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Unit 4 Why don't you talk to your parents ?
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，
涉及子主题有“良好的人际关系与人际交往；和谐家庭与社区生活”等。常见的写作任务
是描述自己与父母在沟通中遇到的问题和困难，讲述个人生活或学习中遇到的困难并寻求
建议和帮助，提出改善亲子沟通或解决问题的建议和方法等。体裁多为记叙文、议论文或
书信、电子邮件等应用文。
【写作技巧】
本单元的话题是“谈论烦恼和提出建议(Problems and advice)”。“谈论烦恼，提出建议”
是中考常考话题之一。该话题涉及的书面表达通常贴近学生生活，如“周末是否应该外出”
“和父母相处时的烦恼”等。此类文章通常以议论文的形式呈现，在写作时要注意观点明确，
论据充足。写此类短文首先应该掌握常用的提建议的句型，根据一定情景，明确提建议的方
法，再根据所提供的信息展开合理的发挥，使句子意思完整。
【写作目标】
1.能够综合运用本单元的知识就课外辅导班话题发表观点、阐述理由及给予建议。
2.能够从结构，内容和语言方面完成一篇就课外辅导班话题的书面表达。
3.学会客观地、辩证地看待压力，平衡生活和学习。
【单元素材积累】
短语积累
1.have free time有空闲时间 9. study too much学得过多
2.allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事 10. get enough sleep有足够的睡眠
3.hang out with sb. 与某人闲逛 11. write sb. a letter给某人写信
4. after-school classes课外活动课 12. call sb. up打电话给某人
5. get into a fight with sb.与某人吵架/打架 13. surprise sb. 令某人惊讶
6. until midnight直到半夜 14. look through翻看
7. talk to sb. 与某人交谈 15. be angry with sb. 生某人的气
8. too many太多 16. a big deal重要的事17. work out成功地发展;解决 30. be oneself做自己
18. get on with与...相处 31. family members
19. fight a lot经常吵架/打架 32. spend time alone独自消磨时光
20. hang over笼罩 33. give sb. pressure给某人施压
21. refuse to do sth. 拒绝做某事 34. have a fight with sb. 与某人吵架
22. offer to do sth. 主动提出做某事 35. compete with sb. 与某人竞争
23. so that以便 36. free time activities业余活动
24. mind sb. doing sth. 介意某人做某事 37. get better grades取得更好的成绩
25. all the time一直 38. give one’ s opinion提出某人的观点
26. in future今后 39. learn exam skills学习应试技巧
27. make sb. angry使某人生气 40. practice sports体育训练
28. worry about sth. 担心某事 41. cause stress造成压力
29. copy one’ s homework抄袭某人的作业 42. cut out删除
必背句型
1.I don’t really agree with … because …
我不同意……因为……
2. It’s bad for your study and health to surf the Internet until late at night.
上网直到深夜对你的学习和健康是不利的。
It is +形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事对某人而言是……
3.In my opinion, it is important for children / parents to …我认为，对于孩子/父母来说……是重要的
in one’s opinion 依……看。用来表达某人的想法。
4.I believe it is better if children / parents … 我认为如果孩子们/父母…….会更好
5.If children …, they will …如果孩子们…..,他们将会……
表达建议的句型
◆ Why not / Why don ’t you do sth.? 表示“你为什么不做某事呢?”。如：
Why not/Why don’t you call Mr. Miller now?
◆ What / How about doing sth.? 表示“做某事怎么样？”。如：
What/How about going to the party tomorrow?
◆ Let’s do sth. 表示“让我们做某事吧”。如：
Let’s volunteer in the hospital.
◆ You should do sth. 表示“你应该做某事”。如：
You should get up early.
◆ You could do sth. 表示“你可以做某事”。如：You could help do the dishes.
◆开头句
①As middle school students,we will face a lot of pressure in our daily lives.
②I'm sorry to know that you have such new trouble. Now I have some suggestions to
share with you.
③Recently,middle school students are under much pressure.
◆中间句
①In my eyes,we should take part in doing chores,such as washing the dishes and sweeping
the floor.
②The more we communicate with our parents,the better they can understand us.
③I'm good at every subject,but it's hard for me to get on well with my classmates.
◆结尾句
①I hope my advice can help you.
②In a word,we should help our parents lower the pressure.
③ Let's take action and do our best to make them happier and more relaxed.
④There are more ways than difficulties,so learn to smile.
◆谚语积累
①Understanding depends on good communication.理解取决于良好的沟通。
②Good communication is the bridge to success.良好的沟通是通往成功的桥梁。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
压力与兴趣：学生上课外兴趣班多多益善还是适量而行？写作任务
假如你校英文网站“Opinion”栏目刊登了一幅图片，邀请全校师生就图片内容发表自己的
观点。请你写一篇短文在评论区留言。
【审清题目】
内容：描述图片内容，然后给出自己的观点。
文体：议论文。
人称：以第一、第三人称为主。
时态：以一般现在时为主。
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
◆常用表达 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。
Describe the carry a big and heavy backpack (背包) with paintbrushes (画笔),a violin, and other things inside, head to the after-school interest
picture
classes, on one's way to, feel sad, out of breath, feel tired
Students should take as many after-
Students shouldn't take too many
Opinions school interest classes as
after-school interest classes.
possible.
• take up new hobbies
• (4)____________________(使
• (1)____________________( 帮
学生非常忙碌)
助学生在生活中更有竞争力)
• place great pressure on
• learn more skills
students
• (2)____________________( 增
• hardly have time to relax
加学生的知识)
Reasons • be too tired to learn well
• open students' minds
• do what they don't like
• (3)____________________( 对
• take away childhood (童年)
学生的未来重要)
from children
• be good for students' all-round
• (5)____________________(引
development
起健康问题)
• help students become successful
Key: 1. help students better compete in life 2. increase students' knowledge
3. be important for students' future 4. make students very busy
5. cause health problems
◆常用句型
描述图片内容
• This picture shows ...
• In the picture, we can see ...
• There is a boy in the picture and ...
发表观点
• In my opinion, ...
• I think / believe / feel that ...
• From my perspective (观点), it seems that ...
• I feel strongly that ...
• It seems to me that ...
• In my view (看法), ...
得出结论• Taking everything into consideration (考虑), I think that ...
• Considering all the information, it is clear that ...
• In conclusion (总之), students should / shouldn't ...
【谋篇布局】
将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。
描述图片内容
In the picture, (1)___________________________________________(我们可以看到一个男孩
背着又大又重的背包) with paintbrushes, a violin, and other things inside. He is struggling to head to
his after-school interest classes, out of breath and feeling sad.
发表“我”的观点并给出理由
I don't think students should take too many after-school interest classes. For one thing, when
students (2)___________________________________________(花费太多的空闲时间在它们上面)
they hardly have time to relax. (3)___________________________________________(如此繁忙的
生活会给他们带来巨大的压力). For another, many students may not be interested in those classes
they take. They do so just because their parents ask them to do so. If they do what they don't like,
taking those classes will be (4)__________________________________________(浪费时间和金钱).
结论
In conclusion, (5)_________________________________________(尽管课外兴趣班可以帮助
学生学习更多的技能), students shouldn't take too many of them. Let students decide to learn things
they like and have the free time to relax at the same time.
Key:
1. we can see a boy carrying a big and heavy backpack
2. spend too much of their free time on them
3. Such a busy life can place great pressure on them
4. a waste of time and money
5. although / though after-school interest classes can help students learn more skills
【中考链接】
时光荏苒，新一阶段的学习生活即将开启。对于未来，同学们期待中又有些许担忧。英
语课上，大家就新学期是否住校这个问题展开了讨论，请根据科代表整理出的结构图提示，
结合自己的看法，以“Are you going to live in the school?”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，在
下一堂课上进行分享。注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 要求语句通顺，行文连贯；
4. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：dormitory (n. 宿舍)
independent (adj. 独立的)
private (adj. 私人的)
manage (v. 管理)
Are you going to live in the school?
A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages
and disadvantages.
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Key: One possible version:
Are you going to live in the school?
A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages
and disadvantages.
Of course, I know as a boarder, not only will I save time to concentrate on schoolwork, but also I
can learn to be independent and manage my own life. Besides, I'll learn how to get along with my
roommates, so I can make more friends.However, in that case, I'm afraid I can't have enough private room and it can get in the way of my
sleep. I have been taken good care of by my parents since I was very young. But what should I do
without their company? I'll miss them so much that I can't put my time to good use.
All in all, I don't think I'll live in the school dormitory. Although studying is important, spending
time with family is more important, do you agree?
Word Bank:
boarder 寄宿生 concentrate on 集中(注意力)
besides 而且 in that case 假使那样的话 company 陪伴
某英文校刊最近就“How to Help Our Parents Lower the Pressure?”为主题展开了讨论。
假如你是校刊编辑李华，请以此为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，向该栏目投稿。要求：先
陈述以下同学的观点，然后发表你的看法。
►►审题指导
1.文体:议论文
2.人称:第一人称和第三人称
3.时态：一般现在时
►►思路点拨
How to Help Our Parents Lower the Pressure?
Last week,we had a hot discussion about how to help our parents lower the pressure.
Different students have different ideas.
① Ann thinks we should always try to communicate with our parents to understand
them better.As for Sam,he tries to lower his parents' worries by studying hard and gettingbetter grades.
②In my eyes,as members of the family,we should do some chores,such as washing the
dishes and sweeping the floor.③ We should take a walk with our parents after a meal
because fresh air and
exercise can help us feel more relaxed.Also,if we work hard,our parents will not worry
about us.
④ In a word,we should help our parents lower the pressure.Let's take action and do
our best to make them happier and more relaxed.
How to Help Our Parents Lower the Pressure? 升格技巧技巧一：巧用
Last week,we had a hot discussion about how to help “the+比较级…，the+比
our parents lower the pressure. Different students have 较级…”句型升格①
different ideas.
① Ann thinks the more we communicate with our 技巧二：巧用it is +n.+to do
parents,the better we can understand them.As for Sam,he sth.句型升格②
tries to lower his parents' worries by studying
hard and getting better grades. 技巧三：巧用衔接词升格③
② In my eyes,as members of the family,it is our
duty to do some chores,such as washing the dishes and 技巧四：巧用
sweeping the floor.③Besides（除此之外）,we should take be expected to
a walk with our parents after a meal because fresh air and do sth.升格④
exercise can help us feel more relaxed. Also,if we work
hard,our parents will not worry about us.
④ In a word,we are expected to help our parents
lower the pressure.Let's take action and do our best to
make them happier and more relaxed.
【必备范文】
现在很多青少年沉溺 (indulge in) 网络，不爱学习，不爱运动，不与人交际
(communicate)，爱吃垃圾食品等等，这些严重影响了他们的身心健康。为此，学校决定本周
五下午举办一场主题为“我阳光，我健康”的演讲比赛。你也想参加这场演讲比赛，请根据下图提示以“How to Be a Sunny Person”为题写一篇演讲稿。
Less internet: fewer computer games, study
More sports: run, swim
How to Be a Sunny Person
Good hobbies: listening to music, drawing
Healthy habits: fruit, vegetables, wash hands…
Dream: …
要求:
1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点。
2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名。
4.词数80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
How to Be a Sunny Person
Hello, everyone. I am glad to be here to give you a report about how to be a sunny person.
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In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. I hope each of you can be a sunny
person.
【答案】例文：
How to Be a Sunny Person
Hello, everyone. l am glad to be here to give you a speech about how to be a sunny person.
First of all, using the lnternet properly is important for us to be a sunny person. If we use less
internet, we will play fewer computer games.We can use the lnternet to study instead of playing
games. What’s more, it is helpful to do more sports, such as running and swimming. We can run for
half an hour every day to keep healthy. In addition, it is good to develop good hobbies like drawing
and listening to music. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. Finally, we
should also develop healthy eating habits. We can have more vegetables and fruits and wash ourhands frequently.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. I hope each of you can be a sunny
person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，打招呼，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何成为一个阳光的人；
第三步，收尾并表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②instead of代替
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
①What’s more, it is helpful to do more sports, such as running and swimming. (it固定句式)
②If we use less internet, we will play fewer computer games. (if引导的条件状语从句)
假如你是李华，你在校报上看到你们学校新来的Lisa说她很孤独，性格内向，不擅长交
朋友，希望能得到帮助。请根据以下提示，给她写一封邮件，介绍一下你的好朋友 Han
Mei，希望她们能成为朋友，并对如何交朋友提出你的看法和建议。
要求：
1. 简单介绍韩梅的情况以及你们是好朋友的原因。
2. 你对如何交朋友的看法和建议。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 使用至少一个if 从句。
4. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息
Dear Lisa,
I’m Li Hua, welcome to our school. I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling lonely.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lisa,
I’m Li Hua, welcome to our school. I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling lonely. Don’t worry,
let me help you. I have a good friend and her name is Han Mei. She is more outgoing and friendly.
She is always ready to help others and she often helps to bring out the best in me, so she is a good
friend. If you can make friends with her, you’ll have fun together.
How to make friends? Here is some advice. First, if you are shy, you can ask the teachers for
help. What’s more, you must be friendly to your classmates, try to help them if they have problems.
Last but not least, you can also join the school clubs. If you are in the clubs, you will make some
friends because you have the same interest.
What do you think of my advice? Hope you can make good friends and feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，简单介绍韩梅的情况以及成为好朋友的原因；
第二步，介绍如何交朋友的看法和建议；
第三步，书写结尾，提出希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do准备做……
②bring out 激发，使显现
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①She is always ready to help others and she often helps to bring out the best in me, so she is a goodfriend.（so连接的因果并列句）
②If you are in the clubs, you will make some friends because you have the same interest.（if引导的
条件状语从句）
学校英语报正在开展以“To be an active student”为主题的英语征文活动，请你根据以下
图表，写一篇英文短文，向校刊投稿。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。
To be an active student
As a junior high student, it is very important to be active. But how to be an active student?
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【答案】例文：
To be an active student
As a junior high student, it is very important to be active. But how to be an active student?
Firstly, we need to eat different kinds of fruits and vegetables and play sports to keep healthy.
Secondly, it is necessary to be kind to others. We will make lots of friends and it can also help us live
happily. Thirdly, having hobbies like painting, reading or playing an instrument can make our life
more wonderful. Fourthly, you should have a nice dream and work hard for it. Lastly, we can help
others often. Stay active and enjoy your time. It must be nice and unforgettable.In a word, let’s work harder and try to be an active student from today on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和
语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段介绍做一个积极的学生的方法；
第二步，详细介绍如何能成为一名积极的学生，从生活、社交、爱好等方面介绍；
第三步，写出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②be kind to others对其他人友好
③help us live happily帮助我们幸福地生活
④from today on从今天开始
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, having hobbies like painting, reading or playing an instrument can make our life more
wonderful. (动名词作主语)
②Stay active and enjoy your time. (祈使句)
Jenny是你们学校校园网英语专栏的主编，为了更好地帮助同学们缓解考前心理压力，她制定了主题
为"I Wish My Teacher Knew"的课程计划。假设你是Starry，请你给Jenny写信，与她交流自己在学习生活中
遇到的快乐、烦恼等，或说说自己的小秘密。请根据图示及要求完成写作。
要求：
①词数80～100，内容必须涵盖所有提示要求，可适当发挥;
②短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总同数;
③文中不得出现真实校名及姓名。
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to share my story with you.
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Yours,
Starry
6．Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to share my story with you. I'm a 15-year-old girl. When I was first in my middle school, I was not
good at getting on with my classmates. Luckily, I met Mr. Zhang, a kind and strict young teacher. With his help, I
made great progress both in my life and study. But I also feel nervous in front of him, because he is so strict. I wish
he could add a smile on his face in his class. Then we'll feel relaxed and I think he will feel happy, too.
Besides, something bad happened to me recently. Last month we had an exam and my grades weren't perfect.
My math got only 86 points, which made me very anxious. The senior high school entrance examination is coming
. What should I do to improve my math in less than two months? I'm very worried. I hope you can give me some
useful suggestions.
Please write to me as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to it.
Yours,
Starry
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一 篇书信作文。要求根据图示及要求给Jenny写一封信，与她交流自己在学习
生活中遇到的快乐、烦恼等，或说说自己的小秘密。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣
主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要使用第一人称，讲述现在的事情用一般现在时，讲述过去的经历用一般过去时。文
章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文；文中一定要包含图示中的要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为
文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接流畅，逻辑合理。
7．某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“如何与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中生，你一定
有自己的思想与辨别是非的能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on
Well with Our Parents?”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。
要点提示：
1. 与父母和谐相处很重要；
2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议；
(1)理解与尊重父母；
(2)多与父母交流。
(3)与父母和谐相处的感受。
要求：
1. 短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯；
2. 词数80-100。
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7．参考范文
How to Get on Well with Our Parents?
It’s very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we get along well with our parents?
Here is some of my advice.
We should understand and respect our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us. We are supposed
to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, we’d better be in a polite way. We should also talk with
them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we’d better help them do some
things.
I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends.
They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each
other.
Let’s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。谈谈如何和自己的父母相处，根据所给提示信息，写一篇短
文，要求紧扣要点，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文要求围绕如何与父母和睦相处为题写一篇文章参加征文大赛，所以人称以第一人称为主。
时态以一般现在时为主。写作时可以分三个方面来写：文章开头先点明主题；然后介绍与父母和谐相处的
具体建议；接着介绍自己与父母和谐相处的感受；最后总结全文，前后呼应。
汤姆最近很苦恼，他觉得父母总是忙于工作，很少陪他，所以他上网发帖求助。假设你是玛丽，请根
据下面的要点提示，给汤姆回帖提些建议。
提示： (1) 应该理解父母，他们努力工作是为了全家过得更好；(2) 可以和父母谈谈，他们可能会在下个
节假日陪你；(3) 帮父母做些家务；(4) 找其他朋友玩，就不会感到孤独。
要求： (1) 语句通顺，表达正确；(2) 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；(3) 70词左右，开头和结尾
已给出，不计入总词数。
Tom, I know you are upset these days. Here is some of my advice for you.
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Mary
2． 例文
Tom, I know you are upset these days. Here is some of my advice for you. First, you should understand your
parents. They work hard because they want your family to live a better life. Second, you could talk to your parents
about the problem. Maybe they could stay with you the next holiday. Third, you should try to help your parents do
some chores. And you could go out to visit your friends and have fun with them. Then you won’t feel lonely. What
do you think of my advice?
I hope you will have a good time.
Mary
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据汤姆的烦恼以及所给提示内容给汤姆提建议，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，要针对汤姆的烦恼提建议；
第二步，根据提示内容具体描述所给建议；
第三步，希望建议对汤姆有用。
[亮点词汇]
①live a better life过更好的生活
②talk to交谈
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①They work hard because they want your family to live a better life.（because引导的原因状语从句）
