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Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world？
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群，涉及子主题有
“中国主要城市及家乡的地理位置与自然环境；世界主要国家的名称、地理位置与自然景观；世界
不同地区的生态特征；常见的动物及其特征与生活环境”等。常见的写作任务是描述某个国家或地
区的自然景观、野生动物及濒危动物保护、环境保护等。体裁多为说明文、书信类应用文或议论文
等。
【写作技巧】
本单元话题是geography and nature（地理和自然）,同学们介绍了几处地理奇观和两种珍稀动
物， 因此写作出题围绕着“保护野生动物” 展开， 命题形式可以是写一篇保护动物的倡议书， 也可以
是根据提示或图片介绍一种或几种野生动物的相关情况。
结合单元所学，我们可以运用:
1.形容词和副词的比较级最高级来描述动物的特征 ;
2.衔接词 because, so,first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, one reason is,
another reason is等词， 使文章内容更具逻辑性 。
【作文思维导图】
【单元素材积累】
1.现状：
cut down 砍倒
be in great danger 处于极大的危险之中
die from / of 因……而死亡fewer and fewer 越来越少2.措施：
take action 采取行动 build natural reserves 建立自然保护区
protect the environment 保护环境 set up natural parks 建立自然公园
stop doing sth. 停止做某事 make laws 制定法律
3.呼吁：
had better do sth. 最好做某事 play a part in 参与
try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大的努力 No trading, no killing! 没有买卖就没有杀
做某事 害！
必背句型
◆开头句
①Animals are good friends to humans,so it's very important to protect them.
②Now let me tell you something about pandas.
③Now the number of animals is becoming smaller and smaller. Why？Here are two main
reasons.
◆中间句
①Pandas are white and black. They are very cute and friendly to people. They feed on
bamboo.
②Besides,people should stop polluting the environment.
③We should plant more trees to make homes for them and make laws to stop them from
being killed.
◆结尾句
①Let's work together to protect wild animals.
②It is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes.
③Remember saving the animals means saving the earth and ourselves.
◆谚语积累
①Protect wildlife and coexist with nature.保护野生动物，人与自然共存。
②Every life deserves respect. Please love animals.每一个生命都值得尊重。请爱护动物。
③Protecting wildlife means protecting human beings themselves！保护野生动物就是保护人类自己！
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
呼吁人们救助流浪猫和流浪狗
写作任务
假如你校英文报“保护动物”专栏正在向全校学生征稿。恰好你阅读到一则有关流浪猫
和流浪狗的新闻，了解到它们的生存现状。请你写一篇英语短文向该专栏投稿，借此机会呼
吁同学们救助流浪猫和流浪狗。
【审清题目】
内容：说明流浪猫和流浪狗的生存现状以及呼吁同学们救助它们。
文体：说明文。
人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主。
时态：一般现在时。
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
◆常用词块 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。
What are the living (1)______________(没有食物和水), have no warm places to sleep, feel
conditions of street cold in winter, (2)______________(死于疾病), receive no medical care, be
cats and dogs? caught or sold by animal traders ...
Why are they in (3)______________(放弃它们), give birth to too many babies, be used fortrouble? illegal (违法的) activities, get lost ...
be kind to street cats and dogs, look for responsible (有责任心的) pet
How can we save owners, adopt (收养) street cats and dogs, (4)_________ (建立) animal
them? shelters (动物收容所), make videos to teach people how to care for street
cats and dogs, raise money ...
Key:
1. have no food or water 2. die from illnesses
3. give them up 4. set up
◆常用句型
•I have some important news to share with you about ...
•These animals don't ... They even ...
•There are many reasons why ...
•One of them is ...
•To help them, we can ...
•If we ..., we can ...
•Let's work together to ...
【谋篇布局】
将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。
说明流浪猫和流浪狗的生存现状
I have some important news to share with you about street cats and dogs. These animals don't
have enough food or water. (1)_____________________________(它们没有温暖的地方睡觉).
They don't receive any medical care.
说明导致这种现象的原因
There are many reasons why they face these difficulties. (2)_________________ (其中之一是
它们的主人放弃了它们). Another one is that they have too many babies.
呼吁救助流浪猫和流浪狗
To help them, (3)_____________________________(我们可以从善待它们开始). If we see
poor cats or dogs on the street, we can give them some food and water. We can also adopt them to
give them a loving home. What's more, we can make videos to teach people how to care for street
cats and dogs.
Remember, (4)_____________________________(尽管我们很年轻，但我们有能力做出巨大
的改变). Let's work together to help these animals!
Key: 1. They don't have a warm place to sleep2. One of them is that their owners give them up
3. we can start by being kind to them
4. although / though we are young, we have the ability to make a big difference
范文剖析
你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals?”为题，写
一篇80词左右的短文，说说为什么要保护野生动物。
提示：
1.Why is it important to protect wild animals?
2.Why are some of the wild animals in danger?
3.What can we do to protect wild animals?
►►审题指导
1.文体:议论文
2.人称:第一人称和第三人称
3.时态：一般现在时
►►思路点拨
►►范文赏析
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals?
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without wild animals
in the world. Animals are good friends to humans,so ① protecting wild animals is very
important.
② Some of the wild animals are in great danger now.③ People kill too many of them
for their meat or fur.④ People also cut down many trees so that animals have no place tolive in.So they are becoming fewer and fewer.
⑤We should protect wild animals.⑥We shouldn't kill wild animals or cut down trees.
We should plant more trees to make homes for them and make laws to stop them from
being killed.
Let's work together to protect wild animals.
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals? 升格技巧
We are not alone in the world. We human beings 技巧一：巧用it
could not live without wild animals in the world. Animals is + adj.+ for
are good friends to humans,so ① it is very important to sb.+ to do sth.
protect wild animals 句型升格①
② However（然而）,some of the wild animals are in 技巧二：巧用衔
great danger now.③ For one reason（一方面）,people kill 接词升格②③④
too many of them for their meat or fur.④For another（另 技巧三：巧用动
一方面）,people cut down many trees so that animals have no 词不定式作目的
place to live in. So
状语升格⑤
技巧四：巧用
they are becoming fewer and fewer.
instead of结构
⑤ To protect wild animals,we should plant more
升格⑥
trees to make homes for them and make laws to stop them
from being killed ⑥instead of killing them or cutting down
trees
Let's work together to protect wild animals.
【中考链接】
2020年3月3日是联合国第七个“世界野生动植物日”，我国提出了“维护全球生命共
同体”的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们，就是守护我们的
未来。下面，让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧！
假如你是熊猫惜惜，请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80词左右的书信。
要求：1. 信中包含所给信息内容；2. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：symbol (n. 象征) destroy (v. 破坏)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. ______________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Xixi
(2020 贵州遵义)
1. 基本信息：13岁，来自四川，中国的象征；爱好（自主发挥）。
2. 我的烦恼：朋友少，家园常常遭到破坏……
3. 我的愿望或建议（自主发挥，至少两条）。
One possible version:
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I'm one of your favorite animals — Panda. I come from Sichuan, China. I am 13
years old. I am a symbol of China. I usually like to play with my friends. I also like climbing trees and
sitting on the trees. I like bamboo best. It's my favorite food.
But I've had some problems recently. My home is often destroyed and I don't have much room to move
around. My friends are fewer and fewer because some people have destroyed my home. There is no
one to play with me and I am very lonely. My favorite food is getting less and less. I'm really sad.
I hope human friends can help me. I hope that people can protect the environment and give me more
space to live. If you can cut down fewer trees, my friends and I will be very happy.
Yours,
Xixi【必备范文】
你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，
以此呼吁大家从小事做起，保护动物，人人有责。假如你参加此次活动，请根据要点提示完
成演讲稿。
要点提示：
situation only 3, 000 blue whales, die . . .
reasons (≥3) kill enough food, safe places . . .
steps(≥3) stop. . . make . . . …
Word bank: pollute v. 污染，rubbish n. 垃圾，environment n. 环境
注意：词数100左右
Dear my friends,
As we all know, ____________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Dear my friends,
As we all know, blue whales live in the deep sea and are the largest animals in the world. They
feed on small fishes in the sea. Sadly, they are in danger now. There may be only 3, 000 blue whales
left. They are dying out.
There are some reasons. People are taking away their homes, so blue whales have fewer safe
places to live. People kill them for different use. People also kill other sea animals so they don’t have
enough food. In order to protect blue whales in the wild, we should make plans. Firstly, we shouldn’t
throw litter into the sea. Secondly, we should stop people from killing them. We can do this by not
buying whale products first. At last, we can think of as many other ways as possible to protect sea
animals.
I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them!【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以
及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍蓝鲸的现状；
第二步、介绍蓝鲸受到危险的原因；
第三步、介绍保护蓝鲸的措施并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on…以……为食
②die out灭绝
③take away夺走
④in order to为了
⑤stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人干某事
[高分句型]
① I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them! (that引导宾语从句)
假设你们学校新来的外教Mr. Green打算寒假去济宁或周边城市的景点看一看，请根据以
下提示信息用英语写一篇短文，向Mr. Green推荐两个地方。要求：
1.所给图片中的景点和提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥。
2.不少于80词。首段已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：traditional culture, Confucius 孔子, thinker 思想家, Confucianism 儒家文化, the
highest, sunrise 日出
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m really happy to hear that you want to spend your winter holiday in Jining.
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll enjoy your holiday in Jining. Have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
9．例文Dear Mr. Green,
I’m really happy to hear that you want to spend your winter holiday in Jining. I will give you
some advice.
I know you are interested in climbing mountains, so Mount Tai, known as one of the Five Great
Mountains of China, is a must-visit. It offers a challenging climbing. And the scenery is very
beautiful on the top of the mountain. The sunrise from the top is very amazing. What’s more, the
Confucius Temple, located in Qufu, is another place you should not miss. It’s a peaceful place where
you can learn the life and thoughts of Confucius. He is a great teacher and thinker in China. The
temple is surrounded by beautiful gardens and ancient buildings. So it is very beautiful.
Hope you’ll enjoy your holiday in Jining. Have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容向Mr. Green推荐两个地方，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出话题；
第二步，介绍推荐的两个景点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②located in坐落于
③be surrounded by被……围绕
[高分句型]
It’s a peaceful place where you can learn the life and thoughts of Confucius. (定语从句)根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于80词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不记入总词
数。所给提示词语仅供选用。
假如你是八年级学生李华，你的英国朋友 Tony计划来北京旅行，想要体验中国的传统
文化。请你用英语写一封邮件，向Tony推荐一个旅游景点，说明理由，并就准备工作给他提
一些建议。
提示词语：traditional culture, Beijing Opera, camera, the Internet, ticket
提示问题：·Which place of interest do you suggest Tony visit?
·Why do you advise him to go there?
·How can he best prepare for the trip?
Dear Tony,
I’m really happy to hear that you’re coming to Beijing! _____________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
10．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m really happy that you’re coming to Beijing! I suggest you visit Lao She Teahouse, as it’s a
fantastic place to experience traditional Chinese culture. You can watch Beijing Opera, drink tea, and
taste traditional Beijing snacks there. Moreover, its special decorations offer a valuable chance for a
richer understanding of Chinese culture.
To enjoy your visit, you should learn about Beijing Opera on the Internet before you go. This
will make it easier for you to understand the show. Also, remember to book your ticket in advance so
you won’t have to wait in a long line. Finally, don’t forget to bring your camera to take photos of all
the amazing things.I hope you have a great time in Beijing!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对朋友的欢迎；
第二步，介绍推荐景点，说明推荐理由；
第三步，提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①moreover此外
②offer a valuable chance提供宝贵的机会
③in advance提前
[高分句型]
①I suggest you visit Lao She Teahouse, as it’s a fantastic place to experience traditional Chinese
culture.(suggest接宾语从句；as引导原因状语从句)
②This will make it easier for you to understand the show.(it作形式宾语)
假如你是李明，听说学校的Animal-lover Club正在招募新成员，请你根据提示，用英语写一封申请
信。
阳光中学八年级的一名学生
自我介绍
有许多爱好：看书、集邮……
热爱野生动物，想更多地了解野生动物
申请理由
野生动物处境危险；……我觉得采取措施保护野生动物很重要
时间 周日上午8点至10点
联系方式 liming@qq.com；85741628
要求：
(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括表格中所有要点内容，省略号部分发挥1-2句；
(3)词数：90词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Animal-lover Club.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Animal-lover Club.
I am a Grade 8 student at Sunshine Middle School. I have many hobbies, like reading books and collecting
stamps. I also like travelling. I love wild animals. I want to learn more about them. However, wild animals are in
danger. For example, they have fewer and fewer living areas. People catch animals to make money. I think it is
important for us to take action to protect them. I can take part in activities from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m on Sunday. You
can call me at 85741628 or email me at liming@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，需要写一封申请信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]第一步，先表达自己想要加入动物爱好者俱乐部；
第二步，进行自我介绍，例如，介绍自己的个人信息，或者爱好等；根据表格提示内容具体阐述申请加入
俱乐部的原因，例如热爱野生动物，想更多地了解野生动物等；
第三步，书写结束语，留下自己的联系方式。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about 了解
②be in danger 处于危险中
③make money 赚钱
④take action 采取行动
⑤take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①For example, they have fewer and fewer living areas. （“比较级+and+比较级”句型）
②I think it is important for us to take action to protect them. （省略that宾语从句）
．最近，不少动物园都发生了动物袭击游客事件。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，请你就这一问题
给某英文报社写一封建议书，呼吁人们在动物园游玩时学会尊重、爱护动物。
（1）动物们很可爱，但有时也会伤人，观赏时请保持距离，不逗弄动物。
（2）喂错误的食物会导致动物生病甚至死亡。
（3）动物园会设置投喂区并提供食物供游客投喂。
（4）如果被动物咬伤，请及时就医。
（5）你认为……
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：逗弄tease 投喂区 feeding areas 被咬be bitten
Dear sir and madam,
Recently, there are often reports in the newspaper that people got hurt by the animals in the zoo.
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Dear sir and madam,
Recently, there are often reports in the newspaper that people got hurt by the animals in the zoo. Animals are
lovely, but sometimes they can be a bit dangerous. So, when you’re watching animals, make sure to keep off them
and avoid teasing them. Giving them the wrong food can make them sick or even cause their death. Some foods are
not suitable for animals. The zoo will set up feeding areas and provide food for tourists to feed. If you are bitten by
animals, please ask for help and go to see the doctor immediately. I think people should learn to respect and care for
animals when visiting the zoo.Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作时应注意题干给出的“动物具有危险性”、“投喂动物食物需谨慎”、以及“爱护动物”等
要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明动物具有危险性，需注意安全；
第二步，结合要点，阐述观看动物的时候需注意的点有哪些。
第三步，总结全文，并提出要爱护动物，尊重动物。
[亮点词汇]
①dangerous 危险的
②suitable 合适的
③immediately 立即
[高分句型]
①So, when you’re watching animals, make sure to keep off them and avoid teasing them.（when引导时间状语从
句）
②I think people should learn to respect and care for animals when visiting the zoo.（宾语从句）
