Unit6Anoldmantriedtomovethemountains.-（人教版）（学生版）_新人教八下资料包_00、更新资料3月16日_单元写作深度指导-V34_2024版

Unit6 An old man tried to move the mountains. 单元写作指导与演练 近三年考情分析 话题 考查热度 传说和故事 叙述故事的发展情节和结局 本单元的话题是谈论神话故事或者传说，熟练使用过去时态，会编写一则小故事。注意记叙文写作的 时间、地点、事件、经过、结果等要素。能根据语境体会过去时态。如果从考试角度出发，本单元内容不 太会出相应的书面表达题目。但是，可以透过编写小故事，来理解不同的过去时态表达的含义。也是可以 尝试一下的。从重点考查学生以下能力： 1. 学会写记叙文； 2. 体会不同的过去时态； 3. 学会使用连词及过渡词。 写作目标 能写简短的通话或神话故事。 1. 能从who，when，where，what，how等问题出发， 完整地叙述故事； 2. 能用as soon as，unless，so... that...来连接句子，构成复合句； 3. 写作微技能：用合适的短语连接多个句子，构成复合句。一，写作步骤： 1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分： 总------第一部分：开篇点题。 分-------第二部分：记述事情的过程。 总——第三部分：总结观点或者表达感受。 2.人称：第一人称。 3.时态：一般过去时、现在完成时等。 真题感知 假定你是Li Hua，请给你的英国笔友Peter写一封信，介绍一个你熟知的成语（Chinese idiom）“掩耳盗铃 （Plugging Ears While Stealing a Bell）”，并简单解释一下这个成语的意思、说说它背后的故事和成语的 重要性。 提示词：deceive欺骗；embody体现。 写作要求：词数在100词左右，信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________ Yours, Li Hua 词汇积累： 1. try to试着 2. happen 发生 3. as soon as一......就 4. remind提醒 5. think about认为 6. find a good way to solve his problem找到解决问题的最好方式7. move a mountain移动大山 8. work hard努力工作 9. give up放弃 10. instead of代替 11. other ways别的方法 12. many sides很多观点 13. for the first time首次 14. main character主角 15. look like看起来像 16. become interested in对......感兴趣 17. come out出版 18. one of the most popular stories最受欢迎的故事之一 19. more than多于 20. be able to能够 21. so...that如此.....那么 22. when/while当......时候 ◆开头句 ①My favorite story is… ②Once there lived a fox and a crow. The fox was very cunning. ③Once upon a time，there was an ugly duck. ◆中间句 ①They laughed at him and even bullied him. ②What’s more，his owner often kicked him. ③One day，when he was walking beside a river，he… ④Whatever the fox said,the crow kept standing in the tree in silence until the fox told the crow he had the most beautiful voice. ⑤When the boat stopped sinking，the man drew a line on the side of the boat. ◆结尾句①From the story，I learn that… ②We are heroes of ourselves. ③If we put in more efforts，nothing is impossible. ④I think the story is interesting and meaningful. ◆谚语积累 1.A fall into the pit，a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。 2.No success in life merely happens.人生中没有什么成功是纯粹偶然得来的。 3.Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。 【话题范文剖析】 假如今天英语口语课的主题是“My Favorite Story”，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文讲述 你最喜欢的故事，在课上和大家分享。 要点提示： 1．What is your favorite story? 2．What is it about? 3．What can you learn from it? 要求： 1．词数：80左右； 2．书写工整，句式规范，条理清楚，标点符号使用正确。 _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ◆◆思路点拨◆◆范文欣赏 My favorite story is The Fox and the Crow.Once there lived a fox and a crow.The fox was very cunning．One day the fox found the crow carrying a piece of meat in his mouth.The fox wanted to get the meat in the crow's mouth.Whatever the fox said，the crow kept standing in the tree in silence until the fox told the crow he had the most beautiful voice.The crow was so happy to hear this that he opened his mouth to sing a song.As a result，as soon as he opened his mouth，the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got it. I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds us that we should never believe the person who wants to cheat us. (一)汉译英 1. 一……就……_________________________ 2.有点儿_________________________ 3. 试图做某事_________________________ 4.放弃_________________________ 5. 从前_________________________ 6.代替；反而_________________________ 7. 引导某人做某事_________________________ 8.爱上某人_________________________ 9. 结婚_________________________ 10.全世界_________________________ 11. 醒来_________________________12.迷路_________________________ 13. 看起来可能_________________________ 14.解决问题_________________________ 15. 一切皆有可能_________________________ 16.找到出路_________________________ (二)英译汉 1. take away _________________________ 2.turn...into... _________________________ 3. neither of _________________________ 4. leave sb.to do sth _________________________ 5. because of _________________________ 6. at other times _________________________ 句子积累 佳句欣赏与模仿 1. As soon as the man finished t alking, Yu Gong said that his family could continue to move the mountains after he died. 【as soon as 一……就；continue to do sth.继续做某事】 大灰狼一看到小红帽(Little Red Riding Hood)就开始跟踪她。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 尽管天开始黑了，大灰狼继续跟踪小红帽。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. This story reminds us that you can never know what’s possible unless you try to make it happen. 【try to do sth.尽力做某事】 大灰狼尽力让小红帽相信他。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. It’s leading us to that wonderful house made of bread, cake and sugar. 【lead sb.to do sth.引导某人做某事】 大灰狼诱使小红帽相信他说的话。 __________________________________________________________________________________________4. Why does the wife tell her husband to leave the children in the forest? 【tell sb.to do sth.叫某人做某事】 妈妈告诉小红帽尽快到外婆家。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. Gretel heard that their stepmother planned to kill her and her brother. 【plan to do sth.打算或计划做某事】 大灰狼打算比小红帽早一点到达外婆家。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. Later that night, they could see the stones because of the shining moon. 【because of 由于；因为 通常接短语】 [来源:学科网] 因为生病，你说话我听不清。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. But unless he can hide his tail, he cannot turn himself into a person. 【unless 如果不；除非】 大灰狼不能吃掉小红帽，除非她走到床边。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. She was so busy that she had no time to make a dress for the party. 【so...that...非常/如此……以至于……】 小红帽看到路边的美丽的花儿太高兴以至于她忘记了妈妈的话。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ （一） 1．假设你准备参加学校“英语角”开展的“用英语讲故事”活动，你选取了“曹冲称象”这个大家 熟悉的故事。请你根据下面图片的内容，用英语写一篇80词以上的小短文。 注意：标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed Cao Cao was very glad to have received an elephant as a present. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________ “Add up all the numbers and we will know the weight of the elephant,’’ Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride. （二） 2．同学们，你们一定了解“乌鸦喝水”这个寓言故事吧。请根据上图，以“The Crow and the Pitcher” 为题， 用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播出。 要求：1. 包含图片全部要点； 2. 你从中得到哪些启发，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：乌鸦crow；口渴的thirsty；鹅卵石pebble；罐子pitcher The Crow and the Pitcher ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 3．童话故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过《皇帝的新装》这个童话故事。请你根据下图提示，以 “The Emperor’s New Clothes”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播 出。 要求：1.语句通顺，没有语法错误； 2.包含图片全部要点； 3.从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥；4.80词左右。（温馨提示：亲，交卷前仔细检查一遍！） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 4．假如你是李梅，你的美国笔友Tom在昨天的 e-mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴 趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封e-mail，向他讲述这一经 典故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法。 play hide and seek (捉迷藏), full of water fall into, be frightened (惊恐的), cry, run for help think over, pick up, throw at break, be saved 作文要求： 1. 文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯； 2. 词数70个左右； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name Sima Guang Hit the Tank.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Mei （五） 5．同学们对“愚公移山”的故事一定有着很深的印象吧？请根据本单元所学内容及下面的提示词语，以 “The Story of Yu Gong”为题，把“愚公移山”的故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什 么。要求：80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词语：90, move the mountains, Zhi Sou, die, son, grandson, continue, god, be moved, help The Story of Yu Gong Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 6．假设图中的小男孩是Tony，图中的男人是Mr. Green，他是Tony的爷爷。请根据下面的漫画写一篇 文章，描述图片中所发生的事情。80词左右。提示词：blood血 finger手指 water tap水管 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 7．在我们的成长过程中，有很多耳熟能详的童话或寓言故事，请你根据下面的图片，以“Sima Guang Hit the Tank（缸）”为题写一篇英文文章。词数不少于80。 提示词：害怕的frightened/scared；哭cry；办法idea/way；石头stone；挽救save；聪明的clever；突然 suddenly ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 8．同学们，在我国古代有很多经典的童话故事，如：愚公移山、精卫填海、女娲补天等等。你一定 也听说过《后羿射日》的故事吧！假定现在一群美国小朋友来到你们学校做客，请你用英语写一篇小短文， 把《后羿射日》的故事讲给美国小朋友听听。 要点： 1. 从前，天上突然出现十个太阳。天气太热了，许多庄稼都干死了。人们不能像往常一样生活。 2. 后羿擅长射箭，天帝命令他惩罚太阳。为了拯救地球上的人，他决定射下九个太阳。 3. 后羿登上了一座大山，在那里射下九个太阳，最后一个太阳害怕了，承诺继续为大地和万物贡献光和热。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：庄稼crop；惩罚punish；为……服务/做贡献serve；箭arrow；天帝God Hi, boys and girls! Today I’ll tell you a story named Hou Yi Shoots the Suns. Once upon a time, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ This is the traditional Chinese story Hou Yi Shoots the Suns. Do you like it? （九） 9．请你根据提示和表格内容及要求，用英语讲述“曹冲称象”的故事。 提示：孙权送给曹操一头大象。曹操想知道大象有多重，但不知道如何称量大象的重量，他的儿子曹 冲想出一个好办法。 1. 先把大象引到船上，并在船上标记水位（the water level）； 方法 2. 把大象带走，然后往船上放石头，直到河水达到标记的水位；3. 最后称（weigh）一下石头的重量就可以知道大象的重量。 要求：1. 包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Today I’ll tell you a famous Chinese story named Cao Chong Weighed an Elephant. Here it goes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） 10．假如你是杨森，你的英国笔友Sally对中国文化很感兴趣，她希望你能给她介绍一些经典的寓言 故事。请你根据下面的提示及要求，给 Sally写一封邮件，给她讲讲“狐假虎威”的故事，然后请她谈一 谈对该故事的看法。 提示： 1. 很久以前，一只老虎在森林里抓到一只狐狸，想吃掉它； 2. 狐狸告诉老虎它是被派来做百兽首领的，如果老虎吃了它，后果会很糟糕； 3. 老虎不信，就跟在狐狸后面看其他动物是不是真的怕狐狸，结果动物们一看到老虎就都逃走了，老虎以 为他们害怕狐狸，所以把狐狸给放了。 要求： 1. 包含提示内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯； 2. 词数：80词左右（邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Sally, I’m glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Today I’ll tell a story about a tiger and a fox. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________ What do you think of the tiger and the fox? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Yang Miao （2023·吉林长春·统考中考真题） 某报正在以“Challenge”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于 80词的英语故事及体会来投 稿。 要求：1.写一个自身或其他人的故事； 2.适当增加细节，行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________（2023·湖北·统考中考真题） 尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德。东东的爸爸妈妈把乡下的爷爷接到了城里一起生活。假如你是东东 请结合图片提示，发挥你的想象，用英文写一篇80词左右的日记。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·天津·统考中考真题） 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一 个感人故事。 （1）一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。 （2）他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。 （3）了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。 （4）救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：蹲下 crouch down救护车 ambulance 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang. On a rainy day, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua （2023·四川南充·统考中考真题） 你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way（有志者事竟成）”为题向全校学生开展征文活动， 请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： （1）你对该谚语的理解； （2）你生活中的一个事例； （3）你的感悟。 要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4.词数100左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。 Where there is a will, there is a way Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （2022·新疆·统考中考真题） 初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记 忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。 例如：1.一次难忘的旅行 2.一次难忘的比赛 3.一次难忘的志愿服务 …… 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名： 3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。 Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories… ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________