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Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks.
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
“提供帮助和做志愿者”
志愿者活动
本单元以"志愿服务"为话题,应用文体裁居多,该话题属于中考常考话题之一。描述了发生在我们
身边的相关事情,目的在于教育学生团结互助,关心社会和谐发展。此类作文为英语中的常考话题作文,
写作时应尽量用倡议或号召性的语句或者用自己或他人亲身经历的事件鼓励、教育他人。
写作目标
1.掌握并熟练使用表达出活动的要点;
2.会写一些简单的应聘信;
3.清晰表达自己的能力。
写作步骤
◆ 1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分:
总------第一部分:开篇点题,引出话题。
分-------第二部分:活动内容以及提供的帮助。
总——第三部分:活动的感受。◆ 2.人称:第一人称。
◆3.时态:一般将来时、一般过去时。
I have read about....
申请目的
I want to be a volunteer of ...in....
I’m good at.../good with...
We can raise money for....
个人优势
We could do more meaningful things...
On the one hand,一方面
I’m able to...
On the other hand ,另一方
I will try my best to make the world more beautiful.
面
个 人 感 受 To be volunteers will be a great experience for me.
I hope I can get the chance.
真题感知
(2023·湖南湘潭·统考中考真题)
湘潭市博物馆正在为“讲好湘潭故事,传播本土文化”的大型宣传活动招募英语讲解员。假设你是李华,
你想参加此次活动,请根据以下提示用英语向活动负责人写一封自荐信。
要点提示:
(1)个人基本情况(姓名、年龄等);
(2)自荐的原因(性格、特长等);
(3)对活动的认知(感想或意义等)。
注意:(1)字数在80词左右,可适当发挥(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息(如校名,个人姓名等)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity.
My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old. I’m such an outgoing boy that it’s easy for me to communicate with
others. In addition, I’ve got varied hobbies, such as reading books, doing sports and performing the cross talk. I am
interested in Chinese traditional culture. I often read books about them. And I also take part in many activities like
this. I think this activity is very meaningful. It can make more people learn about our local culture. It can help to
promote cultural exchanges and development. If I am chosen to be a member of this activity, I will try my best to
do it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,表达想成为一名志愿者的意愿;
第二步,介绍自己的个人情况,自荐原因以及对活动的认知;
第三步,期待对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①in addition另外
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③take part in参加[高分句型]
①I’m such an outgoing boy that it’s easy for me to communicate with others.(such…that引导结果状语从句)
②If I am chosen to be a member of this activity, I will try my best to do it.(if引导条件状语从句)
【词汇积累】
1.help to do...帮助做..... 2.clean up打扫
3.cheer up使高兴起来 4.give out food分发食物
5.teach kids教学生 6.volunteer志愿者
7.give some advice给出建议8.make a plan制定计划
9.come up with想出......
10.work in an old people’s home在敬老院上班
11.help out with想办法解决
lonely孤独的
care for照顾decide to决定做
give up放弃at the age of在.....岁时
try out参加.....选拔tried doing尝试做
come true实现
learn something important学到了重要的东西
be interested in对......感兴趣
at the same time同时
volunteer to do自愿去做.....
put up张贴repair修理
give away捐赠
thank you for...因......而感谢
change my life改变我的生活
句型积累:
I’d like to help to clean up the city parks.我想去帮忙打扫市里的公园。
I can teach kids to learn English.我会教孩子们学英语。
Let’s make some notices.咱们做些通知吧。I want to be a volunteer in an old people’s home.我想在敬老院做志愿者。
I like reading newspaper to them.我喜欢读报给他们听。
We should listen to them and care for them.我们应该倾听他们并且照顾他们。
I love animals and want to be an animal doctor.我喜欢小动物想成为一名兽医。
8.I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their owners’
faces.我得到强烈的满足感当我看见他们主人脸上的喜悦感。
9.Volunteering here is a dream come true.能在这做志愿者,我的梦想实现了。
10.I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.我可以做我喜欢做得去帮助别人。
11.Helping others can bring us happiness.帮助别人能给我们带来快乐。
12.I think we’d better....我觉得我们最好....
13.In my free time I like to...so I think I’d be good at this job.
在业余时间我喜欢做所以我觉得我擅长这项工作。
14.I’m strong in....我强烈想加入....
15.I want to help out as a volunteer in your group.我想在你们的团队里做一名志愿者。
例题分析:
某儿童医院正在招募一批能在周末来医院帮忙的志愿者。假如你是Susan,你想成为其中的一员,请你给
该儿童医院写一封自荐信。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:应用文(自荐信);信的主体部分为说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称
2. 谋布局、写句子3. 巧衔接
本文要求写一封自荐信。在写个人优势时,我们可用 I’m ... 和I can ... 的平行结构作为一种衔接手段,
这样能使文章节奏匀称、紧致。
4. 成篇章
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to you about volunteering at your children’s hospital.
I would like to stay with kids. I’m in good health, so I can care for them well. And I’m friendly and outgoing. I believe
the kids there will like me.
I want to help out as a volunteer at your children’s hospital because I’m studying Child Health Care at school.
What’s more, I’m good with kids. I’m strong in playing the guitar and telling stories. I can also sing and dance. I
can use different ways to cheer them up.I’m free to be a volunteer on weekends, so I think I’d be good at this job.
Yours truly,
Susan
一、词汇积累
(一)动词短语
1. 打扫干净___________________
2. (使)变得更高兴;振奋起来___________________
3. 分发;散发___________________
4. 放弃___________________
5. 张贴___________________
6. 推迟___________________
7. 打电话给(某人) ___________________
8. 修理;解决___________________
9. 赠送;捐赠___________________
10. 建立;设立___________________
11. 帮助解决困难___________________
12. 用完___________________
13. 想出;提出___________________
(二)其他短语
1. 城市公园_____________________
2. 食物银行_____________________
3. 开心的表情_____________________
4. 一个课后计划_____________________
5. 由于_____________________
6. 从现在起_____________________
7. 清洁日_____________________
8. 残疾人_____________________
二、句子积累1. The girl could visit the sick kids in the hospital to cheer t hem up.
【不定式to cheer them up表目的】
我可以去敬老院逗老人开心。
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2. I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.
【what I love to do是作do的宾语,意为"做我喜欢的事情"】
我想做我喜欢的事情。
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3. Volunteering our time to help these people is a good idea to spend our free time.
【volunteering our time to help these people 在此句中是动名词短语作主语,volunteer time to do sth.意为"
自愿花时间做某事"】
我认为自愿每周花时间去帮助残疾人是很有意义的。
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4. I’d like to help homeless people. I want to travel alone.
【would like to do sth.与 want to do sth.是指"想要做某事"】
大学毕业后,我想成为一名志愿者。
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【参考答案】
一、词汇积累
(一)动词短语
1. clean up 2. cheer up 3. give out 4. give up
5. put up 6. put off 7. call up 8. fix up
9. give away 10. set up 11. help out with sth 12. run out of
13. come up with
(二)其他短语
1. city park 2. food bank 3. the look of joy 4. an after-school
program
5. because of 6. from now on 7. Clean-Up Day 8. disabled people
二、句子积累
1. I can go to an old people’s home to cheer them up.
2. I want to do what I love to do.
3. I think volunteering our time every week to help disabled people is meaningful.
4. I’d like to be a volunteer after I finish my college.(一)
1.为了更好地举办冬奥会,市冬奥办现在面向全社会招聘身体健康、热爱体育运动、乐于助人,并
能熟练运用英语和外国友人交流的志愿者。假如你叫李华,请根据以下提示和要求,写一封应征冬奥会志
愿者的自荐信。
提示:1. Why do you want to be a volunteer?
2. What can you do?
要求: 1. 自荐信须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 信中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
3. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. I’d like to be a volunteer for Winter Olympic Games. Because
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. I’d like to be a volunteer for Winter Olympic Games. Because I like sports. In
school, I often take part in all kinds of activities. I am good at English. I listen to English news on the radio every
day and can communicate with foreign friends freely. I am outgoing, too. I can get along with them and give them a
hand whenever they are in need.
I think volunteer work is great. I hope I can be a member of Winter Olympic Games. I’m looking forward to
your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,要求写一篇自荐信;
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作时应围绕所给提示信息写作,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:文章开头已经给出,应承接文章开头,接着写出想成为志愿者的原因及你擅长做的事情;
第二步:对自荐信进行总结,写出你的期待和愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加,参与
② communicate with sb 和某人沟通,交流
③ give them a hand 帮助某人
④ get along with 和某人相处
[高分句型]
① I can get along with them and give them a hand whenever they are in need.(用whenever引导时间状语从句)
②. I hope I can be a member of Winter Olympic Games. (hope后省略that的宾语从句)
(二)
2.根据以下提示,以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容:
1. 过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上;
2. 老师告诉我们有很多儿童缺少衣服和食物,更不能上学;
3. 从那以后,我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织;
4. 我为能帮助别人而自豪。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯;
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右(不含所给词)。
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help. I used to
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【答案】例文
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help. I used to buy clothes and snacks with my pocket money. But sometimes they were a
waste of money. One day, our teacher told us in some places in the world, there were many poor children and they
didn’t have enough clothes and food. They even couldn’t go to school. Hearing that, I felt sorry for them. I should
do something for them. From then on, I gave away my pocket money to an organization to help children. I hope I
can help the poor kids. At least they can buy a book. This makes me feel very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:注意不要遗漏提示内容中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上
下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。内容是根据提示,以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上;然后从老师那儿得知还有很多儿
童缺少衣服和食物,更不能上学;其次介绍从那以后,我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织。
第三步:书写结语。表示“我为能帮助别人而自豪。”
[亮点词汇]
①pocket money零花钱
②a waste of mone浪费金钱
③felt sorry for感到抱歉
④gave away捐赠
[高分句型]
①One day, our teacher told us in some places in the world, there were many poor children and they didn’t have
enough clothes and food.(there be句型)
②From then on, I gave away my pocket money to an organization to help children.(to help children.做目的状
语)③This makes me feel very happy.(make sb. do sth.让某人做某事)
(三)
3.假如你是Helen,你在某个图书馆的网站上看到了招收志愿者的公告,想申请成为其中一员。请你
根据下面的要点提示并结合自己的实际情况,写一封申请邮件。
提示:1. What kind of volunteer work do you want to do?
2. Can you do the work well?
3. Why do you want to do the volunteer work?
4. When are you free to do the work?
要求:1. 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文通顺、连贯;
2. 词数:80左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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___________ I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Helen
【答案】参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to volunteer as a student helper in the library. In my free time, I love reading all kinds of books. I’m
also good at Chinese and English. I think I can do the work well. I want to help students learn about the importance
of reading because it makes people smart. I can also do what I love to do and help others at the same time. I’malways free on weekends, so I’ll be able to volunteer there on time.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Helen
【详解】1. 题干解读:这是一篇电子邮件写作。主要是表达自己想要参加志愿者项目的愿望,题干中给出
了写作要点,写作时不要遗漏,可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导:要求是一封申请邮件,应用书信格式。时态:一般现在时;人称:第一人称。首先描述自己
想要做的志愿者工作以及自己做这份工作的优势;然后描述自己对于志愿者工作的理解;最后告知可以做
志愿者工作的时间。写作时要围绕主题灵活运用不同的短语和句式使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚。
(四)
4.第十九届亚运会即将在杭州市举办。亚组委正向全社会招聘志愿者。假如你叫李华,你对此很感
兴趣,写一封电子邮件应聘。
要求:
1. 乐于为国际友人服务;
2. 掌握丰富的文化知识,既是服务人员,也是文化的使者;
3. 具有流利的英语表达能力,能做好沟通工作。
参考词汇:
第19 届亚运会the 19th Asian Games;使者carrier;
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名;
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 词数在100左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. As the coming of the 19th Asian Games,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】参考例文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. As the coming of the 19th Asian Games, I’d like very much to be a volunteer.
My name is Li Hua. I’m good at English and Arabic. My spoken English is so good that I have no difficulty
communicating with visitors. I am always ready to help others. I am glad to provide the best service for athletes and
visitors during the games. I can lead the athletes to different places easily. Besides, I have a rich knowledge of
Chinese history, so I am not only a volunteer but also a carrier of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your reply. I hope I can play a role in making our city more beautiful and lively.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写信的目的——想成为一名志愿者;
第二步,具体介绍自己的优势;
第三步,最后期待能得到这次做志愿者的机会。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at擅长于
② have no difficulty doing sth做某事没有困难
③ not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
① My spoken English is so good that I have no difficulty communicating with visitors.(结果状语从句)
② I hope I can play a role in making our city more beautiful and lively.(宾语从句)
(五)5.假如你是李欣,一名英国交换生Judy向你咨询你校关于志愿活动的事情,请根据以下内容提示给
Judy写一封邮件,介绍你校的志愿活动。
内容提示:
What volunteering activities do you have in your school?
When do you usually do volunteering work?
How to join the volunteering activities?
Something more about the volunteering.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60—80;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Judy!
I’m looking forward to your exchange visit.
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Hope this helps and see you soon!
Love,
Li Xin
【答案】例文
Hi, Judy!
I’m looking forward to your exchange visit. There are all kinds of volunteering activities in my school. Let me
introduce some of them.
We can collect rubbish in the city park. We can also help the children who are in Children’s Hospital and cheer
them up. Besides, we can do volunteer work in the Old People’s Home. I usually choose to help the sick children,
because I like to stay with them. Also, I can get on well with children. If you want to join these volunteering
activities, you can send an email to school students’ union. We usually do these activities at the weekends. I think
you can get a lot by doing volunteering work.
Hope this helps and see you soon!
Love,
Li Xin【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍学校有哪些志愿活动,自己通常参加哪种志愿活动以及如何加入志愿活动;
第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to期待
②all kinds of各种各样的
③get on well with与……和睦相处
[高分句型]
①Let me introduce some of them.(祈使句)
②We can also help the children who are in Children’s Hospital and cheer them up.(who引导的定语从句)
(六)
6.假如你是李华,你参加了学校团委上周六组织的“用行动温暖世界”(Acts make the world warm)的
志愿者活动。请你根据以下表格信息,给你的笔友John写一封电子邮件
活动地点 街道、社区……至少补充两项)
活动内容 清洁街道;分发环保广告……(至少补充两项)
活动的感受 劳累但……
参考词汇:street, neighborhood, clean, tired but happy, ……
要求:
1.可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
Dear John,
Long time no see! Let me tell you something meaningful recently in my life.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear John,
Long time no see! Let me tell you something meaningful recently in my life.
Last Saturday, I took part in a volunteering activity “Acts make the world warm” organized by my school. The
volunteers went to the streets, neighborhoods, hospitals and old people’s home to do the volunteer activities. Some
of us cleaned up streets. Some handed out environmental advertisements. Some read stories to the sick children in
hospital. Others offered their help in the bus station. I took part in the volunteer activity at the old people’s home. I
helped them wash clothes and clean rooms. I also sang songs to the old people to make them happy. When we
finished the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候对方并提出要给对方介绍自己的一次有意义的活动(题目已给出);
第二步,具体介绍自己的一次志愿者的经历,包括活动的地点、内容以及自己的感受;第三步,最后期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in参加
② clean up打扫
③ at the same time同时
[高分句型]
① When we finished the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.(when引导的时间状语从
句)
② I also sang songs to the old people to make them happy. (不定式作目的状语)
(七)
7.假如你是李华,你和学校的志愿者最近开展了一次志愿活动,你的英国笔友Mike来信问及此事,
请你根据以下要点用英文给他写封电子邮件。
要点如下:
1.时间和地点:5月22日,敬老院;
2.参与人员:学校的志愿者;
3.活动:送鲜花水果,打扫卫生等;
4.收获:懂得关爱老人,团队合作。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:Old People’s Home敬老院
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your last email. Now let me tell you what we did in our last school activity.
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Do you have any volunteer work? I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your last email. Now let me tell you what we did in our last school activity.
Our school volunteers went to the Old People’s Home on May 22nd. We gave them flowers and fruits. We also
helped them clean up. Some students also gave them performances to make them happy. Through this activity, I
understand that we should care for the elderly and work together as a team. If we all give a little love, the world
will be better.
Do you have any volunteer work? I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍时间和地点:5月22日,敬老院。
第二步,介绍参与人员:学校的志愿者。
第三步,介绍活动:送鲜花水果,打扫卫生等。
第四步,介绍收获:懂得关爱老人,团队合作。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up清理
②care for关心
③looking forward to盼望
[高分句型]
①Some students also gave them performances to make them happy.(to make them happy.动词不定式作目的状
语)
②Through this activity, I understand that we should care for the elderly and work together as a team.(that引导的
宾语从句)
③If we all give a little love, the world will be better.(if引导的条件状语从句)(八)
8.假如你是李华,长春市图书馆英文图书室正招募志愿者。你想申请做志愿者, 请根据以下要点和
要求,用英语给负责人格林先生写一封不少于 40 词的申请书。
要点:
1.本人15 岁,来自第一中学;
2.擅长说英语,沟通能力强;
3.可以帮助读者介绍英文书籍、打扫卫生等。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
Dear Mr. Green,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文1
Dear Mr. Green,
I would like to be a volunteer in the library because I like communicating with others. I’m 15 years old. I’m
studying at No.1 Middle School. I’m good at speaking English. I can also help to introduce English books to the
readers. I’m willing to clean the library. Thank you for your kindness and consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文2
Dear Mr. Green,
I want to be a volunteer for the library. I’m a 15-year-old girl from No.1 Middle School. I’m fond of talking
with others and I do well in speaking English. I can help to clean the library and introduce English books to the
readers. I believe I can do it. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明想要申请做志愿者;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己,重点说明你的优势;
第三步,书写结语。希望能被录用。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to be想要成为
②be good at擅长
③consideration考虑
④be fond of喜爱
⑤looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I would like to be a volunteer in the library because I like communicating with others.(原因状语从句)
②I can help to clean the library and introduce English books to the readers.(动词短语并列)
(九)
9.学校学生会正在招募“手拉手”活动的志愿者,为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作(例如剪纸、
风筝、灯笼等),以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李欣,请你用英文给学校学生会写一封自荐信,在信中
说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你会做什么。
内容提示:
(1)Why would you like to be a volunteer?
(2)What do you think of traditional Chinese culture?
(3)What can you do as a volunteer?
(4)Something you’ve learned from volunteer experience.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60﹣80;文中已给出内容不计入总数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the student union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Xin
【答案】例文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the student union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I am Li Xin, a boy from Class 2, Grade 9. I have been a volunteer since I was a middle school student. I have
learned a lot from my volunteer work. For example, I know how to communicate well with others. The reason why
I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese
culture. Besides, My English is very good, so I can communicate with them very easily. I think traditional Chinese
culture is important and useful. I am going to show the traditional handicraft, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns
and so on to spread the traditional Chinese culture. If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international
students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. I’m sure they will be very interested in it.
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Xin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封信件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表明自己写信是为了推荐自己做一名志愿者;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“原因、对于中国传统文化的看法以及作为一名志愿者会怎么做”具体阐
述;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①look for寻找
②communicate with与……交流
③be interested in对……感兴趣[高分句型]
①The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to
spread Chinese culture. (why引导的原因状语从句)
②If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make
kites.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(十)
10.成都将于今年夏天举行世界大学生运动会,随着时间的日益临近,大动会主办方于近日开启了志愿者
招募工作。你是一名即将毕业的初三学生,很想成为一名大运会志愿者。请你根据所给提示,用英语给大
运会组委会相关负责人Jordan先生写一封申请信。
注意:
1. 须全面反映表格中信息;
2. 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名;
3 .词数:100左右。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Jordan,
I learn from the Internet that the World University Games will be held in the Chengdu where I live. I would
like to work as volunteer for it.
I’m a boy of 15 years old from a middle school. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with
foreigners fluently. What’s more, I’m so fond of sports that I am familiar with a lot of kinds of competition rules,
which can make me offer professional explanation. In addition, I am good at communication and always ready to
help others. What’s the most important is that I used to be a volunteer for the University Games, which gives me a
lot of experience related to games. I can help them better.
I also know Chengdu very well. Chengdu has a long history. I also know a lot about the traditional festivals
and meals. I will introduce Chengdu meat zongzi to them and teach them how to make it.
If given the opportunity, I will provide the best service for every athlete in World University Games . Looking
forward to your early reply.
Yours,
×××
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写
作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出申请成为大运会的志愿者;
第二步,具体阐述自己可以成为一名合格志愿者的优势;
第三步,书写结语,期待尽快收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more而且
②so...that如此……以至于……
③am familiar with熟悉
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]①What’s the most important is that I used to be a volunteer for the University Games, which gives me a lot of
experience related to games.(that引导的表语从句,which引导定语从句)
②If given the opportunity, I will provide the best service for every athlete in World University Games. (if引导的条
件状语从句)
1.(2023·广东广州·统考中考真题)
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme)为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动,交换生
Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Center
Activities …
Purpose …
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右(邮件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
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_______Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity
to you.
The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next
Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports
history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, “Healthy You and Me” speech will be on, too. If you want
to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes,
such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like.
The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I
am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节,并突出写作重
点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出对活动的重点介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“主题、时间、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,介绍活动的目的并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce...to...介绍……给……
②from...to...从……到……
③different kinds of各种不同的
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. nextSaturday. (and连接并列句)
②The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.(不
定式结构作表语和作宾语补足语)
2.(2022·辽宁盘锦·统考中考真题)
假如你是李华,你们学校将组织一次主题为“用行动温暖世界”的志愿者活动,活动地点在养老院。
你打算邀请你校的交换生Peter参加,请你用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的时间、地点、内容
以及需要做什么准备。
写作要求:
(1)内容包含以上信息,词数 80—100;
(2)文中已给出内容,不计入总词数;
(3)语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(4)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”. We
are going to organize the activity at the old people’s home in our neighborhood next Friday afternoon. We’ll meet at
the gate of our school at 8:00 am.As soon as we reach the old people’s home, we’ll help the old to clean their rooms first. Then we’ll have a talk
with them. We’ll tell them something interesting so that they can feel happy and comfortable. At last, there will be a
talent show. Some classmates will sing songs, dance and play games with them. Besides, remember to take a
camera to take photos and you should prepare something that you want to give them. I’m sure you can learn a lot.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一封电子邮件,要求以李华的名义给Peter写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加学校
组织的志愿者活动,需要将活动的时间、地点、内容以及准备事项一一列出。
2.写作指导:文章以第一人称为主,时态主要为一般将来时,注意主谓一致问题。写作时注意按要点分段
叙述,第一段介绍活动的时间、地点;第二段介绍活动的安排及准备事项;最后一段作为结束语。写作时
应注意英语句式结构的特点,语法应符合英语规范,用词准确。
3.(2022·四川眉山·统考中考真题)
本周日上午,一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观,现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华,请写一
封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括:
1. 自荐目的:成为志愿者;
2. 个人信息:身份,年龄,性格(外向、善于与人相处),本周日上午有空;
3. 个人优势:擅长英语,……;
4. 表达期望:获得机会并能做好,请本周五前回复。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇:三苏祠Sansu Temple
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students…
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday
morning. I’m willing to be a volunteer.
Let me introduce myself to you. I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl/boy who can
always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this Sunday morning. My oral English is so
excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about Sansu
culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it.
I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance. Please reply to me by Friday!(103 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者,注
意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的,自己的信息
和优势,以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
4.(2023·福建·统考中考真题)
某地“美丽乡村(Beautiful Village)”项目吸引了不少外宾,暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。
假定你是李华,希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示,给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文
自荐信。词数80左右。
What kind of person you are friendly, active…
What you are good at speak English, tell stories…
What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners…
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I
am suitable for the job.
First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have
won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local
culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help
foreigners better understand the life of the village.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封自荐信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍自己想成为“美丽乡村”项目的英语小导游;
第二步,具体阐述自己具备的品质和擅长做的事;
第三步,最后书写结尾,再次表达希望成为小导游中的一员。
[亮点词汇]
①be suitable for适合于……
②introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物
③Most importantly最重要的是
[高分句型]
①I think I am suitable for the job.(省略that的宾语从句)
②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.(if引导的条件状语从句;被动语态)
5.(2023·甘肃甘南·统考中考真题)第31届世界大学生夏季运动会于 2023 年 7 月至 8 月在成都举
行,大赛组委会(Organizing Committee)正在招募志愿者。假如你是Tom,今年15 岁,是一名甘肃的中
学生。请根据以下招募条件和自己的情况,向组委会写一封电子邮件,介绍你的基本情况、兴趣爱好(至
少两项)、特长(至少两项)以及其他符合招募的条件,简要谈谈志愿者工作的意义,并表达你想成为大
运会志愿者的愿望。
成都世界大学生运动会志愿者招募条件
◆会说英语
◆兴趣爱好广泛
◆有 2—3 门特长 ◆善
于与人打交道,对人友好
◆7—8月全天有空
要求:
1. 语句通顺,无语法错误
2. 过渡衔接自然,有恰当的开头和结尾;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;4. 词数80—100。
Dear Sir / Madam,
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Yours,
Tom
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam
I know that the Universiade will be held here soon. I want to apply to be one of the volunteers. I am a Junior
High School student. I am good at English, especially oral English. I like sports. I often play basketball with my
friends in my spare time. I’m also in the Green Earth Club at my school. We often share some knowledge about
environmental protection with other students.
If I can become a volunteer, I will communicate with college students from other countries in English, so that
they can better understand our city. I will also tell the knowledge of protecting the earth to them, so that they can
become an environmentalist during the Games.
I hope the organizing committee can agree with me to become a volunteer. I believe I will do better. I also
hope that the Universiade can be held successfully in Chengdu.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件作文;②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据是一封申请信,介绍自己的基本情况以及谈谈志愿者工作的意义,并表达你想成为大运会志
愿者的愿望。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的基本条件,包括自己的兴趣爱好、特长以及其他符合招募的条件;
第二步,谈谈志愿者工作的意义;
第三步,表达你想成为大运会志愿者的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②in my spare time在我空闲的时间
③agree with sb.同意某人的看法
[高分句型]
①If I can become a volunteer, I will communicate with college students from other countries in English, so that
they can better understand our city.(if引导的条件状语从句,so that引导的目的状语从句)
②I hope the organizing committee can agree with me to become a volunteer.(宾语从句)