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押天津卷 题
书面表达
核心考点 考情统计 考向预测 备考策略
1. 审题立意
考生要认真阅读写作要求中提供的信息，分析
所给的写作素材，确定所写文章的体裁及整体
内容，并确定要用的人称和时态。
2. 罗列要点
书信体应用文
【2023 年第二
书面表达评分标准之一是覆盖所有内容要点。
次】 2024年高考天津卷还会集
高考英语书面表达多数会提供写作要点，通过
中考查书信体应用文，也
申请信 审题，要将这些要点用提纲的形式在草稿纸上
有可能出现征文投稿等其
罗列好。
【2023 年第一 它问题。命题类型仍然属
次】 于半开放性，写作信息点 3. 连句成篇
明确具体，让考生发挥自
解释信 确定了文章的整体布局、基本时态和人称后，
己的逻辑辩证思维进行写
要根据所列出的内容要点选择适当的词语组合
作。
【2022年第二 成句，再结合自己设想的内容框架组成段落。
次】 在组织文章内容时，要在句与句之间加入恰当
的过渡性词语进行润色，以使内容连贯，结构
短视频文字稿
紧凑。
征文投稿
4. 修改完善
写完文章后一定要仔细检查。首先检查文章是
否包括全部要点，然后再检查语言方面是否有
错误，如单词拼写、词语搭配、人称、时态、
语态、主谓一致、句式、从句的引导词、标点
符号、大小写等。
Writing 1
【2023年天津第二次】假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中
英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，
拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：
(1)申请参加本次活动；(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
参考词汇：中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am
writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and
painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese
culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making
Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let
them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强
中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：(1)申请参加本次活动；(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
参加：take part in→participate in
有助于：be conducive to→contribute to
促进、推动：promote→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.
拓展句：I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for
taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional
Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定
语从句)
【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with
Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首引起的部分倒装)
Writing 2
【2023年天津第一次】假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中
向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件：
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思；
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子；
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇：活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you.____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours;
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you. I'm glad that you're interested in the expression “活雷锋”. In Chinese, “活雷锋”
means a person who is kind, helpful, and selfless, just like the legendary hero Lei Feng. This expression is used to
describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return.
To give you an example, let me introduce you to Zhang Jian, a student from our school. Zhang Jian is known
as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone
is in need. Whether it's helping a classmate with their studies, assisting a teacher with classroom duties, or
volunteering for community services, Zhang Jian is always there to lend a hand.
I encourage you to continue your study of Chinese language. I wish you all the best in your studies and hope to
hear more from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上
周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。
【详解】1.词汇积累
期待：expect→anticipate
提供帮助：lend a hand→give a hand
高兴的：glad→delighted
继续：continue→carry on with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one
to offer help when someone is in need.
拓展句：Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers because he is always thefirst one to offer help when someone is in need.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to
others without expecting anything in return. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
Writing 3
【2022年天津第二次】假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社
团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请；
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join
us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic
English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in
learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot
of friends.
Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，并介绍
口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】
1.词汇积累机会：chance →opportunity
参加：participate in →take part in →join in
愉快的：enjoyable →joyful
激发：stimulate →motivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club activities have benefited me a lot.
拓展句：The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We are looking forward to having you in the club!（运用了动名词作宾语）
【高分句型2】I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
（运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构）
秘籍01高分句式
1. 倒装句，分为完全倒装和部分倒装，
** 错误的表达式 **．Only+介词短语+can sb do sth.只有这样sb才能做某事。
Only in this way can we broaden our horizens.只有这样我们才能拓宽我们的视野。
** 错误的表达式 **．Only+时间状语从句，will sb do sth.
Only when we make progress each day， will we achieve a splendid future.每天进步一点点，将来幸福一天
天。
2.分词结构，用现在分词/过去分词做状语。
现在分词doing表主动 V-ing+介词短语，简单句.
Studying at the hometown, I enjoyed the happiest time during my life.
过去分词done表被动 adv +done +by +sb/sth , 简单句。
Deeply moved by the film, we all cried.被这部电影深深地感动，我们所有人都哭了。
3.被动结构：be+done。
The fact cannot be ignored that+简单句。不容被忽视的事实是……
eg：The fact cannot be ignored that you are the best.不容被忽视的事实是你是最棒的。
The fact cannot be ignored that this phenomenon will have long-term and far-reaching influence on people.事实是
不容忽视的，这种现象将长期对人影响深远。
4.定语从句。
** 错误的表达式 **简单句，which is of great importance. ……,这是很重要的。
The deadline is the next Sunday, which is of great importance.截止日期是下周日，这一点很重要。** 错误的表达式 **Anyone who is interested in (doing) sth is welcome to do sth. 任何对……感兴趣的人都
欢迎。
Anyone who is interested in playing basketball is welcome to join us.任何对打篮球感兴趣的人都可以加入我
们。
** 错误的表达式 **简单句(以物结尾即可)，which do/does/will do sth.
There will be an exhibition on paper-cutting in our school, which will start on June 21 and last for a week.在我们
学校将会有一场剪纸展览，将从6月21号开始并持续一个周。
另外，宾语从句也比较受欢迎，比如同学们要写“我觉得做某事怎样……”就可以使用——
I believe/deem that sb (can/should/will…) do sth.
I believe that you can learn a lot from this book.我相信你可以从这本书中学的许多。
虚拟语气堪称杀手锏式的语法，但是很多同学只知道它是一种虚拟的不太可能变成现实的语气。其实你们
知道这一点就够了，记住下面这个结构就可以实际操作：
If I were you, I would （not）do sth.如果我是你的话，我就（不）会做某事。
If I were you, I would fall in love with this idol（偶像）. 如果我是你的话，我会和这位“爱豆”掉到爱河里
去的。
秘籍02高分模板
应用文阅读材料包含的某一方面的信息非常全面，能满足各种人对信息的需求，但在试题中，常常是
就某一点提问，以细节理解题为主，考生完全没有必要从头到尾全部仔细阅读，因为材料中有很多冗余无
效信息。做此类题时，宜采用＂题干定位法＂，即先阅读题干，然后根据问题要求，按照题目顺序依次有
针对性地结合题干关键词到文中定位答案范围，阅读相关部分，快速寻找有效信息，再把原文和选项相比
较。问题与材料相同→对号入座；问题与原文相同→同义替换、归纳事实等。
一、建议信
Dear ,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to ,and I will try to make some conductive suggestions
here.In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions: (建议的内容).I hope you
will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck
with your (祝愿)!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
二、求职信
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in (报纸名称)of (广告发布时
间).Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a (工作名
称).On the one hand, (第一个原 因).On the other hand, (另一个原因).Should you grant me a
personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me
at any time at (电话号码).Thank you for considering my application,and I am looking forward to meeting
you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
三、投诉(抱怨)信
Dear ,
I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.The reason for my dissatisfaction is
(总体介绍).
In the first place, (抱怨的第一个方面).In addition, (抱怨的第二个方面).Under thesecircumstances,the devastating effect could be multiplied if this problem cannot be immediately solved.(如该问题不
能立即解决,它将产生更坏影响).I would appreciate it very much if you could (提出建议和请
求),preferably (进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by (设定解决
事情的最后期限).
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
四、邀请信
Dear ,
(开门见山提出事件/活动、地点、时间).It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.During the
party/conference,we will have lots of activities you will be interested in.First, (要举行的活动内容
一).
Second, ( 要 举 行 的 活 动 内 容 二 ).I know/believe that you will be very interested in
.First/For one thing, (受邀请人参加的理由一).Second/For another, (受邀请人参加的理
由 二 ).The party/conference would not be complete without you! The party/conference will begin at
(时间)and we do hope you can come.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
五、请求信
Dear ,
I am writing to formally request to (请求的内容).The reason for is that (给出原
因).I ,so I (给出细节).I would also like to request (提出进一步的要求).I am
sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any
questions,do not hesitate to contact me at (电话号码).I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
六、道歉信
Dear ,
I am sorry to say/tell you that (直接说出道歉事由).Now,I am writing you this letter of apology
to show my deep regret.Please accept my sincere apology.I hope you will understand me and excuse me for
(请
求对方原谅的事由).The reason for my delay/absence was that (过失的原因 ).I had no way out
because (自己当时的处境和情况).Therefore,it’s not in my power to (过失导致的结
果).Naturally,I want to suggest (提出建议).I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when
and where you (约定下次见面的时间和地点).We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
七、感谢信
Dear ,
I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for (感谢事由).I’d like you to know
how much you meant to me.You have a positive genius for (对收信人某一方面的赞美).I not only
enjoyed
,but also .I shall ever remember as one of the most in my life.I will feel
very honored and pleased if you (表达自己回报的心愿).I am looking forward to seeing you next time!
I repeat my thanks again for your .Please give my kind regards to your .Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
八、询问信
Dear ,
I am (自我介绍).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to pro-vide me with information regarding
(要询问的内容).First of all,what is (第一个问题)?Secondly,when will (第二个问题)?
Thirdly,is (第三个问题)?I would also like to inquire (将最重要的问题单独说明).Could you be kind
to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt
attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
九、祝贺信
Dear ,
I have learned with delight that you (祝贺事由).I would like to extend you my utmost congratulations
on .You must be .And I feel very happy for you. (所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news! I
know this is surely owing to (被祝贺人过去的努力).It is a reward you richly deserve for your (被
祝贺人的优点).Kindly let me know when you (咨询对方何时有空).I hope (表达自己的愿望).
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
Writing 1
【2024届天津市和平区一模】假设你是李津。你的英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下
周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福（a blessing in misfortune）”和
“揠苗助长（To pull up the seedings to help them grow）”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写
信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下。
1．鼓励他积极参与：
2．提供帮助（如解释成语的意义，举一些事例，你给予的演讲建议等）
3．表达美好的祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数不少100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I think you should
actively engage in it. And I am writing to encourage you to get prepared and go for it!
Regarding the topic of the speech, the idiom “a blessing in misfortune” means that sometimes we lose
something, but we may get better returns in other aspects, while another one means sometimes simply being eager
for success will only make things worse. But as for the speech, I do suggest you share some examples or personal
experiences, which can show your understanding of the language and also your life here in China. In addition, pay
attention to your pronunciation, and try to make your speech clear and understandable. What I strongly recommend
is to share your personal journey, or similar expressions in your culture, which will not only make your speech
more authentic, but will also arouse the interest of your audience.
Finally, I sincerely wish you good results in the competition. Most importantly, enjoy yourself!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办
的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福”和“揠苗助长”这两个成语中任选一个完成
一篇演讲。Chris特写信向考生求助，要求考生按照要求给他回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：consider→ think about
参与：participate in→ join in
积极地：actively→ positively
方面：aspect→ way2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I think you should
actively engage in it.
拓展句：Because I hear that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I think you
should actively engage in it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I
think you should actively engage in it.（运用了现在分词Hearing作状语、that引导的宾语从句、省略引导词
that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】What I strongly recommend is to share your personal journey, or similar expressions in your
culture, which will not only make your speech more authentic, but will also arouse the interest of your audience.
（运用了What引导的主语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句）
Writing 2
【2024届天津市河北区一模】假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友
好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委
会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：
（1）描述照片的内容；
（2）说明选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。
参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬Green Campus, Flying Youth
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, a student from Chenguang High School. With the World Earth Day approaching, I am thrilled to
participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Youth” photography exhibition to be held online by our school and our
British sister school.
I would like to submit a photo that features a group of students planting trees with enthusiasm on a sunny
afternoon. I choose this photo because it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and
caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
I sincerely hope that my photo will be selected for the exhibition. It would be an honor to have my work
displayed with the other outstanding entries and to contribute to the global effort of promoting environmental
awareness. Thank you for considering my submission.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封信来推荐照片，描述照片的内容，说明选择该照片的
理由，表达对该照片入选的愿望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
参加：participate in→take part in
提交：submit→hand in
对……做贡献：contribute to→make contributions to
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I choose this photo because it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and
caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
拓展句：The reason why I choose this photo is that it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental
protection efforts and caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the World Earth Day approaching, I am thrilled to participate in the “GreenCampus, Flying Youth” photography exhibition to be held online by our school and our British sister school.(使用
了With复合结构、不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】It would be an honor to have my work displayed with the other outstanding entries and to
contribute to the global effort of promoting environmental awareness. (使用了It作形式主语且不定式作真正主
语的句型、have sth. done结构)
Writing 3
【2024届天津市河西区一模】假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来
校访问，希望了解中国传统节日。请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。
内容要点：
1. 表示欢迎：
2. 介绍元宵节（至少包括两点）；
3. 邀请他们参加元宵节活动。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
元宵节The Lantern Festival
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【答案】Good morning, dear friends.
I am Li Jin, Chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang high school. On behalf of our school, I’m here to
extend our warmest welcome to you all. Since the Lantern Festival is around the corner, I’d like to take this
opportunity to talk about this important festival.
The Lantern Festival falls on the 15th day of the lst lunar month. During the festival, lanterns of various
shapes and sizes are hung in the streets and “Guessing lantern riddles” is an interesting part of the festival. Peoplealso enjoy eating yuanxiao, which helps to unite their families in a joyful atmosphere during the festival.
Meanwhile, there are performances such as dragon dances and lion dances, attracting lots of visitors.
Recently, there has been a Lantern Show in the Water Park. We’ll invite you to enjoy it tonight. Wish you have
a good time.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日，要
求考生一篇发言稿欢迎他们，并向他们介绍元宵节，邀请他们参加元宵节活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表示：extend→express
机会：opportunity→chance
各种各样的：various→kinds of
重要的：important→significant
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, there are performances such as dragon dances and lion dances, attracting lots of visitors.
拓展句：Meanwhile, performances such as dragon dances and lion dances take place, which attract a large number
of visitors.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Since the Lantern Festival is around the corner, I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about
this important festival.(as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]People also enjoy eating yuanxiao, which helps to unite their families in a joyful atmosphere during
the festival.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Writing 4
【2024届天津市红桥区一模】假定你是学生会主席李华，你校的交换生Bob已学习中国象棋长达一年，特
发邮件向你询问将由学生会举办的中国象棋大赛的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．举办比赛的目的；
2．比赛的时间和地点；
3．建议他报名参加并说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国象棋大赛Chinese Chess Contest____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Dear Bob，
Delighted that you are interested to know about the Chinese Chess Contest to be held by the Students' Union,
I'm writing to inform you of some relevant information.
Aimed at raising students' awareness of traditional Chinese culture and developing students' love for Chinese
chess, the contest will be held at the Student Center on September 8th. Since you have learned to play Chinese chess
for a year, I suggest that you should participate in the contest. I am convinced that your participation will surely
make a difference.Through the contest, not only can you improve your skills of playing Chinese chess but also you
can make friends with other excellent players.
If you need further information, please don’t hesitate to contact me. I'm expecting to see you in the contest and
it is my belief that you will perform well. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生回复交换生Bob关于学校举办中国象棋大赛的情况。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般将来时和一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1．举办比赛的目的；
2．比赛的时间和地点；
3．建议他报名参加并说明理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted that…/ inform sb. of sth./ be aimed at/ awareness/ suggest that sb. should do sth./ make a difference/
not only…but also…/ make friends with sb./ hesitate to do sth./ expect to do sth./ look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.Delighted that you are interested to know about the Chinese Chess Contest to be held by the Students' Union, I'm
writing to inform you of some relevant information.2.Aimed at raising students' awareness of traditional Chinese culture and developing students' love for Chinese
chess, the contest will be held at the Student Center on September 8th.
3.Since you have learned to play Chinese chess for a year, I suggest that you should participate in the contest.
4.I am convinced that your participation will surely make a difference.
5.Through the contest, not only can you improve your skills of playing Chinese chess but also you can make friends
with other excellent players.
6.If you need further information, please don't hesitate to contact me.
7.I'm expecting to see you in the contest and it is my belief that you will perform well.
8.Looking forward to your reply.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Since you have learned to play Chinese chess for a year, I suggest
that you should participate in the contest.中since引导原因状语从句，that引导宾语从句；I'm expecting to see
you in the contest and it is my belief that you will perform well.中that引导同位语从句。
Writing 5
【2024届天津市宁河区一模】假设你是红星中学学生李津。暑假期间，你市将举行三个以唐诗、书法和戏
剧为主题的文化活动。届时，你的英国朋友Jason将到你市旅游。请你为他推荐三个活动之一并发一封e-
mail回复。
（1）对Jason来中国表示欢迎。
（2）推荐的活动及理由。
注意：（1）词数不少于100字；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：唐诗（Tangpoems）剪纸（Paper-cutting）
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【答案】Dear Jason,
Welcome to China! （欢迎）
I’m glad that you’ll spend your summer holiday here in Tianjin. There will be three activities themed Tang
poems, paper cutting and calligraphy on display. And of the three, I recommend paper cutting to you.
The first reason is that you are intrigued in traditional Chinese culture, and paper cutting is a symbol of it. By
taking part in the activity, you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture. What’s more, paper cutting is an
art form that features lively colors and shapes. Experts is scheduled to illustrate how to make figures out of paper
and you can master the handcraft on spot. What matters most is that you can make friends with people who share
the same interest in the activity.
Hope my recommendation can be of some help for you to have a good holiday in Tianjin.
Yours
Lijin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jason写封e-mail，为他推荐以唐诗、书法和戏剧
为主题的文化活动之一。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
专家：expert→specialist
重要：matter→count
参加：take part in→participate in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There will be three activities themed Tang poems, paper cutting and calligraphy on display.
拓展句：There will be three activities whose themes are Tang poems, paper cutting and calligraphy on display.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The first reason is that you are intrigued in traditional Chinese culture, and paper cutting
is a symbol of it. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】What matters most is that you can make friends with people who share the same interest in the
activity. (运用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句)
Writing 6【2024届天津市十二区县重点学校联考一模】假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你有一位英国好友Jim，
他告诉你他最近经常使用Chatgpt（一款人工智能的语言类软件）来完成他的学习任务，比如写演讲稿和实
验报告。他问你是否愿意使用这类人工智能来完成学习任务，你写给他一封E-mail，主要内容包括：
1. 你是否愿意让人工智能替你完成学习任务及其原因。
2. 你在生活中是怎样利用高科技产品的。
3. 祝愿Jim学业进步。
注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
词汇提示：
人工智能：AI (Artificial Intelligence) 高科技产品：high-tech products
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Jim,
I heard that you often use ChatGPT to assist in your learning tasks, and I would like to share my thoughts on
this matter.
Personally, I am not inclined to use artificial intelligence to help do my learning tasks. While its efficiency and
accuracy are indeed impressive, we can gain a deeper understanding of knowledge only by learning independently.
In my daily life, I actively embrace high-tech products as well. They make it possible for me to access
information, learn new things, and stay connected with friends anytime, anywhere. At the meantime, I don’t let
them control my life by setting a fixed time for using them.
Finally, I wish you all the best in your academic journey. I am confident that with your dedication and hard
work, you will achieve excellent results.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Jim写一封电子邮件，告诉他你是否愿意让人工智能替自己完成学习任务及其原因、在生活中是怎样利用高科技产品的、并祝愿Jim学业进步。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
帮助：assist→help
倾向于：be inclined to do...→tend to do.../have a tendency to do...
独立：independently→on one’s own
与……保持联系：stay connected with→keep in touch with
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In my daily life, I actively embrace high-tech products as well. They make it possible for me to access
information, learn new things, and stay connected with friends anytime, anywhere.
拓展句：In my daily life, I actively embrace high-tech products as well, which make it possible for me to access
information, learn new things, and stay connected with friends anytime, anywhere.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While its efficiency and accuracy are indeed impressive, we can gain a deeper
understanding of knowledge only by learning independently. (使用了while引导让步状语从句、动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】They make it possible for me to access information, learn new things, and stay connected with
friends anytime, anywhere. (使用了make it possible for sb. to do...结构)
Writing 7
【2024届天津市十二区县重点校高三一模】假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校将在即将到来的全国
爱眼日（6月6日）举办爱眼护眼活动。你的英国朋友Chris对此感兴趣，并询问相关事宜。请你写一封回
信进行介绍。
内容包括：
1. 活动目的：2. 活动安排(讲座、义诊等)：3. 期待活动达到预期效果，并取得圆满成功。
参考词汇：
全国爱眼日 National Eye Care Day 眼科专家eye specialist
义诊 conduct a free clinic event 近视 short-sightedness
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文流畅。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you these days? Learning that you pay more attention to the activities concerning National Eye Care
Day in our school, I’m delighted to share with you a brief introduction.
With the purpose of evoking students’ passion for protecting their eyes, several activities will be conducted on
June 6th. To start with, a lecture entitled “Take good care of eyes and prevent short-sightedness” will be delivered by
a famous eye specialist. It, I hope, is bound to wake up the students’ awareness of protecting their eyes.
Additionally, some eye doctors and nurses will be invited to conduct a free clinic event to help the students get a
better understanding of their eye health.
I do hope events of this year will produce a positive effect on us students, encouraging them to do eye exercise
on a daily basis and break bad eye care habits, such as prolonged screen time and inadequate reading lights. May
the activities succeed.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校将在即将到来的全国爱眼日（6
月6日）举办爱眼护眼活动。你的英国朋友Chris对此感兴趣，并询问相关事宜，要求考生写一封回信进
行介绍。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
活动：activity→event
高兴的：delighted→glad
首先：to start with→firstly
影响：effect→influence
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the purpose of evoking students’ passion for protecting their eyes, several activities will be conducted
on June 6th.
拓展句：Several activities, which aim to evoke students’ passion for protecting their eyes, will be conducted on
June 6th.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that you pay more attention to the activities concerning National Eye Care Day in
our school, I’m delighted to share with you a brief introduction.(that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]I do hope events of this year will produce a positive effect on us students, encouraging them to do eye
exercise on a daily basis and break bad eye care habits, such as prolonged screen time and inadequate reading
lights.(省略that的宾语从句以及do加动词原形的强调句)
