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2025年高考英语二轮复习话题写作高频热点通关必备攻略
通关必过（应用文）
项目 考情分析 话题综述 真题再现 模拟提升
内容 考点分布 总述 构思 词汇/金句 真题详解 基础训 提升练
考情分析
专题 内容 卷型
以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿 2024 全国
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图表类 据图表写一篇以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论调查结果 2022全国乙
以“自律”为主题的调研活动 2020年北京
据图写一篇关于 “劳动最光荣”的社会实践活动的周记 2019年北京
根据图写一篇带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的周记 2018年北京
写一篇以记录 “感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的周记 2017年北京
话题综述
话题综述
图表类作文一般是对某个具体问题的调查统计，主要是关于一些调查研究的统计数据
和结果，以及某项活动的统计示意图。其要求考生将图表形式（如坐标图、曲线图、饼图
等）的信息转化成段落形式的文字信息，在描述完内容时需要过渡到普遍现象。写图表作
文需要介绍图表中讲了什么，数据有什么变动，反映了哪些问题和趋势，并分析问题背后
的原因，结合自身谈谈解决措施或给出观点。
话题构思/模板
图表作文写作可以细分为三个部分：
第一部分：引出话题并介绍图表内容。
第二部分：分析造成这一问题的原因。
第三部分：给出自己观点，提出相应的解决方案。
模板构建
模板1
Recently, we/I have done a survey about /a survey has been carried out on ________(调查的主要内容).
Views vary from person to person. The results are as follows.
As can be seen from the(pie/bar)chart/graph/diagram/table, the majority/...% of the people/studentsinterviewed ________(调查的结果一). They think _________. Only in this way can they________(原因一). Very
few people/students, that is about ... %, think ________(调查的结果二), because ________(原因二①). What’s
more, ________(原因二②). However, ... % of the ... believe ________(调查的结果三). _________(原因三).
In my point of view, _________(你的看法或观点).
模板2
As is shown in the(pie/bar)chart/graph/diagram/table, most _______(图表所反映的主题). Surprisingly, most
of the surveyed _______. Only a few ________. And those who _______ are in the minority.(描述图表信息). 或：
Recently, we have made a survey about _______(调查的主要内容)among ... in ... According to the survey, ...%
/Most of the ... surveyed _______, while _______ % _______ and the rest _______.(描述图表信息). we can
conclude (that)most of ... _______(图表所反映的主要现象).
Many factors contribute to this situation. First of all, due to _______(原因一). Secondly, _______(原因二).
Thirdly, _______(原因三)/Other factors, such as _______(其他原因).
Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures should be taken to solve the problems. Most importantly,
_______. Besides, _______. What’s more, _______. (提出具体建议).
话题词汇/金句
1. Recently a survey has been done to find out ...为了找出/发现……，
2. In this survey, ...were interviewed.在这项调查中，……接受了采访。
3. Most of the surveyed answered...大多数受访者回答说……
4. The results are as follows.结果如下。
5. As is apparently shown in the table above, ...正如上表所突显的那样，……
6. As is shown in the table(chart)/As can be indicated in the table(chart)/According to the figures given
in the table(chart), ...如表(图)所示，……
7. It can be seen from the table that.../From the table we can see that...从表中可看出…/从表中我们可
知……
8. As is shown in the(pie/bar)chart/graph/diagram/table ...如图(饼图/条形图)图表/图形/表格所
示……
9. As we can see from the table that...正如我们从表中看到的那样……
10. As can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in ...
11. 从图表中可以看出，……发生了巨大的变化……
12. It is expected to increase ... times. 预计将/有望增加……倍。13. There is an increase of ...% in total this year. 今年总共增加了……%。
14. The total number was lowered by ...%. 总数减少了……%。
15. It has decreased almost to and half times, compared with that in ...与……相比，已下降了近1.5倍。
16. Compared with ..., it fell from ... percent to ... percent.与……相比，它从百分之……下降到了百
分之……
17. It was decreased twice than that of the year ...比去年减少了……两倍。
18. The figure of ... is about twice as much as that of ....……的数字大约是……的两倍。
19. The trend/increase slowed down in ...……的趋势/增长放缓。
20. It accounts for ... % of the total population. 它占总人口的……%。
21. The number of students has reached ..., indicating a rise of ...%, compared to last year.
学生人数已达……，与去年相比增长了……%。
22. Many factors contribute to this situation.造成这种情况的因素很多。
23. The reason why... is that...……的原因是……
24. Every coin has two sides.每件事都有两面性。
25. With the rapid growth of..., ... have become increasingly important in our daily life.
随着……的快速增长，……在我们的日常生活中已经变得越来越重要了。
26. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that...现在越来越多的人开始意识到……
27. There is no doubt that immediate attention must be paid to the problem of ...
毫无疑问，……问题必须立即引起注意。
28. The increase/decrease in... is due to the fact that ...……增加／减少是由于……样的事实引起的。
29. Such changes in the table should owe to the following reasons. Firstly, ... Secondly, ...
表中的这种变化应归功于以下原因。首先，其次，……
30. The reason for...is that ...……的原因是……
31. One of the most surprising findings is that...最令人惊讶的发现之一是……
32. It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.很明显，增加的比率变得越来越
大。
33. They couldn’t be satisfied with them more.他们对这个结果非常满意。
34. More emphasis should be put on ...更多的重点应该放在……
35. In spite of the different opinions, I still hold the view that ...尽管有不同的意见，我仍然认为……
36. The great effect these changes have on ... is obvious that ...这些变化对……的巨大影响是显而易
见的。37. It will bring about an unfavorable influence on ...这将对……产生不利影响。
38. It may produce a great change in ...它可能会在……方面产生巨大的变化。
39. From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论……
40. There is no doubt that attention must be paid to ...毫无疑问，必须注意……
41. I suggest the government take effective measures to ...我建议政府采取有效措施……
42. All these data clearly prove the fact that ...这些数据明显地证明了这一事实，即……
43. It is high time that we placed great emphasis on ...是我们高度重视……的时候了。
44. It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.
必须采取有效措施来防止这种情况的发生。
真题再现
Writing1【2021新课标I&II卷】
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】 Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development.Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of
travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for
short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity
travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication
to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey
towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一
篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供：offer→provide
极大地：dramatically→tremendously
减少：reduce→decrease
总之：in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a
symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people
access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network
that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
Writing2【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一
篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述：
2. 简单评论;3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are
choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English
movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English
learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading
English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing
games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and
teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：choose → select
提高：improve → strengthen
各种各样的：various → diverse
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned → from my perspective
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of
students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句：Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing
number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English
songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句
以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语，to
improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
Writing3【2020年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调
研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动
中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律 self-discipline
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___________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version:
While studying at home, I surveyed my class on “self-discipline”. The findings worried me a lot.
To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. Then I held an online
discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves. After that, we all knew better what to do.
Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline. I phoned my teacher
about it, and we both felt very pleased.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。这是一篇图画作文，要求考生按以下四幅图的先后顺序，就你开展
“自律”调研活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程写一篇英文稿件，向学校英文网站投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时
人称：第一人称为主
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表明写作主题——“自律”
2. 根据图片描写事件过程：
第一幅图片描写自己对“自律”调研结果很担忧；
第二幅图片描写自己向父母求助解决方法/建议；
第三幅图片描写自己和同学们在网上讨论如何自律；
第四幅图片描写三个月后，大家自律能力有了很大提高，我和老师很高兴。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
ask sb. for help；practical advice；an online discussion；do a second survey
第三步：连词成句
1. I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice.
2. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves.
3. I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not
least2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also),
including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one
hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合
逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如 which showed great improvements in self-discipline这句话中
用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如 ask sb. for help，an online discussion，do a
second survey等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，
文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
Writing4【2019年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。
请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜watermelon【答案】
Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And
he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip. On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While
working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun. When I came back home, I shared my
experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
【分析】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。
【详解】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实
践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。分析四幅图可知，图画作文
内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动
感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾
段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾
语从句how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.，还使用了At the class meeting, When I got home,
On the farm, While working, When I came back home等过渡词，使文章上下文衔接流畅。
Writing5【2018年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周
接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)
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【答案】
Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out
be to extremely rewarding.
On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave
them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the
exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make
tea.
In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail.
Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they
couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves,
and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture.
The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable
day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with
pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.
【详解】本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类
题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。
1. 认真读图，把握中心。
根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的过
程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。
2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。
在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充
分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故时态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地
充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。
3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。
运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。
串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上
下文更为紧凑、自然。
4. 反复审核，修改错误。
一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。
5. 宜详则详，该略则略。
对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。
如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一
些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。
亮点说明：
巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience
the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.
使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：
On arriving at the tea house…
I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,
Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture
holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.
使用倒装句突出重点。Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.
使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。
Writing6【2017年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你
们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频 video
【答案】
Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed
on making a video to record our experiences at school.
Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of
every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some
compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on
the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a
great sense of achievement.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生根据四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业
前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最终：finally→eventually
困难的：tough→difficult不可避免的：unavoidable→inevitable
当然；无疑：surely→certainly
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：We debated over what to put into the video.
拓展句：We debated over what we should put into the video.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers
and took pictures of every aspect of school life. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well
received. (运用了when引导的状语从句)
模拟提升
基础训
Writing1
你校英文报正在开展学生使用拍照搜题类软件（snap-for-answers applications）的调查。请根据图表中
的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.软件使用情况描述；
2.分析该现象的原因；
3.简要谈谈你的看法。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
As is shown in the survey conducted by our school’s English newspaper,
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【答案】
As is shown in the survey conducted by our school’s English newspaper, the usage of snap-for-answers
applications is on the rise among high school students, with 40% of freshmen, 60% of sophomores, and 80% of
seniors using them.
This trend can be attributed to the increasing academic pressure and the convenience offered by these apps.
Additionally, some students may lack the necessary study support, leading them to rely on these tools.
In my view, while they can be helpful for quick reference, overreliance on them may discourage deep learning
and critical thinking skills. Therefore, we should use these tools wisely, balancing their benefits with the need for
independent study.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。校英文报正在开展学生使用拍照搜题类软件的调查。要求考
生根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在增加：on the rise → on the increase
另外：additionally → in addition/besides
依赖：rely on → depend on
我认为：in one's view→from one's point of view
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, some students may lack the necessary study support, leading them to rely on these tools.
拓展句：Additionally, some students may lack the necessary study support, which leads them to rely on these
tools.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This trend can be attributed to the increasing academic pressure and the convenience
offered by these apps.(运用了过去分词短语作后置状语)
[高分句型2] Therefore, we should use these tools wisely, balancing their benefits with the need for independent
study. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
Writing 2当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状
作了调查，结果如下:
获取短视频内容的类
受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间）
型
辅助学习类 48%
娱乐休闲类 31%
生活技能类 12%
其他 9%
请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）
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【答案】A survey conducted by a website is aimed at figuring out the situation about high school students’ use
of short videos as a channel for gaining information. As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen
time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment
and leisure accounts for 31%.In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important
life skills. And 9% is spent on random contents.
As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their
study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos. Thus, it is no
wonder that a large proportion of their time is spent on short videos. I am sure that this trend will continue and last
forever.
【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：be aimed at→ be intended to do
与……相关：related to→ with regard to
除此以外：in addition→ additionally
提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills.
拓展句：In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos that are relevant to some important life
skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent
on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure
accounts for 31%.（运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students
to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos.（运
用了强调句型以及make it+形容词+for sb. to do sth.的结构）
提升练
Writing3
有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一
座桥梁。假如你是李华，你校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后
作业类型”，对全校1000名学生进行了问卷调查。请你根据下面图表信息，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。要求：
(1)词数不少于80；
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名等；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)参考词汇仅供参考。
参考词汇：arouse interst 激发兴趣 enrich experiences 丰富经历 promote competence 提升素养
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____________________________________________________【答案】Our school did a survey among 1000 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here
are the results. 42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing.
The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose other kinds of homework.
As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting
way. Three weeks ago, we were asked to make an English poster about Dragon Boat Festival. Then I collected lots
of information about the festival. Finally, not only did I finish the task perfectly, but also I got a deeper understanding of
our colorful culture. In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my
experiences in learning.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类写作。要求考生根据对全校1000名学生进行的主题为“你最喜欢的
一种英语课后作业类型”问卷调查结果，写一篇英语短文。简要说明调查结果并介绍自己喜欢的作业类型。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最后：finally→ at last
大量的：lots of → a lot of/a great amount of
完成：finish → complete
在我看来：in my opinion→ from my point of view
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing.
拓展句：42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, while 29% enjoy reading and
writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose
other kinds of homework.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in
an interesting way.（运用了because引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
Writing4
下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因, 请根据你对图表和漫画的理解, 用
英语写一篇短文。写作要点：
1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；
2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；
3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。注意：1. 可参照图表、漫画及下面文章开头所给的提示进行必要的发挥；
2.词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Many animals are in danger of dying out.
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【答案】Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the chart, the kinds of wild animals
have decreased sharply in the past three decades. As a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2015.
There are several reasons for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal
killing is an important reason. Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease
in the number of wild animals.
In my opinion, it is high time that we should take action to protect them and give wild animals a good living
environment. In addition, the government should pass more laws to forbid killing wild animals. Only in this way can
we live in harmony with wild animals.
【分析】这是一篇图表作文。本篇要求考生根据图表和漫画反应的内容讲述野生动物种类的变化情况
和原因。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，
下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因, 请根据你对图表和漫画的理解, 用英语写一篇短文。写作要点：
1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；
2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；
3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。
第二，人称为第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，描述
野生动物种类的变化趋势。第二段，分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因。第三段，谈谈你对保护野生动物
的看法和建议。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: in danger of ，Apart from，resulted in，take action to do sth，live in
harmony with.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which 引导的非限制性定语从句 Human beings hunt wild animals for big
profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of wild animals. 虚拟语气In my opinion, it is high
time that we should take action to protect them and give wild animals a good living environment.完全倒装句 Only
in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: As a result，In my opinion，In addition.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】本文中的三段式结构符合作文要求，并且各部分衔接自然顺畅，过渡词 as a result, apart from,
in addition等的使用使得文章读起来条理清晰。另外还使用了亮点短语和句式：result in, in my opinion, as和
which引导的非限制性定语从句 Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp
decrease in the number of wild animals. 虚 拟 语 气 it is high time that sb. should do sth.和 Only in this way can
we live in harmony with wild animals位于句首的倒装句, 使文章增色不少。
