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Unit10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“历史、社会与文化” 这一主题群，涉及子主题有
“中外名胜古迹的相关知识和游览体验”等。常见的写作任务是介绍景点或最喜欢的地方等。体裁多为
书信、图表类应用文、说明文或议论文等。
【写作技巧】
此类写作要求学生能够运用"have ever been to..."表达某人曾经去过某地，运用"have ever
done sth."表达曾经历过某事，运用一般将来时表达对未来的期望。
本单元话题近3年中考试题中的考查角度涉及：介绍某人的家乡。其他常见写作角度有：①介绍某个
国家或城市；②介绍某人曾经的一次旅游经历。
【作文思维导图】【单元素材积累】
必背句型
◆开头句
①The best place I've ever visited is Beijing.
②The most beautiful city I've ever been to is Xiamen.
③National Day is coming. It is a good idea to go on a trip to Disneyland in Shanghai.
◆中间句
①It is famous for its beautiful mountains and rivers.
②Visitors can enjoy not only its ancient buildings but also the modern life in Beijing.
③Also，there are lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose.
◆结尾句
①What a great trip I had!
②I believe you'll have a great time there because it's such a great place.
③I hope I can go there again.
◆谚语积累
①Life is like a trip. Do not have to care about the destination but the scenery along the way and the
mood to see the scenery. Let the mind to travel.人生就像一场旅行，不必在乎目的地，而是沿途
的风景以及看风景的心情。让心灵去旅行。
②Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles.读万卷书，行万里路。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
写作任务 (Section B 3b)介绍你游览过的一个地方
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
某英文网站正在开展以“大美中国”为主题的征文活动，你打算参加。请你写一篇英语
短文介绍你游览过的一个地方，为此活动做准备。
●【审清题目】
内容：介绍你游览过的一个地方（可从其位置、面积、人口数量等着手，着重介绍该地景点
和美食）。
文体：说明文。
时态：以一般现在时为主。
人称：以第二人称和第三人称为主。
●【头脑风暴】
Size and location History
Population A trip to ... Places to visit
Weather Things to eat / drink
●【提供素材】
◆常用词块 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。
Size and location ·the size of ..., ... square kilometers, has / covers an areaof ..., one of the largest ... in ..., with an area of ...
·lies in / between ..., stands at the foot of ..., is located in /
on ..., is in the south / ... of China / ...
(1)______________(有……人口), a big / small city / county (
Population 县) / ... with a population of ..., the population of ..., its
population ...
warm all year round, (2)______________(夏天热，冬天
Weather 冷), neither too cold nor too hot, the average (平均的)
temperature, (3)______________(温暖的阳光) ...
History with a history of ..., has a history of ...
·many places of interest, beautiful scenery (风景), one of the
most popular tourist destinations (目的地) ...
Places to visit
·Litang Monastery (理塘寺), Mount Genie (格聂神山),
Maoya Steppe (毛垭大草原) ...
·(4)______________(美食), special drink ...
Things to eat /
drink ·barley wine (青稞酒), buttered tea, roasted barley flour (糍
粑) ...
Key:
1. has a population of ... 2. hot in summer and cold in winter
3. warm sunshine 4. delicious food(s)
◆常用句型
· Have you ever been to ...?
· It's a good place to ...
· The weather there is ...
· It is famous / well-known for / as ...
· The best time to visit ... is ...
· There are many tourist attractions (向往的地方), such as ...
· If you are a(n) ..., you can ...
· You're sure to have a great time in ...
· If you like traveling, you should go ...
· ... is highly recommended (推荐) / I'd like to recommend ...
●【谋篇布局】
将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。介绍一处旅游打卡地
◆点明介绍的地方
I've been to Litang county. I fell in love with it when I first traveled there. Now I'd like to
recommend it to you.
◆介绍该地方
（位置、人口、面积、景点、节日和特色食物）
Litang county lies in the west of Sichuan. (1)________________(它是一个人口约七万四千八
百人的小县城). It covers an area of about 14,360 square kilometers. It is famous as “the city in the
sky”. (2)________________(参观它最好的时间是春天和秋天). There are many tourist attractions,
such as Maoya Steppe and Mount Genie. You can enjoy the beautiful scenery in the fresh air, take a
walk in the untouched forests and take photos in the green grasslands there. There is also a horse racing
festival. (3)________________(它通常在八月的第一周举行). You can watch exciting horse races
and wonderful performances. If you are a food lover, you can try buttered tea and roasted barley flour.
(4)________________(它们非常特别).
◆推荐该地方
If you want to enjoy the natural beauty, you should go to Litang county.
(5)________________(如果你想体验不同的文化，你应该去理塘县). It will never let you down.
Key:
1. It is a small county with a population of about 74,800
2. The best time to visit it is spring and autumn
3. It usually takes place in the first week of August
4. They are very special
5. If you want to experience different cultures, you should go to Litang county
范文剖析
读万卷书，行万里路。同学们，你游览过中国的哪些地方呢？请以
“The Best Place I've Ever Visited”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80
词左右的短文，介绍你游览过的最棒的地方。
提示：
1.你游览过的最棒的地方是哪里；2.简要介绍这个地方的特点；
3.你在那里游览时的经历和感受。
►►审题指导
1.文体:记叙文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
►►思路点拨
►►范文赏析
The Best Place I've Ever Visited
The best place I have ever been to is Beijing.①It is a beautiful city and it has a
history of more than 3,000 years.It attracts lots of visitors every year.② Visitors can enjoy
its ancient buildings and the modern life in Beijing.
I have been there once. And I enjoyed many places of interest,such as the Great
Wall,the Palace Museum and so on. When I visited these places,③ I felt very happy.I also
tried the well-known traditional dishes—Beijing hot pot and Beijing roast duck.④They were
delicious.
I believe you'll have a great time there because it's such a great place.The Best Place I've Ever Visited 升格技巧
The best place I have ever been to is Beijing.①It 技巧一：巧用with
is a beautiful city with a history of more than 3,000
结构表伴随状况升格①
years.It attracts lots of visitors every year.② Visitors can
enjoy not only its ancient buildings but also the modern life 技巧二：巧用not only…
in Beijing. but also…句型升格②
I have been there once. And I enjoyed many places of 技巧三：巧用
interest,such as the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and so
have a strong feeling of
on. When I visited these places,③ I had a strong feeling of
satisfaction satisfaction短语升格③
from the bottom of my heart. I also tried the well- 技巧四：巧用
known traditional dishes—Beijing hot pot and Beijing roast
so…that…句型升
duck.④ They were so delicious that I liked them very
much. 格④
I believe you'll have a great time there because it's
such a great place.
【中考链接】
假如你是Jenny，请你给你的朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你和父母在暑假时来中国旅行的所
见、所闻、所感。词数不少于80。
Places Xi’an Beijing
Things visited the Terracotta Army visited the Great Wall, ate Beijing Roast Duck and Beijing snacks
Feelings wonderful; great excited
Dear Tom,My parents and I had a good trip in China.
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We’ll be back soon. See you.
Yours,Jenny
【答案】参考范文
Dear Tom,
My parents and I had a good trip in China.
First, we went to an ancient city—Xi’an. It is one of the most beautiful cities that I have ever visited. We
stayed there for three days and visited the Terracotta Army. The weather was great and the Terracotta Army was so
wonderful that we took a lot of photos.
After that, we went to Beijing to visit the Great Wall. It’s a good place to visit and there were many tourists. I
was so excited when I was climbing the Great Wall. Just as the Chinese often say, “One who fails to reach the Great
Wall is not a hero.” I felt like a hero when I stood on the top of it. We also ate Beijing Roast Duck and Beijing
snacks. They were quite delicious.
We’ll be back soon. See you.
Yours,
Jenny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接邮件开头，引出话题；
第二步，先按照表格中的要点介绍去西安的所见、所闻、所感，再介绍北京之旅的所见、所闻、所感，可
列举具体的事例；
第三步，表示会尽快回来并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①feel like感觉像
②on the top of在……的顶端
[高分句型]
①It is one of the most beautiful cities that I have ever visited.（that引导限制性定语从句）
②The weather was great and the Terracotta Army was so wonderful that we took a lot of photos.（so…that引导结
果状语从句）
③I was so excited when I was climbing the Great Wall.（when引导的时间状语从句）④Just as the Chinese often say, “One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”（引用名言名句）
【必备范文】
中国第一个迪斯尼乐园——香港迪斯尼乐园(Hong Kong Disneyland)于2005年9月12日正式向游人开
放。请根据表格中的信息写一篇短文。
要求：短文包含所有提示信息；不少于70词
Things to see Things to do
1. Mickey Mouse. 1. Watch Disney movies.
2. Donald Duck. 2. Eat in Disney restaurants.
3. Many other famous Disney characters. 3. Buy Disney gifts.
4. Go to Disney parties.
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【优秀参考范文】
Have you ever seen Mickey Mouse or Donald Duck in real life? Do you want to play with them? If so, you
can come to Hong Kong Disney land. Here you can see the clever Mickey Mouse, the lovely Donald Duck and
many other famous Disney characters. You can also watch Disney movies, enjoy delicious food in Disney
restaurants and buy Disney gifts for your friends. You can go to Disney parties too. Come and visit it yourself!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍来香港迪士尼能看到的东西和能做的事情。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。先介绍在香港迪士尼能看到的东西，再介绍在这能做的事情，写
作时保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。
13．书面表达
请以“My trip to Kunming”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记述你的一次旅行。
要求：1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；
2.不少于80词。
提示：
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel about the trip?
My trip to Kunming____________________________________________________________________________________________
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My trip to Kunming
I went to Kunming with my parents last summer. We went there by train. We spent three days in Kunming. It
was really a beautiful place. We visited the Stone Forests, the West Mountain, the Flower Market and so on. Also,
we went to the National Village, where there were a lot of national performances. Some were singing, some were
dancing. The singing was very pleasant and the dance was also very exciting. We took lots of photos there. We also
tasted the Crossing Bridge Rice Noodles. We really had a good time and I would never forget it. What a happy trip
in Kunming!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题属于话题作文，要求以“My trip to Kunming”标题，根据提示内容记述一次你
的旅行。写作时要紧扣提示内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一
遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 参考范文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的参考范文。参考范文紧扣题目要求，开篇点题，通过回答提示中的
三个问题记述了自己去昆明的旅行。参考范文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：by train；spend；also；and so on；a lot of；take lots of photos；have a good time。
句型：where引导的非限制性定语从句；感叹句。
书面表达
你到过什么地方？你对它有什么深刻的印象？请用英语写一篇短文来介绍你游历过的城市或景点。80词左
右。
要点提示：1. Have you been there before?
2. Why do you like this place?
3. What do you think of the people there?
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【优秀参考范文】
Have you ever been to Wuhan? I have been there several times. I think it's really a beautiful city. I fell in love with
it when I first traveled there. It has many nice places. The traffic is fine. And the people are friendly. There are some
beautiful parks. In the zoo, you can see many kinds of animals. You can easily buy what you want, because there
are supermarkets everywhere. Buses and taxis can take you where you want to go. The drivers are polite. You willfeel comfortable. Please travel to Wuhan. I would like to be your tour guide.
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我游历过的城市或景点。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在完成时和一般现在时，人称为第一，二人称，注意主
谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I have been……，
The traffic is……，There are……，I would like to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式
交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我去过武汉几次，接下来介绍我喜欢武汉的原因，最后指
出我对武汉的看法。此处fall in love with, many kinds of, would like to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不
少。
假如你是Li Ming，去年夏天去了海南旅游。请你根据要点和所给句型描述一下你去过的海南岛，词
数80左右。
1. 参考词汇: the second largest island, hot, water sports, scuba diving (潜水)
2. 参考句型: Have you ever tried/seen/been...?
If you..., you will/can....
You should... (walk along the beaches)
One great thing about...is... (try sweet fruit)
I have been to Hainan Island
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【答案】例文
I Have Been to Hainan Island
I had never been to Hainan Island before, so I decided to go there last summer.
Have you ever been to Hainan Island? It is the second largest island in China. It’s a beautiful place. If you go
there, you should walk along the beaches. The weather in Hainan is very hot, so people like doing many water
sports, such as scuba diving, fishing, swimming, surfing and boating. One great thing about Hainan is that you can
try many kinds of sweet fruits there.
If you go to Hainan, I’m sure you will enjoy yourself, and have a great time there.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意根据参考词汇和参考句型描述一下你去过的海南岛，适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我以前从未去过海南岛，所以去年夏天我决定去那里。”来引出重点介绍
的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍海南岛的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“如果你去海南，我相信你会玩得很开心，在那里玩得很愉快。”
[亮点词汇]
① like doing sth喜欢做某事
② many kinds of许多
[高分句型]
①If you go there, you should walk along the beaches. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②The weather in Hainan is very hot, so people like doing many water sports, such as scuba diving, fishing,
swimming, surfing and boating.（so连接表因果关系的并列句；such as表示“例如”）
3．请根据提示写一篇关于你最熟悉或印象最深刻的地方的报道，不少于60词。
要点提示：
1. 此地所处的位置、面积；
2. 此地的气候状况；
3. 此地的自然景观；
4. 此地的饮食等风土人情。
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【答案】One possible version:
My hometown is in Hainan. It is a beautiful island. And it is the second largest island in China. It is in the
south of China. The climate is neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.
You can enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful beaches here. You can also eat the delicious seafood,
walk along the beautiful seaside or swim in the blue sea here.
People in my hometown are very easy to get along with. They are friendly and they are always ready to helpyou.
I’m sure you’ll fall in love with my hometown as soon as you see it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意条理清晰、逻辑连贯、无语法使用错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这个地方是哪里，它所处的位置和面积；
第二步，介绍该地的气候状况和自然景观；
第三步，介绍该地的风土人情；
第四步，总结全文，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① in the south of 在……的南方
② neither ... nor 既不……也不……
③ get along with 与……和睦相处
④ fall in love with 爱上
[高分句型]
① You can also eat the delicious seafood, walk along the beautiful seaside or swim in the blue sea here.（or连接的
并列句）
② I’m sure you’ll fall in love with my hometown as soon as you see it.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
4．假如你是李华，上周你和父母一起去西安旅行。请你根据下面的表格提示写一篇英语短文，向大
家介绍一下西安这座城市。要求不少于80词，可适当发挥。
Location In the center of Shaanxi Province
Area 10,108 km
History More than 3,000 years
Places of interest The Terracotta Army, Bell Tower…
Climate Four different seasons
Things to eat Noodles, dumplings…
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【答案】参考范文
Have you ever been to Xi’an? It’s a beautiful city. It lies in the center of Shaanxi Province and covers an area
of 10,108 square kilometers. With a history of more than 3,000 years, there are many places of interest in Xi’an,
such as the famous Terracotta Army and the amazing Bell Tower. Xi’an has four different seasons. Each season has
its own features. Besides, the food in Xi’an is great. If you go to Xi’an, you will have a chance to try the delicious
noodles and dumplings there. One great thing about Xi’an is that it has convenient transportation. You can go to
different places easily by subway or by bus. It’s really a great city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍西安的地理位置和占地面积；
第二步，按照表格中提示的要点介绍西安的历史、著名景点、气候、美食等，还可以补充交通出行方面的
便利等，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，发表对这座城市的评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with a history of有着……的历史
②places of interest名胜古迹
③convenient transportation便利的交通
[高分句型]
①With a history of more than 3,000 years, there are many places of interest in Xi’an, such as the famous Terracotta
Army and the amazing Bell Tower.（介词短语作伴随状语）
②If you go to Xi’an, you will have a chance to try the delicious noodles and dumplings there.（if引导条件状语从
句）
③One great thing about Xi’an is that it has convenient transportation.（that引导表语从句）
5．学校英语角本周的主题是“我最喜欢的国家”。假如你是李华，最喜欢的国家是新加坡，请你根
据以下提示内容，以“My Favourite Country”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍新加坡。要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
My Favourite Country
My favourite country is Singapore.
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【答案】范文
My Favourite Country
My favourite country is Singapore. It is located in the southeast of Asia. Singapore City is the capital of
Singapore. It is also called the Lion City. It is a very beautiful and clean city. There is no dust in the air. And it is
famous as the business centre. Singapore is a young country and an island with a long history. There are lots of
places of interest, such as Singapore Zoo and Sentosa Island. So, it’s a good choice for a holiday.
Do you like Singapore? I’m sure you will have a good time there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给的有关新加坡的信息。可适当添加细节。[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明自己喜欢的国家是新加坡，并从“位置、首都、历史和旅游业”等方面进行介绍；
第二步，书写结语，推荐去新加坡旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in位于，坐落于
②be famous as作为……而出名
[高分句型]
①There is no dust in the air.（there be句型）
