尬。
②由第二段首句内容“马修斯教授是一位出色的演讲者，讲座进行得非常顺利。”可知，
第二段可描写作者向教授道歉及自己的感悟。
2.续写线索：进入教室——发现真相——感到尴尬——道歉——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.进入：enter/get into
②.意识到：realize/recognize
③.证明：turn out/prove
情绪类
①.生气：angry/filled with anger
②.尴尬：embarrassed/awkward
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was
about to take place.（由where引导的限制性定语从句 ）
[高分句型2]. Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student
of our college, he was afraid and nervous, too. （由that引导的宾语从句）【模拟题 3】（2022·广东·深圳外国语学校模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Even before I reached the tent, I knew there would be trouble. My little brother Andy was
following me, with a sleeping bag, a flashlight, and his stuffed bear. My friends Wade and Bred
think Andy would ruin everything. He would get scared in the middle of the night and have to be
taken back to the house. They complained so much you'd think they were hospital patients instead
of kids I'd invited for an outdoor sleepover.
Andy promised that he wouldn't ruin anything. He wormed his way into the tent and settled
in the far corner. Night was settling in, too, with the woods around us fading toward black. The
house, with its porch light, seemed a long way from us.
“Time for ghost stories!” Brad announced as soon as I'd closed the tent. He told a story
about vampires （吸血鬼）, but it only made us fall over laughing. When it was Wade's turn, he
told a story of three guys who were camping in a tent. He described our situation exactly-except
for Andy. When he was describing a terrifying creature, somewhere outside, a branch snapped
（发出咔嚓声）。The hairs on my arms shot straight up. “These guys were crawling into their
sleeping bags, right?” Wade continued. “When out of the darkness rang this terrible cry.” And out
of the woods behind us there was a cry! High-pitched, frightening, and strange. The hairs on my
head shot straight up!
“What was that?” Bred asked as the cry came again. We all looked at each other in horror,
speechless. Wade suggested someone should go out to check, but no one dared. “What if it's
something trapped or hurt?” Andy said anxiously. We focused our flashlights on Andy, whom we'd
forgotten, sitting in the corner with his arms around his bear. Andy would adopt every lost or hurt
animal in the world if Mom would let him.
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1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
“I'm going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darkness.
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参考答案：
“I’m going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darkness. Although filled with
fear, I ran after him without hesitation. He was my little brother after all. Andy was headed into
the woods, his flashlight beam wobbling along the trail. Finally I saw him, a few yards ahead, with
his flashlight aimed at the upper branches of a large tree. I raised my own light to shine on the
same spot. A pair of shining eyes seemed to float in the darkness. My heart pounded harder.
Andy said it was a baby monkey caught between branches, and it was crying for its mama. I
knew he was right. I had to admit that Andy was impressive. We helped the little monkey out
carefully. Having ensured that the little monkey was in good condition, we let it go. When we
walked down back, I could see the guys gathered before the tent. “Are you all right?” They asked.
“We’re fine.” I answered with a broad smile, knowing that the guys’ opinion of Andy would
change, too.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带着弟弟安迪一起去户外过夜，朋友不想让安迪和他
们一起，安迪独自一人搭了个帐篷，在作者和朋友说鬼故事时外面发出了响声，安迪很有
勇气的出去帮助了一只夹在树枝的猴子的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容““我去看看。”安迪跑出帐篷，消失在黑暗中。”可知，第一段可
描写安迪出去找出响声的场面。
②由第二段首句内容“安迪说那是一只夹在树枝间的小猴子，它在哭着找妈妈。”可知，
第二段可描写安迪的勇气使作者的朋友的态度改变。
2.续写线索：出去——惊恐——真相大白——救助——回去——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.充满：be filled with/be full of/abound with②.举起：raise/lift/upborn
情绪类
①.小心翼翼：out carefully/with great care/very cautiously
②.积极：positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Although filled with fear, I ran after him without hesitation.这句话运用了although
引导的让步状语从句。
[高分句型2]. Finally I saw him, a few yards ahead, with his flashlight aimed at the upper
branches of a large tree.这句话运用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。
【模拟题 4】（2022·湖南·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其情节和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight
by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started
to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to
find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a
high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest
and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,
but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane
was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to
be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)
somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also
saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything
better.
Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to'
the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,
another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to
an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3)请在答题卡的相应位置作答；
4)字体端正，格式规范，卷面整洁。
Paragraph l:
But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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参考答案：
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for
another cold night. At that moment, she felt a little sad, but she wasn’t so frightened. She reminded
herself constantly, “Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and
will return soon! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream,
hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. She walked and walked, exhausted but full
of hope. Suddenly, she spotted a huge flat rock. She managed to climb onto it and waited with
patience. The helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse.
To her great joy, the helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly.
Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly and burst
into tears.
【解析】【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了简和她的丈夫汤姆到森林里的一个湖边露营过夜。期间发
生了不愉快的事，简独自一人没带手机离开了，后来在森林里迷路了，最后汤姆叫来直升
机救简的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又黑了。”可知，第一段可描写简
第一次逃离获救没有成功，鼓励自己汤姆会来救自己。
②由第二段首句内容“当简醒来时，天已破晓。”可知，第二段可描写最终直升机救援简
成功，简和汤姆重逢。
2.续写线索：失落——抱有希望——高兴——获救——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①独自：stay alone/by oneself/on one’s own
②发现：spot/find
③设法：manage to do/attempt to do
情绪类
①悲伤的：sad/down/depressed
②筋疲力尽：exhausted/spend oneself/worn out
【点睛】
[高分句型1] She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable
place to guide the helicopter. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语的结构)
[高分句型2] The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse. (运用了“the +比较级，
the +比较级”结构)
【模拟题 5】（2022·重庆市天星桥中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
The five children in Larrane Leech’s day care group were outdoors early, painting landscapes
under the dizzy sun. By 10 a. m., it was time to find shade, so Larrane decided they would walk
down to the river.“We’re going to pick berries now, ” she announced. A nature lover, Larrane insisted they
spend as much time as possible outdoors.
Larrane handed each child an empty jar and called for Pal, her one-year-old German shepherd
(德国牧羊犬). The group made its way over the dusty road and then onto a dirt path through the
trees. They stopped at the first berry bush and got busy picking berries, cheering and talking
excitedly.
A young cougar (美洲狮)cocked an ear toward the birdlike chatter and sniffed the air.
Stepping over the thick carpet of pine needles, the cougar moved quietly toward the children.
Larrane sensed the children suddenly go quiet. She looked up to see the back end of a cougar,
the size of Pal, standing over one child, Mikey. The sight of the cougar near her kids immediately
froze Larrane. Larrane couldn’t tell whether Mikey had been bitten. Her mind racing wildly, she
darted toward the cougar. Desperately intending to grab its tail, she shifted aim at the last minute
and seized the cougar by the neck. She shook it from side to side. Instantly, the cougar wheeled
toward Larrane. Growling and hissing, it stretched up high and brought its paws down upon the
head of the woman. Although still in its youth, it had all the teeth and muscle a cougar needs to
pull down a victim three times its size. This animal was capable of killing her.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane.
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Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground.
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参考答案：
Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane.
They picked up branches from the ground and began attacking the cougar. However, their strikes
only managed to anger the fierce beast. Letting out a threatening howl, it scratched Larrane head.Blood began to flow down Larrane’s face, but she held tightly onto its neck to prevent its deadly
bite. Just then, Pal came to her rescue. He sank his sharp teeth into the beast and tore open its flesh
while dragging it backward. Facing such united enemy, the cougar had to admit defeat and flee.
Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground. He was still breathing. “Thank
God! He’s alive.” Larrane thought in relief, but he was disturbingly still because he was in total
shock. “We have to run home now. ” She said calmly to the terrified children, “Everything will be
all right.” With Mikey on her back and the other children following her, she ran all the way back
to the day care center. The other staff helped her put Mikey down on a bed. That was when she
finally had time to attend to her wound. Larrane met the greatest challenge of her life head-on and
won. Sometimes we have no idea what we can do until we have to make a choice between life and
death.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位日托中心的负责人Larrane有一天带五个孩子到户
外活动，先画风景，后采浆果，在采摘浆果这期间出现了一只美洲狮意图伤害他们，此时
Larrane思绪混乱但选择了勇敢地与美洲狮搏斗，然而女性力量无法与残忍强壮的美洲狮抗
衡，就在危险关头Larrane的牧羊犬Pal出现帮忙，打跑了美洲狮，Larrane与孩子们死里逃
生。
【详解】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“现在意识到危险，其他四个孩子尖叫着跑在Larrane后面。”可知，
本段应描写在发现了美洲狮的威胁之后，Larrane与孩子们跟美洲狮搏斗求生的过程。在千
钧一发之际，Larrane的牧羊犬Pal出现，打跑了美洲狮，他们获得安全。
②由第二段首句内容“Larrane冲向Micky，Micky静静地躺在地上。”可知，本段应描写
Larrane和Pal将美洲狮打跑后，迅速检查Micky的伤情，并将恐惧的孩子们带回日托中心，
最后感悟生死之间可以做的抉择。
2.续写线索：发现美洲狮——迅速出手——尽力相搏——处于劣势——Pal相救——恢复安
全——感悟
3.词类激活行为类
①击打：attack/strike/hit②防止：prevent/stop
③帮助：help/assist/aid
情绪类
①害怕的：threatening/terrifying/scary
②轻松的：released/relaxed
【点睛】
[高分句型1].He sank his sharp teeth into the beast and tore open its flesh while dragging it
backward.（由while引导时间状语从句，省略了主语和be动词)
[高分句型2].Larrane thought in relief, but he was disturbingly still because he was in total shock.
(由because引导原因状语从句。)
[高分句型3].Sometimes we have no idea what we can do until we have to make a choice between
life and death.(由what引导同位语从句)
【模拟题 6】（2022·辽宁·东北育才学校模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An Act of Neighborliness
The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard, cutting my face like a sharp knife.
Rain fell in big drops and thunder and lightning flashed across the skies. I shook with cold and
fear as I walked home, through the streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by,
completely wet in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren holding their heavy schoolbags tightly and rushing
home, I also saw that some road repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, the
workers had left in a hurry because of the storm. There were few signs and it was hard to see what
was on the road. There were pieces of wood and metal and it looked like a hole had been dug and
hurriedly covered with boards.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard some sounds. It sounded like children crying. I
quickly turned back and went back to the place from where the sounds came. I was frightened! To
my sadness, I found that a small child had fallen into the hole on the road. The boards had moved
away with the force of the rushing water. I could hardly see the child as it was dark all around me.
I told he that I was going to look for help. I knew the neighbors well, and they all shared a sense ofneighborliness, willing to give a hand.
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Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for
help.
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The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had
happened.
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参考答案：
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for
help. I charged away to knock on the door on end. After a while, an athletic man of medium height
opened the door. Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the
situation in the way as concise as possible. While calming me by patting my shoulder, the man
reached over to grab the torch on the shoe cabinet near the door. No sooner had we arrived where
the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the
hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands, pulling him out completely. Shortly afterwards,
we sent the child to the nearest police station and waited for his parents.
The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had
happened. They were more than grateful and thanked us. With an outpouring of relief, I was also
proud of myself, as I had never imagined I would be part of a rescue party and the act of
neighborliness could really make such a difference. While the mother and the father were holding
the child tightly, I spotted the man beaming at the child with softness gleaming in his eyes. I was
absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father. All of a sudden,
thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality. I walked to the man and tugged his
sleeve, whispering, “Thank you.” I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in
need.【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在回家路上发现有小孩掉进了路上的洞里。作者告诉
离他最近的房子房主，他很友好，愿意伸出援助之手。最后他们合力把孩子安全地从水坑
里救出，孩子的父母很感谢他们。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我不太确定能做些什么，也不知道要去哪里，但决定去最近的房子
寻求帮助。”可知，第一段可描述作者是如何与好心的房主救出孩子并将其送到警察局的。
②由第二段首句内容“刚刚下班到家的孩子父母听到发生的事情很震惊。”可知，第二段
可描写孩子们的父母感谢作者和好心房主的善举，以及作者得到的感悟。
2.续写线索：找到好心的房主帮忙——安全救出孩子——孩子的父母表示感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①冲向：charge away/rush to
②努力做：attempt to do/try to do
③慢慢移动：inch/crawl
④抓住：seize/get hold of
⑤紧紧抱住：hold tightly/embrace/firmly
情绪类
①震惊的：shocked/astonished
②感激的：grateful/thankful
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the
situation in the way as concise as possible.（as引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to
scan the surroundings.（No sooner……than……固定句型）
【高分句型3】I was absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender
father.（现在分词作状语）
【高分句型4】All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality.
（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
