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2025 年高考英语话题写作高频热点通关必备攻略
专题07 人与动物（读后续写）
项目 考情分析 话题综述 真题再现 模拟提升
内容 真题归类 总述 构思 词汇/金句 真题 语篇解读 基础训 提升练
考情分析
编号 话题 内容 卷型 主题语境 体裁
01 浓浓亲情 母亲节惊喜早餐 新课标2021.6 人
万圣节南瓜趣事 浙江卷2021.1 与
记
02 师生情谊 写作比赛逆袭获奖 新课标2023.6 自
03 成长故事 “我”的工资 浙江卷2021.6 我 叙
04 温暖励志 残疾男孩参加越野跑 新课标2022.6
文
05 校园生活 脑图定位找目标 浙江卷2024.1
与同伴共同完成任务 浙江卷2022.1
06 善举助人 与出租车司机的诚信之约 新课标2024.6 人与
帮助无家可归之人 浙江卷2022.6 社会
三个孩子帮助贫困小男孩 新课标2020.6
07 人与动物 蜂鸟奇遇记 浙江卷2023.1 人与
熊口脱险 浙江卷2020.7 自然
小狗Poppy的陪伴 浙江卷2020.1
话题综述
话题综述
人与动物的主题在“读后续写”中是一个备受青睐的题材，因为这种关系不仅充满温情，也容易
唤起读者的情感共鸣。人与动物的互动常常超越了语言的限制，通过一举一动、无言的陪伴和默默的
守护，传递出深厚的信任与依赖。这类故事不仅能呈现人与动物之间难以言喻的情感纽带，也能折射
出主角在这个过程中逐渐实现的心灵蜕变。写作这种题材，可以唤起读者内心深处的温暖情感，同时
引发对生命与自然的更深思考。例如在2022年高考全国卷的《The Loyal Friend》中，主人公与一只
收养的小狗小黑一起经历了从陌生到亲密信任的旅程，甚至在关键时刻共同面对危机。故事中，小黑
不顾一切地保护了主人公，这一举动不仅加深了彼此的情感纽带，也让主人公重新审视了生命的可贵
与感恩之心。这类情节触动人心，呈现了人与动物之间相互依赖、相互成就的深刻情感。人与动物的
故事往往包含多个情感层次：从初识时的好奇，到相伴中的温情，再到面对危机时的守护与最终的离
别。这些情感交织，构成了续写中丰富而细腻的情感基础。从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角
度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；
另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周
旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。
话题构思/写作步骤
在构建情节时，可按照按以下情况g构建：
Part1可爱型动物 陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或
者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
Part2 凶猛的动物 难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命
威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。
Part3主题升华设计 求助与获救.
在续写时，可按照以下三步写：
第一步：初识动物——建立联系与好奇
情感表现：好奇、期待、兴奋 肢体动作：小心靠近、轻轻触摸、温柔注视
第二步：共同经历——陪伴与守护
行动表现：相互陪伴、默契配合、无言守护 情感变化：从欣喜到感动，从理解到依赖
第三步：告别或危机——情感升华
情感表现：不舍、感激、动容 主题升华：感悟生命的脆弱和美好、珍惜相伴的时光
话题词汇/金句
好奇期待类
1. filled with curiosity and excitement 满怀好奇与兴奋
2. cautiously approach 小心靠近
3. with eyes full of wonder 满眼好奇
4. be drawn to it 被吸引
陪伴守护类
5. always by one’s side 始终陪伴左右
6. a silent guardian 沉默的守护者
7. share an unspoken bond 共享无言的联系8. offer a sense of comfort 带来慰藉
危机救援类
9. rush to one’s rescue 迅速前来救援
10. shield from harm 护免受伤害
11. act out of instinct 本能地行动
12. never abandon in times of need 从不在需要时离开
不舍告别类
13. part with reluctance 依依不舍地告别
14. watch longingly 依依不舍地注视
15. a bittersweet farewell 苦乐参半的告别
16. remember with a grateful heart 怀着感激的心铭记
成长感悟类
17. touched by the loyalty 被忠诚所感动
18. realize the preciousness of life 意识到生命的珍贵
19. understand the beauty of companionship 理解陪伴的美好
20. grateful for every moment spent together 感激每一个相处的瞬间
人与动物满分句式
1. He approached the animal cautiously, his heart racing with both excitement and
uncertainty.他小心翼翼地靠近那只动物，心中既兴奋又忐忑。
2. Its gentle eyes seemed to speak, drawing him closer.它温柔的眼神仿佛在诉说，吸引着
他靠近。
3. Curiosity sparkled in her eyes as she reached out her hand tentatively.
她眼中闪烁着好奇，小心翼翼地伸出手。
4. Through countless days and nights, it stood by him, a silent companion.
在无数个日夜，它默默陪伴在他身边。
5. They shared an unspoken understanding, bound by loyalty and trust.他们心有灵犀，由忠诚和信任维系着彼此。
6. In its presence, he found solace, as if the world was a little kinder.
在它的陪伴下，他找到了慰藉，仿佛世界也温柔了许多。
7. When danger struck, the animal acted without hesitation, shielding him from harm.危险来
临时，那只动物毫不犹豫地保护他免受伤害。
8. With a fierce loyalty, it stood between him and danger, unwavering.
它充满忠诚地站在他和危险之间，毫不动摇。
9. In that critical moment, it was his silent protector, guarding him at all costs.在那关键时刻，
它成了他的无言守护者，竭尽全力守护他。
10. With a heavy heart, he watched it disappear into the horizon, memories flooding his mind.
他心情沉重地注视着它消失在地平线，回忆涌上心头。
11. As he bid farewell, he realized how deeply it had touched his life.
在道别时，他意识到它对他生命的深刻影响。
12. Their parting was bittersweet, leaving him grateful for every moment shared.
他们的离别苦乐参半，他感激每一个共同度过的瞬间。
13. It is through this enduring, silent companionship that he came to understand the intricate
depth of loyalty and devotion, a bond that transcended words and gestures.
正是通过这种持久而无言的陪伴，他才领悟了忠诚与奉献的深邃，那是一种超越言语与行动
的纽带。
14. The bond between human and animal revealed to him the profound, often unspoken, beauty
of unconditional love, a connection resilient enough to withstand both time and trials.
人与动物之间的联系让他领悟到那种深邃却无言的无条件之爱，一种足以承受时间与考验的
坚韧情感。
15. Not until the moment of parting did he grasp the intensity of the connection they shared, an
attachment woven quietly into the fabric of his life.
直到离别的瞬间，他才真正明白他们之间那份无声无息融入他生命的深切联结。
真题再现
Writing1【
2023浙江1月卷】
原题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm andwalked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my
attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs
(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was
the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the
sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling
against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I
stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering(悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked
into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was
departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our
group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my
eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must
have come to say goodbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ____________________________________________________
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. _________________________________________
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【答案】
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I
rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the
original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was
getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to
survive?I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned
around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes
locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of
this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into
my car and drove away.
【语篇解读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘
蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，
它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好
像是在和作者告别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所
想到的。
②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作
者的感想。
2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作
者的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①思绪回到……：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to
②匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to
③盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at
情绪类
①宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from
the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的
主语从句)
Writing2【 2020年7月浙江卷】
真题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应
为150左右。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp
outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should bephotographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a
telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our
garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and
bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard，and fired
blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he
just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes
before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager
suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited
guest slowly and，through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake
to wash his eyes.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our
camp.________________________________________________________________________________________
________________
Paragraph2:At that very moment, the helicopter
arrived.______________________________________________________________________________________
_________________
【答案】
Paragraph 1
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp, then we realized the spray had only angered him
even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly,
not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over
the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he eat up all the
bread and came back again.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the
helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the
air, I was amazed to the spot that the bear had finally tore down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind.
I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear.
【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北
极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁
丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下，作者求助营
地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使
熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。”可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付
熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。
由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。
2.续写线索：熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推
到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面
3.词汇激活
行为类
①激怒：anger/provoke / enrage
②抓起：grab/snatch up
③拿出：take out/fetch out
情绪类
①疯狂的：mad/crazy
②兴奋的：excited/thrilled
【点睛】[高分句型1] then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer
this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly.（for引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3] Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. (once引导时间状语从句
和形容词作状语)
Writing3【 2020年1月浙江卷】
真题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应
为150左右。
“I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend
goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪)get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of
town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least.The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see you
back home in a month, okay？"His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds
of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in
her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to
visit. Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old
girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy
up？"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mom.” Without anybody left in the house but us, this
place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home
as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly,
then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.
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Para 2. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.
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【答案】
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog Then two fluffy paws. Next the box tipped over sideways, and outtumbled a mass of wiggly golden silliness. Poppy was amazed. She wagged furiously. She barked with joy. She
smiled, her tongue lolling out as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was not shy and immediately starting
yipping and jumping around the older dog. “That didn’t take long,” remarked Mom, as both dogs went roaring
around the house in an impromptu game of chase. Dad laughed.
Para 2.
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had missed Poppy and was looking forward to
seeing her. When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing
up to lick his face too. “Oh my gosh, who is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed at the look of shock on his
face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe you got yourselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mom. “This
puppy is for Poppy!”
【语篇解读】这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在
家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的
小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男
孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Poppy的。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当
的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用
的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：a mass of，with joy，look forward to等高
级词汇；非谓语动词的运用The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the
older dog.；时间状语从句When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden
cloud came racing up to lick his face too.等高级句式。
模拟提升
基础训
Writing1
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左右。
Gen and her 5-year-old daughter found a fox cub (幼崽) trapped between her and her neighbour’s fence. The
poor cub looked as though it had fallen down between the fence. It was stuck on its back with its limbs in the air.
Gen put gloves on and carefully freed the cub from the fence, but it was clear that it was shocked and injured.
When she put it down, it couldn’t even move. She contacted their local wildlife rescue charity soon, but they said
they couldn’t help because they didn’t have enough staff members. “We shouldn’t leave it there to die,” Gen saidto her daughter. So they took it back and tried their best to look after it.
They fed the fox cub and kept it warm and clean. The fox cub slowly began to regain its strength and was able
to walk, only a few feet at first, though. Once the fox cub had recovered, Gen felt clear that it wanted to look for its
family, so they put it in a box outside in the garden for periods of time with some food and water, hoping its family
might come to look for it.
At first, there was no sign of the mother fox. But then one night, something had visited Gen and her husband
David’s garden. The next morning, the family were shocked to see the garden had been torn apart. They thought
the mother fox must have had come looking for her cub.
“The mother fox was angry,” said David. “Trying to think about what she must have been going through to
destroy so much of our stuff,” said Gen. They thought they had to create a good chance to get them back together.
Then a genius idea came to them.
注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
David attached a washing basket to a long piece of rope and placed the fox cub underneath it.
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After observing the garden for just 15 minutes, the mother fox appeared.
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【答案】One possible version:
After sending the David attached a washing basket to a long piece of rope and placed the fox cub underneath it.
Meanwhile, he held onto the rope out of sight from the upstairs window. When they saw the mother fox coming,
David would pull the basket up and let the fox cub go to its mother. It would be perfect if the mother fox could findthe cub soon and take it away. Gen and David were a little worried at first. However, their plan worked.
After observing the garden for just 15 minutes, the mother fox appeared. As is expected, she was waiting for the
garden to be quiet for her to come and take her cub away. David pulled the basket up and released the cub. It took a
while, but eventually, the mother fox heard the cub calling. She picked it up and carried it away. Gen and David felt
extremely happy that their plan had worked. They thought they had really done a good thing.
【导语】本文以一只狐狸幼崽为线索展开，讲述了 Gen和女儿救助了一只卡在栅栏上的狐狸幼崽，小狐
狸恢复后他们把它放在花园的一个箱子里，希望它的家人来找它，一天夜里狐狸妈妈的到来让花园遭受很
大的破坏，所以Gen和丈夫David想出一个主意来让它们团聚。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“David把一个洗衣篮系在一根长绳子上，然后把小狐狸放在下面。”可知，第一
段可描写Gen和David如何把狐狸幼崽放在花园。
②由第二段首句内容“只观察了15分钟，狐狸妈妈就出现了。”可知，第二段可描写狐狸妈妈出现后发
现狐狸幼崽并团聚的过程。
2.续写线索：
抓住绳子等待狐狸妈妈——担心——狐狸妈妈出现——放走狐狸幼崽——狐狸妈妈发现并带走狐狸幼崽
——开心
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓紧：hold onto/grasp
②出现：appear/turn up
③放走：release/free
情绪类
①担心：worried/concerned
②开心的：happy/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]. When they saw the mother fox coming, David would pull the basket up and let the fox
cub go to its mother. （由when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. It would be perfect if the mother fox could find the cub soon and take it away. （由if引导的条
件状语从句）
[高分句型3]. They thought they had really done a good thing.（省略that的宾语从句）
Writing 2
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左右。
For two years, Mika and I were hunting for a cheap, cosy cottage by a stream. Then, late one night, something
appeared online. A log cabin(木屋)on four acres, with a dirt road to the Susquehanna River and protected farmland
on all sides. Perfect!Except......
“You know where it is, riiiight?” the realtor(房地产经纪人)warned when I called the next morning. Only two
houses were down there. Everything else, for hundreds of acres, was open farmland. No police, no local government,
not even a grocery store. The only place within fifteen miles to buy food was a one-room shop in the back of an
Amish farm. If we moved out there, he warned, we'd be completely our own.
Whatever. It had to be better than our apartment here, right?
We pulled into the dirt drive way to find horses eating grass along the fence, flowers blooming in the streams,
and an Amish farmer rumbling(轰隆隆)past in a steel-wheeled truck. Unbelievable! We threw open the car doors,
excitedly talking about the wonderful view. Pulling the realtor aside, we couldn't wait to make an offer. And a few
weeks later, we left Philly for our dream home.
Solitude(独处)was going to be our biggest problem — or so I thought, until I heard Mika scream. I dropped the
box I was unpacking and came running. I found her on the back door, holding two-year-old Maya in her arms, moving
away from a six-foot black snake winding at her feet. She had been watering a row of plants and when she stepped
from one to the next, the snake dropped from the roof and felt down right where Mika had been standing a second
earlier.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
I grabbed a shovel(铲子).
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【答案】One possible version:
After sending the I grabbed a shovel. I tried to drive the monster away, but it began climbing up the roof. I
banged the shovel in front of its face to drive it back. Instead, the snake slid right over the shovel and disappeared
into the roof. Now what? The only thing worse than finding a giant snake outside your house is driving it inside,
especially when inside contains a baby you’ll soon be putting to bed.I walked to our nearest neighbor for help. When I finally found an old Amish farmer and asked him how to get
rid of the snake, he didn’t understand the problem. “You’re lucky,” he said. “That’s a rat snake. It will eat your
mice and stay out of your way.” So I needn’t have worried at all! All I need is to get used to its being around. I
went home in great relief.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和米卡一直希望住在小溪边一间廉价而舒适的小屋，虽
然房地产经纪人警告说附近只有两幢房子。其他几百英亩的土地都是开阔的农田。没有警察，没有地
方政府，连杂货店都没有。但是作者还是搬到了梦想中的家，高兴延续到有一天遇到六英尺的黑蛇惊
慌失措想要赶走的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我抓起一把铲子。”可知，第一段可描写作者想赶走黑蛇的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“我走到我们最近的邻居那里寻求帮助。”可知，第二段可描写作者从邻居那里
了解了黑蛇。
2.续写线索：驱赶黑蛇——黑蛇进入房间——向邻居求助——邻居解释——如释重负回家
3.词汇激活
行为类
①寻找：search for /look for /hunt for
②回家：go home/return home
③摆脱：rid off/free from/get rid of
情绪类
①幸运的：be fortunate/ be lucky
②如释重负：a great weight off my shoulders./feel a sense of relief / in great relief
【点睛】[高分句型1]. The only thing worse than finding a giant snake outside your house is driving it inside,
especially when inside contains a baby you’ll soon be putting to bed.（由when引导的状语从句和定语从
句）
[高分句型2].All I need is to get used to its being around.（省略关系代词that引导定语从句和非谓语动
词）
句)
提升练
Writing3
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左右。
Even before I reached the tent, I knew there would be trouble. My little brother Andy was following me, with a
sleeping bag, a flashlight, and his stuffed bear. My friends Wade and Bred think Andy would ruin everything. He
would get scared in the middle of the night and have to be taken back to the house. They complained so much you'dthink they were hospital patients instead of kids I'd invited for an outdoor sleepover.
Andy promised that he wouldn't ruin anything. He wormed his way into the tent and settled in the far corner.
Night was settling in, too, with the woods around us fading toward black. The house, with its porch light, seemed a
long way from us.
“Time for ghost stories!” Brad announced as soon as I'd closed the tent. He told a story about vampires
（吸血鬼）, but it only made us fall over laughing. When it was Wade's turn, he told a story of three guys who were
camping in a tent. He described our situation exactly-except for Andy. When he was describing a terrifying creature,
somewhere outside, a branch snapped （发出咔嚓声）。The hairs on my arms shot straight up. “These guys were
crawling into their sleeping bags, right?” Wade continued. “When out of the darkness rang this terrible cry.” And
out of the woods behind us there was a cry! High-pitched, frightening, and strange. The hairs on my head shot
straight up!
“What was that?” Bred asked as the cry came again. We all looked at each other in horror, speechless. Wade
suggested someone should go out to check, but no one dared. “What if it's something trapped or hurt?” Andy said
anxiously. We focused our flashlights on Andy, whom we'd forgotten, sitting in the corner with his arms around his
bear. Andy would adopt every lost or hurt animal in the world if Mom would let him.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
“I'm going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darkness.
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【答案】 “ I’m going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darknes s. Although filled with fear, I
ran after him without hesitation. He was my little brother after all. Andy was headed into the woods, his flashlight
beam wobbling along the trail. Finally I saw him, a few yards ahead, with his flashlight aimed at the upper branches
of a large tree. I raised my own light to shine on the same spot. A pair of shining eyes seemed to float in the darkness.My heart pounded harder.
Andy said it was a baby monkey caught between branches, and it was crying for its mama. I knew he was right. I had
to admit that Andy was impressive. We helped the little monkey out carefully. Having ensured that the little monkey
was in good condition, we let it go. When we walked down back, I could see the guys gathered before the tent. “Are y oaull
right?” They asked. “We’re fine.” I answered with a broad smile, knowing that the guys’ opinion of Andy would
change, too.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带着弟弟安迪一起去户外过夜，朋友不想让安迪和他们一起，
安迪独自一人搭了个帐篷，在作者和朋友说鬼故事时外面发出了响声，安迪很有勇气的出去帮助了一只夹
在树枝的猴子的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容““我去看看。”安迪跑出帐篷，消失在黑暗中。”可知，第一段可描写安迪出去找
出响声的场面。
②由第二段首句内容“安迪说那是一只夹在树枝间的小猴子，它在哭着找妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写安
迪的勇气使作者的朋友的态度改变。
2.续写线索：出去——惊恐——真相大白——救助——回去——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.充满：be filled with/be full of/abound with
②.举起：raise/lift/upborn
情绪类
①.小心翼翼：out carefully/with great care/very cautiously
②.积极：positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Although filled with fear, I ran after him without hesitation.这句话运用了although引导
的让步状语从句。
[高分句型2]. Finally I saw him, a few yards ahead, with his flashlight aimed at the upper branches of a large tree.
这句话运用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。
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左右。
A freezing downpour washed the street in front of the small-town bar. I sat gazing into the watery darkness,
alone as usual. I had been in that old bar for half an hour, quietly drinking, when my thoughtful eyes finally focused on
a medium-sized lump (一团) in a puddle (水洼) a hundred feet away. For another ten minutes, I looked out through
the window trying to decide if the lump was an animal or just something.
The night before, a German dog named Shep had come into the bar begging for potato chips. He was starvingand just the size of the lump in the puddle. Why should a dog lie in a cold puddle in the freezing rain? I asked myself.
The answer was simple: Either it wasn’t a dog, or it was, he was too weak to get up.
The wound in my right shoulder ached all the way down my fingers. I didn’t want to go out in the storm.
Hey, it wasn’t my dog. It was just a stray on a cold rainy night, a lonely drifter (流浪者). So was I, I thought, as I
tossed (扔) down what was left of my drink and headed out the door.
He was lying in the three inches of water. When I touched him, he didn’t move. I thought he was dead. I put
my hands around his chest and raised him to his feet. He stood unsteadily, and his head hung like a weight at the
end of his neck. His floppy ears were just hairless pieces of flesh dotted with open sores (伤口).
“Come on, Shep,” I said, leading him to a corner next to the bar, where he lay on the cold cement and closed
his eyes. A block away I could see the lights of a late-night convenience store. It was still open. I bought three cans
of dog food and fed him. He couldn’t swallow but poorly look at me. He was dying!
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The local vet (兽医) was still at his office, so I loaded the poor creature into a taxi and headed there.
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Three days later, when I opened the door of the vet’s, Shep welcomed me with wild enthusiasm.
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【答案】
The local vet was still at his office, so I loaded the poor creature into a taxi and headed there. After a quick
check on the poor dog, the vet shook his head with regret. He promised me he would try his utmost but Shep was
unlikely to get through it unless there is a miracle. While the vet treated the sores carefully, I tried to drop water in
his mouth and fed him with food bit by bit. I never gave up hope of getting him saved. Many times I would caress
his neck, whispering into his ears to encourage him to hold on. He was so weak that he had to stay in the vet’s.
Three days later, when I opened the door of the vet’s, Shep welcomed me with wild enthusiasm. He wagged his
tail from left to right as if to say “Thank you”. He was gaining strength and improving for the better. Tears filling my
eyes, I knew all our efforts were worthwhile. Soon, the dog recovered from severe sores and I adopted him and
took him home. Once in a while, I would go to that bar with Shep, a drink for myself and a serve of potato chips for
him. What would have happened if I hadn’t stepped out on that stormy night? Care and kindness really made a
difference, to both of us.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者独自坐在小镇的老酒吧凝视着一百英尺外的水坑，水坑
里有一团中等大小的东西，而外面在下着冰冷的大雨。经过长时间的思考，最终作者前去查看，发现水坑
里确实是那只叫Shep的流浪狗，他已经奄奄一息。作者带Shep去看兽医，和兽医一起努力救助他。三天
后作者再去诊所时Shep已经恢复体力，作者收养了他。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“当地的兽医还在他的办公室里，所以我把这可怜的动物装上一辆出租车直奔那
里。”可知，第一段可描写作者带Shep去看兽医，和兽医一起努力救助他。
②.由第二段首句内容“三天后，当我打开兽医诊所的门时，Shep热情地欢迎我。”可知，第二段可
描写三天后作者再去诊所时Shep已经恢复体力，此后作者收养了他。
2.续写线索：带Shep看兽医——情况不乐观——一起救助Shep ——Shep得救了——收养了Shep——
作者的感慨
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.尽力：try one’ utmost/ try one’s best
②.低声说： whisper/ mutter/ speak in a low voice
情绪类
①.小心地：carefully/ with care
②.严重的：severe/ serious/ extremely bad
【点睛】[高分句型1]. He promised me he would try his utmost but Shep was unlikely to get through it unless
there is a miracle.（运用了由unless引导的条件状语从句）
[高分句型2]. While the vet treated the sores carefully, I tried to drop water in his mouth and fed him with food
bit by bit.（运用了由while引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]. He was so weak that he had to stay in the vet’s.（运用了由so…that引导的结果状语从句）
