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Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet？
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
文学与音乐
自己喜欢的歌手、作家及其作品，描述他们的经历和故事
本单元以“文学与音乐”为话题，要求我们会写关于一位作家、一本书或一名歌手、一个乐队的短文。
写作体裁多为记叙文，时态多为一般现在时或现在完成时，写作时首先要点明你想写的人、物或事，然后
阐明其具体情况，一般在结尾时表达出自己的观点和感受。
写作目标
1.能介绍一位自己喜欢的歌手或作家;
2.能正确运用各种时态描述事件的发展过程;
3.能结合实际生活进行写作训练。
真题感知
（2023·山东淄博·统考中考真题）
某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favorite book”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文
中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。
注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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【答案】例文
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book.
The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a
normal monkey. In fact, he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like
to read it.
The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and
what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his
magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book
tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries
his best to win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak.
Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求介绍自己最喜欢的书，包括其主要内容及喜欢它的理由；考生应按照要求写作，正确用
词，使作文表达流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己最喜欢的书是什么；
第二步，详细介绍这本书的主要内容以及你喜欢它的理由；
第三步，介绍从这本书中学到了什么。[亮点词汇]
①in fact 事实上
②try his best to do sth. 尽他最大的努力做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can
change into. (why引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)
②I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.(because引导的原因
状语从句)
词汇积累
type 种类 finish doing sth.完成某事 put down 放下
cut down 砍倒 wait for 等待 be interested in 对……感兴趣
can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 belong to 属于
do some research on sth.做一些关于……的研究 come to realize 开始意识到
bring sb.back 使某人回忆;回顾 enjoy success in 享受……的成功
used to do sth.过去常常做某事
句型积累
1.Chen Ping likes reading.She has read at least 200 different books.
陈萍喜欢阅读。她已经读了至少200本不同的书。
2.The movie brings me back to my college life.这部电影使我想起了我的大学生活。
3.That book reminds students that studying without thinking is dangerous.
那本书提醒学生没有思考的学习是很危险的。
4.Mo Yan is one of the most successful writers in China.莫言是中国最成功的作家之一。
5.The writer grew up in the mountain and he belonged to it.
这位作家在大山里长大,他属于这座大山。
【单元写作素材】
◆开头句
①Mo Yan is one of the most successful writers in Chinese history.②Now she has become one of the most successful writers in the world.
③I enjoy reading different kinds of books，and my favorite book is Journey to the West.
◆中间句
①The story was so amazing that I couldn’t put it down until I finished reading it.
②This book teaches me never to give up when I am in trouble.
③If we are brave enough and not afraid of failure，we will succeed in the end.
◆结尾句
①If you haven’t read any of the books yet，pick one now.
②You will find a wonderful world in it.
③It reminds us that the best things in life are free—laughter，friends，family and so on.
④All in all，the book not only gives me a lot of fun but also tells me what to do when I am in trouble.
⑤Reading can make a difference to our life.
◆谚语积累
1.There is no end to learning.学无止境。
2.One is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。
3.A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。
4.Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles.读万卷书，行万里路。
常用句型
①It's about four sisters growing up.
②I chose Treasure Island, but I haven't finished reading it yet.
③Her favorite kind of books is science fiction.
④Every time she is in the library，Sally looks at the many books she hasn't read yet and she can't wait to read
them.
⑤Listening to The Toms is a good way to wake up.
⑥She heard a song full of feelings about returning home on the radio.
⑦Garth is one of the most successful musicians in American history.⑧He's sold more than 120 million records.
⑨Many songs these days are just about modern life.
动听的音乐就像是飞舞的蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞，也像是叮咚的泉水在山间流淌，有时候，也像是璀璨
的星辰，在夜空里闪烁。各种各样的音乐中，你最喜欢哪一种呢？请从country music, light music, classical
music, folk music, pop music…中选择你最喜欢的音乐种类，以“My favorite music”为题，写一篇不少于60
词的作文。
提示：
1. What kind of music do you like best?
2. When do you usually listen to it?
3. Why is it your favorite?
4. Who is your favorite musician or singer?
要求：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，并适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My favorite music
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【答案】One possible version:
My favorite music
There are many kinds of music. I like soft music best. Before I go to sleep, I always listen to soft music. It can
help me relax and have a good dream. My mother tells me that before I was born, she listened to soft music all the
time, so I must be affected by her. My favorite musician is Matthew Lien. His goal is to arouse people’s awareness
of protecting the environment by music.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，还有“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示要点并适当进行发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己最喜欢的音乐类型和听音乐的时间；
第二步，说明喜欢这类音乐的原因；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的音乐家。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of许多种
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③be affected by受……影响
④arouse one’s awareness唤起某人的意识
[高分句型]
①My mother tells me that before I was born, she listened to soft music all the time, so I must be affected by her.
（that引导的宾语从句）
②His goal is to arouse people’s awareness of protecting the environment by music.（动词不定式作表语）
今天的外教课上，老师让同学们介绍一位自己最喜爱的作家或者歌手。请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文，
在课上发言。
提示：
1.Who is your favorite writer/singer?
2.When and why did he/she become famous?
3.How do you feel about his/her books/music?
要求：
1.词数：80左右；
2.书写工整，句式规范，条理清楚，标点符号使用正确。
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◆◆范文欣赏
J.K.Rowling is my favorite writer.Her first book about Harry Potter came out in 1997，and she became
famous right after that.Now she has become one of the most successful writers in the world.I read the first book
about Harry Potter three years ago.The story was so amazing that I couldn't put it down until I finished reading
it.So far，I have read all the seven books about Harry Potter and watched all the movies.If you haven't read any of
the books yet，pick one now.You will find a wonderful world in it.
（一）
1．书籍是人类进步的阶梯。书籍在赋予我们知识的同时，也向我们传授生活的道理。生活中，你喜
欢读书吗？哪位作家的著作使你印象深刻呢？请你以“My favorite writer”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的
短文，介绍你最喜欢的作家。
My favorite writer
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【答案】One possible version:
My favorite writer
I like reading in my free time and I have already read many books written by different writers. Of all the
writers, I like J. K. Rowling best.
J. K. Rowling became famous because of Harry Potter. Its first novel came out in 1997 and the last one came
out in 2007. The novels were so popular that both children and adults loved to read them. Although I have already
read those novels several times, I still find them exciting.
Have you read these novels yet? I think you will love them if you read them.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我最喜欢的作家”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。先介绍自己最喜欢的作家是谁，再介绍这位作家的相关
情况以及他的作品。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（二）
请你以“My Favorite Singer”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
My Favorite Singer
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Singer
Zhou Jielun is my favorite singer, and I like him very much.
His English name is Jay Chow. It sounds so funny in Chinese pronunciation. He is a talent boy because he can
make music by himself, not by others. And he also knows a lot about the music, especially the Moderns and Hip-
pop music. I can sing many songs of him, for example, Qinghuaci, Yifuzhiming, and Qianlizhiwai.
This is my favorite singer. I hope I will be a singer like him one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意围绕主题介绍自己最喜欢的歌手的信息和原因等内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题介绍自己最喜欢的歌手是谁；
第二步，描写喜欢他/她的原因；
第三步，书写结语，做出总结。
[亮点词汇]
① especially尤其
② for example例如
③ by himself他自己
[高分句型]
① He is a talent boy because he can make music by himself, not by others. （because引导的原因状语从句）
② I hope I will be a singer like him one day.（hope后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
（三）
假设你校读书俱乐部正在举办“世界文学名著欣赏”系列活动，这周阅读的名著是《格列佛游记》
（Gulliver’s Travels）。请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1. 这部小说由英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特（Jonathan Swift）创作；
2. 书中讲述了医生格列佛四次出海航行冒险的经历；
3. 你读完这部小说后的感受。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、语法正确；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容，但可作适当发挥；
3. 80词左右。
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【答案】例文
This week I have read a book called Gulliver’s Travels. It was written by Jonathan Swift who was an English
writer. It told a story about a doctor named Gulliver and his journey to four different countries. During his journey,
he met some little people, some big people, some smart but useless people and some horses. I would like to be asbrave as Gulliver. The story is full of fun. If you read it, I’m sure you will fall in love with it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这本书的基本情况，包括它的作者以及讲述的主要内容；
第二步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to想要
②as…as与……一样
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①It was written by Jonathan Swift who was an English writer.（who引导的定语从句）
②If you read it, I’m sure you will fall in love with it.（if引导条件状语从句）
（四）
请根据下面内容，以“My Favorite Book”为题，写一篇英语短文。
My Favorite Book
名称和作者 主要人物介绍
主要内容或情节 个人观点或感想
My Favorite Book
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【答案】例文：
My Favorite Book
My favorite book is Harry Potter. It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling. It is full of interesting stories.
And it is one of the funniest books I have read.
The main character of the book is Harry Potter. He’s a brave and clever boy who fights against powerfulenemies. I have learned a lot from him. We should be confident and brave like Harry Potter. And we should love
and protect our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very much and I have read it three times. I think it is an interesting book.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要题中给出的四个要点信息，写短文介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的书的名称、作者；
第二步，介绍主要人物及情节，并发表个人观点；
第三步，简单收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②fight against 与……作斗争
[高分句型]
①And it is one of the funniest books I have read.（省略that的定语从句）
②He’s a brave and clever boy who fights against powerful enemies.（who引导定语从句）
③I like reading Harry Potter very much and I have read it three times.（and连接并列句）
（五）
书籍是人类进步的阶梯，音乐使人类的精神爆发出火花。请根据以下提示，以“My Favorite Book and
Music”为题写一篇英语作文。
提示：
1. What’s your favorite book? How did you get it? How long have you read it? What’s it about? What do you think
of it?
2. What kind of music do you like best? Why do you like it? Have you introduced it to others?
3. What have you learned from your favorite book and music?
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括以上写作提示，也可在此基础上适当发挥。
2. 分段介绍，条理清晰，语句连贯，逻辑性强，书写规范。
3. 60词以上。照抄阅读语篇和写作提示不得分。
4. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，严禁乱写乱画，否则不予评分。My Favorite Book and Music
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【答案】例文
My favorite book is Treasure Island. I got it from my aunt on my tenth birthday. I have read it for three years.
It is about a boy who goes out to sea and finds an island full of treasures. I think it is not only interesting but also
educational.
I like American country music. I like it because it can remind me that the best things in life are free—laughter,
friends, family and the beauty of nature and the countryside. I have introduced it to my classmates. They are also
interested in listening to it.
I have learned a lot from my favorite book and music. We should never give up trying to achieve our dreams.
What’s more, we should be kind to each other and trust one another.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为辅；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意按照要求分段介绍自己最喜欢的书籍和音乐是什么，不要遗漏要
点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己最喜欢的书籍，具体包括书名、如何获得的、读了多久了、主要故事情节等；
第二步：介绍自己最喜欢的音乐，具体介绍自己为什么喜欢它以及把它推荐给他人；
第三步：谈谈从最喜欢的书籍和音乐中收获了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① educational 有教育意义的
② remind 提醒
③ be interested in 对……感兴趣
④ give up 放弃
⑤ be kind to 对……友好[高分句型]
① It is about a boy who goes out to sea and finds an island full of treasures. （who引导的限制性定语从句）
② I think it is not only interesting but also educational.（think后是省略that的宾语从句）
（六）
中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美
好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一
篇英语短文，介绍你曾经读过的一本书或一首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。
提示：
1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；
读书的重要性
2. 提升自我，增强自信……
1. 作品内容简介；
读过的一本书或一首诗
2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。
1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；
多读书、读好书
2. 多读经典文学作品……
要求：
1. 短文应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名；
3. 词数80～100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：
classics 经典作品；open up one’s eyes开阔某人的眼界；improve oneself提升自我；be more confident更自
信；responsibility责任；cooperation合作Growing Up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in
reading books, especially classics.
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【答案】参考范文Growing Up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in
reading books, especially classics. Reading can not only help us get a lot of knowledge, but also help us open up
our eyes. At the same time, it can make ourselves feel more confident and improve ourselves.
I have already read Journey to the West. The Monkey King uses a magic stick to fight against the bad people.
I’m interested in reading this book because the Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. It
is so good that I can’t put it down. After reading it, I know the importance of cooperation and responsibilities.
So I suggest that everyone should read more books, especially classics, in their spare time. And I hope that
everyone can get into the habit of reading, which can bring us a lot of pleasure.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：介绍读书
的重要性；第二段：介绍读过的一本书；第三段：建议人们多读书，读好书。
（七）
请根据以下提示以“Mozart”为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况。
莫扎特是一位很重要的作曲家。他于1756年出生于奥地利。不到6岁就开始弹奏钢琴，还可以演奏小
提琴。他的家人带着他在欧洲许多城市进行巡演。他谱写了几百首动听的乐曲。然而他变的很穷。并且在
1791年，年仅35岁的莫扎特去世了。和施特劳斯父子一样，他是一位伟大的欧洲音乐家，许多人仍然认
为他的曲子是完美的。
1.词数80左右；
2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。
提示词：作曲家composer；奥地利Austria ；施特劳斯Johann Strauss
Mozart
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Mozart
Mozart was a very important composer. He was born in Austria in 1756. Before he was six he played not only
the piano, but also the violin. His family took him around Europe and he gave concerts in many cities. He wrote
hundreds of beautiful pieces of music. But he became very poor and died in 1791 when he was only 35. Like
Johann Strauss, father and son, he was a great European musician, and many people still think his music is perfect.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍莫扎特的相关信息。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。从他的出生地，学习和演奏钢琴的经历，以及人们对他的评价等方面
来进行描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（2023·湖南张家界·统考中考真题）
假如你是张家界某青少年宣讲团的李娟，国外友人 Peter对首届湖南省旅游发展大会的吉祥物之一
“鲵宝宝”很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍“鲵宝宝”。
写作要点：
Name Ni Baobao
round face, big eyes…
Appearance (外貌)
Xilankapu scarf (西兰卡普围巾)…
be friendly…
Meaning (象征意义) say hi to…
protect the animal…
… …
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.不少于60词(文章开头及结尾均已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：鲵宝宝 Ni Baobao 吉祥物 mascot 大鲵 giant salamander
Dear Peter,I’m happy to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce the mascot to you. In fact, the mascot was designed from
the protected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander.
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I’m looking forward to seeing you in Zhangjiajie. Let’s experience Tujia culture and enjoy the beautiful
scenery.
Yours truly,
Li Juan
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce the mascot to you. In fact, the mascot was designed
from the protected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander.
We call it Ni Baobao. It has a round smiling face with big eyes. And it has a small nose and a small mouth. In
my opinion, it is a little fat but cute. What’s more, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands for Tujia culture. Look,
it is waving its little hands and saying hi to you. It is friendly, isn’t it? Besides, do you know why we call it
Baobao? As far as I can see, it aims to protect the animal. If you come to Zhang Jiajie, you can’t miss it.
I’m looking forward to seeing you in Zhangjiajie. Let’s experience Tujia culture and enjoy the beautiful
scenery.
Yours truly,
Li Juan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍“鲵宝宝”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对“鲵宝宝”的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名字、外貌、象征意义”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion在我看来
②What’s more而且
③stands for代表
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①What’s more, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands for Tujia culture.（which引导的定语从句）
②If you come to Zhang Jiajie, you can’t miss it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·广西·统考中考真题）
艺术充满魅力，艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们
征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学校开设的艺术课（如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等）；
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况（如上课时间、活动等）；
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：art course（艺术课），painting（n.绘画），calligraphy（n.书法），drama（n.戏剧）
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school.
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My favourite art course
Art courses are important in school. We have many art classes in our school, such as music, painting, dance,
calligraphy, drama and so on. However, my favorite art class is painting.
I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m.
Our school holds a painting competition on June 30 every year.
I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. With my crayons, I can paint a vibrant world and anything
that catches my fancy. Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail
me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，介绍最喜欢的一门艺术课，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并点明自己最喜欢的艺术课是绘画；
第二步，具体介绍课程、活动的安排；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢绘画的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②from...to...从……到……
③allow sb to do允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m.
(which引导的限制性定语从句)
②I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me.(when引导的时
间状语从句)
（2023·山东枣庄·统考中考真题）
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My favourite book”为主题，
写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，内容包括：
1.书名、书的类型和主要内容；
2.你喜欢这本书的理由。
注意：1.词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
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【答案】例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
My favorite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China. It was written
by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang
Monk, the Monkey King , Piggie and Monk Sha. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally,
they make it. The Monkey King is my favorite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master
and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve
everything.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题。
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的书的书名、书的类型以及主要内容；
第三步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这本书。
[亮点词汇]
①get over difficulties克服困难
②on the way to在去往某地的路上
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.(when引导的时间状语从句)
（2023·四川南充·统考中考真题）
你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way（有志者事竟成）”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你
用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你对该谚语的理解；
（2）你生活中的一个事例；
（3）你的感悟。
要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means
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Where there is a will, there is a way
Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means if you are really determined to
do something, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way to do it well. The important point is that
you must have the will to achieve success.
Take me for example. Speaking English used to be difficult for me. In Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English
clearly and my classmates always laughed at me. With my English teacher’s help, I made plans to improve it. I read
English texts aloud for an hour every morning. I also made a foreign friend online. I talked to her twice a week. She
helped me correct the way I spoke English. Day by day my spoken English improved a lot. Last month I won first
prize in my school’s English Speech Contest.
This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it, just the
saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，结合自身经历，谈谈你对“有志者，事竟成”的理解和感悟，可适当添加
细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并表达自己对该谚语的理解；
第二步，以自身经历为例来阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take me for example就拿我来说
②used to be过去常常是
③make plan to do制定计划做某事
④make the decision to do sth下决定做某事
[高分句型]
①The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success. (表语从句)
②This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it, just the
saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
（2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但
学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药
学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：
1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；
2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。
参考词汇：读唇语read lips
注意：
1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age.
However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
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【答案】 A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became
deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has
always been her dream to study medicine to save people. So she read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of
becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.
I also have a dream. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. It’s been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like
playing with children, and I also like to teach my knowledge to others. In order to realize my dream, I must study
hard and stick to my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历；
第二步，介绍自己的梦想；
第三步，介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②grow up长大
③in order to为了
④stick to坚持
[高分句型]
①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people.
（并列连词and以及转折连词but的使用）
（2022·浙江衢州·统考中考真题）
每一次经历都是学习的体验，成长的积淀。近期你校英语社团将举办以“在学习中成长”为主题的征文活
动。请以“To Learn, To Grow”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1. 介绍你在文化、艺术、体育等方面的一次活动经历；
2. 谈谈你的感受。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
2. 词数：90-110；
3. 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：activity, pleasure, improve, experience
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To Learn, To Grow
Every experience is a learning experience, and we can always learn something valuable from it.
Last term, there was an English speech contest in my school. I decided to take part in it, because I thought I
was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches. I was sure I could win the contest
easily, so I spent little time practicing. Did I win? Of course not. The winner was Jim, one of my classmates, who
had practiced after school every day.
“Practice makes perfect”, as the saying goes. No one can succeed without hard work. This is what I learned
from my failure. If there’s another chance, I’ll take it seriously and do my best.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“To Learn, To Grow”为题，结合提示内容进行写作。写作前，可以提前
列举出可能需要用到的单词、短语和句型等；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检
查。
2.写作指导：这是一篇材料作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描述过去的经历时用一般过去
时。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己的经历；第三段描述自己的感受。
（2022·四川宜宾·统考中考真题）
亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你一定有很多感慨。在此之际，请你以“My Favorite
Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。
内容包括：
1. 最喜欢的老师；
2. 简单介绍该老师（外貌或性格）；
3. 喜欢他（她）的理由（两个）；
4. 最想对老师说的话。
注意：
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名（只用Mr./Ms./Miss+姓；学科）；
3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
My Favorite TeacherHow time flies! My three-year junior middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories
of my teachers.
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My Favorite Teacher
How time flies! My three-year Middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of
my teachers.
As for me, my favorite teacher is Ms. Li, our English teacher. She is a bit thin but very beautiful, with a pair of
thick glasses. She is serious and strict. In fact, she often makes her classes so interesting and lively that we all enjoy
her lessons. When we are tired in class, she often tells jokes to make us relaxed. With the help of her, we have made
great progress in English.
Ms. Li, I only want to say to you: My dream—to be a good senior school student—will come true in the end.
Thank you! (I wish you a happy life in your life long journey.)
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，介绍自己喜欢的老师。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。文章可分为三段式：第一段文章已给。第二段
阐述喜欢的这位老师是谁、他(她)的外貌或性格、以及喜欢的原因。最后一段介绍自己想对老师说的话。
写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（2022·辽宁沈阳·统考中考真题）
榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向。学校英语社团开展以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题的社团活动。
假如你是李华，请你写一封英文发言稿来介绍你心中的榜样——李想。
内容包括：
1. 人物描写；
2. 说明理由；
3. 表达希望。
【注意】
1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.
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【答案】例文
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.
He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I
don’t do well in studying. So he not only helps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to
catch up others. With Li Xiang’s help, I made great progress and I thank him very much.
I think I’m lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. And I
hope I will learn from Li Xiang to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，要求根据提示问题，介绍自己心中的榜样。注意要点齐全，可
适当发挥。
2.写作指导：文章以第一、三人称，一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时要分别介绍榜样是谁，
为什么是自己的榜样并表达自己的希望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
