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Unit10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与社会” 主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主题
有“家乡和社会的变迁、历史的发展、对未来的畅想以及和谐家庭与社区生活”等。常见的写作任务是
介绍家乡的变迁，分享最喜欢的旧物等。体裁多为书信、图表类应用文、说明文或议论文等。
【写作技巧】
（1）本单元的话题是" Living environment(生活环境)"，要求学生学会描述自己周边环境的变化，
并适当表达自己的感受。在写这类文章时，要注意正确运用时态，内容合理，行文流畅、完整。
（2）本单元的话题是谈论身边所拥有的东西物品或者自己喜欢的物品等。属于说明文的范畴，考查学
生描述一个物品的特点，并对物品发表自己的简单看法及感受。重点考查学生以下能力：
学习说明文的写作特点；使用现在完成时态表述持续；学会发表个人看法及观点。
“三步法”介绍的文章：
◆第一步：整体介绍你最喜欢的东西是什么；
◆第二步：学出你喜欢的原因；
◆ 第三步：总结。
【作文思维导图】【单元素材积累】
必背句型
◆开头句
①Before you come,I'd like to introduce my hometown to you.
②My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear.
③My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
◆中间句
①In the past,the air was very fresh and the river was clean.
②It's special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years
old.
◆结尾句
①I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful.
②I'm sure it will get richer and more beautiful in the future. I love my hometown.
③Now，I don't want to part with it. But to be honest，I have to,because I'm getting older!◆谚语积累
①When in Rome，do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。
②East or west，home is the best.金窝银窝，不如家里的草窝。
③Brave people are at ease，wherever they go is their homeland.勇敢的人随遇而安，所到之处皆
故乡。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
介绍童年时最喜欢的一件物品
写作任务
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter给你发来电子邮件，询问你童年时最喜欢的一件物品
是什么以及为什么喜欢它。请你用英语写一封电子邮件回复他。
【审清题目】
内容：介绍你童年时最喜欢的一件物品以及你喜欢它的原因。
文体：应用文（电子邮件）；邮件的主体部分为说明文。
人称：第一人称和第三人称。
时态：以一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时为主。
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】（以“我”童年时最喜欢的一件物品——一本带锁日记本为例）◆常用词块 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。
My favorite thing from childhood — a diary with a lock
on my tenth / ... birthday, before entering (进入) junior high school, ...
When
month(s) / year(s) ago, (1)________________(在儿童节) ...
How long for (2)________________(超过两年), for at least five years, since ...
(3)________________(一个生日礼物), a prize because of a good
How performance in a competition, a reward ( 奖励 ) for helping with
housework ...
Who from my classmate / mother / father / aunt / best friend ...
write down anything I like, express (表达) myself freely, be a safe place,
help me reflect (反思) and grow, (4)________________(从过去吸取
Why 教训), get a deeper understanding of myself and the world around me,
stick to my dreams, write down my goals (目标) and the steps needed,
be a close friend who listens without judgment (评价) ...
Key: 1. on Children's Day 2. more than / over two years
3. a birthday gift 4. learn from the past
◆常用句型
• My favorite thing from childhood is ...
• It has been with me since I was ...
• I've owned / had it for ...
• My ... gave it to me as a(n) ... on my ... birthday ...
• I like it more than others because ...
• It's special to me because ...
• I think I will ...
【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。
▶寒暄后点出最喜欢的物品
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear from you. My favorite thing from childhood is a diary with a lock.
(1)______________________(我已经拥有它三年了). It was a gift on my twelfth birthday from my
aunt.
▶说明喜欢它的理由
(2)______________________(我喜欢这个带锁日记本有三个原因). First, it allows me to express
myself freely. Whenever thoughts and ideas come to mind, I can write them down in it.(3)______________________(它已经成为我的一个安全空间). There I can be true to myself. Second,
it helps me reflect and grow. Recording my experiences has made me get a deeper understanding of
myself and the world around me. Third, (4)______________________(它鼓励我坚持我的梦想). I
use it to write down my goals, big and small, and the steps I need to take to achieve them. It's like
having a road map to my future.
▶表达喜爱之情
The diary with a lock is special to me because it's like a close friend who listens without judgment.
(5)______________________(我想我会永远珍藏它).
Yours,
Li Hua
Key: 1. I've owned / had it for three years
2. I like the diary with a lock for three reasons
3. It has become a safe space for me
4. it encourages me to stick to my dreams
5. I think I will treasure it forever
范文剖析
你的家乡每天都在发生着日新月异的变化。请根据下面的提示，以“The Changes in My
Hometown”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述一下你家乡的变化。
提示：
1.过去的家乡什么样；
2.现在的家乡什么样；
3.对未来家乡的期待。
►►审题指导
1.文体：说明文
2.人称：第三人称
3.时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
►►思路点拨►►范文赏析
The Changes in My Hometown
①My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
In the past,the air here was very fresh and the river was clean. The houses were small
and old. People went to work on foot or by bike.②It was a quiet place.
Nowadays,things are quite different. The houses are big and bright. Many people have
their own cars. The changes have brought young people a modern life.③ They all feel
happy.But there are fewer trees,and ④the environment is worse than before.
⑤ I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful and we can live a happier
life in the future.
The Changes in My Hometown 升格技巧
① Great changes have taken place in my hometown 技巧一：巧用take
in recent years.
place短语升格①
In the past,the air here was very fresh and the river
技巧二：巧用used
was clean. The houses were small and old. People went to
work on foot or by bike.②It used to be a quiet place. to短语升格②
Nowadays,things are quite different. The houses are big
and bright. Many people have their own cars. The changes
技巧三：巧用how引
have brought young people a modern life.③How happy
they all feel! 导的感叹句升格③
But there are fewer trees,and ④ the environment isnot as good as before. 技巧四：巧用not
⑤ I hope my hometown will be more and more as…as结构升格④
beautiful so that we can live a happier life in the future.
技巧五：巧用so that
结构升格⑤
【中考链接】
我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是
什么呢？对你来说, 它有什么特殊的意义？请以“The Story Behind My Favorite Gift”为题写一
篇英语短文。
写作要点：1. 介绍你最喜欢的礼物； 2. 讲述该礼物背后的故事；
3. 说明该礼物对你的特殊意义。
写作要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整、规范；
2. 词数70左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
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Key: One possible version:
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
My favorite gift is the little teddy bear that my mother gave me. Let me tell you something about
it.
On my birthday last year, I had a fever and was in the hospital. I was very sad because I couldn't
have a happy birthday. At that time, my mother brought me a little teddy bear, so I was very happy.
Since then, whenever I am sad, this little teddy bear has been there for me. It is not just a toy; it's
more of a friend.
Word Bank: teddy bear 泰迪熊
【必备范文】
童年时获得的东西中总有一件是你最爱的，并能给你带来美好的回忆，比如一个礼物，一个玩具……。
请介绍你童年中最喜爱的一样东西，晒晒你“童年”的美好回忆。
提示：
(1) How long have you had it?
(2) Who gave it to you?(3) Why do you like it so much? Why is it special?
(4) Can you say anything more about it?
要求：
（1）短文内容需包含提示问题中的要点，可适当发挥。
（2）语言准确得当，条理清晰。词数为70左右。首句已给出，不计入词数。
I’m glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you.
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【答案】例文
I’m glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you. It is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was
five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my
grandmother made it for me. I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night
because I didn’t like the dark. I held my teddy bear to feel safe.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己童年中最喜欢的一样东西，注
意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时。
作文要分别介绍这样物品有多久了，谁给你的，为什么这么喜欢它，它为什么特别等内容。要保证语言连
贯，无语法和拼写错误。
自从学校开设劳动课后，同学们有了很多变化。请你根据下面的结构图和要求，以“Changes after having
labor classes”为题，给你校英文校报写一篇短文投稿，谈谈同学们的变化。
Changes after having labor classes
At school At home
参考词汇：help wash dishes, water the flowers, cook meals, ...要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Changes after having labor classes
As we know, many changes have taken place since we began to take labor classes.
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【答案】例文
Changes after having labor classes
As we know, many changes have taken place since we began to take labor classes.
First, we do many meaningful things around our school every day. For example, students take turns to help
wash dishes in the school dining hall, which makes us understand our duty. Then, some students often plant trees
and water the flowers to make our school more beautiful. And it’s easy for us now because we have learned how to
plant trees in labor classes.
At home, we always do some difficult housework by ourselves. The boys begin to do his own laundry, and the
girls like to cook for the family. Thanks to the labor class, we have learned a lot of life skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：主要记录劳动课后同学们的变化，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍同学们在校的变化；
第二步，介绍同学们在家的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①take turns to do sth.轮流做某事
②by onself靠自己
③thanks to由于[高分句型]
①For example, students take turns to help wash dishes in the school dining hall, which makes us understand our
duty.（which引导的定语从句）
②And it’s easy for us now because we have learned how to plant trees in labor classes.（because引导的的原因状
语从句）
假定你是李华，本周学校将举办一场以“My Hometown”为主题的英语角活动，请你按要求准备发言稿
要求：
（1）说说家乡的变化；
（2）介绍家乡的旅游景点；
（3）推荐家乡的特色小吃。
注意：
（1）词数90左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Now please allow me to say something about my hometown.
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Now please allow me to say something about my hometown.
It is in the south of China with an area of about 210,000 square kilometers. Great changes have taken place
here in recent years. Many new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built, which shows that my
hometown is developing rapidly. It has a long history and there are many places of interest, such as Yuelu Academic
Yard, Dongting Lake and the memorial hall of Chairman Mao. My hometown is also famous for its special food—
the spicy crayfish, which is really delicious. What’s more, the weather here is rather comfortable. It’s not too hot or
too cold.
I really hope you can visit my hometown and have a good time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，想向大家介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，具体阐述内容，从家乡变化、旅游景点、美食和气候等方面介绍自己的家乡；第三步，书写结语，希望大家可以到自己的家乡游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②such as例如
③what’s more另外
[高分句型]
①Many new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built, which shows that my hometown is developing
rapidly.（现在完成时的被动语态）
②My hometown is also famous for its special food—the spicy crayfish, which is really delicious.（which引导非
限制性定语从句）
假如你是李华，你校的英语广播站计划做一期“毕业生感言”的专题节目，想邀请你参加。请你以
“The Progress I’ve Made”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈初中这三年多时光
中，你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。
要求:
1. 100词左右；
2. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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The Progress I’ve Made
Looking back at the past three years, I have made great progress.
First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other and help each other in life as well
as study. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to
do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to
my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.
I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我所取得的进步的介绍要点，适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍我所取得的进步”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容：在生活中取得的进步和在学习上取得的进步；
第三步，书写结语，表达：我会付出更大的努力，在未来取得更大的成功！
[亮点词汇]
①look back 回首
②make friends交朋友
③as well as也
[高分句型]
①I am not shy any longer and become active and confident.（“not...any longer”句型）
②With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so
on.（with作伴随状语）
当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“China in Ten Years”为题，畅想
并描述十年后的祖国。
要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in
many fields. What will China be like in ten years?
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【答案】例文
China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in many fields. What will China be
like in ten years? Can you imagine the future of China?
I think China will be the largest, the richest and the most developed country in the world. In the future, we can
live on any planet in the solar system. And we don’t have to worry about garbage pollution, because we can
dissolve it as soon as possible, which will benefit our life. What’s more, people even don’t need to build a house by
themselves, and robots can do it instead of human beings. Even so, education will be more convenient, no matter
where you are, you can learn what you need from the Internet.
That’s the future China. What’s your opinion?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题，畅想中国未来十年是什么样子；
第二步，从生活，工作，交通等方面畅想未来。
[亮点词汇]
①made great achievements 取得众多成就②worry about 担心
③instead of 代替
[高分句型]
①And we don’t have to worry about garbage pollution, because we can dissolve it as soon as possible, which will
benefit our life.（because原因状语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
②no matter where you are, you can learn what you need from the Internet.（no matter引导让步状语从句）
随着义务教育“双减”政策的实施，学校的作业少了，课外辅导班叫停了。作为政策的亲历者，你的
课余生活发生了哪些变化？你如何看待这一政策？现你校英文报刊就“双减”这一话题开设专栏，展开讨
论。请根据思维导图以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。
提示词：the“double reduction”policy“双减”政策
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于90词，至少含有两个复合句，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly.
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【答案】例文：
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly. I used to have much
homework. But now I have less homework than before. I had to do homework that was boring in the past. Now I
have some creative homework.As for weekend activities, I had to take after-school classes. I used to be busy and tired. I had too much
pressure. But now I have more time to take up my hobbies. On weekends I often play basketball with my friends to
improve my skills. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. I read more books to develop my reading abilities. I have
more time to do what I like.
All in all, I think the “double reduction” policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一
篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称行文；在介绍“双减政策”前的课余生活时用一般过去时，介绍现在的课余
生活时用一般现在时；文章可分为三段式：第一段承接开头点题；第二段具体讲述课余生活的变化；最后
一段讲述作者对“双减政策”的看法。在写作时要保持主谓一致性，除了要含有两个复合句之外，还要正
确运用好两个时态。
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上
发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used to结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First,
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【答案】例文
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to be thin, but now I am a little fatter. I used to have
curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Second, I have made much progressin English, I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English
exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But
now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours?
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的
变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，
英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点
错误。
