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【冲刺2024高考】高中英语应用文写作
（创新话题命题类）新题速递10
审题+框架搭建+范文+话题表达总结+同话题应用文练习
2024年4月江西南昌二模高三英语应用文
创新点：发帖类、消防演习、分享经历
假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的消防安全演习，请你在校英文论
坛发表一篇帖子，分享此次经历，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.个人感悟。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：消防安全演习 fire safety drill
第一部分 审题
体裁：发帖类
内容：分享上周参加学校组织的消防安全演习经历
人称：第一人称
时态：一般过去时
第二部分 框架搭建
第一段：帖子开头= 报道开头（引出活动）
Last week, I had the opportunity to participate in a fire safety drill organized by
our school, which proved to be an eye-opening and educational experience for me.
句式Last week witnessed my participation in ....
第二段：活动过程过程部分也有两种写法：
①用活动类活动套句：讲座+演习；
②纯演习的过程，更突出细节描写的能力。
【写法1】
演习以一场关于消防安全重要性和火灾期间应遵循的正确程序的信息性讲
座开始。接着我们将分组，每个小组被指派了特定任务，如疏散大楼、灭火或
提供急救。
The drill commenced with an informative lecture on the importance of fire
safety and the proper procedures to follow during a fire. We were then
divided into groups, each of which was assigned a specific task such as
evacuating the building, extinguishing a fire, or administering first aid.
【写法2】
演习以一声突如其来的火警开始，标志着演练的开始。随后，我们被指示
迅速而有序地疏散大楼，使用指定的逃生路线。最重要的是要尽量贴近地面行
动，以避免吸入烟雾。
The drill began with an unexpected fire alarm, signaling the start of the
exercise. We were then instructed to evacuate the building quickly and orderly,
using the designated escape routes. The most important part was to stay low
to the ground to avoid inhaling the smoke.
第三段：个人感悟
Personally, /On a personal level,...
This experience taught me the importance of being prepared and aware of potential
dangers and also emphasized the significance of teamwork and calmness during
emergencies.
Through this experience, I realized that fire safety is not just about knowing what to
do during a fire, but also about taking preventive measures to avoid one.
第三部分 范文
【参考范文】
Last week I participated in a fire safety drill organized by our school, which leftme a deep impression.
We were having a maths class when suddenly the fire safety alarm rang. Under
the guidance of our teacher, we immediately left the classroom. With my hands
covering my mouth, I bent down a bit and ran downstairs quickly on our evacuation
route. Finally we landed on the playground safely within a short time.
The drill not only raised our fire safety awareness but also offered a real scene in
case of a fire, greatly improving our survival skills. I firmly believe that it will truly
save lives in emergencies.
第四部分 话题表达总结
活动目的+活动主题
目的：提高意识：enhance/ strengthen XXX awareness
XXX themed (with) XXX was successfully conducted. 成功开展了以……为主
题的活动。
具体过程
响起警报：The alarm rang/ sounded.
捂住嘴巴，弯腰下楼：With my hands covering my mouth, I bent down a bit
and ran downstairs.
到达：land on/ evacuate to XXX
按照XXX路线：on/ according to XXX route
现场讲解：deliver on-site explanations
展示用法：demonstrate the usage
素材积累： During the drill, the moment the alarm sounded, all students
covering their mouths and noses with wet towels bent down low and promptly
evacuated to a safe area in an orderly manner according to the predetermined
escape route.
活动意义
提高意识：enhance/ strengthen/ raise awareness
提供真实场景：offer real scene提高生存技能：improve survival skills
在紧急情况下：in emergencies
获得必要的（防火）知识和技能 acquire essential (fire prevention) knowledge
and skills
第五部分 同话题应用文练习
【24届江西萍乡二模】
你校最近开展了一次消防演练活动。请你为校英文报写一份主题为“Focus
on Fire Safety, Cherish Life”的新闻报道，内容包括：
1.活动目的；2. 活动过程和感受。
【注意】1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.参考词汇：灭火器 fire extinguishers; 消防栓 fire hydrants
【范文】
In order to enhancethe fire safety awareness and emergency response
capabilities of the students, a fire drill themed “Focus on Fire Safety, Cherish
Life” was successfully conducted in our school.
Initially, professional firefighters were invited todeliver on-site explanations
and demonstrate the correct usage of fire extinguishers and fire hydrants. Then,
during the drill, the moment the alarm sounded, all students covered their
mouths and noses with wet towels bent down low, and promptly evacuated to
a safe area in an orderly manner according to the predetermined escape route.
Through this fire drill, not only did weacquire essential fire prevention
knowledge and skills but our fire safety awareness was further strengthened.
【2023年4月金华十校】
假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校即将组织急救演练，请你用
英文写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点及参与人员；
2. 具体内容；3. 注意事项。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【参考范文】
Announcement for Medical Emergency Drill
Aimed at preparing students for medical emergencies that may arise, a
medical emergency drill is scheduled to be conducted on the school playground
this Friday from 3 p.m. to 4 p.m. All students and staff members are required
to participate.
During the drill, a medical emergency situation will be simulated, where
the participants will act either as first aiders or victims. The focus will be on
providing basic first aid for victims before emergency services arrive, such as
CPR and Heimlich maneuver, which can mean the difference between life and
death.
Please note that all the participants must follow the instructions of the
emergency personnel. Thank you for your cooperation.
