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考点 44 读后续写 09 生
活类（亲情、友情、趣事
篇）（原卷版）
【命题解读】
生活类故事的核心就是体验生活，体验感情：友情，亲情，人与动物之情等。
【思维导图】友情和亲情
【核心技巧 1 ：矛盾塑造（尴尬 + 紧张） 】
1. So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台
州高三调考）
2. I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head
around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. （2021年1月浙江高考）
3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and
strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （2021
年1月浙江高考）
3. 她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.
【核心技巧 2 ：快乐结局塑造（感激 + 开心） 】
1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。
They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.
1. 谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and
warmth.
2. 这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
3. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）. （2021.04
台州高三调考）
4. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the
happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）. （2021年
1月浙江高考）
5. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽
管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模）
Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around
to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.人与动物
从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一
般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动
物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，
遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人
狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极
探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐
父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江
高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临
沂市一模）。
【可爱型动物故事情节 】
可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是
狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
1. They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到
以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020
年1月高考浙江卷）
2. Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for
a long hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）–Poppy was
back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
【凶猛型动物故事情节 】
凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故
事情节为主。
1 、害怕
1. Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐惧
吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，
使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
4. A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）
5. Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死）
（2017年6月高考浙江卷）
6. I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palms
sweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
2 、求助与获救
1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7
高考浙江卷）
2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （惊奇地发现）that
the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考
浙江卷）
3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清洁伤口）and
then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照顾狼）
together with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）
4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗）
till he had become dry. （山东模拟）
5. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走这只
狼）. （山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
【主题升华 设计】
可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。
凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
1. Elli and I learned our lesson（学到一个教训）: Be aware of a bear with a toothache.（2020.7
高考浙江卷）2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion（充
满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）, saving our farm, just
like my boy saved a life.（202103宁波十校）
4. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s
hand as if to express thanks（好像在表达感谢）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金华十校）
【模拟题 1】（2022·江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Snowflakes dancing in the sky, it was an awfully cold winter. Mary felt as gray as the sky
outside. She struggled to get by the tough winter because her bills went up while her income went
down.
Her refrigerator sat empty. Her only food consisted of peanut butter, bread and bananas, only
enough for two sandwiches. Worse still, it would be four days before she got paid. As Mary
prepared to sit down and eat half of her remaining food, she heard a knock at the door. Who could
it be on such a freezing night? Robbery scenes from films flashed across her mind. Then Mary
shook her head and laughed at her foolish thought-no robber would choose her as a target.
Opening the door, she saw a stranger standing outside, body trembling with cold.
“Madam, sorry to disturb you, but I'm lost and get stuck in the snow. Could you please spare
a piece of bread?" the stranger asked cautiously and politely in a weak but deep voice.
“I'm afraid not,” said Mary, “but I could make you a peanut butter and banana sandwich.”
“That sounds wonderful,” the stranger answered. "Mind if I wait here on the porch?”
“Yes, I do mind,” Mary replied, "but you could come in and eat it at the table.”
Not expecting both food and warmth, the stranger entered the house eagerly. Mary hurried off
to the kitchen for the last four pieces of bread, peanut butter, and bananas. In a few minutes, she
returned and invited him to sit down to eat what she could offer. After eating, the man thanked and
said goodbye to her.Looking outside, Mary hesitated a moment and said, "If you don't mind, you can sleep on the
sofa.” "That would be good enough," responded the man gratefully.
Mary went into her room, and locked the door. The next morning, when she woke up, she
remembered the man. "How will I tell him I have nothing for breakfast?" she asked herself. She
dressed, unlocked, and opened the door slightly.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To her surprise, the man was nowhere to be seen.
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Mary opened the envelope and found a letter.
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【模拟题 2】（2022·江苏·模拟预测）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落首句进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house
and in an age, not so long ago, when we children could go home for lunch and find our mothers
waiting. At the time, I didn’t consider this to be so important, although today it certainly would be.
Actually, our lunch time together in the past years had had a great influence on my life before I
realized it.
Our lunch time when I was in the third grade will stay with me always. I had been picked to
be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly practised my lines
with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every
word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained patiently that
she needed a narrator and had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles.
Her words, kindly delivered, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But shesensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in
the yard. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine(藤) was turning green. Under the huge trees,
we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) appearing unexpectedly through the grass in bunches, as
if a painter had touched our landscape with small amounts of gold. I watched my mother casually
bend down by one of the bushes. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling a
blossom up by all its roots. “From now on, we’ll have roses in this garden.” I immediately
protested, “But I like dandelions. All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty?” asked my mother thoughtfully.
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“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said.
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【模拟题 3】（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学模拟预测）
Tim recently graduated from the university and was looking for a job. After searching on the
Internet he found out that a famous online business company is recruiting a new office manager.
Many candidates applied for the entry exam, but only one would be accepted in the end. Tim
noticed the resumes (简历) of other candidates and was surprised to see that some of them held a
Master’s Degree or even a Doctor's Degree .But Tim was only a Bachelor, and barely met the
lowest requirement of the diploma. Tim felt a bit frustrated because he had no advantage over
other candidates who were excellent students. All the candidates entered the exam hall after
handing up their resumes. Tim scanned through the pages of the test paper and found out that thequestions were very difficult for him. Tim tried to calm down and focus on the questions
themselves instead of their difficulty level. He started with the easiest ones and moved on to the
more difficult ones slowly.
There were two invigilators (监考人) in the hall , one of them was tall and thin , while the
other invigilator was of the opposite: he was short and fat .They seemed to be quite confident
about the honesty of the candidates and were absent. After about 10 minutes, one of the
invigilators left to answer a phone call. The other invigilator soon went out too.
The atmosphere in the exam hall changed after the invigilators had left .Some of the
candidates took out notes and books, some of them brought tablets to search for answers, and
some even called others for help .Tim looked back, and he saw the candidate sitting behind him
cheating too. The man winked to Tim, as if telling him to cheat in the test because everyone was
doing so Tim shook his head and continued doing the difficult problems at a slow pace.
In about half an hour, the invigilators returned to the exam hall. Tim still had one question
left blank at the end of the test. He was almost sure that he was not going to be accepted.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为120左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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The test result was to Tim’s surprise.
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Tim then understood everything that had happened.
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【模拟题 4】（2022·重庆·礼嘉中学一模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was my first day of school. I loved school: the smell of chalk and colored crayons andhaving my own desk that was just my size. However, there was one big problem with school:
Mildred.
Daily when I walked the short distance home after school, Mildred would hit me and scare
me. I was absolutely terrified of her. She had failed first grade and was a year older than me.
Mildred didn’t have any friends, so she seemed to concentrate on making enemies. Because I was
one of the smallest children in first grade, she had selected me as her number one enemy.
As soon as the dismissal bell rang each day, my heart started to pound and I blinked fast so I
wouldn’t cry.
Pretty soon my mother figured out something was wrong at school. I didn’t want to tell her
about Mildred. Mother continued to question me, and I finally sobbed out the whole story. I
begged not to go to school and didn’t sleep much that night. The next morning she said, “Marion,
I’m going to walk up the hill with you today. I believe we’ll see Mildred.” Mildred walked from
way across down to school. She never bothered me on the way to school, only afterward.
“Oh, mama, please don’t do that! Don’t say anything to Mildred. It will just make her mad.
Let me stay home by myself. Please, mama.”
“Hurry and get dressed, Marion.” Her voice was gentle, but quite firm.
“Ple-e-ease, mama.”
“Trust, Marion. I have a plan.”
We bundled up against the bitter cold wind and stared out. Maybe we wouldn’t see Mildred, I
hoped. But my mother had this confident look. I knew the look well, and I had a sinking feeling
that we would see Mildred and that mother would use her “plan”.
Just as we were turning around at a corner when we spotted Mildred. We waited a few
moments as she approached us. “Hello, Mildred.” my mother said.
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Mildred stopped, frozen as still as a statue.
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Paragraph 2:Mildred chewed on her bottom lip and then nodded.
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