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Unit 1 What's the matter？
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题有“健
康、文明的行为习惯与生活方式，安全与防护”等。常见的写作任务是描述某人的健康问题并给出
合理建议。体裁多为记叙文、书信等应用文或说明文等。
本单元的写作任务是会写针对健康问题提出合理化建议的短文。在写作过程中，要求同学们熟悉人体部
位的表述，掌握描述人体的不适等健康问题。要注意关键词语的正确使用，并能够针对健康问题运用情
态动词should和shouldn't提出更加正确、具体和深入的合理化建议。
【中考分析】
【写作目标】
能表达生活中存在的健康问题，并就这些提出建议；能描述意外伤害事故，并给出合理的应对措施。
1.能用"have.."表达健康问题及意外事故。
2.能描述健康问题的状况或意外事故发生的过程及病情或受伤的程度。
3.能用"shouldshouldn't"提建议。
4.写作微技能：不同句式的表达。
【写作技巧】
本单元围绕“健康与急救”这一话题,本单元中常会涉及谈论健康问题或意外事故等,并给出
建议。在写这类文章时,要运用一般过去时来描述过去发生的事情。注意行文应完整、流畅。
健康话题是新课标要求学习的话题，也是单元测试中和中考中常考的作文类型。【写作思维导图】
【单元素材积累】
相关短语积累
必背短语：
1.have a cold感冒 9.go to a doctor看医生
2.have a toothache 10.lie down 平躺
3.have a stomachache 胃痛；腹痛 11.put some medicine on it 涂药
4.have a fever 发烧 12.get an X-ray做X光
5.have a cough 咳嗽 13.run out of用完；耗尽
6.take one’s temperature量体温 14.be in control of控制
7.have a sore throat喉咙痛 15.thanks to多亏
8.have a rest休息
(二) 常用句型积累
1.What’s the matter with you?你怎么了？
2.I have a cold.我感冒了。3.You should take your temperature first.你应该先量体温。
4.You should lie down and rest.你应该躺下休息。
5.You should drink some hot water with honey.你应该喝一些加蜂蜜的热水。
6.It’s important to keep healthy.保持健康是重要的。
7.You’d better take more exercise.你最好多锻炼。
8.If your head and neck still hurt tomorrow,then go to a doctor.
◆开头句
①As we know,health is very important to us.
②The following are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
③We should have a healthy lifestyle. Here is some advice.
◆中间句
①Firstly,to keep healthy,we'd better play sports at least one hour every day.
First，you should...Second，you...Third，you...
②We should also get at least eight hours' sleep at night.
③Try to be happy every day./Don't worry about your study. /.As for a headache，you should.../
.If you have a bad...，you should see a doctor/dentist.
◆结尾句
①I hope everyone can live a healthy life.
②To sum up,health is wealth.
③Follow the advice,and we will be healthy.
【名言积累】
①An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。
②Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.早睡早起让人健康、富
有和明智。【实例讲解 1】
How to Live a Healthy Life 升格技巧
Nowadays,more and more people have come to focus on 技巧一：巧用衔接词
teenagers' health.① As we know （众所周知）,health is very
升格①②⑤
important to us. Here is some advice.
技巧二：巧用it's
② First of all （首先）,to keep healthy,③ it's better to play
sports at least one hour every day .④ Enough exercise not only better to do sth.
makes us stronger but also helps us relax. We should also 句型
get at least eight hours' sleep at night so that we can have enough 升格③
energy to study.
技巧三：巧用not
⑤ What's more （而且）,we must believe in ourselves.⑥ Be only…but also…句
happy as possible as we can. Happiness is important to our health.
型
All in all,keeping healthy is very important 升格④
for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life. 技巧四：巧用as…as
句型升格⑥
【实例解析 2】
自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划
（2023-2025年）》的通知以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英文网站拟举
办一次以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健
康生活呢？请根据下面表格中的提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康这两个方面写一篇
80词左右的英语短文投稿。
physical health psychological health
（身体健康） （心理健康）
keep exercising believe in ourselves
sleep well be happy
… …
►►审题指导
1.文体：说明文
2.人称：第一人称
3.时态：一般现在时►►思路点拨
How to Live a Healthy Life
Nowadays,more and more people have come to focus on teenagers' health.①Health is very important
to us.Here is some advice.
②Firstly,to keep healthy,③we'd better play sports at least one hour every day.④Enough exercise
makes us stronger and helps us relax.We should also get at least eight hours' sleep at night so that we can
have enough energy to study.
⑤Secondly,we must believe in ourselves.⑥Try to be happy every day.Happiness is important to our
health.
All in all,keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life.
升格技巧
How to Live a Healthy Life
技巧一：巧用衔接词升格①②⑤
Nowadays,more and more people have come to
focus on teenagers' health.①_As we know（众所周知）,health is very
技巧二：巧用it's
important to us. Here is some advice. better to do sth.句型升格③
升格技巧
②First of all（首先）,to keep healthy,③it's better to play sports at least
one hour every day.④Enough exercise not only makes us stronger but 技巧一：巧用衔接词升格①②⑤
also helps us
技巧二：巧用it's
relax.We should also get at least eight hours' sleep at night so that we can
have enough energy to study. better to do sth.句型升格③⑤What's more（而且）,we must believe in ourselves.⑥Be happy as
技巧三：巧用not
possible as we can.Happiness is important to our health.
only…but also…句型升格④技巧
All in all,keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody
四：巧用as…as句型升格⑥
can live a healthy life.
【实战演练】
当前，全国儿童青少年近视率居高不下，教育部也于2023年3月30日印发了《2023年全
国综合防控儿童青少年近视重点工作计划》的通知。对于儿童青少年近视问题，你有何看
法和建议？请你根据下面的导图提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，告诉大
家如何保护视力。
审题指导
1.文体：________
2.人称：__________
3.时态：____________
4.写作要点：①________________________________；
②__________________________；③________________。
►►思路点拨►►小试身手
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
例文：
As we all know,eyes are very important to us. However,many students have poor eyesight.
In order to protect our eyesight,we should follow these suggestions.
Firstly,we should develop good habits of using eyes. For example,we'd better take a break
after reading for 30 minutes. Secondly,remember to do eye exercises often. It will help us to
keep good eyesight. Thirdly,a healthy eating habit is important as well. We should eat more
vegetables and fruit. What's more,we must spend less time on computers and mobile phones.
Last but not least,we must give up staying up late.
In a word,let's take action to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【真题解析】
UNIT 1 What's the matter?
写作能力提升练
一、写作任务。
眼睛让我们能够欣赏自然之美，领略这个多姿多彩的世界，也是我们与外界沟通和表达
情感的窗口。我们只有视力健康才能畅游知识的海洋。然而，越来越多的同学的视力下降得
愈发严重，很多同学都戴上了眼镜。为了保护视力，我国早在 1996年就确定每年的６月６日
为我国的全国爱眼日，号召大家科学用眼，保护视力。
请你从以下几个方面谈谈你对近视的看法：1.造成近视的原因；
2.近视对学习或生活的影响；
3.如何保护视力并号召大家行动起来。
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
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［谋篇布局］
［遣词造句］
beginning
<基础句型> Some students see the screen for a long time.一些学生长时间看屏幕。
<提升句型> Some students see the screen for a long time without a break.一些学长时间看屏幕，
没有休息。
<升华句型> Some students often spend much time on the screen without taking a break.一些学生花
费； 大量时间看屏幕，（眼睛）没有得到休息。
body
<基础句型> We can’t see the blackboard.我们不能看黑板。
<提升句型> If we are nearsighted, we can’t see the blackboard clearly.如果我们近视了，看黑板的时间就会不清楚。
<升华句型> If we are nearsighted, we can’t see the blackboard clearly, and then we can’t study
well.如果我们近视了，看黑板的时间就会不清楚，到时候我们就不能很好的学习。
ending
<基础句型> Take the advice and we will have good eyesight!听从这些建议，我们将会有好的视
力。
<提升句型> Don’t delay ! Act now without any cause.别再犹豫，现在就行动起来。
<升华句型> Don’t delay ! Act now without any cause. Hope all of us can have bright eyes and a
bright future.别再犹豫，现在就行动起来。希望我们都能有一双明亮的眼睛和一个明亮的未
来。
［连句成篇］
Eyes play an important role in our life. However, quite a lot of students are nearsighted for different
reasons. Some students often spend much time on the screen without taking a break. Some keep their
eyes too close to the books while reading and others often read in poor light.
Being nearsighted brings much trouble to our life and study. If we are nearsighted, we can’t see
the blackboard clearly, and then we can’t study well. Also, it’s inconvenient for us to wear glasses
when we are in a swimming pool or a bathroom. So, it’s important to protect our eyes. First, we
shouldn’t study for hours without breaks and we should limit the screen time. Second, going outside
for exercise and doing eye exercises regularly are also helpful.
Don’t delay! Act now without any cause. Hope all of us can have bright eyes and a bright future.
曾有这样的事件：老人跌倒，路人不敢出手相助。某记者就What would you do if an old
man fell down？这一问题对200名学生进行了调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇80词左
右的英语短文。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。What would you do if an old manfell down?
A reporter did a survey about “Whatwould you do if an old man fell down？”among 200 students. Here are
theresults.
______________________________________
The rest of the students said，“It depends on whether the old manneeds help or not.”
范文:
What would you do if an old man fell down?
A reporter did a survey about “What would you do if an old man fell down？” among 200 students. Here
are the results.
25% of the students would help the old man stand up at once without thinking, because they thought it was
their duty to help old people in trouble. And 40% of the students would offer help if the old man asked, and they
would ask someone else to help the old man together. About 20% of the students would refuse to help the old man,
because they worried that they might be regarded as the person who hurt the old man. But they would call the
police. The rest of the students said, “It depends on whether the old man
needs help or not.”名师点评：
◆过渡词运用恰当，使各要点之间过渡自然，定语从句、形式主语等的灵活运用，增强了文
章的整体性。
◆本文添彩点：
(1) 连词because, but 等的使用，使文章行文流畅，过渡自然；
(2) fall down, refuse to do, offer help, without doing 等短语的运用，增强了语义表
达的丰富性。
假如你们学校要举行以"优秀不是一种行为，而是一个习惯"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提
示用英语写一篇演讲稿，与同学们分享你的好习惯。
提示：
①Do you get up and go to bed early?
②Do you often play sports?
③Do you often read?
④Do you eat fruit and vegetables?
要求：70 词左右，可适当发挥；开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I do believe that excellence is not a behavior but a habit. Now let me tell you about my good habits. I get
up at 6:30 from Monday to Sunday. And I always go to bed before 9:30. I like playing sports. It's good for
health. I often play soccer with my classmates after school. I like to read books. I go to the library every
Saturday morning. And I read before I go to bed. As for food, I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every day.
That's all. Thank you!
这是一篇演讲稿。要求学生根据四个问题，介绍自己日常生活中的一些好习惯：作息的习惯；运动的
习惯；阅读的习惯以及饮食的习惯。写作时，应使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述，要注意英语表
达习惯和汉语的不同，如状语在句中的位置，句型的表达需要等。在句子之间还一个使用一些适当的
连词，使整篇短文语意连贯，表达流畅。
写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如：from Monday to Sunday；like playingsports；be good for health；go to the library等，高分句型（一） I often play soccer with my classmates
after school. 描述日常活动的句型。高分句型（二）As for food, I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every
day.描述日常饮食的句型。注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好一般现在时，以及一些
衔接词,如and, but ,before,as for等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
上周的体育课上，李明打篮球时严重摔伤了腿，引发了学校对“体育课安全”的关注。学校要求体育
委员在班会上讲一讲这个问题。请你以“How to keep safe in P. E. class?”为题，在班会课上作主题发言。
要求：语句连贯，词数90左右。
Good afternoon, everyone!
Do you know that we'll be in danger in P. E. class if we are not careful enough? For example, LiMing fell
down and hurt his leg badly when playing basketball in P. E. class last week.
How to help students stay away from danger in P. E. class? First, we should warm up before doing sports.
Second, we must wear sports clothes in P. E. class. Third, we must know some safe behaviors, for example,
drinking some water after P. E. class. In a word, safety is the most important thing. All of us should pay
attention to it.
That's all. Thank you.
【详解】这是一篇命题作文，时态是一般过去时和一般现在时，首先介绍体育课安全事故；然后介绍
体育课上怎样远离危险；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系
更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be in danger；for example；fall down；when+动词ing；how to
do；help sb. do sth.；stay away from；warm up；in a word；pay attention to等。最高级和宾语从句的运
用为文章增色不少，如：Do you know that we'll be in danger in P. E. class if we are not careful enough?In a
word, safety is the most important thing.等。连词and、if、first、second、third的运用使文章上下文联系
更为紧密。
近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效地自我保
护，免受伤害呢？我市正在举行以 "How to Keep Safe" 为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根
据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛。
How to Keep SafeTraffic traffic lights, electric bikes (电动车)…
Swimming rivers, swimming pool…
Internet ID number, code (密码), unhealthy websites…
… …
要求:⑴短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥；
⑵语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
⑶文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
⑷词数: 80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to
keep safe is very important.
First, we should follow the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we
shouldn't ride the electric bikes. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go
swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID numbers or codes
when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with
friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers
even the police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about selfprotection so that we can protect
ourselves well.
【详解】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍怎样保持健康。时态是一般现在时，首先介绍总结保持健康的
重要性；然后具体介绍怎样保持健康；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文
章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：how to do；go+动词ing；surf the Internet；what's more；go out；
without one's permission；be in danger；ask for help；afterall；so thatwant to do。状语从句When the
lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous.Third,
we shouldn't tell strangers our ID numbers or codes when we are surfing the Internet.If we are in danger, wecan ask for help from our parents or teachers even the police. We should learn something about selfprotection
so that we can protect ourselves well.；宾语从句Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we
are not careful enough?的运用为文章增色不少。连词if、first、when、second、because、third、what's
more、so that、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
在中国学习的英国交换生吉尔(Jill)近期总是头痛，她到医院诊治多次，但效果不佳。她听说中医保健
治疗效果不错，就登录了中国某健康网留言咨询中医孟大夫。假如你是孟大夫，请你根据以下提示，
用英语写一篇短文，回复吉尔。
提示：1）描述吉尔的病情；
2）分析原因；
3）给出建议：保证足够的睡眠并多做运动；多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉……(至少补充1条)
要求：90词左右，可适当发挥。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jill，
I'm sorry to hear that you are getting headache these days. You said you went to see the doctor，but you
didn't feel better. According to what you told me，I think the reason that you are headache is that you're too
tired. Here is my advice. First，you should get enough sleep every day，at least 8 hours at night. And you
should do more sports. Second，you should eat more fruit and vegetables. Try to eat less meat. Third，try
putting your feet in hot water for an hour before going to bed.
Hope you will be better soon.
Dr. Meng
【详解】这是一篇英语书信。在写作时要注意英语的书信格式。文章的内容要符合作文题目要求。短
文要包含提纲出现的所有信息。文章要给出治疗吉尔疾病的建议。文章的书写要有逻辑性，不要出现
语法错误。
这是一篇很好的英语书信。文章运用了一些固定短语和简单的结构，使得短文读起来很流畅。文章很
具逻辑性，语句简单，容易理解。很好的表达了作者的观点。
