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Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
＂家务、杂务＂
谈论家务
本单元以＂家务、杂务＂为话题，围绕这一话题，引导学生学习掌握情态动词could
表示委婉地请求以及请求许可的用法。以谈论家务以及对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由
为话题的作文或是请求他人帮忙的电子邮件之类的书面表达是单元测试或中考所常考查的。
写作目标
本单元以“家务琐事与许可”为话题，要求学生学会运用与做家务相关的动词短语
描述家务琐事，要能运用“Could I...？/Could you please...？”表示“请求得到许可”，
使用think, believe, agree及disagree等相关句式表达自己对做家务的看法。此话题常见的
写作角度涉及：①树立劳动观念，进行实践活动 ②做家务的收获
写作步骤真题感知
（2023·辽宁朝阳·统考中考真题）
劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准
(2022年版)》，从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，
你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作
等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，
写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives.
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【答案】例文
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I
always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a veryimportant and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn
how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. In the future, I
would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my
hometown more beautiful.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据提示内容进
行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么；
第二步，介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处；
第三步，介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②on weekends在周末
③take good care of照顾好
④In the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my
independence by cooking.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill
and make my hometown more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
【词汇积累】
rubbish 垃圾 fold 折叠 sweep 打扫 mess 杂乱 wash 清；清洗 clean 打扫
busy 忙碌 chore 杂务 housework 家务劳动 tired 累的 take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
do the dishes 洗餐具 fold the clothes 叠衣服 sweep the floor 扫地
make one’s bed 整理床铺 clean the room 打扫房间 do housework/chores 做家务help sb.do sth.帮助某人做某事 take care of 照顾 do housework all evening 整晚做家务
find the house clean and tidy发现房间干净又整洁 share the housework分担家务
a clean and comfortable home一个干净又舒服的家
there is no need for somebody to do something 对于某人来说没必要做....
develop children's independence 养成孩子的独立（习惯）
the idea of fairness 公平意识
have no idea how to take care of himself 不知道怎样照料自己
it's fair/ unfair for children to do something对于孩子来说，做……是公平的/不公平的。
a few other things I want you to do我想要你做的另处几件事情
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
It is the parents' job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children.
在家给孩子们提供一个干净而舒服的环境是家长们的工作。
2.It is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework.
对于孩子们来说，学会怎样做家务和帮助父母亲做家务是很重要的。
3.Since they live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should do their
part in keeping it clean and tidy.
既然他们和他们的父母生活在同一房子里，他们就应该明白每个人都应该做他们份内之事
以保持房子的干净与整洁。
4. The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.
孩子们越早独立，对他们的未来就更好。
5.Playing computer games is a waste of time and energy.打电脑游戏是浪费时间和精力。
6.Doing chores can develop children’s independence.做家务能够培养孩子们的独立能力。
7．We can't depend on our parents too much.我们不能过多地依赖我们的父母。
8.The more the children do the chores，the earlier they will learn to be independent.
孩子们做的家务越多，就会越早地学会独立。
9.It helps children to understand the idea of fairness. 这帮助孩子们理解公平的含义。
1-.Students have no time to do the housework. 孩子们没有时间做家务。
◆开头句
①It is everyone’s duty to do chores.
②I think it is necessary for us to do housework.
③Now many students are too lazy to do housework at home.
④I think we should help parents do some housework.◆中间句
①I swept the floor at first and took out the rubbish.
②We should finish our homework independently and make a study plan carefully.
③What’s more，I also cooked some porridge.
④Third，doing housework can relax ourselves.
⑤I often help my parents with much housework,such as cleaning the rooms,taking out the rubbish
and doing the dishes.
◆结尾句
①I believe if we can do these things，we will be more independent.
②I think it’s our duty to share housework to keep the house clean and tidy.
◆谚语积累
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
2.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。
杂志Sunday Mail就“孩子在家应不应该做家务”这个话题征集稿件。请你写一篇英语
短文向该杂志投稿。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：议论文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
2. 谋布局、写句子3. 巧衔接
本文在表明观点后，需要阐述支撑观点的理由，为此，我们可以先用Here are three
reasons来承上启下，使文章过渡自然。然后具体的理由可以用first, second, third来衔接，
使行文条理清晰、紧密相连。
4. 成篇章
Dear Sir or Madam,Yours truly,
Mandy
5. 化“平凡”为“非凡”
Children are part of the family. They should share chores at home. ➝As part of the family,
children should share chores at home.
答案
2. 谋布局、写句子
(1) they do all the housework at home
(2) It can make children understand their parents better
(3) do their part in keeping their rooms tidy
(4) children depend on their parents too much
(5) have good living habits
4. 成篇章
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think children should do chores at home. Here are three reasons. First, parents will feel very
tired if they do all the housework at home, so children should help their parents do some chores. It
can make children understand their parents better. Second, children are part of the family. They
should share chores at home. Children should do their part in keeping their rooms tidy. For example,
they should make their beds and fold their clothes. Third, these days children depend on their
parents too much. Doing chores can help children learn how to take care of themselves. And it can
help them have good living habits. It’s good for their future. So I believe that children should do
chores at home.
Yours truly,
Mandy短语积累烹饪家务
1. 切碎
2. 做汤
3. 做晚餐
4. 做奶昔
5. 用……填满
6. 清洗餐具
其他家务
7. 做家务
8. 打扫（或清楚）干净
9. 扫地
10. 叠衣服
11. 铺床
12. 扔掉；抛弃
13. 倒垃圾
14. 保持……整洁
15. 接通（电流、煤气、水等）；打开
写作佳句
1. 我认为孩子们学习如何做家务是非常重要的。
I think it’s very important for children .
2. 我愿意在我的空闲时间打扫房间。
I would like in my free time.
3. 与家人一起做家务是我们与他们相处的好机会。
It is for us to get along with family when doing housework with them.
4. 做家务可以帮助我们学会如何照顾好自己。
Doing chores can help us lern ourselves well.
5. 分担家务，拥有一个干净舒适的家是我们的责任。
It is the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.
6. 我度过了一个忙碌但开心的星期六。
I had a Saturday.
7. 我们越早学会独立，我们未来的生活就越容易。we learn to be independent， our future life
will be.
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1．假设你是李华，请你结合最近新出台的劳动课程标准，根据自身的劳动体会，给校报英语专栏写
一篇短文，谈谈你对劳动课程的看法。
内容包括：
1. 校内：学习生活技能；
2. 校外：参加实践活动，如：植树、种菜等；
3. 在家：学做家务，如：整理房间、烧饭等；
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意:
1. 词数: 80~100；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：劳动课labor education class
A new curriculum (课程) standard for labor education came out recently in order to help more students to
develop hard-working spirit.
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（二）国家提出将 “劳动教育（labor education）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你
对劳动教育的看法。内容包括：
你对劳动教育的看法 be good for health; relax from the hard study...
at home: do the dishes...
你自身的劳动经历及感受
at school: clean the classroom...
你对劳动教育课程的建议 offer different kinds of labor classes; hold competitions about labor skills ...
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 短文必须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯,书书工整；
3. 词数：80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in
China. I think
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3．现在许多孩子在家里很少做家务，甚至不愿意做家务。学校为了号召同学们积极参与家务劳动，
开展了以“We Should Help Parents Do Housework”为主题的演讲活动。假如你是李华，请结合下面的信息用
英语写一篇演讲稿。
We Should Help Parents Do Housework
What housework do you often do How do you feel about doing Why do we have to do
at home? housework? housework?
注意: 1. 文章必须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实地名、人名和校名；
3. 词数在70左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to give you a speech. My topic is “We Should Help Parents DoHousework”.
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Thanks for listening.
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4．很多家长认为孩子不应该帮忙做家务，他们的主要任务是学习，请根据以下内容提示问题，写一篇题
为“Should Teenagers Help with Housework at Home?”的短文。 内容提示问题：
What do you often do to help your parents at home?
Do you think kids should help out with chores at home?
Why do you think so?
Something more about doing homework.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60—80；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should Teenagers Help with Housework at Home?
Many parents think that teenagers don’t have to help with housework at home.
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5．热爱劳动，才能热爱生活，才能感受生活的温暖。青少年应该主动参加各类劳动，如社区服务、
学校劳动和日常家务等。假如你是李华，你们学校组织“Grow Up in Labor”的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
内容包括：
谈谈参加劳动的意义；
介绍你经常参加的两项劳动和收获；
提醒同学们劳动时要注意的事项（至少两项）。
作文要求:：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Grow Up in Labor
Labor plays an important role in life.
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6．随着年龄的增长，我们已经能做一些力所能及的家务，替父母分担劳动也是我们应该做的事情。
当然，在这个过程中我们也会收获很多。请以“I get a lot from doing housework”为题，根据写作要求，用英
语写一篇短文，谈论下你对此的观点吧。
注意：
1.词数：100左右；
2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息；
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7．随着义务教育阶段《劳动课程标准》的颁布，劳动教育将在学生全面发展过程中发挥重要作用。
槐荫学校希望许飞同学在“国旗下讲话”时，对全校同学发出重视劳动教育的倡议。假如你是许飞，请根
据以下提示写好这篇倡议书。
写作提示：
1. 认真对待劳动课程，熟练掌握劳动技能；
2. 积极参加劳动实践，全程体验劳动快乐，如：植树、种菜等；
3. 主动承担简单家务，培养良好劳动习惯，如：整理房间、洗衣服等；
4. ……（补充一两点个人想法）
写作要求：
1. 围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实，意思连贯，表达流畅；
2. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称：
3. 词数 100 词左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：labor courses劳动课；form v. 养成
Good morning, everyone. I’m Xu Fei. It’s my great honor to stand here to give a speech.
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_________In a word, I warmly welcome the labor education and call on us all to value the working spirit.
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8．有人说，劳动创造生活；有人说，劳动带来美好。请根据下表中内容和所给提示，谈一谈你对劳
动的看法，说一说你经常从事的劳动工作及其个人感受。
At home do the dishes, clean rooms, ...
Kinds of Labor At school sweep floors, water plants, ...
At community help old people, visit sick kids, ...
Meaning of Labor Improve our physical health...
提示：（1）What labor would you like to do?
（2）Why do you do it?
注意：（1）短文须包括表格中的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
As we know, labor can create a colorful life and bring happy things.
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1．（2023·青海西宁·统考中考真题）为提高自理能力，适应未来发展，青少年应学会做日常家务，
培养必备生活技能，如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 为题写一
篇80词左右的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
要点提示：1.你会做哪些家务？2.你想学哪些家务？为什么？3.对你有何帮助和意义？
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
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1. （2023·内蒙古通辽·统考中考真题）
勤劳是中华民族的优秀传统美德，青少年要继承并发扬这一传统美德。请结合下列提示及自身实际，以
“Doing Housework”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：
1. 请列举你经常做的家务活；
2. 你还打算学做什么家务及原因；
3. 谈谈你对做家务的看法。
要求：
1. 思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
Doing Housework
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2. （2023·山东临沂·统考中考真题）
作为家庭的一员，每个人都有做家务的责任和义务。请以“My Experience of Doing Housework”为题，根
据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文。提示：
1. What housework do you usually do?
2. Tell an experience of doing housework.
3. What have you learned from it?
要求：
1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2.不少于80词。
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3. （2023·四川眉山·统考中考真题）
劳动创造美好生活，劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生，请你根据下表要点，以“Labor is Glorious (劳动
光荣)”为题，向校报“英语园地”栏目投稿。
在学校，和同学一起打扫教室和操场；
劳动实践 在家里，做饭、洗衣服、整理房间；
在社区，做志愿者，帮助老人或残疾人。
学到一些基本生活技能，学会照顾自己；
劳动收获
获得满足感，变得更加独立和有责任心。
发出倡议 ……
注意：
1. 词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Labor is Glorious
It’s well known that labor is glorious.
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某英语报社组织关于学生做家务的讨论，有人赞同，有人反对。请你根据提示，选择一个你同意的观点，
用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。
Agree with doing chores Disagree with doing chores
●develop students’ independence; ●waste of students’ time;
●learn to look after themselves; ●is the parents’ job;
●... ●...
注意：
1.依据你选择的观点，将标题补充完整；
2.理由必须包括表中你所选择观点的相应内容，并补充一个理由；
3.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
4.词数：80~100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
________ with doing chores
We’ve had a discussion about doing chores. Some students agree, while others don’t. I think
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5. （2022·内蒙古鄂尔多斯·统考中考真题）
近日，教育部发布《义务教育劳动课程标准》，今年秋季，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在
生活中，做家务就是最常见的一种劳动。请以Let’s do housework为题写作，倡议更多的青少年加入到做家
务的行列中来。
要点：
1.你能做的家务；
2.做家务的益处；
3.倡议更多的青少年加入到做家务的行列。
写作要求：
1.书写工整，卷面整洁，行文连贯，结构完整；
2.包含以上所有要点内容，可适当发挥；
3.词数：不少于 80 词；
4.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。Let’s do housework
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6. （2022·四川资阳·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Tom发邮件询问你对中学生做家务劳动的看法。请你用英语回复，内容包
括：
1.赞成中学生做家务劳动，并阐述理由；
2.介绍你常做的家务劳动，并谈谈感受。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Glad to receive your e-mail!
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
