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Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents?
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
烦恼与建议
阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见
本单元的话题为“烦恼与建议”。该话题习作通常阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见或给出
合理的解决办法，最后提出祝愿。在写作时，首先要学会运用“My problem is that…/I can't…”等描述生活
中存在的问题，学会用“should/could/why don't you…/why not…/what about…/how about…”提出建议以及用
“In my opinion…”等阐述观点与理由。
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一：1.描述烦恼；
◆ 步骤二：给出合理化的建议；
◆ 步骤三：表达祝愿，希望对方走出困境。
真题感知
（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友 Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息
给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
长时间使用电子产品；
近视原因
读书时间过长。
控制使用电子产品时间；
建议 养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望 ……
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 myopia；电子产品 electronic device
Dear Mike,
How is it going with you?
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【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
How is it going with you? I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I think you may use
electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight. And reading books for too long may cause
myopia.
But don’t worry. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight. At first, you should control the
time you spend on electronic products. You can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some
good habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercisesplays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined every term to make
sure your eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②be good for对……有好处
③play an important role in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
【单元写作素材】
◆开头句
①Glad to hear from you，but I’m sorry to…
②We all have some problems and stress in our lives.
③I know you are upset these days.
◆中间句
①Here is some of my advice for you.②Why not buy some flowers for your best friend?
③First，you… Second，you… Third，you…
◆结尾句
①Last,if you have too much stress，you’d better see a doctor.
②That’ll be enough to make him happy.
③I hope you will have a good time.
【常用句式】
1. I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
2. You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我关
于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。
3. I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
4. Why not.../Why don't you...？为何不……？
5. I'd like to suggest that... 我想要建议......
6. In my opinion,...在我看来，......
7. If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会......
8. You'd better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不......
9. I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
10. It's important to.../It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
11. I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
12. Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
13. I hope you will find these suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
14. Thank you for your attention. 感谢你对此事的关注。
◆谚语积累
1. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻。
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
3.True friendship is like health. You don’t know its value until you lose it.
真正的友谊好像健康，失去时才知道它的可贵。
【例文】Gina最近遇到了一个问题，她给某杂志的专栏作者Jenny写了一封信，以寻求帮助。
Dear Jenny,
I am not well these days because I can’t sleep well. I always think about the things in the daytime. I don’t know
what I should do.
Can you help me? Thanks a lot！
Yours,
Gina
根据信件内容及下列提示内容，帮Jenny给Mrs. Smith写一封回信。80词左右。
提示：1. 尽量放松，不要想太多；
2. 睡前做些运动 ；
3. 在床上听一些轻音乐。
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一．审题
体裁 应用文
话题 谈论问题，提出建议
时态 一般现在时
人称 第一.二人称
二．文章布局
开头：点明主题以“I am sorry to hear that you can't have a good sleep...” 引出问题
文章段
正文：提出建议 不同问题，不同建议
落结构
结尾：表达祝愿 以“I hope you will be better soon.”表达祝愿
三．遣词造句
①词汇库
放松Relax;锻炼exercise;睡觉sleep;轻音乐light music;建议advice/suggestion;苦恼trouble/problem
②短语箱尽量Try to; 在意care about;太多too much;睡觉 go to bed;听音乐listen to music;锻炼do sports;担心worry
about;解决work out
③链接句型
I am sorry to hear that you....
In your letter your problem is that...
Thanks for telling me about your problem.
Don’t worry about that./It is normal for your age.
Here are some good pieces of advice for you.
I hope everything will work out./ I hope you will be better./I hope these suggestions will be helpful for you.
You'd better do...
You can/could/should do....
Why don't you/Why not do...
提建议的
句型
Would you like to do....
What/how about doing...
It will be better/important/necessary for you to do...
四、参考范文
Dear Gina,
I’m sorry to hear that you can’t sleep well. Don’t worry about that. Here are some pieces of advice.
First of all , you'd better try to relax and not care about too much.Secondly,you can do more exercise before you go
to sleep. It will help you go to sleep very quickly. Next,Why not listen to some light music when you are in bed?
Finally,If you are really serious, it is necessary to see a doctor.
I hope these can help you. You will be better soon.
Yours,
Jenny
（一）问题类短语
1. 对某人生气 be angry with sb
2. 与某人吵架 get into a fight with sb
3. 不能与同学和睦相处 not get on with classmates4. 给某人施压 give sb pressure
5. 与同学竞争 compete with classmates
6. 太多的作业 too much homework
（二）建议类短语
1. 与父母交流 communicate with parents
2. 早点睡觉 go to sleep earlier
3. 给某人写信 write to sb
4. 主动提出帮助 offer to help
5. 给某人打电话 call sb up
6. 归还某物 return sth
7. 给某人道歉 say sorry to sb
8. 根据某人的看法 in one’s opinion
句子积累
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
1. You should call him so that you can say you’re sorry. 【so that 为的是；以便】
你应该在课堂上认真听讲，以便你能取得好成绩。
You should listen to the teachers carefully in class so that you can get good grades.
2. My problem is that I can’t get on with my family. 【my problem is that...我的问题是……】
我的问题是我没有时间做我自己喜欢的事情。
My problem is that I don’t have time to do what I love to do.
3. The tired children don’t get home until after 7：00 p. m. 【not... until...直到……才……】
学生们直到晚上10：30才睡觉。学*科网
Students didn’t go to bed until 10:30 p.m.
（二）根据提示词，用不同的句型表达生活中存在的以下问题。
1. 【not sleep well 】
My problem is that I can’t sleep well.
2. 【not get along well with my classmates】
I can’t get along well with my classmates.
3. 【not get good grades 】
I am sorry to tell you that I can’t get good grades.
4. 【have too much homework】My biggest problem is that I have too much homework.
5. 【have a fight with my best friend】
I am really sad that I have a fight with my best friend.
（三）完成下列提建议的句子（每空一词）
1. You should just be yourself.
2. Why don’t you talk to your parents?
3. What/How about calling him up and saying sorry to him?
4. Why not do some sports to keep healthy?
5. Why don’t you talk about these feelings?
例文：
现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短
文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；
2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；
3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。
要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
参考词汇：be short of 缺少
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【佳作展示】Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. They think doing exercise can affect their studies.
Therefore they have less time to study. Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly
will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities. In
this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they won’t get sick easily. But after they leaving school, no one forces
them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.
I think students should take exercise every day outside the school. In a word, exercise is helpful, important and
absolutely necessary.
1．（2024·新疆克孜勒苏·统考一模）
最近你和父母针对 “青少年该不该在周末和朋友外出” 进行了讨论。请你根据下列表格中的信息提示，
以 “Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?” 为话题，写一篇 80词左右的英语短文。开头已给
出，不计入总词数。
You’re parents’ ideas Your ideas
1. go over lessons 1......
2. have a good sleep 2......
3. help parents do housework 3.........
要求：1. 所写内容包括表格中提供的父母的想法
2.至少给出你的三个想法。
Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on
weekends.
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___________________【答案】例文：
Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on
weekends.
My parent thinks that teenagers should stay at home on weekends. They should go over their lessons. And they
could have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help parents do some housework on
weekends.
In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to go out with friends for fun on weekends, so we can relax
more. And we can also share ideas with each other. What’s more, we can also take some exercise together to keep
fit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出谈论的主题（已给出）。
第二步，介绍父母的想法；
第三步，介绍自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home待在家
②go over their lessons复习功课
③have enough time to do有足够时间做某事
④share...with sb和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①My parent thinks that teenagers should stay at home on weekends. (that引导的宾语从句)
②In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to go out with friends for fun on weekends, so we can relax more.
(被动语态)
2．（2024·西藏拉萨·统考一模）
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展主题为“ How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents”
的征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：1. 父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法；
3. 表达对父母的理解。
【答案】例文：
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night.
They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think
my parents don’t understand me.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as
friends, and I always tell them my trouble. I also help them do some housework.
Also, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and they give
me too much pressure, I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己的问题；
第二步，具体阐述你与父母保持良好关系的做法；
第三步，最后表达对父母的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion 在我看来
②allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
③too much太多
[高分句型]
①I think my parents don’t understand me.（宾语从句）
②Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and they give me too much pressure, I know they really
love me and want me to have a bright future.（让步状语从句，宾语从句）
3．（2024·福建三明·统考一模）
汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友 Anna的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根
据以下提示给她写封回信。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anna,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible versions：
Dear Anna,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese
course. Chinese is spoken by the most people in the world. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming
more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese
culture.
In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinesesongs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a
lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻
辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，给出相应的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
hear from收到……的信
suggest建议
not only…but also…不仅……而且……
communicate交流
admire欣赏
be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course.(省略that的宾语从句)
Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.（动名词作
主语）
4．（2024·福建南平·统考一模）
新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为重要。目前，许多中学生课
外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出合理的建议。
词数80左右。注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】例文
At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, most students have
too much homework to do. Some students haven’t developed reading habit. They prefer to spend their free time
watching TV or the Internet.
However, reading actually has many advantages. It can not only increase our knowledge, improve our
thinking, but also make our lives more colorful.
Here are my suggestions to share with everyone. We can form reading groups, read whole English books
together, and then share our reading experiences with each other. Let’s start reading today and enjoy the fun of
reading!【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因并提出合理的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因；
第二步，介绍阅读的好处；
第三步，介绍自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②prefer to do更喜欢做某事
③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①It can not only increase our knowledge, improve our thinking, but also make our lives more colorful. (not
only...but also结构)
②Let’s start reading today and enjoy the fun of reading! (祈使句)
5．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模）
假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为身体瘦弱而苦恼，请你根据以下信息，谈谈你的看法，并告
诉他如何做一名身体健康的中学生。
写作要点：
1. 因他的信任而高兴。
2. 你的看法：
①参加体育运动是必要的。
②体育运动即能增强体质又能调节情绪。
3. 告诉他如何做一名身体健康（in good health）的中学生。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,How are you doing?
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I’m glad of your trust. I would like to offer you some advice.
I think it is necessary to take part in sports, because sports can not only strengthen the body but also regulate
the mood. As we all know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, fresh
fruit and vegetables. You should not take in too much meat or too many sweets. Also, physical exercise is needed
instead of studying all the time. For example, you can play basketball or swim after school. What is more, having
enough sleep is of great benefit. Therefore, I sincerely suggest that you should have at least eight hours of sleep
every day and get rid of staying up too late. Only in this way can we keep fit.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己因对方的信任而高兴；第二步，具体阐述自己对于体育运动的看法，并就如何做一名身体健康的中学生提出建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do想要做某事
②take part in参加
③at least至少
④get rid of摆脱
[高分句型]
①What is more, I sincerely suggest that you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and get rid of
staying up too late.(that引导的宾语从句)
②I think it is necessary to take part in sports, because sports can not only strengthen the body but also regulate the
mood.(because引导原因状语从句)
6．（2023·福建福州·福建省福州铜盘中学校考模拟预测）
六月，全国节能宣传周和全国低碳日活动的主题是“践行节能低碳，建设美丽家园”。请以“共建文
明城市，低碳生活我先行”为主题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇倡议书。词数80左右。
主题 Let’s create a civilized city together
ways benifits
1.ride, walk reduce, save...
具体做法
2.throw, spit clean...
3.plant beautiful, environment...
你的建议 联系生活实际提出至少2条合理的建议。
注意事项：
1）根据要点提示，可适当发挥（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Let’s create a civilized city together
As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city.
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【答案】例文：
Let’s create a civilized city together
As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city.
We can reduce air pollution by riding bikes or walking. It can also save energy. We mustn’t throw rubbish or
spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d
better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can turn off the lights when
leaving the room. Actions speak louder than words. Let’s take an active part in creating a civilized city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：注意具体做法要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅，建议不能少于两点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述建造一个文明的城市是我们的责任；
第二步，详细说如何做；
第三步，给出的两点建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way使用这种方法
②so that为了
[高分句型]
①In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life.（表目的的状语从句）
②Actions speak louder than words.（谚语：行动胜于言语）
7．（2023·陕西渭南·统考模拟预测）
假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请根据以下提示，
用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。Summer Camp
Living skills training Sports training
on a farm in a training centre
live with local people live with team members
cook meals by yourself be tested by coaches
feed animals, ... play ball games, ...
要求: 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Sir/Madam,Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get
during the process will be very important to my later life.
The living skills training will be on a farm. There, I can live with local people. They will help me learn more
about their customs and lifestyles. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. In the summer
camp, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I also have some advice for you. I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables. I hope
I will enjoy myself on the farm.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“并对你选择的活动提出建议”一项，
适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明自己更喜欢的一种活动；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢这种活动的理由；
第三步，书写结语，提出自己的建议，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①make me interested使我感兴趣
②by oneself独力
③take part in参加
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be very important to my
later life. (含有原因状语从句和定语从句的复合句)
②what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. (what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句)
8．（2023·安徽合肥·合肥38中校考三模）
奋斗的道路不会一帆风顺，初中三年我们在生活和学习上都经历过困难。Teenager magazine正在举办
“How to get over difficulty”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据提示结合自身实际情况，写一篇短文投稿。
(1)遇到的困难，(2)解决的办法，
(3)收获与感想。
1. 请围绕所给要点写作，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺、意思连贯，80—100 词左右；
3. 文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
How to get over difficulty
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How to get over difficulty
In our daily life, we often meet different kinds of difficulties. But how can we get over them? Here is one of
my unusual experiences.
When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t do well in my lessons first. Exams always brought me sadness. As a result, I
was afraid of study and I became very lonely. Then, I decided to ask my teachers for help. Luckily, they gave me
some useful advice. They told me not to give up easily because nothing is impossible if we put our heart into it. I
was deeply moved by their words and worked harder than before. Finally, I improved myself a lot.
From this experience, I understand that I should learn to get over difficulty by myself with my confidence and
my hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：以“How to get over difficulty”为题，结合所给的要点提示，写一篇介绍自己如何克服困难的短文。
[写作步骤]第一步：介绍你自己遇到了什么困难；
第二步：你解决问题的方法是什么；
第三步：谈谈你的收获与感想。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 各种各样的……
②one of ……之一
③give up 放弃
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t do well in my lessons first. （when引导时间状语从句）
②They told me not to give up easily because nothing is impossible if we put our heart into it. （because引导原因
状语从句）
（一）
1.（2023·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）
当前，全国儿童青少年近视率居高不下，习近平总书记对此高度重视并作出重要批示，教育部也于2023年
3月30日印发了《2023年全国综合防控儿童青少年近视重点工作计划》。对于儿童青少年近视问题，你有
何看法和建议。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，告诉大家如何保护视力。
要求：
1. 包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。As we all know, eyes are very important to us. However, many students have poor eyesight. In order to protect
our eyesight, we should follow these suggestions.
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In a word, let’s take action to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【答案】例文
As we all know, eyes are very important to us. However, many students have poor eyesight. In order to protect
our eyesight, we should follow these suggestions.
In my opinion, it’s important to have good eyesight. We should develop good habits of using our eyes. For
example, we’d better take a break after reading for 45minutes. We can do eye exercises and do more sports. They
are helpful to protect our eyesight. Eating healthy food is also good for protecting our eyesight. I hope we protect
our eyes well so that we can see the colorful world.
In a word, let’s take action to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容呼吁人们保护视力，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对下文建议的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍如何保护视力；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion在我看来②take a break休息一下
③be good for有益于
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, it’s important to have good eyesight.（It固定句型）
②I hope we protect our eyes well so that we can see the colorful world.（省略that的宾语从句和so that引导的
目的状语从句）
（二）
（2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题）
青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，
并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英
文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer
holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes
and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They
disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents? Can you give
me some advice?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care about关心
③take painting lessons上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
（三）（2023·湖北孝感·统考中考真题）
亲爱的同学，在你成长的过程中，也许会遇到一些“小烦恼”，自身的调节与朋友的建议可以帮助你
成为更好的自己。近期，学校将举行一次相关主题的经验交流会，请你根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇
发言稿。
要点提示：
1. 简要介绍你自己(如年龄、爱好……)；
2. 讲述你或你的朋友曾经遇到的问题及感受（如学习中的、同学间的、家庭里的……)；
3. 分享解决问题的方法(如多沟通、听音乐、参与活动……)。
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
communicate v. 沟通
参考词汇：pressure n. 压力
Hello, everyone! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9.
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Hello, everyone! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9. I am 15 years old. I like doing sports. But I used to hate
doing sports. It was my mother who changed me.Once I spent too much watching TV and playing computer games. So my grades were worse and worse. My
mother noticed my changes. She had a long conversation with me. She said that spending too much on them was
bad for my eyes. She advised me to relax by listening to music and doing sports. She asked me to run for an hour in
the morning every day. A few days later, I found running could make me healthy and happy. I could do everything
better.
In my opinion, when you meet some difficulties, you can share them with your parents or teachers. They will
give you some useful advice.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息以及爱好；
第二步，分享自己曾经遇到的问题，以及解决的方法；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③be bad for对……有坏处
[高分句型]
①She said that spending too much on them was bad for my eyes.（that引导宾语从句，动名词作主语）
② She asked me to run for an hour in the morning every day. （动词不定式作宾补）
