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Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city park.
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主
题有“公益劳动与公共服务；志愿服务与公共服务”等。常见的写作任务是描述一次志愿活动经
历、制订一份志愿工作计划以及招募志愿者等。体裁多为记叙文、志愿者招募海报等应用文或夹叙
夹议的文体。涉及的时态通常是一般现在时和一般将来时。
该话题属于社会热点话题，在中考中常出现与该内容有关的话题，如：去敬老院看望老人；去儿童医院
看望生病的儿童；去支援灾区等。通过本单元的学习，同学们应该积极参加志愿者工作和慈善活动。
【写作技巧】
学生可通过一些志愿活动或慈善事业来树立自己的责任意识和社会意识,培养乐于参加公益事
业的情怀。在写作方面,这一话题主要包含两个方向:一是呼吁人们参加志愿工作;二是描述自
己或他人参加过的志愿活动。。
【写作思维导图】【单元素材积累】
相关短语积累
拜访医院生病的孩子 visit the sick kids in the 每周六早上 every Saturday morning
hospital 给贫困的孩子捐赠书籍 give away books to the poor
让他们开心 cheer them up kids
在课后学习中心做志愿 volunteer in an after-school 读报纸 read newspapers
study program 讲故事 tell interesting stories
帮助打扫城市公园 help to clean up the city parks 倾听和照顾 listen to and care for
制定计划去做某事 make a plan to do sth 一种强烈的满足感 a strong feeling of satisfaction
在学校周围悬挂标识牌 put up signs around the 看到主人脸上高兴的表情 the look of joy of their
school owners' faces
分发传单 hand out notices 在几岁的时候 at the age of
捡垃圾 pick up the rubbish 随着每本新书进行不同的旅程 go on a different
在我的空闲时间 in my free time journey with each new book
为无家可归的人筹钱 raise money for homeless 梦想实现 dream come true
people 对...有耐心 be patient with
打电话召集朋友 call up friends 期待做某事 look forward to doing sth
一周一次 once a week 教孩子们弹吉他 teach them to play the guitar(二) 常用句型积累
1. I feel great to help...
2. It gives me a feeling of...
3. I think helping others can..
4. It's a meaningful thing to pass on warmth to more people.
5. From the experience, I learned that....
▶I’d like to/ I'm interested in/ I want to volunteer as... 。
▶ I'm good at/ I'm strong in/I do well in/I'm able to/ In my free time, I like to... so I think I'd be good at this job.
▶I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people's home/ school/ museum/group because...
▶I am free to help in/on...
▶ It's meaningful for us to...
▶The best thing I want to do is ...
◆开头句
①I'd like to share my special experience with you.
②One of my most unforgettable experiences was a volunteer service last summer vacation.
③Last Saturday,my classmates and I went to do some volunteer work.
Here is what we did.
◆中间句
①We cleaned their rooms and helped them cook.
②There we had many activities,such as singing，dancing，telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old.
◆结尾句
①A day was limited,but the volunteer work would never stop.
②I hope to have more chances to do volunteer work.
③I think this kind of activity is meaningful.
【名言积累】
①Giving is better than taking.给予比索取更好。②Love is the best stage for volunteers，and dedication is the most beautiful language for volunteers.爱心是志愿
者最好的舞台，奉献是志愿者最美的语言。
▶ Help others and you will get in return. The rose is in her hand, the flavor in mine。
赠人玫瑰，手留余香。
▶It's better to give than to take． 给予比得到更好。
▶ Helping other is a virtue．助人为乐是一种美德。
▶I think helping others can bring happiness not only to others but also to ourselves.笑Sometimes small actions
can make a big difference to the world.
我认为帮助他人不仅给他人带来快乐，也给自己带来快乐，有时小作为也可以改变世界（小作为，
大世界） 。
▶Serving others can bring us happiness.助人为乐。
▶ In a word, if everyone gives a helping hand, they may live a better life and the world will be full of love. 总之，
只要人人都献出一点爱，世界将变成美好的人间。
▶The more you give, the more you will get. and the more I do, the happier I will be.
付出越多，收获越多，我做的越多，我就越快乐。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
如何写申请做志愿者的自荐信
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
假如你是张楠，在某英文网站上看到某动物保护组织（animal protection organization）正
在招募一批志愿者，工作内容是周末帮街上的流浪猫或流浪狗找一个家。你想申请成为其中
的一名志愿者，请你给该组织写一封自荐信。
●【审清题目】
内容：本文要求写自荐信，因此信中要表明自己为什么想申请该工作以及自己的优势，以便
让负责人接受。
文体：应用文（自荐信）。
时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
人称：以第一人称为主。
●【头脑风暴】
Apply for a volunteer Why do you want to do the volunteer job?job in an animal What are your advantages (优势)?
protection
organization What will you do as a volunteer?
●【提供素材】
◆常用单词和短语 在横线上填写单词或短语。
Job a volunteer in an animal protection organization
call on more people to love animals, be (1)______________(有教
Reasons
育意义的) / meaningful, (2)______________(获得满足感) ...
Experienc
used to do a similar job, often help homeless cats and dogs ...
e
be patient (有耐心的), be responsible (有责任心的),
Character
(性格)
be (3)______________(外向的), be ready to help ...
Advantages
Time be free / (4)______________(有空的) on weekends ...
be good with animals, be good at drawing, get support (支持) from
Others
parents, make posters (海报) for ...
(5)______________(制作视频) about looking for responsible pet
What to do owners, teach people how to adopt (收养) street cats and dogs, give
a speech in public (公开发表演讲) ...
Key: 1. educational 2. get a feeling of satisfaction 3. outgoing 4. available 5. make videos
●【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全这封自荐信。
称呼 Dear Sir or Madam,
自
I'm writing to you about volunteering in your organization.
荐
(1)_____________________(我对这份志愿工作感兴趣) and
信 写信目的
want to help find warm homes and loving owners for homeless cats
and dogs.I think I'm up to this job. First, I'm an animal lover.
(2)_____________________( 我 最 喜 欢 的 动 物 是 狗 和 猫 ).
Second, I have good experience for the job,
表明个人
(3)_________________(因为我过去做过一份类似的工作).
优势
Third, I'm free on weekends. Also, my parents support me and let
me do what I want on weekends. What's more, I'm good at drawing,
so I can help any animals in need by making posters.
If I become a volunteer, (4)_________________(我将尽力做好这
份工作). First, I will give a speech in public on the importance of
showing care for homeless cats and dogs. Then,
若同意申
(5)_________________(我将教人们如何照顾它们). Next, I will
请，表明
call on more people to protect them.
自己将会
如何做 I think if more people give a helping hand to our animal friends,
there will be no more homeless cats or dogs in the world.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
落款
Zhang Nan
Key:
1. I'm interested in this volunteer job
2. My favorite animals are dogs and cats
3. because I used to do a similar job
4. I will try my best to do the job well
5. I will teach people how to look after / care for them
◆常用句型
• I'll help to ...
• I hope to work at / in ...
• I want to help out as a volunteer at / in ... because ...
• I'm interested in / good at / strong in ...
• I'm free to be a volunteer on ...
• I'll try my best to ...
• In my free time, I like to ... so I think I'm up to (能胜任) this job / I can do this job well.
【实例讲解1】
My Experience of Doing Volunteer Work 升格技巧① One of my most unforgettable experiences （我最难忘的经历之一） was 技巧一：巧用one of…句
a volunteer service last summer vacation. 型升格①
I visited the old people's home with my friends on a Saturday afternoon. We 技巧二：巧用how引导的
prepared lots of food for the old like snacks and fruits. We cleaned their rooms and 感叹句升格②
helped them cook. We also talked to them and shared some interesting stories with 技巧三：巧用I think引导
them.② How happy they were! 的宾
③ I think this kind of activity is meaningful. ④ We 语从句升格③
can not only bring warmth to the old people,but also 技巧四：巧用 not only…
learn to love and share in this way. I hope to have but also…句型升格④
more chances to do volunteer work.
【实例解析2】
假如你将参加学校英语报以“My Experience of Doing Volunteer Work”为题的征文活动，请根据以下提
示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述一次你的志愿服务经历。
提示：
1.What kind of volunteer work did you do?
2.When and where did you do the volunteer work?
3.How did you feel about it?
►►审题指导
1.文体:记叙文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态：一般过去时
►►思路点拨
My Experience of Doing Volunteer Work
①I did a volunteer activity last summer vacation. It is an unforgettable experience in my life.
I visited the old people's home with my friends on a Saturday afternoon. We prepared lots of food for
the old like snacks and fruits. We cleaned their rooms and helped them cook. We also talked to them andshared some interesting stories with them.②They were very happy.
③This kind of activity is meaningful.④We can bring warmth to the old people，and we can also learn
to love and share in this way.I hope to have more chances to do volunteer work.
升格技巧
My Experience of Doing Volunteer Work
技巧一：巧用one of…句型
①One of my most unforgettable experiences（我最难忘的经历之一） was a
升格①
volunteer service last summer vacation.
技巧二：巧用how引导的
I visited the old people's home with my friends
感叹句升格②
on a Saturday afternoon. We prepared lots of food for the old like snacks and fruits.
技巧三：巧用I think引导
We cleaned their rooms and helped them cook. We also talked to them and shared
的宾语从句升格③
some interesting stories with them.②How happy they were!
③I think this kind of activity is meaningful.④We can not only bring warmth to
技巧四：巧用not
the old people,but also learn to love and share in this way.I hope to have more chances
only…but also…句型升格
to do volunteer work.
④
【实战演练】
假设你是李华，你准备在即将到来的五一节假期中抽一天时间来参加志愿者活
动。请根据下面的提示，以“My Volunteer Work Plan”为话题写一篇80词左右的英语
短文，谈论你的活动计划，并在明天的班会课上与大家分享。审题指导
1.文体：________
2.人称：__________
3.时态：____________
4.写作要点：①________________________________；
②__________________________；③________________。
►►思路点拨
►►小试身手
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
例文：
Hello,everyone!Labor Day Holiday is coming. I am going to do some
volunteer work on May 2nd. Now I'd like to share the work plan with you.
To begin with,I will help to clean up the city parks. I will pick up the litter,the plastic
bags and other wastes. In this way,I can make our city a cleaner place to live. Besides,I am
going to visit the elderly in the Senior Citizens' Home. I will help them do some chores and
talk to them to cheer them up. Lastly,I am going to visit the sick kids in the hospital where I
plan to sing for them for comfort. I hope they can recover and get better soon.
There is a saying that helping others is helping ourselves. I believe it will be a meaningful
day.
【真题解析】假如你是李华,上周六上午,你们班全体同学在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动.请根据下表中提供的
信息,用英语给你的笔友 Sandy写一封信.
What You See What You Do What You Feel
1.School: clean, tidy2. Students:
◆blind, deaf 1.paly games learn paper cutting2. give
……
books, snacks, toys
◆speak/read/write, difficult follow
teacher, carefully
要求:
1.文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译),并适当发挥;
2.词数:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名.
Dear Sandy,
Last Saturday morning, our class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_
【答案】Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the special school. My classmates and I took a lot
of presents to them,such as books,snacks and toys. The school is clean and tidy.Some students are blind.Others are
deaf.Some students can’t speak or read or write.It is difficult for them to do everyday things.But they followed the
teacher to do things carefully.After arriving there,some of us began playing games with them. Some of us taught them
to learn paper cutting .We also performed wonderful programs,such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join
us and they were very happy. All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we
should spend more time helping them. Helping others is Chinese people’s virtue.
【详解】这是一篇图表,要求给笔友写一封信,来介绍上周在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动.动笔前先要
认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注
意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点.根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般过去时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,
不要犯语法错误.注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯.
根据以下提示,以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题,写一篇英语短文.
内容:
1. 过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上;
2. 老师告诉我们有很多儿童缺少衣服和食物,更不能上学;3. 从那以后,我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织;
4. 我为能帮助别人而自豪.
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯;
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右(不含所给词).
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help. I used to______________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help. I used to buy clothes and snacks with my pocket money. But sometimes they were a waste
of money. One day, our teacher told us in some places in the world, there were many poor children and they didn’t
have enough clothes and food. They even couldn’t go to school. Hearing that, I felt sorry for them. I should do
something for them. From then on, I gave away my pocket money to an organization to help children. I hope I can
help the poor kids. At least they can buy a book. This makes me feel very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:注意不要遗漏提示内容中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误.注意上下文之
间的逻辑关系,语意连贯.
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图.内容是根据提示,以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题,写一篇英语短文.
第二步:具体阐述写作内容.首先介绍过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上;然后从老师那儿得知还有很多儿童缺
少衣服和食物,更不能上学;其次介绍从那以后,我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织.
第三步:书写结语.表示“我为能帮助别人而自豪.”
[亮点词汇]
①pocket money零花钱
②a waste of mone浪费金钱
③felt sorry for感到抱歉
④gave away捐赠
[高分句型]①One day, our teacher told us in some places in the world, there were many poor children and they didn’t have
enough clothes and food.(there be句型)
②From then on, I gave away my pocket money to an organization to help children.(to help children.做目的状语)
③This makes me feel very happy.(make sb. do sth.让某人做某事)
Second Chance Farm是一个收留流浪猫狗和其他小动物的志愿者组织.该组织想要招募一些喜爱动物的
志愿者照顾小动物,请帮助该组织写一个招募广告.
要求:1、条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范.
2、不少于80个单词.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Are you a friendly person? Do you like to help others? Do you love animals? Then Second Chance Farm is looking
for you! We have many dogs, cats and other animals here at Second Chance Farm. No one wanted these pets, so they
came to live with us. We train the animals to be good pets, so they can find new homes. We also teach people to look
after their pets well. We need help to look after all our animals! Can you help us feed and wash the animals? Can you
play with them? If you’re interested, then please give us a call!
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求为Second Chance Farm写一封志愿者招募广告,志愿者需要喜爱动物、会照顾
小动物,招募广告一般要突出重点、语言简练且朗朗上口.
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一、二人称为主,时态多用一般现在时.招募广告多会使用一般疑问句来询问有意
向者是否符合招募条件,要仔细审题抓住写作重点,做到无单词拼写和语法错误.
为了更好地举办冬奥会,市冬奥办现在面向全社会招聘身体健康、热爱体育运动、乐于助人,并能熟练
运用英语和外国友人交流的志愿者.假如你叫李华,请根据以下提示和要求,写一封应征冬奥会志愿者的自荐
信.
提示:1. Why do you want to be a volunteer?
2. What can you do?
要求: 1. 自荐信须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 信中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
3. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. I’d like to be a volunteer for Winter Olympic Games. Because____________
____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. I’d like to be a volunteer for Winter Olympic Games. Because I like sports. In
school, I often take part in all kinds of activities. I am good at English. I listen to English news on the radio every day
and can communicate with foreign friends freely. I am outgoing, too. I can get along with them and give them a hand
whenever they are in need.
I think volunteer work is great. I hope I can be a member of Winter Olympic Games. I’m looking forward to
your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,要求写一篇自荐信;
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作时应围绕所给提示信息写作,并适当发挥.
[写作步骤]
第一步:文章开头已经给出,应承接文章开头,接着写出想成为志愿者的原因及你擅长做的事情;
第二步:对自荐信进行总结,写出你的期待和愿望.
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加,参与
② communicate with sb 和某人沟通,交流
③ give them a hand 帮助某人
④ get along with 和某人相处
[高分句型]
① I can get along with them and give them a hand whenever they are in need.(用whenever引导时间状语从句)
②. I hope I can be a member of Winter Olympic Games. (hope后省略that的宾语从句)
10月4日是世界动物日, 你校组织以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为题的英语演讲
比赛.假如李明参加比赛, 请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己, 内容如下:
品
善良, 善待动物; 勤劳, 做额外事
质
爱
……(至少两点)
好事
为Save China’s Tigers筹款; ……(至少一点)
迹
感
动物是人类的朋友;保护动物就是保护我们自己
悟
打
……(至少两点)
算
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
________________________________________________________________________________________
____
【答案】
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever raised money for Save
China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals. Animals are our friends. We should love them. I am always
thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will ask more
people to care for animals. I must try my best to make the world more beautiful.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】这篇作文要求以I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals写一篇演讲稿,推荐自己成为保护动
物的志愿者.题目中利用表格的形式列举了文章的主要内容,包括自己的品质、爱好、事迹、感悟和打算,学
生们应从这几个方面入手,补充细节内容,组织语言,用正确的英语表达出来.通过审题可知,这篇短文应使用一
般现在时,第一人称来叙述,应注意分清主次,以事迹和感悟为主要内容,其他是次要内容.写作时应注意英语表
达习惯和汉语不同,不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子.例如可以简单句结
构为主,穿插使用and,but,so等连接的并列句,以及宾语从句、状语从句等复合句结构以及非谓语动词等复杂
句式,提升文章档次.同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅.
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求写了一篇演讲稿,推荐自己成为保护动物的志愿者.短
文内容完整、充实,作者按照题目中列出的提纲分成五个方面对自己进行了介绍,并补充了细节内容,使文章
更加丰富.结构清晰,主次分明,以后半部分自己的事迹和感悟为主,内容安排合理.其次短文中使用了正确的时
态和人称,文章以一般现在时为主来叙述,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构符合英语的表达习惯.短文中主要以简
单句为主,也使用了状语从句、动名词、动词不定式等结构,调整文章节奏,提升了作文档次.文章中较好的句型有I’m glad to make a speech here.、I like playing football and the guitar、I am always thinking protecting animals
is protecting ourselves. 、If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect
animals.、I must try my best to make the world more beautiful等等.
3月5日是学雷锋纪念日,你校师生去幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动.假如你是李华,请通过
邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary.
活动形式:1. 送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福.
2. 帮老人打扫卫生……
3. 陪老人聊天;为老人表演(唱歌、跳舞),读报……活动感想:此活动很有意义,从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老
人……
要求:1. 要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥.
2. 词数100左右.(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last email. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.
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【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last email. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.
As a member of volunteer, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers
bought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we gave the flowers and fresh
fruit to the old people. And we sent them our best wishes too.
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed for them, such as
singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspapers for them. Some of us chatted with them. From this activity,
we realized that we should care for the old and respect them. What a valuable and meaningful activity!
If you have the chance in China,I hope you can join us.
Li Hua
【详解】点评:本文运用了“4W1H法”写“叙事类”作文.4W: who (we volunteers,the old people),where
(Happiness Nursing Home),when (5th March),what (bought…,cleaned… and
swept…,performed,read…,chatted… ),1H:how (valuable and meaningful).
添彩点:短文层次分明,思路清晰,叙述有条理.①处是一个含有原因状语从句的复合句;②处用such as举例;
③处是感叹句.这些句式结构的运用,为文章增色不少.【点睛】书面表达,动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥.根据材料内容可知本文是一般现在时
态,主语是第一人称,注意时态与主谓一致问题.写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
