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Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元教材写作情境为“孩子们是否应该做家务”,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的
“做人与做事”这一主题群,涉及子主题“劳动实践,劳动品质与工匠精神”。此类写作要
求学生能够恰当运用情态动词“could”,针对“孩子们是否应该做家务”发表看法,通常以
一般现在时为主。
常见的写作任务是描述一次做家务的经历、讨论做家务的利弊等。体裁多为记叙文、议论
文或夹叙夹议的文体。学生可通过对做家务进行一场辩论赛，树立自己的责任意识和社会
意识,培养乐于做家务，分担家务情怀。涵盖日记、演讲稿、书信和报道等多样化的写作形
式，模拟真实生活中的家务场景，提高学生的实际应用能力。
【写作技巧】
本单元的话题和“家务劳动（housework/chores）”有关。该话题常见的书面表达种类多样，
可以描述你做过的家务劳动，也可以发表对“学生做家务”的观点或看法。或者以谈论家务
以及对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由为话题的作文或是请求他人帮忙的电子邮件之类的书
面表达是单元测试或中考所常考查的。
【写作目标】
本单元的话题为“做家务”，该话题就“学生是否应该做家务”提出观点，然后进一步
阐述其利弊。在写作时，要学会运用“Could I…？/Could you…？”来表达“请求得到许可”
和运用“I think/believe that…”或“I agree/disagree that…”表达自己的观点。
【单元素材积累】
短语积累
finish doing sth. 完成做某事 sweep the floor 扫地
clean and tidy 干净整洁的 make your/the bed 整理床铺
do the dishes 洗餐具 clean the livng room 打扫客厅
take out the rubbish 倒垃圾 a waste of time浪费时间
fold your/the clothes 叠衣服 in order to 为了get good grades取得好成绩 have much stress from school 在学校有很多压
get into a good university 考上好的大学 力
mind doing sth. 介意做某事 it is not enough to do…做sth是不足够的
depend on依赖;依靠 take care of/look after/care for 照顾
develop children's independence发展孩子的独 provide a comfortable and clean environment at
立性 home for kids 为孩子们提供干净舒适的环境
understand parents more 更理解父母
as tired and busy as 和...一样又忙又累
◆开头句
①It is everyone’s duty to do chores.
②I think it is necessary for us to do housework.
③Now many students are too lazy to do housework at home.
④I think we should help parents do some housework.
◆中间句
①I swept the floor at first and took out the rubbish.
②We should finish our homework independently and make a study plan carefully.
③What’s more，I also cooked some porridge.
④Third，doing housework can relax ourselves.
⑤I often help my parents with much housework,such as cleaning the rooms,taking out the rubbish
and doing the dishes.
◆结尾句
①I believe if we can do these things，we will be more independent.
②I think it’s our duty to share housework to keep the house clean and tidy.
◆谚语积累
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
2.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
辩论赛 on houseworkCons of doing the housework
做家务的弊端
▶️K(cid:7)ids these days already have enough stress from school.They do not have time to study and do
housework,too. Housework is a waste of their time. They should spend their time on schoolwork in
order to get good grades and get into a good university. Also, when they get older, they will have to do
housework so there is no need for them to do it now. It is the parents' job to provide a clean and
comfortable environment at home for their children.(Text on P22)
▶️ (cid:7)Doing the housework is a waste of time, if you don't do it, you will save more time to study in order
to get good grades and get into a good university. After graduation, you will find a job with a lot of
money, you can buy whatever you want, like a house, a car, even a robot who can help you do the
housework at any time.
▶️ (cid:7)Without housework you will have enough time to enjoy your life better and try your best to make
your dream come ture.
▶️S(cid:7)tudents should pay attention to their study and housework can take up long time, their parents are
more hopeful for good grades but learn to do the housework.
▶️(cid:7)It's nothing wrong if you want to share housework with your parents, but I think the best
returning to your hard-working parents is to get good grades and good university.
▶️ (cid:7)I can give you an example, Mary wants to do the dishes to help their parents, and unfortunately sehned s
up breaking several plates and did not do it "mother clean", so her mom has to do it again, it is not a
good idea to make trouble for your tired mother. You'd better leave it alone. stop making mistakes to
make your mom angry, and let your mom stop fighting with you. Happy mom, happy family.
▶️ (cid:7)Time is money, you can save the time of doing chores and take up a new hobby like playing the
guitar or learning something new, it can help you to make money by teaching other kids how to play
the guitar. You can do lots of things with these money, like buying your mom a present which can
also make your mother happy.
Pros of doing the housework
做家务的好处
▶️ (cid:7)I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. It
is not enough to just get good grades at school. Children these days depend on their parents too much.
Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.
It also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. Since they live in one house with their parents,
they should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy. The earlier kids learn
to be independent, the better it is for their future. (Text on P22)▶️E(cid:7)veryone should take responsibility for doing housework or chores.
▶️ (cid:7)It is necessary for us to share the housework with parents.
▶️ (cid:7)When we study at school, our parents also work at a factory or hospital. They are also as busy and
tired as us. Why shouldn't we do some housework for them and make them happy? like cooking
dinner for them when they get home from school.
▶️ (cid:7)Doing housework can help us develop good habits, like putting things in order and keeping
everything clean and tidy everywhere. With these good habits, when you go to the university , you
will take better care ofyourself than others.
▶️ (cid:7)Doing housework is not only good for our future, but also makes us get a strong feeling of
satisfaction when we see the look of Joy on our parents' faces.
▶️ (cid:7) Doing housework is also kind of exercise. It's good for students' physical and mental health.
▶️D(cid:7)oing housework can also make us understand our parents more and think of others.
▶️T(cid:7)hrough doing housework, we can understand that no pains, no gains. And the idea of the fairness
in our life.
▶️(cid:7) It's easy for normal people to do the housework, but what about disabled people?They cannot
do some other difficult jobs. But if they can do the housework, they can at least get money from it for
living. For example sweeping the floor, doing the dishes and working as a security guard.
▶️ (cid:7) We should do something for our parents, and doing housework can develop our skills to find a
part-time job during the summer or winter vacation, we can make some money for our university or
give it out to the poor childrenin the countryside.
▶️ (cid:7) If you depend on your parents too much. You will face many problems in your life. You have to
live on your own when you grow up. For example, you can't cook dinners, wash clothes and look after
yourself. You will have a terrible life.
▶️D(cid:7)oing housework can improve the relationship with your parents and family members.
▶️(cid:7) When you go to the university, you will live in another city. How could you live if you cannot
look after yourself?
▶️ (cid:7)Doing housework can develop students' patience and perseverancce. if we have enough patience,
we will do our homework quickly and better.
加分谚语
▶️ (cid:7)Happiness follows labor.劳动带来幸福。
▶️ (cid:7)Labor itself is a kind of enjoyment.劳动本身就是种享乐。
▶️ (cid:7)The fruit of labor is the sweetest of all fruits.劳动的成果是所有果实中最甜美的。
▶️L(cid:7)abor is the source of happiness. 劳动是快乐的根源。▶️ (cid:7)An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于晨。
▶️L(cid:7)abour breeds our body, learning breads our soul.劳动教养了身体，学习教养了心灵。
▶️ (cid:7)Labour is often the father of pleasure.劳动是快活的根源。
▶️W(cid:7) ork is the true source of human welfare.劳动是人类的幸福之源。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's more,
in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
收钱做家务？谈论孩子做家务获得报酬的利与弊！
写作任务
上周，你们班举办了一场题为“孩子做家务是否应该获得报酬”的英语辩论赛。请你写
一篇英语短文，介绍此次辩论情况。
【审清题目】
内容：针对“孩子做家务是否应该获得报酬”介绍正反方观点，然后给出自己的观点。
文体：议论文。
人称：以第三人称为主。
时态：以一般现在时为主。
【头脑风暴】【提供素材】
◆常用词块 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。
Should children get money for doing chores?
Opinions (观点) Reasons
•be a good way to make pocket money (零花钱)
•teach children money management skills (管理技巧)
•(1)______________(更容易让孩子做家务)
•understand the importance of hard work
Pros (赞成)
•teach children to be responsible (负责的)
•help children understand the real world
•(2)______________(理解公平的概念)
•...
•get into a bad habit of expecting payment for any task (任务) they do
•(3)______________(家庭生活的一部分)
Cons (反对)
•be a family responsibility and not a job
•be unfair to parents•(4)______________(应该分担家务)
•learn important life skills
•be everyone's job to keep the house clean and comfortable
•...
Key: 1. be easier to make children do chores 2. understand the idea of fairness
3. be a part of family life 4. should share the housework
◆常用句型
引入辩论主题：
1. We had a debate (辩论) about / on whether (是否) ...
2. The opinions about ... fall mainly into two groups.
介绍正方观点：
Some are for / in favor of (赞成) / agree with the idea. They think / believe ...
由正方观点过渡到反方观点：
However, others have a different opinion.
介绍反方观点：
Others are against / don't agree / disagree with the idea. They think / believe / argue (争论) ...
表明个人观点：
1. As for me, I agree with / I'm for the first /... opinion.
2. In my opinion, ...
【谋篇布局】
将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。
孩子做家务是否应该获得报酬
总体介绍辩论情况（主题、参与人员等）
Last week, my class talked about whether kids should get money for doing chores. My classmates
have two different opinions.
分别介绍正反方观点及理由
Some of my classmates said yes. They think (1)______________________________(它是一个
获 得 零 花 钱 的 好 方 法 ). And getting money from their work
(2)______________________________(使他们明白努力工作的重要性).But some of my classmates said no. They think chores are things they will have to do when they
grow up. After all, (3)______________________________(将来没有人会付钱给他们做家务). And
it's unfair to parents because they never ask for money when they look after their kids.
表明“我”的观点并说明理由
As for me, I don't think kids should get money for doing chores.
(4)________________________________(保持房子干净舒服是家里每个人的责任). We should all
work together and do our part.
Key:
1. it's a good way to get pocket money
2. makes them understand the importance of hard work
3. no one will pay them for doing chores in the future
4. It's everyone's job in the family to keep the house clean and comfortable
Help with housework 范文赏析 1
Housework for students
Housework is an important part in the home. For students, I think we should help our parents do
some housework at home, because they are always too busy and tired after work.
We can do some simple housework, such as taking out the rubbish, sweeping the floor, folding
the clothes, making the bed and so on. We can show our love to our parents by doing the
housework. We can have a good communication with our parents when we do the housework. It's
good for us to have a happy family and live a happy life.
2
Housework for students
Housework is an important part in the home. For students, I don't think we should do any
housework at home, because we usually have too much homework to do.
It usually takes us lots of time to finish it. We have little time to do the housework. Also, we
have much pressure from our study and school, So we need to relax ourselves at home. As parents,
they should understand us and help us be relaxed at home. Then we can study better at school. At the
same time, we should also get help from them to finish our homework.
At last, we should also have a good sleep and rest at home. It's good for our study.
3
Let's help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.Our parents are always busy with work. They are tired after work, but they still have to do chores.
If we help them do some chores, they will have more time to rest. And sharing housework can help
us understand our parents better. So we should help them do housework as much as we can. In fact,
we can do lots of housework at home. For example, we can make the bed, clean up the room, wash
clothes, do the dishes and take out the trash. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot （意义
重大）.
From now on, let's help our parents do chores.
教育部提出劳动教育是义务教育的重要组成部分。劳动有助于提升我们的生活技能，创造
美好生活，也有助于培养我们的精神品质。你校英文杂志社将开展以“Labor Is the
Greatest”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿。
提示：
1.What do you think of labor?
2.What kind of labor do you often do?
3.What did you learn from doing so?
参考词汇：garbage sorting垃圾分类，community社区
►►审题指导
1.文体:说明文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态：一般现在时
►►思路点拨
① Labor is part of our life.It helps us develop independence.② We should share
some labor work both at home and at school.As for me,I often do some chores,such as cleaning the floor,washing the dishes,making
the bed,cooking meals and so on at home. At school,I often help teachers or other
classmates do some cleaning. Besides,I join in some garbage sorting activities in the
community.
I learn a lot from labor work.③It helps me learn to look after myself and develop my
life skills.④ More importantly,I learn how to take my responsibility at school and in my
family.
①Labor plays an important part in our life。 It helps us 升格技巧技巧一：巧用
develop independence.②It's necessary for us to share some play a part in词组
labor work both at home and at school. 升 格 ① 技 巧 二 ： 巧 用 It's
As for me,I often do some chores,such as cleaning necessary for sb.to do sth.句
the floor,washing the dishes,making the bed,cooking 型
meals and so on at home. At school,I often help
teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides,I 升格②技巧三：巧用
join in some garbage sorting activities in the community. not only…but also…句型
③ It not only helps me learn to look after myself but
also helps me develop my life skills. ** 错误的表达式 升格③技巧四：巧用表
**The most important thing is that（最重要的事情是） I 语从句升格④
learn how to take my
responsibility at school and in my family.
【必备范文】
学生需要做家务吗？某校针对这个问题对200个学生做了一项调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇报
道，开头已给出。
有必要（30%） 没有必要（70%）
1. 多数学生不会千家务活。 1. 学生的任务是学习而不是劳动。
2. 做家务可以锻炼吃苦耐劳的精神。 2. 学习任务繁重，没有做家务的时间。
3. 做家务可以体验父母的艰辛。 3. 做家务活是父母的事情。
你的看法：……
Is it necessary for students to do housework at home? We did a survey about this.
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【答案】例文
Is it necessary for students to do housework at home? We did a survey about this. According to the result, we
knew most of the students (about 70%) thought it was not necessary for students to do housework. They thought it
was the job of their parents. As students, their duty was to study hard. They had no time to do housework because
of their heavy homework. On the other hand, some students (about 30%) thought it was good for them to do
housework. Because they could learn a lot by doing it, and knew how hard their parents were. I think we students
should spend some time on housework, no matter how busy we are.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据表格的调查结果写一篇报道，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出话题，讲述调查结果；
第二步，具体阐述不同学生的不同观点；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①According to根据
②have no time to do sth.没时间做某事
③be good for对……有好处
④spend time on sth.花时间在某事上
[高分句型]
①They thought it was the job of their parents.（宾语从句）
②Because they could learn a lot by doing it, and knew how hard their parents were.（原因状语从句）
③I think we students should spend some time on housework, no matter how busy we are.（宾语从句）
假如你是文昌中学一名八年级的学生，上周末你们班开展了一次帮父母做家务（Helping Parents Do
Housework）的活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，叙述你上周做家务的过程及感受。要
求不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：（1）做家务的起因；
（2）做了哪些家务；
（3）父母的反应以及个人的感受。
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School.
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【答案】例文：
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School. Last week, our class held an activity called “Helping
Parents Do Housework”. Everyone in my class took an active part in the activity.
As for me, I did a lot of chores because my parents were away last Saturday morning. First, I swept the floor,
cleaned all the rooms and took out the rubbish. Then, I made the bed and folded the clothes. Finally, I watered the
flowers in our garden. After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. When my parents came back and saw
what I had done, they were pleased with me. From then on, I decided to help my parents do more housework in my
spare time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的三点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重
点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明做家务的起因。总体介绍该活动，如名称、活动范围、总体表现等；第二步，具体叙述做了哪些家务。写作过程中需注意做家务的逻辑，要符合实际情况；
第三步，描写父母的反应和个人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① hold an activity called ... 开展了一个名叫……的活动
② take an active part in 积极参与
③ as for ... 关于……
④ be pleased with ... 对……感到开心和满意
⑤ in my spare time 在我的空闲时间
[高分句型]
① After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. （介词after后接动名词）
② When my parents came back and saw what I had done, they were pleased with me. （when引导的时间状语从
句；what引导的宾语从句）
【实例解析2】
假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加中学生英语演讲比赛。演讲的主题是“We should help parents do
housework”，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。
提示：1. 目前许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。
2. 你常做的家务活是整理床铺、浇花、打扫房间、倒垃圾等。
3. 你的体会和看法是什么。
参考词汇：lazy，chores，make the bed，water flowers，clean the room，take out the rubbish，relaxing，
interesting，be proud，be pleased，duty
词数：80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
It’s my honor to give you a speech!
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【答案】例文：
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
It’s my honor to give you a speech! I’m Wang Ming. My topic is “We should help parents do housework”.
Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework
because they are busy with their work and tired after work.
I often help my parents do chores. In the morning, I always make the bed and water flowers. They are
relaxing and interesting. In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the rubbish. When I see the tidy room, I
feel proud of myself and my parents are pleased with me. I think it’s our duty to help our parents with some chores.
What’s more, doing chores can help us develop our independence.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻
辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍目前许多学生的现状；
第二步，介绍自己经常做的家务活；
第三步，介绍自己的体会和看法，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①do housework做家务
②too…to太……而不能③be busy with忙于
④do chores做家务
⑤be pleased with sb.对某人感到满意
⑥independence独立
[高分句型]
But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work.
(省略that的宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句)
【实战演练】
假如你是李华,你校上周末开展了“Doing Chores”为主题的实践活动。请你用
英语写一封师件,向 Doris 讲述一次你在参与该实践活动时做家务的经历,并分享
你的感受。
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
2.文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(校名、姓名和地名等);
3.词数 80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计总词数)。
Dear Doris,
Do you often do chores? Let me share my experience of doing housework with you.
Last Sunday, since my parents had to go to Shanghai for work, I took responsibility
for （承担责任） doing chores. At first, I thought it was easy for me to do housework.
In fact, I did many kinds of housework, such as cooking meals, doing the dishes and
folding the clothes Besides, there were many invisible chores. After doing these, I felt
so tired that I had to rest.
I used to think that housework was a waste of time and we students should spend
our time on schoolwork in order to get good grades and get into a good university. But
now, my mind has completely changed. It's not our parents' job to do housework. Each
family member should share housework to make the house cleaner and more
comfortable.
Labor is the most glorious （劳动最光荣） . Let's do housework together and
make labor a habit!
Yours
Li Hua
假设你是Susan,在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求,有时你是否感到厌烦?你是怎样解决的?请你根据
下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文.
父母的要求 每天打扫房间;不能玩电脑游戏;晚上10点前必须睡觉……
你的看法 虽太严厉,但理解他们……
你的解决方式 与父母多交流,为父母做些家务……
要求:1.文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容,可以展开思路,自由地适当发挥.
2.不能出现真实的校名、人名和其它真实信息.
3.词数80词右.前两句已经给出,不计入词数.
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【答案】
My name is Susan. There are too many rules in my family. I have to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to
play computer games in my free time. I can't go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents
are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I communicate with my parents
as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them do housework. These are
my good ways to get on well with them.
【详解】本文属于材料作文,要表达对父母过多的要求的看法以及解决方案.根据要表达的内容确定并准确
运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容.
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、
主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如there be,be allowed to,free time,be strict with,communicate with,as much as
possible,share ... with,get on well with等.增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯.
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题.审好题是写好书面表达的关键.审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求.
构思提纲.有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料.通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而
具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键.
初写短文.一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁
性.使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词.同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然.
修改润色.修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤.这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否
合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等.
假如你是文昌中学一名八年级的学生,上周末你们班开展了一次帮父母做家务(Helping Parents Do
Housework)的活动.请你根据下面的要点提示,写一篇英语短文,叙述你上周做家务的过程及感受.要求不少于
80词.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
要点提示:(1)做家务的起因;
(2)做了哪些家务;
(3)父母的反应以及个人的感受.
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School._____________________________________________
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【答案】例文:
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School. Last week, our class held an activity called “Helping Parents
Do Housework”. Everyone in my class took an active part in the activity.
As for me, I did a lot of chores because my parents were away last Saturday morning. First, I swept the floor,
cleaned all the rooms and took out the rubbish. Then, I made the bed and folded the clothes. Finally, I watered the
flowers in our garden. After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. When my parents came back and saw what I
had done, they were pleased with me. From then on, I decided to help my parents do more housework in my spare
time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的三点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点.
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明做家务的起因.总体介绍该活动,如名称、活动范围、总体表现等;
第二步,具体叙述做了哪些家务.写作过程中需注意做家务的逻辑,要符合实际情况;
第三步,描写父母的反应和个人的感受.
[亮点词汇]
① hold an activity called ... 开展了一个名叫……的活动
② take an active part in 积极参与
③ as for ... 关于……
④ be pleased with ... 对……感到开心和满意
⑤ in my spare time 在我的空闲时间
[高分句型]
① After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. (介词after后接动名词)
② When my parents came back and saw what I had done, they were pleased with me. (when引导的时间状语从
句;what引导的宾语从句)
