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【冲刺2024高考】高中英语应用文写作
（创新话题命题类）新题速递09
审题+框架搭建+下水文&范文+话题表达总结
2024年5月温州三模英语应用文
创新点：投稿类、当英语遇上艺术、分享活动
你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”(When English Meets The Arts)
系列活动开展征文。请你写一篇短文，分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动，内
容包括：
1. 活动介绍；2. 你的感想
When English Meets The Arts
新颖之处：英文遇上艺术
1. 活动的重点元素必须要有英文和艺术的元素；
2. “遇上”这个动词要求活动内容的安排需要将英文和艺术相结合。
首先是英文，英文可以有英文的诗歌、小说、戏剧、歌曲歌词等内容，所
以我们在写作本文时设计的活动可以和这些元素相关；
然后是艺术，艺术的形式非常多元，摄影、绘画、歌曲演唱创作、戏剧创
作表演、雕塑、服装设计等都是艺术；
以上两个关键词的内容扩充之后，咱们再来进行结合：
1. 英语歌唱比赛English Song Creating Competition
2. 英语绘画比赛English Painting Competition
3. 英语戏剧表演English Drama Show
4. 英语海报设计English Poster Design Competition
5. 英语诗歌鉴赏English Poems Competition
最后，因为本文涉及两个层次的话题，那我们在写“个人感想”的时候也
可以从两个层次入手，既有“英文层次”的感想，也有“艺术层次”的感想，
更高阶的可以将两者结合起来表达。第一部分 审题
1. 文体：活动介绍类短文
2. 话题：英语、艺术
3. 对象：全校师生
4. 人称：第一、第三人称为主
5. 时态：一般过去时、现在完成时为主
第二部分 框架搭建
首段：背景介绍+目的（分享“当英语遇上艺术”活动）
我校英文报最近举办了“当英语遇上艺术”系列活动，我迫不及待和大家
分享我印象最深刻的一项活动。
正文：活动介绍+个人感想
1. 活动介绍
以English Song Creating Competition为例
_________________________(令我印象最深的是)the English Song Creating
Competition.
The competition_______________________________________________________.
(要求参与者用创作英语原创歌词，并且现场演唱）.
_____________________________________________________________________
.(最刺激的环节就是参赛者为了拉票而现场即兴演唱).
What impressed me most was the English Song Creating Competition.
The competition required the participants to write their original lyrics in
English and sang it on the stage.
The most thrilling part was the moment when the participants freestyled to get
more votes.
2. 我的感想
不仅在诗句、歌词中进一步体会了英文之美，还在......中体会了一次美学之旅；
不仅体会了英文戏剧/歌曲创作的趣味，也被同学们的才华折服；
感受到了语言和视觉意象双重的美丽；
3.尾段对这次活动记忆犹新，期待更多活动。
第三部分 下水文&范文
下水文
When English Meets The Arts
In the series of activities held by our school with the theme of "When English
Meets The Arts", I am lucky enough to get involved and expose myself to the unique
charm brought by the combination of English and the arts.
A wide range of activities, such as English poetry recitation, English song singing
and English drama performance, made it accessible for us to feel the beauty of
English rhythm with exposure to the arts. What impressed me most, however, was the
English drawing and hand-copying. Under the guidance of my teacher, I combined
English learning with my drawing skills, therefore creating an exquisite and
imaginative work.
This activity provided me with an opportunity to learn through interest, enabling
me to draw a work with my own insight into English and the arts.
当英语遇上艺术
在我校举办的“当英语遇上艺术”系列活动中，我有幸亲身参与并深刻体
验到了英语与艺术融合所带来的独特魅力。
英语诗歌朗诵、英语歌曲演唱和英语话剧表演等一系列活动让我们得以在
艺术的熏陶中感受英语的韵律之美。而让我印象最深刻的活动是英语绘画手抄
报制作。我在老师的指导下，将英语所学与绘画技巧相结合，创作出一幅富有
想象力的精美作品。
这次活动给我提供了一个在兴趣中享受学习的机会，让我用画笔描绘出对
英语和艺术的独特理解。
参考范文1
When English Meets The Arts
The "When English Meets The Arts" series recently held by our school
encompassed various engaging activities. However, the one that left the most indelible
mark on me was the "Poetry Slam in English". In this event, participants wereencouraged to compose and perform their original poems in English, with
performances judged on both content and delivery.
The raw emotion and creativity displayed during these performances were truly
awe-inspiring. It was fascinating to see how English, a language that many of us learn
as a second language, could be so powerfully used to express deep feelings and
innovative ideas. This experience not only enhanced my appreciation for the art of
poetry but also deepened my love for the English language.
Witnessing my peers bravely sharing their works, I felt a strong sense of
community and was reminded of the beautiful ways in which language and art can
intersect to create something truly meaningful.
我校最近举办的“当英语与艺术相遇”系列活动，内容丰富多彩。然而，
给我留下最不可磨灭的印记是“英语诗歌大满贯”。在这次活动中，参与者被
鼓励用英语创作和表演他们的原创诗歌，并根据内容和表达进行评判。
在这些表演中表现出的原始情感和创造力确实令人敬畏。看到英语这种我
们很多人作为第二语言来学习的语言，是如何被如此有力地用来表达深刻的感
情和创新的想法的，真是令人着迷。这次经历不仅提高了我对诗歌艺术的欣
赏，也加深了我对英语语言的热爱。
看到我的同龄人勇敢地分享他们的作品，我感到一种强烈的社区意识，并
提醒我语言和艺术可以以美丽的方式相交，创造出真正有意义的东西。
参考范文2
When English Meets The Arts
The "When English Meets The Arts" series of activities at our school was a
wonderful fusion of language learning and artistic expression. Among the various
events, one that left a lasting impression on me was the Poetry Slam.
During the Poetry Slam, students showcased their creativity by reciting original
poems in English. It was a powerful platform for self-expression and allowed students
to explore different themes and emotions. The event was filled with passion, rhythm,
and heartfelt performances.
Personally, I was amazed by the students' ability to convey their thoughts andfeelings through poetry in a language that is not their first. It was inspiring to witness
their confidence and growth in using English to articulate their innermost thoughts.
The Poetry Slam showcased the transformative power of language and the arts,
allowing students to connect with others on a deeper level.
Overall, the "When English Meets The Arts" series highlighted the importance of
incorporating creative elements into language learning. It showed that language is not
just about grammar and vocabulary, but a means to express oneself and connect with
others. The Poetry Slam was a beautiful reminder that language learning can be both
educational and deeply meaningful.
我校举办的“当英语与艺术相遇”系列活动是语言学习与艺术表达的完美融
合。在各种各样的活动中，给我留下深刻印象的是诗歌大满贯。
在“诗歌大满贯”活动中，学生们朗诵了英文原创诗歌，展示了他们的创
造力。这是一个强大的自我表达平台，让学生探索不同的主题和情感。整个活
动充满了激情、节奏和发自内心的表演。
就我个人而言，我对学生们用一种不是他们第一次使用的语言通过诗歌表
达思想和情感的能力感到惊讶。看到他们用英语表达自己内心深处的想法，我
感到很鼓舞。诗歌大满贯展示了语言和艺术的变革力量，让学生们在更深层次
上与他人联系。
总的来说，“当英语与艺术相遇”系列强调了将创造性元素融入语言学习
的重要性。它表明语言不仅仅是语法和词汇，而是一种表达自我和与他人联系
的手段。诗歌大满贯是一个美丽的提醒，语言学习既可以教育和深刻的意义。
参考范文3
The "When English Meets The Arts" series, recently held at our school, was a
vibrant fusion of language and creativity. Among the activities, the "Poetry Slam"
particularly struck a chord with me.
In this event, students crafted and performed poems in English, emphasizing not
just linguistic fluency but also emotional expression and artistic performance.
Watching my peers boldly share their stories, weaving words with such passion and
vulnerability, was deeply inspiring. It underscored the power of English as a global
language not just for communication but as a medium for art and personal expression.This event truly expanded my perspective on the versatility and beauty of
English.
最近在我校举办的“当英语与艺术相遇”系列活动是语言与创意的生动融
合。在这些活动中，“诗歌大满贯”尤其引起了我的共鸣。
在这次活动中，学生们用英语创作和表演诗歌，不仅强调语言流利，而且
强调情感表达和艺术表现。看着我的同龄人大胆地分享他们的故事，用如此热
情和脆弱的语言编织，我深受鼓舞。它强调了英语作为一种全球语言的力量，
不仅用于交流，而且作为艺术和个人表达的媒介。
这次活动确实扩大了我对英语的多样性和美丽的看法。
第四部分 话题表达总结
各类活动的表述
1. 英语歌唱比赛English Song Creating Competition
2. 英语绘画比赛English Painting Competition
3. 英语戏剧表演English Drama Show
4. 英语海报设计English Poster Design Competition
5. 英语诗歌鉴赏English Poems Competition
with the theme of以...为主题；
expose oneself to使某人接触/体验某事；
a wide range of一系列的；
... make it accessible for sb to do sth使某人可以做某事，其中it是形式宾语
结构；
with exposure to接触，引申为“在...的熏陶下”；
What impressed me most was ...最让我印象深刻的是...，其中what引导出定语
从句；
learn through interest在兴趣中学习；
insight into...的理解。
