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Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet?
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“文学、艺术与体育”这一主题群，涉及子主
题有“中外文学史上有代表性的作家和作品；中外影视、戏剧、音乐、舞蹈、绘画、建筑等艺术形
式中的文化价值和作品赏析”等。常见的写作任务是分享最喜欢的书籍、音乐、电影等，分享读书
的好处、好书推荐、名著读后感、读后续写等。体裁多为书信、图表类应用文、说明文或议论文
等。
【写作技巧】
本单元以“文学与音乐”为话题，要求写关于一位作家、一本书或一名歌手、一个乐队的短文。写作
体裁多为记叙文，时态多为一般现在时或现在完成时。写作时首先要点名你想写的人、物或事，然后
阐明其具体情况，一般在结尾时要表达出自己的观点或感受。
【作文思维导图】
【单元素材积累】必背句型
◆开头句
①Reading can give us fun and knowledge.
②Now she has become one of the most successful writers in the world.
③I enjoy reading different kinds of books，and my favorite book is Journey to the West.
◆中间句
①I like them because I can find out what's going on in ancient China and the world.
②The story was so amazing that I couldn't put it down until I finished reading it.
③This book teaches me never to give up when I am in trouble.
◆结尾句
①I hope that everyone can read more books to make his or her life more colorful and meaningful.
②All in all，the book not only gives me a lot of fun but also tells me what to do when I am in
trouble.
③Let's go into the world of books together to find the treasure of knowledge and the beauty of life.
◆谚语积累
①There is no end to learning.学无止境。
②One is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
如何介绍自己最喜欢的一本书
写作任务
下周你所在的英语俱乐部要求会员们分享自己最喜欢的一本书。请写一篇英语短文为该
活动做准备。
【审清题目】
内容：介绍你最喜欢的一本书。文体：说明文。
人称：第一人称和第三人称。
时态：以一般现在时为主。
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】（以下表格以《西游记》和《绿山墙的安妮》为例，展示如何搜集所需语言素
材）
◆常用词块 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。
书名 Journey to the West Anne of Green Gables
作者 Wu Cheng'en Lucy Maud Montgomery
Tang Seng and his three disciples (徒 Anne, an 11-year-old orphan
主要人物 弟) — Sun Wukong, Zhu Bajie and Sha (孤儿), Matthew and his
Wujing sister, Marilla
need help on the farm, want
travel west to India to find Buddhist
to adopt (收养) a boy, get to
scriptures (佛经), (1)_____________(经
the farm by mistake, work
历许多困难), get over these difficulties,
hard, (3)_____________(照
主要内容 (2)_____________(齐心协力), finally
顾Anne), think of Anne as a
reach / arrive in / get to India, bring back
daughter, be popular with
Buddhist scriptures to Chang'an, the
her teachers and classmates,
capital (首都) of the Tang Dynasty
become a teacher
grow up to be a happy and
follow my dream(s), achieve / realize my useful person, learn to love
喜欢的理
dream(s), (4)_____________(永不放 the things that make me
由
弃), be brave to face difficulties ... special, value (重视) love
and friendship ...
Key: 1. experience / go through many / a lot of / lots of difficulties 2. work together3. look after / care for / take care of Anne 4. never give up
◆常用句型
1. My favorite book is ...
2. The book (that / which) I like best is ...
3. ... was written by ...
4. ... is a novel written by ...
5. The book tells the story of ...
6. I love / like this book because ...
7. From it, I have learned (that) ...
8. I can not only ... but also ...
9. The book tells me that ...
10. ... is really worth (值得) reading.
【谋篇布局】
将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。
▶点明“我”最喜欢的书及其作者
My favorite book is Anne of Green Gables. It was written
by Lucy Maud Montgomery.
▶介绍该书的主要人物和主要内容
It tells the story of Anne, an 11-year-old orphan. She is
sent to Matthew and his sister Marilla's farm by mistake.
Although Matthew and Marilla want to adopt a boy
instead of a thin girl like Anne,
(1)__________________________(他们决定留下她).
From then on, Anne has a home at Green Gables.
My favorite (2)__________________________(Anne 和那儿的人
book 不同), but her independent spirit and rich imagination
win the people's hearts. Matthew and Marilla think of
Anne as a daughter. Anne works hard and
(3)__________________________(在学校里交很多朋
友). She is popular with her teachers and classmates.
When she grows up, she becomes a teacher.
▶陈述喜欢该书的理由
I love this book because
(4)__________________________(它教我成长为一个
快乐而有用的人). From it, I have learned that I should
learn to love the things that make me special.
Key:1. they decide to keep her
2. Anne is different from the people there
3. makes lots of / a lot of / many friends at school
4. it teaches me to grow up to be a happy and useful person
范文剖析
4月 23 日为世界读书日（World Reading Day）。你们学校开展了“Share Books to
Spread Happiness”的主题活动。请根据以下通知要求，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈你
对读书的看法，并鼓励更多的人参与读书。
World Reading Day is coming!
●Do you like reading?Why?What kind of books do you like
best?Why do you like them?What can you learn from them?
●What's your hope about reading?
Share with us!
►►审题指导
1.文体:议论文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态：一般现在时
►►思路点拨
►►范文赏析Share Books to Spread Happiness
April 23th is World Reading Day.Reading can give us fun and knowledge.① It can
open our minds and make us cleverer and happier.② If we read more,we will learn more
and have a brighter future.
As for me,I like books about history. I like them because I can find out what's going
on in ancient China and the world.③Also,when I'm reading history,I feel like I was talking
to a wise man.④I understand more historical stories and become a better person by reading
history.
I hope that everyone can read more books to make his or her life more colorful and
meaningful.⑤Let's start reading now.
Share Books to Spread Happiness 升格技巧
April 23th is World Reading Day. Reading can 技巧一：巧用
give us fun and knowledge.① It can not only open our
not only…but also…句型
minds,but also make us cleverer and happier. The more
升格①
we read,the more we will learn and the brighter future we
will have. 技巧二：巧用
As for me,I like books about history. I like them “ the+ 比 较 级 … ，
because I can find out what's going on in ancient China the+比较级…”句型升格
and the world.③ What's more（而且）,when I'm reading ②
history,I feel like I was talking to a wise man.④ As a
技巧三：巧用
result （ 结 果 ） ,I understand more historical stories and
become a better person by reading history. 衔接短语升格
I hope that everyone can read more books to make
③④
his or her life more colorful and meaningful.⑤One is never 技巧四：巧用谚语升格⑤
too old to learn.（活到老，学到老。）Let's start reading
now.
【中考链接】
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My
favourite book”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，内容
包括：
1. 书名、书的类型和主要内容；
2. 你喜欢这本书的理由。注意：1. 词数80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行
文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to share my favourite book with
you._________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you for your attention.
(2023 山东枣庄)
Key: One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to share my favourite book with you.
My favourite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China.
The book tells us about the stories of four main characters. They are Tang Seng, Sun Wukong, Zhu
Bajie and Sha Wujing. After getting over many difficulties on the way to the West, finally they make
it. Among the four characters, Sun Wukong is my favourite. He is so smart and brave that he can
protect his master and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can
achieve everything.
That's all. Thank you for your attention.
【必备范文】
“读万卷书，行万里路。”你校英语社团将举办以“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，
以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为题写篇短文，分享你对阅读的看法，并提出建议。
内容要点：1.阅读给你和同学们带来了什么好处，如：开阔视野(open one’s eyes)……；
2．同学们在阅读中还存在什么问题，如：一些人不愿意阅读，一些人没时间阅读……；
3．针对存在的问题，提出你的建议(至少2条)。注意：1.词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．短文必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等。
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading has become part of our life.
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【答案】例文：
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading has become part of our life. It can not only open our eyes, but also make us relaxed and more
knowledgeable. Our study can be improved if we read more good books.
Many students have difficulty in reading. Some students don’t like reading, because they think it is boring.
Some students have no time to read. They think reading is a waste of time. In my opinion, we can learn a lot of
interesting things from books as long as we keep reading. We can read anywhere, when we are taking a bus, taking
a plane and so on.
Books are our friends, so let’s read them from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阅读给我们带来的好处。
第二步，同学们在阅读中存在的问题，并提出建议。
第三段，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②have difficulty in在某方面有困难
③a waste of time浪费时间
[高分句型]
①Our study can be improved if we read more good books. (if引导条件状语从句)
②Some students don’t like reading, because they think it is boring. (because引导原因状语从句)
2．我市“读书节”开幕了。我们班将组织“与好书为友，以读书为乐”的主题活动。请根据以下提
示，用英语写一段话，词数在80~100之间，内容必须包括表格中提示的要点：
读书：意
活动计划 个人感受
义
了解世界 找些好书
带来快乐 用好时间 ……
培养习惯 做好笔记
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Festival in our city opened. Our class will organize a reading activity—Be Friends with Good Books
and Take Delight in Reading.
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【答案】例文
Reading Festival in our city opened. Our class will organize a reading activity—Be Friends with Good Books
and Take Delight in Reading.
I think reading has many meanings. It can make us know the world. Also, reading will not only give us joy, but
also develop our good habits. According to these meanings, we should take actions to use this festival. First of all,
we should find our some good books. You know, good books can fill our knowledge. Then we must make good use
of time. Much time can give us much knowledge. Finally, I think we can make some notes. If so, much knowledge
will be written down. I believe that if we read many books, we can be wiser and smarter.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，介绍“读书节”的主题；
第二步，介绍读书的意义；
第三步，介绍活动计划以及个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不但……而且……
②according to根据
③take actions采取行动
④make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①I think reading has many meanings（省略that的宾语从句；动名词作主语）
②If so, much knowledge will be written down（if引导条件状语从句）
3．假设你校读书俱乐部正在举办“世界文学名著欣赏”系列活动，这周阅读的名著是《格列佛游
记》（Gulliver’s Travels）。请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1. 这部小说由英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特（Jonathan Swift）创作；
2. 书中讲述了医生格列佛四次出海航行冒险的经历；
3. 你读完这部小说后的感受。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、语法正确；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容，但可作适当发挥；
3. 80词左右。
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This week I have read a book called Gulliver’s Travels. It was written by Jonathan Swift who was an English
writer. It told a story about a doctor named Gulliver and his journey to four different countries. During his journey,
he met some little people, some big people, some smart but useless people and some horses. I would like to be as
brave as Gulliver. The story is full of fun. If you read it, I’m sure you will fall in love with it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这本书的基本情况，包括它的作者以及讲述的主要内容；
第二步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to想要
②as…as与……一样
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①It was written by Jonathan Swift who was an English writer.（who引导的定语从句）
②If you read it, I’m sure you will fall in love with it.（if引导条件状语从句）
4．寒假里，学校倡议同学们利用好课余时间，多读书，读好书。
请谈谈你的阅读心得。
内容主要包括：
1. 你最喜欢的一本书和它给你的启发；
2. 养成阅读习惯的好处。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；（开头句子已给出，不计入总词数）
2. 不要详写故事梗概，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
小词典：1. overcome (v.) 克服 2. will (n.) 意志 3. wise (adj.) 智慧的
4. determination (n.) 决心 5. growth (n.) 成长 6. bad condition 恶劣的环境
名著 Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe; Journey to the West by Wu Chen’en____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Of all the books I have read, I like Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe best. Robinson had to stand hunger,
fight against bad condition, and overcome a lot of difficulties when he was left alone on an island. However, with
his strong will and great determination he was successful. Just like Robinson, we may meet trouble and difficulties
in our life. We can never give up easily. Only with hard work and strong will can we find a way out.
In my opinion, reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. Good books can help to open our minds and
build our character, which is quite important for our growth. However busy we are, we should spend some time
reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，并号召大家养成阅读习惯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的一本书以及它给你的启发；
第二步，介绍养成阅读习惯的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②find a way out找到出路
③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Robinson had to stand hunger, fight against bad condition, and overcome a lot of difficulties when he was left
alone on an island. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Only with hard work and strong will can we find a way out. (倒装句)
③Good books can help to open our minds and build our character, which is quite important for our growth. (which
引导的定语从句)
5根据下列表格中的提示，写一篇短文向你的外国朋友介绍中国四大古典名著之一《西游记》，并谈
谈你对此书的看法。
Name of the book Journey to the West
Writer Wu Cheng’enBackground (背 A true story of a Chinese monk (和尚) named Xuan Zang who went for some Buddhist
景) scriptures (佛经)
Main characters Monk Tang: ... ; Monkey King: ... ; Pigsy: ... ; Sandy: ...
Your opinion (观
...
点)
要求：1)所写内容须包括表格所有信息，可适当发挥，并表达自己的观点，至少2句话；
2)语句通顺，句意连贯；
3)词数80左右，开关已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many famous novels in our country. Today, I will introduce one of the four greatest classical Chinese
novels to you .
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【答案】例文：
There are many famous novels in our country. Today, I will introduce one of the four greatest classical Chinese
novels to you. It is called Journey to the West. The writer Wu Cheng’en wrote about a story of a Chinese monk,
Xuan Zang. He went to the west for some Buddhist scriptures. There are some lovely characters in it: the kind
Monk Tang, the brave Monkey King, the funny Pigsy and the serious Sandy. They worked together, tried hard and
finally got what they wanted. The book is very interesting. From it I know whenever we meet with difficulties, we
should not give up until we succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍《西游记》这部作品
并谈谈自己对这本书的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出写作目的，介绍小说《西游记》；
第二步，具体介绍这部小说的作者、背景、主角等信息；
第三步，谈谈自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce sth. to sb. 向某人介绍某物
②work together 一起工作[高分句型]
①There are some lovely characters in it: the kind Monk Tang, the brave Monkey King, the funny Pigsy and the
serious Sandy.（There be句型）
②They worked together, tried hard and finally got what they wanted.（what引导宾语从句）
③From it I know whenever we meet with difficulties, we should not give up until we succeed.（whenever引导让
步状语从句）
6．提示:我们读过或听过的许多故事，会在生活和学习中带给我们重要启示，帮助我们成长。请以
“What I have learned from the story”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述一个故事，谈谈你从故事中学到了什么。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
What I have learned from the story
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【答案】例文
What I have learned from the story
I have read and heard of a lot of wonderful stories. Among them, there is one story called “Yu Gong Moves the
Mountains”. I love it and learn a lot from it.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two mountains near his house. They were
so high and big that it took a long time to walk to the other side. So Yu Gong and his children tried to move the
mountains. He thought that the mountains would become smaller and smaller as long as they kept trying. The gods
were moved by Yu Gong’s act and helped him move the mountains.
What I have learned from the story is: We can never know what’s possible unless we try to make it happen. As
long as we work hard, we can solve most of the problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中从故事中学了什么。注意动词时态的变换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。介绍我很喜欢“愚公移山”这个故事；第二步，具体介绍“愚公移山”这个故事的内容；
第三步，我从“愚公移山”这个故事中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of大量的，许多的
②once upon a time从前
③so...that...太……以至于……
④as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Among them, there is one story called “Yu Gong Moves the Mountains”.（There be句型）
②They were so high and big that it took a long time to walk to the other side.（that引导状语从句）
③He thought that the mountains would become smaller and smaller as long as they kept trying.（that引导宾语从
句）
④We can never know what’s possible unless we try to make it happen.（what引导宾语从句；unless引导状语从
句）
7读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示， 以“Growing up with
Reading”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍你曾经读过的一本书，并建议大家多读书，读好书。
要点提示：
1）读书的重要性；
2）所读书目对自己的影响及感悟；
3）对读书的建议。
注意：
1）短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
Growing up with Reading
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【答案】例文
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in
reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not
only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident.My favourite book is Robinson Crusoe. I am always deeply interested in it when I read about the hero
Robinson who escapes from the broken ship to an uninhabited island. He never gives up his hope to live on this
island. His wisdom and bravery help him beat any difficulty. Robinson Crusoe encourages me to fight against any
trouble. So I suggest that everyone should read more books, especially classics so that we can build up our strong
minds.
So I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more books during our spare time and develop a good reading
habit. And we should read more classics to learn more culture of the world. It’s a good idea to build reading clubs.
The student can read more books. Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求以“Growing up with Reading”为题，根据三个提示要点写一篇英语短文介
绍你曾经读过的一本书，内容包括：读书的重要性，所读书目对你的影响和感悟以及你对读书的建议。
2.写作指导：要点提示一和提示三以观点陈述为主，其时态主要用一般现在时，要点提示二需根据实际情
况选用时态；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示内容进行发挥，还可以在提示内容的基础上再适当发挥以丰富
文章内容和达成字数要求；题目要求“介绍你自经读过的一本书”，所以写作重点可放在要点提示二上；
写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文的表达习惯。
