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第三次周练高中英语应用文写作热点话题讲评
第三次周练高中英语应用文写作热点话题讲评五柳学校（原江科附中高复部）2027届第三次英语周练（选自2025重庆一模） 出卷人：邓家荣老师Clark 假设你是明光中学的学生李华，你的英国笔友Mike在邮件中提到，他感觉中国的科技产品在全球越来越有影响力，但了解不多。请你给他写一封回信，与他分享一个你欣赏的中国品牌。 内容包括： 1.简要介绍该品牌及其成就； 2.阐述它带给你的启示。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.请按书信格式作答，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I was so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. You asked me to share one that I truly admire — and Huawei immediately came to mind. As a global leader/pioneer in communication technology, Huawei is not only known for its innovative products but also for its remarkable spirit. What inspires me most is its determination. Even when facing significant challenges, Huawei never gave up on its mission. Its story has taught me that real success comes from facing difficulties with confidence and perseverance, not avoiding them. I believe/sustain brands like Huawei are truly illuminating the world stage. I’m really curious to know what you think! Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生给英国笔友Mike写一封回信，分享一个自己欣赏的中国品牌。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 想到：come to mind → occur to sb. 非凡的：remarkable → extraordinary 激励：inspire → encourage 面对：face → confront be faced with =be confronted with 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：What inspires me most is its determination. 拓展句：It is its determination that inspires me most. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】What inspires me most is its determination. (运用了what引导的主语从句) 【高分句型2】Even when facing significant challenges, Huawei never gave up on its mission. (运用了when引导的省略句) 学生优秀习作展示（高复2班） 
袁文欣同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关） 保留学生原有高级句式：not only倒装、it is universally acknowledged）后：Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. I’m more than delighted to recommend a Chinese brand that I appreciate and share some insights into it with you. First and foremost, it is universally acknowledged that Huawei is a promising brand founded by Chinese people. Moreover, not only does it regard creativity and technological progress as its top priority, but it also attaches great importance to users’ feedback. Furthermore, it enjoys/boasts a bright future thanks to its corporate culture. From my perspective, it is a trustworthy brand delivering high‑quality products and is highly recognized worldwide. I’d appreciate it if you could share your opinions with me. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 
程皓铭同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一：保守修改版（尽量保留学生原有句式，只改错误，适合课堂讲评） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. As Chinese technological products are becoming increasingly influential nowadays, I’m more than pleased to introduce a Chinese car brand to you, named “Beyond Your Dream”, also known as “BYD”. BYD is a car brand focusing on developing new‑energy cars and battery technology. It has broken the monopoly （打破垄断）of foreign brands and become the most popular new‑energy car brand across the world. More importantly, Chinese battery technologies are among the best in the world thanks to BYD’s innovation and efforts. Therefore, I hold the view that I have gained many valuable lessons from BYD. Only by technological innovation and joint efforts can we become stronger and better. What a valuable lesson for me! I hope you can learn more about BYD and other Chinese brands. Yours, Li Hua 版本二：高分优化版（14‑15分，升级高级表达，保留原作文核心立意） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. As Chinese technological products are gaining growing influence worldwide, I’m more than pleased to introduce a Chinese car brand to you — BYD, whose full name is “Beyond Your Dream”. BYD is a car brand focusing on the research and development of new‑energy vehicles and battery technology. It has broken the monopoly of foreign brands and grown into the world’s most popular new‑energy car brand. More importantly, Chinese battery technology ranks among the world’s best, thanks to BYD’s continuous innovation and hard‑won（来之不易的，历经千辛万苦的） efforts. Therefore, I believe I have drawn many meaningful lessons from this brand. Only through technological innovation and joint efforts can we achieve greater progress. It is really a precious lesson for me. I hope you can know more about BYD and other outstanding Chinese brands. Yours, Li Hua 
滕伟豪同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一｜保守修改版（尽量保留学生原有句式，只改错，适合课堂讲评） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. When asked which Chinese brand impresses me most, I hold a firm belief that Xiaomi exerts a profound influence on both the Chinese vehicle industry and the mobile‑phone industry. Aiming to make Chinese brands more influential, Xiaomi serves as a pioneer in integrating its AI technology into electric‑powered vehicles, which drives the rapid development of China’s vehicle industry. While iPhone gains great popularity worldwide, Xiaomi never pauses its pace. Not only does it teach me never to give up, regardless of the fact that how powerful its competitors are, but it also illustrates the wisdom to transform its industry, maintain its flexibility and spark innovation when faced with tough challenges. I hope you can learn more about Xiaomi and other outstanding Chinese brands. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 版本二｜高分优化版（14‑15分，优化句式、替换高级词汇，保留原文全部立意） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. When asked which Chinese brand impresses me most, I firmly believe that Xiaomi exerts a profound influence on both China’s automobile industry and mobile‑phone sector. Aiming to elevate the global influence of Chinese brands, Xiaomi acts as a pioneer by integrating its AI technology into electric vehicles, which fuels the rapid development of China’s automobile industry. While iPhone enjoys widespread popularity across the globe, Xiaomi never slows down its pace. Not only does it inspire me never to give up, no matter how powerful its competitors are, but it also demonstrates the wisdom to reshape its industry, preserve its flexibility and spark innovation when confronted with tough challenges. I hope you can know more about Xiaomi and other remarkable Chinese brands. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 
江嵩同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一｜保守修改版（保留学生全部句式，只修正错误，适合讲评） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. When it comes to Chinese brands, what impresses me most is Xiaomi, a brand starting out as a phone‑selling company. Despite countless failures and difficulties, it manages to overcome them one by one, which lays a solid foundation for its future development. What’s more, Xiaomi was not trapped in the fierce competition of smartphones and cast its eyes on the automobile industry, developing the SUV‑7 successfully. Tough as the situation is, it dares to make an attempt to explore different paths, which enlightens me that only by facing challenges bravely can we overcome them and achieve brilliant victories. Not only Xiaomi but also more and more Chinese brands begin to enter the global market. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 版本二｜高分优化版（14‑15分，升级表达，保留学生核心立意） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. When it comes to Chinese brands, what impresses me most is Xiaomi, which started out as a smartphone manufacturer. Despite numerous setbacks and hardships, it has overcome them one after another, laying a solid foundation for its future growth. What’s more, Xiaomi refused to be confined to the fierce smartphone market. Instead, it turned its attention to the automobile industry and successfully developed the SUV‑7. Tough as the challenges are, it dares to make an attempt to explore new paths. This inspires me that only when we face difficulties bravely can we overcome them and achieve brilliant victories. Not only Xiaomi but also a growing number of Chinese brands are stepping onto the global stage. I hope you can know more about Xiaomi and other outstanding Chinese brands. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 
陈腾同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一｜保守修改版（尽量保留学生原有句式，只改错，适合课堂讲评） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. As far as I’m concerned, what impresses me most is a technological brand, whose name is Huawei. It is the achievements it has made that make it stand out. Not only does Huawei make brilliant progress in technological innovation, but it also enhances our international reputation. Huawei brings plenty of knowledge and wisdom to me, which ignites my passion for technology and strengthens my belief to make a commitment to the development of our country. Only by using technology to make people’s lives more convenient can it achieve its value to the fullest. In conclusion, Huawei is a great brand. If you want to know more about Huawei, feel free to search for information online. Yours, Li Hua 版本二｜高分优化版（14‑15分，优化措辞，保留全部原句亮点） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. As far as I’m concerned, what impresses me most is the tech brand Huawei. It is its remarkable achievements that make it stand out in the world. Not only has Huawei made remarkable progress in technological innovation, but it also boosts China’s international reputation. Huawei has brought me abundant knowledge and inspiration, which fuels my passion for technology and strengthens my resolve to make a commitment to our country’s development. Only by applying technology to improve people’s lives can it realize its full value. In conclusion, Huawei is an outstanding Chinese brand. If you are eager to learn more about it, you can look up relevant information online. Yours, Li Hua 
黄子睿同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一｜保守修改版（最大程度保留学生原有句式，只修正错误，适合课堂讲评） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. As we all know, there are multiple influential brands actively working in the global market. Yet the one I appreciate most is DJI, a promising company focusing on autonomous flight services. It has resisted sanctions from the US and has completely dominated this field thanks to its outstanding technological breakthroughs. Despite its remarkable achievements, what is of greatest importance is its corporate culture and spirit. “Under no circumstance will we give up.” These simple words have inspired it to pull through the darkest times, enlightening us to pursue our targets without sparing any effort. What’s more, knowledge and passion are what make such great companies. We should maintain a positive attitude and pursue these qualities, which are essential for us. I’d appreciate it if you could agree with my opinion and reply to me. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 版本二｜高分优化版（14‑15分，优化表达，保留全部核心立意） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. As we all know, numerous influential Chinese brands are thriving in the global market. Among them, the one I admire most is DJI, a leading enterprise specializing in autonomous flight services. It has withstood sanctions imposed by the US and secured a dominant position in this field, thanks to its extraordinary technological breakthroughs. Despite its outstanding achievements, what matters most is its corporate culture and spirit. “Under no circumstance will we give up.” These simple words have driven it to pull through the toughest periods, inspiring us to chase our goals with all our efforts. Furthermore, such remarkable companies are built on knowledge and passion. We should hold a positive attitude and pursue these precious qualities, which are vital to our growth. I hope you can share your thoughts with me. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 
郑万豪同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一｜保守修改版（保留学生原有句式，只改错，适合课堂讲评） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. Among numerous splendid Chinese brands, Yushu Technology stands out remarkably in the field of technology. Founded by Wangxingxing, an enthusiast for maths and science, this brand focuses on engineering research and development as well as the innovation of all‑round robots, which can mimic human beings and finish various tasks smoothly and accurately. What impresses me most is its breathtaking martial‑arts performance at the Spring Festival Gala in 2026, showcasing spectacular progress in Chinese technology and winning worldwide recognition. In terms of the inspiration it has brought me, I have learned that every achievement comes from diligent work and brilliant creation. Only when we study hard can we make awesome contributions to the development of our country. May this brand arouse your interest in exploring more about China. Yours, Li Hua 版本二｜高分优化版（14‑15分，升级表达，保留全部立意） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. Among numerous outstanding Chinese brands, Yushu Technology shines brightly in the field of technology. Founded by Wangxingxing, a lover of mathematics and science, the company devotes itself to engineering R&D and the innovation of versatile robots, which are capable of imitating human beings and completing diverse tasks with great smoothness and accuracy. What impresses me most is its stunning martial‑arts show at the 2026 Spring Festival Gala. It demonstrates the remarkable advances of Chinese technology and has earned worldwide recognition. As for the inspiration it has given me, I realize that all achievements stem from hard work and creative thinking. Only by working hard can we make remarkable contributions to our country’s development. May this brand spark your interest in learning more about China. Yours, Li Hua 
衷静彤同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一｜保守修改版（保留学生原有句式，只修正错误，适合课堂讲评） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. Among Chinese technological products, what impresses me most is Huawei, a Chinese brand focusing on developing smartphones and other electronic products. Not only does Huawei serve as a practical and convenient choice for people to buy related products, but it also contributes to fostering China’s advanced technological development. Equally worthy of note is that Huawei is almost the only brand to create products on its own, instead of relying too much on technologies originating from other countries. Inevitably, Huawei integrates technological innovation into commercial expansion successfully and effectively. It dawns on me that only when we link our personal ambitions to China’s grand development can we nurture our aspirations and shoulder our responsibilities. Yours, Li Hua 版本二｜高分优化版（14‑15分，优化措辞，保留全部核心立意） Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. Among Chinese technological products, what impresses me most is Huawei, a domestic brand dedicated to developing smartphones and other electronic devices. Not only does Huawei offer people practical and convenient options for purchasing related goods, but it also helps foster China’s high‑tech development. Equally worthy of note is that Huawei is one of the few brands that develop products independently, rather than over‑relying on technologies from overseas. Huawei has successfully integrated technological innovation into its commercial expansion. It dawns on me that only by connecting our personal ambitions with China’s grand development can we nourish our aspirations and shoulder our social responsibilities. Yours, Li Hua 
况力豪同学习作 润色修改后的版本（邓家荣老师Clark 把关 版本一｜保守修改版（保留学生原有句式，只修正错误，适合课堂讲评）Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. Among various Chinese brands, Huawei, as a symbol of China’s development, exerts a profound impact on me. Since Huawei was founded, it has faced threats and challenges from other countries, which intended to restrict its development. Yet under huge pressure, it still sticks to fighting against difficulties and improves its technological capabilities with all its efforts. What impresses me most is that it announced it had cutting‑edge technologies, powerful enough to boost our country and make our lives better. From this, I have learned that we shouldn’t give up when we are faced with difficulties. Instead, we should gather our courage to try again, and we will find ourselves becoming stronger. This is my opinion. I would appreciate it if you could respond to me and share your thoughts. Yours, Li Hua版本二｜高分优化版（14‑15分，优化措辞，保留全部立意）Dear Mike, I am so glad to receive your email and learn about your interest in Chinese brands. Among numerous Chinese brands, Huawei, a symbol of China’s technological development, has left a deep impression on me. Since its establishment, Huawei has encountered threats and challenges from other nations that sought to restrict its growth. Despite enormous pressure, it keeps fighting against hardships and spares no effort to upgrade its technologies. What strikes me most is that it has developed cutting‑edge technologies, which are strong enough to promote national development and improve people’s quality of life. From Huawei’s story, I have learned that we should never surrender to difficulties. Instead, we need to pluck up courage and keep trying, and we will find ourselves growing stronger. That is my view. I would appreciate it if you could share your thoughts with me. Yours, Li Hua