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【冲刺2024高考】高中英语应用文写作
（创新话题命题类）新题速递03
审题+框架搭建+下水文+话题表达总结
2024年2月深圳一模高三英语应用文
创新点：发言、发表观点、网络投票
题目提供了一个现实生活中的情境，即使用网络投票评选校园十佳歌手。
通过引入新颖的主题，学生能够思考并探讨现代技术对社会活动的影响，从而
拓展了他们的视野，从而更好贯彻课标和教材的素养要求。
在口语课上，外教Alex组织同学们讨论是否使用网络投票(online voting)的
方式评选校园十佳歌手。请你代表小组发言，内容包括：1.小组观点；2.陈述理
由。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone!
Thank you for listening!
第一部分 审题
体裁：小组发言（类似演讲稿）
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称（we为主）
交际对象：外教Alex和同学们
进一步审题：该题本质还是议论性质的，在英语的议论文中，通常是一边倒，
要么支持，要么反对，再给出论据，一般是不建议中立。这道题核心还是在于
是否使用网络投票，可能会出现三种情况，一是支持使用派，二是反对使用派，三是线上线下结合派。
第二部分 框架搭建
Paragraph 1 — To state you viewpoint首段一句话简单明了表达观点。
【要点内容】
要点一：小组观点。观点比较简单，支持或反对。这里要注意的是校园十佳歌
手比赛的表达，可以是Top Ten Singers Competition/Contest
语料积累：（注意支持/反对某人和某做法的表达是不同的）
1.支持，赞同某做法可以怎么表达？
2.反对某做法可以怎么表达？
赞同方：
Our group supports the implementation of online voting for the Top Ten
Singers Competition.
反对方：
On behalf of our group, I’d voice our opposition to the proposed
adoption of online voting for the selection of the top ten singers on campus.
以支持为例
Hello, everyone! Our group believes that （网上投
票） is
（一个绝妙的方法）to select the （校园十大
歌手） (阐述本组观点：支持)
Paragraph 2 — To state your case理由可从网络投票本身的特点着手，可分为以
下几点：
支持网络投票
不支持网络投票要点二：陈述理由。赞同即从好处出发，反对即从坏处出发，议论文中还有一
种方法是先扬后抑，先指出某一做法的好处，再找漏洞，用于加强观点论述力
度。
赞同理由：更加便利、没有时间空间限制、快速并实时显示数据、节省线下成
本等等
Online voting provides greater convenience for us, allowing us to participate in the
voting process from any location with internet access, saving time and effort.
反对理由：弊端有容易刷票（因为难以验证身份，所以可以找人刷票或创很多
账号刷票）、投票范围广，人太多，选择和评价不够专业（像我是歌手的舞
台，观众的年龄段横跨几十年，喜好也不同）等。如果选择反对网络投票，可
以在结尾主张传统纸质投票。
Online voting presents a significant risk of cheat. With the anonymity of the internet,
it becomes challenging/tough/sticky to verify the authenticity of votes.
以支持为例
Firstly, it’s important to acknowledge that online voting is
.
______________(方便且每人都可的参加) With just a few clicks on a computer
or a smartphone, we can easily ______________________（投
票)to support our favourite singers. （原因一）Besides, online voting
________________________________________（允许更广泛的接触和参与），
_____________________________________________________________（打破了
地理界限）and enabling more people to participate in the voting process.(原因
二)
Paragraph 3 — To restate your viewpoint
重申观点，总结理由。以支持为例
Overall, we think online voting is a
（便捷且包容的方式）for choosing the top ten campus singers. Thank you for
listening! (总结)
第三部分 下水文&范文
【下水作文1】支持篇
Hello everyone! It’s my privilege to represent my group to deliver our
viewpoint. We believe that online voting to select the top ten campus singers
is a positive practice.
Firstly, online voting increases participation from a wider audience,
ensuring an inclusive and transparent selection process. Compared to traditional
paper votes, it enhances efficiency and convenience by allowing participants to
vote from anywhere with an internet connection. Meanwhile, as it eliminates
the need for paper and printing, it is more environmentally friendly. What’s
more, you may also witness the climax when the real-time results are
unfolded, which further increases the interaction and engagement.
In conclusion, online voting is a practical and effective approach that can
enhance the overall experience for participants and ensure a fairer
outcome.Thank you for listening.
【下水作文2】反对篇
Hello, everyone! On behalf of my group, I’d like to shed some light on
the reasons why we should stick to the traditional way of voting instead of
putting it online regarding the Top Ten Singers Competition.
First and foremost, the inaccessibility to cellphone or computer of high
school students makes it impossible for everyone to vote, while a piece of
paper ticket is highly convenient on campus. Furthermore, the whole activity
will be more compacted and smoother with the result of vote calculated and
announced on the spot. Plus, what can guarantee the fairness of the vote and
eliminate the possibility of repeated votes better than designated staff
overwatching the whole process?To sum up, with all factors considered, we believe that putting the vote
off-line would be a proper choice.
【参考范文一】支持篇
Hello, everyone! Our group believes that online voting is a fantastic idea to select
the top ten campus singers.
Firstly, it’s important to acknowledge that online voting is convenient and
accessible to everyone. With just a few clicks on a computer or a smartphone, we can
easily cast votes to support our favorite singers. Besides, online voting allows for a
wider reach and engagement, breaking down the boundaries of physical locations and
enabling more people to participate in the voting process.
Overall, we think online voting is a convenient and inclusive means for choosing
the top ten campus singers. Thank you for listening!
【参考范文二】反对篇
Hello, everyone! Though online voting is widely used, its drawbacks are
undeniable. Let me share our concerns about using it to select the top ten campus
singers.
Firstly, not all of us have access to the Internet or electronic devices, so the voting
result can not reflect the true preferences of the entire student community. Besides,
cheating is a significant concern. Contestants may create multiple accounts to vote for
themselves or ask for votes from acquaintances. In this way, the voting result fails to
show the contestants’ vocal abilities and stage performance.
Overall, while online voting has its benefits, we should also guarantee the
fairness and reliability of the contest. Thank you for listening!
第四部分 话题表达总结
【关于同意的一些语料素材】
①Online voting allows for a more extensive participation of the student body.
By utilizing digital platforms, every student can easily access and cast their vote,regardless of their schedule or location. This inclusively ensures a broader
representation of opinions and preferences, leading to a more democratic outcome.
②Online voting offers transparency and accuracy in the selection process. The
results are generated electronically, eliminating the possibility of human error or bias.
Additionally, the voting process can be monitored and audited, enhancing
the credibility and integrity of the outcome.
③Online voting promotes convenience and flexibility. It eliminates the need
for physical ballot boxes and paper-based voting procedures, saving time and
resources for both the organizers and the participants. Students can conveniently vote
at their own pace, enhancing the overall efficiency of the selection process.
【关于反对的一些语料素材】
①Online voting may not guarantee fair representation. Not all students have
equal access to digital platforms or may not be adept at using them. This could result
in a skewed representation of the student body's preferences, favoring those who are
more technologically inclined.
②Online voting lacks accountability and transparency. Unlike traditional paper-
based voting methods, online systems are susceptible to hacking, manipulation, and
fraudulent activities. Without proper safeguards in place, there is a risk
of compromising the integrity of the voting process, leading to questionable results.
③Online voting may undermine the spirit of camaraderie and engagement
among students. Physical voting booths provide a communal space for students to
gather, discuss, and participate in the voting process together. By transitioning to
online voting, we lose the interpersonal interactions and sense of
community involvement that are integral to campus events.
