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考点 43 读后续写 08 脱
险类（火灾、洪水、迷路
篇）（原卷版）
【命题解读】
读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一
定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就
考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。
【思维导图】救人之前（恶劣环境 + 负面情绪）
1 、恶劣环境
（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的
味道。In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）.
Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it.
（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack.
（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning smell filled the air.
2 、 负面情绪 ：害怕
(1) Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless(无力的) as if we were broken tiny boats at
the mercy of strong waves.
(2) Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind，
which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)
(4) Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body (在身体涌动)救人之中（努力 + 救人动作 + 如释重负）
1 、 . 挣扎努力
(1) Tom looked thoughtful(若有所思)
(2) “We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)
(3) ...,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地).
2. 救人有关的惊险场面描写
(1) The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on
the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water.
(2) I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass(像
玻璃一样破裂). （浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
(3)As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down(把我拖下水). I was tired of the struggle
and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
3 . 实施救援的过程
(1) “帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高
考质量测评联盟）
“Help me get Simmons out of the car!” Norwood yelled loudly to her friends, who were left in a
panic. 诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地
方。
(2) 尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东
新高考质量测评联盟）
Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to
Simmons.
诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考
质量测评联盟）
4 、如释重负
(1) Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge of triumph .(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)(2) Hearing the news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
(3) It thrilled us to hear the good news (听到新消息很高兴).
(4) On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning
merrily at each other.
救人之后（感激 + 升华）
1 、感激
(1) “If I had not been given first aid, I would have dead.” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully.
Simmons showed her gratitude to Norwood, saying “It was you who came to my aid and saved my l.i”fe
如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感
谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
(2) “Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.”
Simmons whispered to Norwood. “谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。” 西
蒙斯对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
2 、升华句
(1) 花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。
Take some time to learn the knowledge of first aid. It saves lives, and it works.
(2) 这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。
The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
(3) 每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
Everyone should learn something about first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.
(4) 了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowing basic first-aid
techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.【模拟题 1】（2022·全国·信宜市信宜中学模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据为内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Aladdin and his mother lived a poor life in Arabia. One day, he got an old lamp under a tree.
WHOOSH! When he rubbed it, noise, fire and red smoke came from the lamp, and out of the
smoke came a very big jinnee（神仙）. “ I’ am slave of the lamp. What is your wish,master?”
Cried the jinnee.
With this magic lamp, Aladdin and his mother became rich and he even married the princess.
He owned all the happiness. Meanwhile, he was respected by people around for his kindness to the
poor. However, he was envied by Abanazar a magician from Morocco who wanted Aladdin’s
magic lamp very much but he didn’t know where the lamp was hidden. So he got out his seven
black stones which were magic too, and put them in water. Then he was informed that the lamp
was in a palace in Arabia.
Abanazar flew to the palace and plotted his dirty plans. For the next week Abanazar watched
Aladdin’s palace until Aladdin and his friends left the palace to go hunting in the hills one day.
Abanazar passed off himself as an old man, selling lamps in the street. “But not for money.” a
slave-girl reported to the princess, “the old man said, ‘New lamps for old. Give me an old lamp
and you can have a new one’. So every body’s getting a new lamp.”
“Yes, my husband’s old lamp! Go and give it to the old man”, the princess knew nothing
about the lamp and its magic, “ Aladdin will be happy to have a nice new lamp!”
The old man(it was Abanazar ,of course) fled into the hills with the magic lamp in such a
hurry that his magic stones were left on the floor in front of the palace.
Para 1. Abanazar just couldn’t wait to rub the lamp.
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Para 2. It was many,many miles from Arabia to Morocco,but Aladdin was there in a second.
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【模拟题 2】（2022·广东广东·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Probably, most of you had the feeling before, at least once—you had been waiting for a long
time, yet being afraid of getting. It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college. I
had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate
programme in management approved. And when the time had come for me to visit the college for
the first day of the study,I couldn't sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look
good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter. However,the positive
attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning. Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college
half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway. About 15
minutes after I came, the hallway started to be full of students. Professors who walked on their
business probably didn't pay attention to me. I knew which hall to go to and had already checked
that it was open. However,I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone. People were moving
around me as if they hadn't seen me. I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in
the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me. He
introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with
anything.In that situation,I realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I
wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before, but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat. As a
result, instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance （相识）, I told the
man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class
without anybody's assistance.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily,the man didn't seem to be angry.
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Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.
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【模拟题 3】（2022·广东·深圳外国语学校模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Even before I reached the tent, I knew there would be trouble. My little brother Andy was
following me, with a sleeping bag, a flashlight, and his stuffed bear. My friends Wade and Bred
think Andy would ruin everything. He would get scared in the middle of the night and have to be
taken back to the house. They complained so much you'd think they were hospital patients instead
of kids I'd invited for an outdoor sleepover.
Andy promised that he wouldn't ruin anything. He wormed his way into the tent and settled
in the far corner. Night was settling in, too, with the woods around us fading toward black. The
house, with its porch light, seemed a long way from us.
“Time for ghost stories!” Brad announced as soon as I'd closed the tent. He told a story
about vampires （吸血鬼）, but it only made us fall over laughing. When it was Wade's turn, he
told a story of three guys who were camping in a tent. He described our situation exactly-except
for Andy. When he was describing a terrifying creature, somewhere outside, a branch snapped
（发出咔嚓声）。The hairs on my arms shot straight up. “These guys were crawling into their
sleeping bags, right?” Wade continued. “When out of the darkness rang this terrible cry.” And out
of the woods behind us there was a cry! High-pitched, frightening, and strange. The hairs on my
head shot straight up!
“What was that?” Bred asked as the cry came again. We all looked at each other in horror,
speechless. Wade suggested someone should go out to check, but no one dared. “What if it's
something trapped or hurt?” Andy said anxiously. We focused our flashlights on Andy, whom we'd
forgotten, sitting in the corner with his arms around his bear. Andy would adopt every lost or hurt
animal in the world if Mom would let him.注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
“I'm going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darkness.
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Andy said it was a baby monkey caught between branches, and it was crying for its mama.
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【模拟题 4】（2022·湖南·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其情节和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight
by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started
to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to
find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a
high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest
and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,
but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane
was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to
be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)
somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also
saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything
better.
Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to'the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?
Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,
another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to
an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3)请在答题卡的相应位置作答；
4)字体端正，格式规范，卷面整洁。
Paragraph l:
But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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【模拟题 5】（2022·重庆市天星桥中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
The five children in Larrane Leech’s day care group were outdoors early, painting landscapes
under the dizzy sun. By 10 a. m., it was time to find shade, so Larrane decided they would walk
down to the river.
“We’re going to pick berries now, ” she announced. A nature lover, Larrane insisted they
spend as much time as possible outdoors.
Larrane handed each child an empty jar and called for Pal, her one-year-old German shepherd
(德国牧羊犬). The group made its way over the dusty road and then onto a dirt path through the
trees. They stopped at the first berry bush and got busy picking berries, cheering and talkingexcitedly.
A young cougar (美洲狮)cocked an ear toward the birdlike chatter and sniffed the air.
Stepping over the thick carpet of pine needles, the cougar moved quietly toward the children.
Larrane sensed the children suddenly go quiet. She looked up to see the back end of a cougar,
the size of Pal, standing over one child, Mikey. The sight of the cougar near her kids immediately
froze Larrane. Larrane couldn’t tell whether Mikey had been bitten. Her mind racing wildly, she
darted toward the cougar. Desperately intending to grab its tail, she shifted aim at the last minute
and seized the cougar by the neck. She shook it from side to side. Instantly, the cougar wheeled
toward Larrane. Growling and hissing, it stretched up high and brought its paws down upon the
head of the woman. Although still in its youth, it had all the teeth and muscle a cougar needs to
pull down a victim three times its size. This animal was capable of killing her.
注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane.
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Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground.
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【模拟题 6】（2022·辽宁·东北育才学校模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An Act of Neighborliness
The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard, cutting my face like a sharp knife.
Rain fell in big drops and thunder and lightning flashed across the skies. I shook with cold and
fear as I walked home, through the streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by,
completely wet in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren holding their heavy schoolbags tightly and rushing
home, I also saw that some road repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, theworkers had left in a hurry because of the storm. There were few signs and it was hard to see what
was on the road. There were pieces of wood and metal and it looked like a hole had been dug and
hurriedly covered with boards.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard some sounds. It sounded like children crying. I
quickly turned back and went back to the place from where the sounds came. I was frightened! To
my sadness, I found that a small child had fallen into the hole on the road. The boards had moved
away with the force of the rushing water. I could hardly see the child as it was dark all around me.
I told he that I was going to look for help. I knew the neighbors well, and they all shared a sense of
neighborliness, willing to give a hand.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for
help.
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The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had
happened.
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