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2025年高考英语二轮复习话题写作高频热点通关必备攻略
通关必过（应用文）
项目 考情分析 话题综述 真题再现 模拟提升
内容 考点分布 总述 构思 词汇/金句 真题详解 基础训 提升练
考情分析
专题 内容 卷型
给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 2023新课标
01 给关于介绍中国的发展成就的建议 2024北京
建议信
给Lynn求助关于校报“排忧解难”专栏给建议的回信 2024上海
对筹划“绿色北京”社团活动的建议 2023北京
话题综述
话题综述
建议信是针对朋友、同事等写的求助信的回复，或对某种不合理的应该纠正的情况提出自己的看法和
建议。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
话题构思/模板
建议信通常包括三部分内容：
1. 写信目的；
2. 介绍详情、说明原因；
3. 提出建议。
话题词汇/金句
常用词汇
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
建议信常用句型
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。
2. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.这样的问题是很正常的。可能
下面的建议会有一些帮助。
3. I have received your letter saying you plan to...我已经收到了你的来信。信上说。。。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions
here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ..很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于
如何。。。。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to ...很高兴收到
你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在。。。，我写信给你一些建议。
7. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
8.Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
9. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
10. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good
luck with your studies/work！
11. Here are a few suggestions.
真题再现
Writing1【2023▪新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在
问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议 。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training
after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This
can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for
the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone
who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select.
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students
choose their own partners.
Writing2【2024北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年
新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内
容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary
of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights
in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’srole in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中
国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary
of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements,
which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases
China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
Writing3【2023年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，
他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
,
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to
offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can
participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by
themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will
all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
Writing4【2017·北京卷】
你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你们学校英语报开设了一个“排忧解难”专栏，你的校友Lynn发出
求助，请根据她的来信写封回信：
写信要求：1. 提出你的建议；2. 说明你的理由
I’m a high school student. I want to do some cooking but my parents don’t allow me to
do so. How can change their mind.Dear Lynn,
I’m sorry to hear about your worries and I understand how frustrated you are. Here is some of
my advice on how to convince your parents to allow you to cook.
First of all, communicate is one of the best way to solve a problem. You are supposed to talk to
your parents honestly instead of keeping silent. It would be beneficial to explain to them the reasons why
cooking appeals to you and tell them your feeling of satisfaction when you see the dishes made by
yourself, which will make them empathize with you. Meanwhile, you can make a promise that you are
old enough to take all necessary safety precautions, allaying their concern about your safety. Furthermore,
you can highlight the healthy lifestyle. To live healthily and happily, cooking is a basic skill for teenagers
as homemade food is more delicious and nutritious than takeaway food.
Only then will you avoid arguing with your parents and let you do what you like. I believe patient
conversation will contribute to their understanding.
I hope my suggestions are helpful and you will enjoy cooking soon.
Warm regards,
Li Ming
模拟提升
基础训
Writing1
假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，特发邮件向你征求建议。
请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐一种活动形式；
2. 说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear you plan to organize an activity with the theme of environmental protection. And I’m willing
to offer my advice.
I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. Biking
is familiar to a majority of people, so the race will definitely attract many participants, contributing to spreading the
awareness of environmental protection. Moreover, it’s such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the
green practice.
I hope my idea is helpful and that your event will be a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面属于应用文，新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，要求考生回复一
封邮件，向他推荐一种活动形式并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
①环保：environmental protection → environmental conservation
②鼓励：encourage → inspire/motivate
③绿色出行：green travel → eco-friendly transportation/sustainable commuting
④意识：awareness → consciousness
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And I’m willing to offer my advice.
拓展句：And I’m willing to offer my advice which I hope can be of assistance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well
with the theme. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型 2】Moreover, it’s such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green practice.
(such...that引导的结果状语从句)
Writing 2
假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing
to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can
see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and
management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed.
Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the
viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的
交换生Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想法：idea →opinion
安全：security →safety
因此：therefore →thus确信：convinced →sure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing
to share my ideas with you.
拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China,
I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.
（运用了虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much
appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语）
提升练
Writing3
假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结
成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封
信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
要点：1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charles,
How delighted I am to hear about your new removal! Given your enthusiasm for Chinese culture, I suggest thedesign and decoration of your room embracing Chinese style with elegance.
From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but
also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life.
Additionally, use colors of red, gold and black, associated with Chinese culture, their richness enhancing the warmth
of your space. There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space.
Were it possible, you could combine these elements to create a room reflecting your personal taste. I am sure your
creation will be a masterpiece, a perfect blend of China and the foreign countries.
Eager to see the fruit of your endeavor!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同龄朋友 Charles写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计
的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→joyful
热情：enthusiasm→passion
优雅：elegance→grace
此外：additionally→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：How delighted I am to hear about your new removal!
拓展句：How delighted I am when I hear about your new removal!
【点睛】【高分句型1】From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a
cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving
the pressure of daily life. (运用了not only位于句首的倒装句式和独立主格结构)
【高分句型2】There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space. (运用
了that引导的同位语从句)
Writing4
假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式
存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）说明问题；（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Christine,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Christine,
I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming English handwriting competition.
As scheduled, our submissions are required to be handed in online. This, however, is very likely to cause problems
such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition.
I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a
specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.
I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into account.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教 Christine写封邮件，说明正在筹办校英语书法大赛，
要求学生线上提交作品存在的问题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
要求：require→ request
可能：likely→ probably
减少：reduce→ decrease
考虑：take … into account→ take … into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and ina specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.
拓展句：I consider it a better alternative that all participants should complete and submit their works at a given time
and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works
at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.（不定式
作宾语）
【高分句型2】This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness
of the competition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
