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Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?
单元写作指导与演练
【单元话题解读】
本单元的写作情境属于“人与自然”以及“人与社会”主题范畴，涉及子主题有
“社会热点与国际事务；身边的自然现象与生态环境；自然灾害与人身安全，灾害防范
基本常识”,等。常见的写作任务是描述重大历史事件和难忘的事件等。体裁多为记叙文
或图表类说明文等。
【写作技巧】
围绕“难忘的事件”这一话题,本单元中会涉及谈论发生在过去且令人印象深刻的事件,如
学校活动、自然灾害、事故、旅行等。这类话题作文以记叙文为主,可写人可叙事,写作时
要注意写清事情发生的前因后果及发展过程等。通常要运用一般过去时和过去进行时。
【写作目标】
围绕该话题的书面表达形式有两种：
一是根据提示写一件令你印象深刻的事件；
二是描述自己和他人过去所发生的事情。
【单元素材积累】
短语积累
众所周知 as we all know 靠 某 人 自 己 on my own = depend on
忙于做某事 be busy with oneself
开始去做某事 began to do sth 练习做某事 practice doing something
像平常一样 as usual 下雨下的大 rain heavily
突然 all of a sudden=suddenly 主动提供去做某事 offer to do sth
试着做某事 try to do sth 经历之后 through that experience
让sb做某事 make sb do 俗话说得好 as an old saying goes
做sth是重要的 It's important to do 允许某人去做某事 allow sb to do sth
教sb去做某事 each somebody to do 害怕做某事 be afraid of doing sth= be
寻求sb的帮助 ask somebody for help afraid to do sth
想要放弃 want to give up 对sth有好处 be good for
能够做某事 be able to do 做某事有困难 have difficulty/problem/trouble
继续去做某事 continue to do something doing sth
首先 at first = first of all 在我看来 in my opinion
花费时间做某事 spend time doing sth
(一)描述过去难忘的经历句型：
1.I was doing sth.when he did...2.My brother was doing...while his teacher was doing...
3.It happened in/on...
4.I still remember what we were doing when..
5.An important event that I remember was..
6.When this event happened,I was...
(二)表达感受的句型：
1.I was so shocked/scared/surprised/...that...
2.The activity brings everyone closer together.
3.I realized that...
4.This event is very important to me because...
必背句型
◆开头句
①There are many unforgettable events in my life.
②I had a terrible day the day before yesterday.
③There is always something unforgettable in my life,especially the story between my friend
and me.
· Life is full of unexpected. I still remember what happened last summer.
·· As time goes by, lots of things have disappeared from my mind, but there is one thing that is
unforgettable.
· In my life, I have experienced many things, but one thing is the most unforgettable for me.
· Although there are many unforgettable things in my life. I will never forget the day when I...
· An unforgettable thing I remember well happened on a rainy day.
· As we all know, everyone has some special experiences, and so do I. Let me tell you one of them.
· Life is full of unexpected. I still remember what happened last summer.
· Everyone has his own unforgettable things. For me, there was one thing that I still remember well
until now.
· How time flies. During my life, there was one thing I will never forget.· There is one thing I will never forget in my memory. Let me tell you.
◆中间句
①While I was doing my homework…
②He was riding very fast when a car came.
③I was so worried that I couldn't say a word.
◆结尾句
①In my opinion,no matter what happens,true friends will always be friends.
②I'll always remember that day.
③What an unforgettable day it was!
· This event is unforgettable for me because it makes me understand that it's important to...
· Through that experience, I learn that we should continue to work hard no matter what happens.
· Life is full of ups and downs. We should face the difficulties bravely.
· I will never forget this experience because it makes me learn that...
· No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of the problems will be solved in the end. Just try it and
never give up.
· From that I knew I should never give up in the face of difficulty.
· Through this experience, I learned that how to deal with problems in life properly and never give up.
◆谚语积累
▶️ (cid:2)The more we do, the more we can do. 做的越多，能力越大。
▶️ (cid:2)It's hard to beat someone who never gives up.坚持就是胜利。
▶️ (cid:2)There is no rainbow without the rain.不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹。
▶️ (cid:2)Believe in yourself and you will be unstoppable. 自信者勇往直前。
▶️ (cid:2)Action is the key to all successes. 行动是成功的关键。
▶️ (cid:2)Keep on going and never give up/ Never say never.永不言弃。
▶️ (cid:2)Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
▶️ (cid:2)Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。
▶️ (cid:2)Go big or go home. 全力以赴。
▶️ (cid:2)God helps those who help themselves.天道酬勤。
▶️ (cid:2)Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。
▶️ (cid:2)No pains, no gains. 没有付出，没有回报。
▶️ (cid:2)There is no royal road to learning. 书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。
▶️ (cid:2)Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. 世上无难事，只怕无难事。
▶️ (cid:2)No sweet without sweat. 苦尽甘来。▶️ (cid:2)A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。
连词
first of all, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，
both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's
more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye, besides, last but not least, on the one hand, on
the other hand
写作任务 (Section B 3b)
写作任务
2023年国庆长假期间，恰逢杭州亚运会正在举行，浙江省杭州第七中学给学生布置了一
份特殊的“假期作业”——给亚运冠军画像。假如你是校英文报小记者，请你就此写一篇英
文报道，刊登在校报上。
【审清题目】
内容：写一篇关于浙江省杭州第七中学学生给亚运冠军画像活动的报道。
文体：记叙文。
人称：第三人称。
时态：以一般过去时和过去进行时为主。
【头脑风暴】【提供素材】
◆常用词块 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。
Event
the 19th Asian Games, take place (发生)
Time and place
(1)_____________________(国庆假期期间), in Zhejiang Hangzhou No. 7 High School
People
the teachers and students from Zhejiang Hangzhou No. 7 High School
Activities
do special homework, draw pictures of Asian Games champions ( 冠 军 ),
(2)_____________________(分发画纸), set up over 40 studios (画室), set up WeChat groups, be
responsible for (负责) different sports events, report on gold-winning situation, let the students know
about the champions as soon as possible, choose the drawing task ( 任务), watch the games,
(3)_____________________(网上浏览信息), draw carefully, (4)_____________________(想出一
个有创意的主意), ask the teacher for help, finish 628 pictures, on show, come to admire (欣赏) the
pictures
Evaluation (评价)
speak highly of, enjoy the activity, improve students' drawing skills, a special way to celebrate ...,
increase students' knowledge, open students' minds, learn from the champions
Key:
1. during the National Day Holiday
2. hand / give out drawing paper
3. look through the information online
4. come up with a creative idea
◆常用句型
• ... took place in ... from ...
•It was such a(n) ... that ...
•While / When ..., the ...
•In order to / To ..., the school ...•For them, it was not only ... but also ...
【谋篇布局】
将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。
简述重大事件
The 19th Asian Games took place from September 23, 2023 to October 8, 2023. It was such a
great event that everyone wanted to play a part in it.
报道杭州第七中学进行的活动
While the 19th Asian Games were taking place, the headmaster of Zhejiang Hangzhou No. 7 High
School, Mr. Xia, came up with a creative idea. (1)_____________________________(他要求学生
们 做 特 殊 的 作 业 ) — drawing pictures of Asian Games champions.
(2)_____________________________(师生都对这作业感到兴奋). Just before the vacation, the
school handed out drawing paper to students. And (3)_____________________________(为了更好
地服务学生们), the school set up over 40 studios and many WeChat groups to help them. The students
chose whether to finish the drawing tasks depending on their interests. To draw the pictures well, the
students had to watch the games and look through the information about the champion online.
(4)_____________________________(最后，同学们完成了628幅画).
The students spoke highly of the activity. For them, it was not only
(5)_____________________________(一个特殊的方式来庆祝这个盛大的事件) but also a special
way to help them improve their drawing skills and increase their knowledge.
Key:
1. He asked students to do special homework
2. Both the teachers and students were excited about the homework
3. in order to / to better serve the students
4. Finally / At last / In the end, the students finished 628 pictures
5. a special way to celebrate the great event
【中考链接】
时光荏苒，新一阶段的学习生活即将开启。对于未来，同学们期待中又有些许担忧。英
语课上，大家就新学期是否住校这个问题展开了讨论，请根据科代表整理出的结构图提示，
结合自己的看法，以“Are you going to live in the school?”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，在
下一堂课上进行分享。注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 要求语句通顺，行文连贯；
4. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：dormitory (n. 宿舍)
independent (adj. 独立的)
private (adj. 私人的)
manage (v. 管理)
Are you going to live in the school?
A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages
and disadvantages.
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Key: One possible version:
Are you going to live in the school?
A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages
and disadvantages.
Of course, I know as a boarder, not only will I save time to concentrate on schoolwork, but also I
can learn to be independent and manage my own life. Besides, I'll learn how to get along with my
roommates, so I can make more friends.However, in that case, I'm afraid I can't have enough private room and it can get in the way of my
sleep. I have been taken good care of by my parents since I was very young. But what should I do
without their company? I'll miss them so much that I can't put my time to good use.
All in all, I don't think I'll live in the school dormitory. Although studying is important, spending
time with family is more important, do you agree?
Word Bank:
boarder 寄宿生 concentrate on 集中(注意力)
besides 而且 in that case 假使那样的话 company 陪伴
假如你是李嘉，请阅读下面的学校通知，然后根据通知内容写一篇80
词左右的应征稿。可以适当发挥。
Dear students,
There are many events on our road to growth （ 成 长 ） .Maybe they made you
happy,excited,nervous or sad. Our school magazine is having an essay contest（征文大赛） this
month. Please write an essay on “An
Unforgettable Event”.In your essay,you must talk about these questions:
1.What was the event?When and where did it happen?
2.What was the result?
Please send your essay to us as soon as possible.
E-mail us at gmzx666@163.com.
Mr. Zhang
►►审题指导
1.文体:记叙文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态：一般过去时
►►思路点拨An Unforgettable Event
① There are many unforgettable events in my life and I can't forget them.I'd like
to share one of them with you.
On November 5th,I took part in an English talk show competition.②On that day,I
woke up very early to practice the speech.When I walked onto the stage,I almost forgot all
the words. Then I took a deep breath and talked as usual. Luckily,I made up some words to
let my speech go.③ Finally,I won the first place. ④ It was an unforgettable day!I'll always
remember that day.
An Unforgettable Event 升格技巧
① There are so many unforgettable events in my life 技巧一：巧用so…that…句型
that I can't forget them . I'd like to share one of them with 升格①
you.
On November 5th,I took part in an English talk 技巧二：巧用 because 引导的
show competition.② On that day,I woke up very early 原因状语从句升格②
because I wanted to practice the speech .When I
walked onto the stage,I almost forgot all the words. 技巧三：巧用主语从句升格③
Then I took a deep breath and talked as usual.
Luckily,I made up some words to let my speech 技巧四：巧用 what 引导的感
go.③ 叹
句升格④
What surprised me most was that （最使我惊讶的是）
I won the first place at last.
④ What an unforgettable day it was! I'll always
remember that day.
【必备范文】
每个人都有自己难忘的经历，这些经历或者带给我们快乐，或者带给我们成长，请谈谈一段你自己难
忘的经历，内容包含：这个经历是什么？你有何收获和体会？
提示：unforgettable, experience, practice, understand●What is your unforgettable experience?
●What can you learn from this experience?
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【答案】例如
We all have experienced highs and lows in our lives. I will never forget my experience as a volunteer. I have
done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste Sorting
Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste-sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our
community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste and put
them into different dustbins. We were busy all the afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought
we did something meaningful. I have learnt a lot from the experience. If we sort out recyclable things before
throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced and less waste will be burned or buried.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，谈谈一段你自己
难忘的经历。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时，注意承接上
文，根据要点提示具体介绍我的这个经历是什么，我有何收获和体会；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有
要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下
文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提
示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
友谊对每个人都很重要。朋友能相互帮助，共同进步；也能相互陪伴，令人身心愉悦。某英文网站正
在开展以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一下你最好的朋友
是谁，他/她性格如何，谈谈你们之间一件令你难忘的事以及你通过这次经历学到了什么。
提示词语：friendly, encourage, share, help
提示问题：·Who is your best friend? And what is he/she like?
·What’s the most unforgettable experience between you and your friend?
·What have you learned from the experience?
Friendship is important to everyone.
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【答案】例文：
Friendship is important to everyone. Tony is my best friend. He is very kind and helpful. One day I wanted to
copy his math homework, but to my surprise, he didn’t agree. He said, “It’s wrong to copy others’ homework. If
you have difficulty, I can help you.” His words made me feel warm. From then on he helped me with my math
every day. With his help, I made great progress in math.Tony made me realize that good friends should help each other in the right way.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍自己最好的朋友。要点包括：最好的朋友是谁；
他/她的性格是什么样的；你们之间发生的难忘的事情；通过这件事情你学到了什么。
2.写作指导：文章以第一、三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，注意主谓一致问题；
写作时注意按要点分段叙述，保证文章要点齐全，语句通顺。
今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生
而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此
事故写一篇日记。
内容要求：
1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；
2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；
3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。
写作要求：
1.一定要注意写日记的格式；
2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；
3.不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
October 6th, Saturday Fine
There was a terrible car accident happened at 8:10 on Xin Hua Road. That’s because the driver was very
careless. When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. When he stopped the car, it was
too late. In the accident, the driver hurt badly and was sent to the hospital. Luckily, the two students were a little
hurt. They were also sent to the hospital.
The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. I thought we must obey the
traffic rules and have to wait for the green traffic light. Especially, for students, we must learn to protect ourselves
when we walk on the road. The safety is the most important thing to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要求”中的具体信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、
大致情况等。可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据内容要求，介绍清楚事故发生的时间、地点和大致情况；第二步，说明自己对交通安全的认知以及自己的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①be sent to被送到
②be careful小心；当心
③obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则
④wait for等候
[高分句型]
①When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. （there be句型）
②The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. （that引导的宾语从句）
假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈
感受。
1．上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒……
2．王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝……
3．树干太沉，她搬不动，然后……
4．你认为……
参考词汇：
被吹倒：be blown down；
挡住：block；
树枝：branch；
树干：trunk。
要求：
1．词数80—100。
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday,
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Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a tree was blown down by the strong wind and blocked theroad. She picked up the branches immediately and then put them on the side of the road. Then she tried to move the
trunk, but it was so heavy that she couldn’t move it even though she tried her best. Many people came to help, and
finally they moved it away. How happy and proud they were!
I think Wang Hong is really kind and her story also tells us that many hands make light work.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，作者分享一件好人好事给笔友；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述王红做好事的过程；
第三步，书写结语。作者希望收到笔友的来信，也希望笔友能分享他周围的故事给作者。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up 拿起，捡起；
②try to do sth. 努力做某事，尝试做某事；
③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事；
④Many hands make light work 众人拾柴火焰高。
[高分句型]
①Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a tree was blown down by the strong wind and blocked the
road. (省略that的宾语从句；be blown down被动语态)；
②Then she tried to move the trunk, but it was so heavy that she couldn’t move it even though she tried her
best. (so…that…引导结果状语从句)
生活中总会有一些令人难忘的事件，让你记忆犹新。或许它是幸福快乐的，或许它是悲伤难过的，亦或它
是意料之外的… … 请以“An Unforgettable Event”为题，结合自身经历描述一件这样的事情，以及难忘的
原因和你的感受。
提示：
1. What was the event?
2. When and where did it happen?
3. Why was it unforgettable?
4. How do you feel about it?
要求：
1. 所给提示必须都用上。
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰；
3. 字数：不少于80词。标题不计入总词数
An Unforgettable Event【答案】An Unforgettable Event
Last Sunday I went to visit the Great Wall with my friends. We went there by bus. It was hot and windy that day.
There were thousands of people. When we saw a group of foreigners. We went up and talked with them. We told
them lots of history of the Great Wall and the Chinese culture. They were very surprised when they saw our English
was excellent. They were also very interested in the Chinese culture. They thanked us a lot and we really had a
good time. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese. I will remember this experience forever.
【详解】这篇短文要求我们以“An Unforgettable Event”为题写一篇短文。人称为第一人称，时态为一般过
去时。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括：这件事情是什么？发生在何时何地？为什么它
令人难忘？你觉得怎么样？写作提纲虽然已经给出，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得
完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注
意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据写作提纲，讲述了自己难忘的经历。层次非常的清晰。短文
中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如There were thousands of people. We felt proud of ourselves and
being Chinese.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如
They were also very interested in the Chinese culture.等。
初中生活已经过去近两年，你在这期间一定发生了很多难忘的事情，请你选择一件最难忘的事，结合
以下要求写一篇英语作文。
参考要点：
1. 事件发生的时间及地点：
2. 事情发生时，你和你的朋友或家人正在做什么；
3. 这件事对你来说为什么难忘。
4. ……
要求：
1. 词数80-120词。
2. 文中不得出现自己所在的学校、班级、姓名等真实信息。
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【答案】例文：
How time flies! It’s almost two years since I came to the junior high school. Many things happened to me
during the two years. But I never forget one of them.It was a Saturday morning. The weather was fine. My classmate Li Lei and I went to the countryside to have a
picnic by bus. The bus was full of people. When we were on the bus, we were talking happily. Then an old woman
got on the bus. I wanted to give my seat to the old woman, but I was afraid others thought I wanted to get thanks. I
looked around. Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping. Suddenly a little boy stood
up and made room for the woman when I was thinking. I felt very ashamed and regretted. I was not as good as a
little boy.
I will remember the thing. From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help. If
everyone try to help others, the world will become much more beautiful.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求按汉语提示写一件最难忘的事，要补充要点，适当发挥，
仔细观看写作要求。
写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景；描
述故事时，场景描写要细致；故事发生的时间、地点、人们在做什么、为什么难忘却等要叙述完整，保证
条理清楚。
假如你是李明，希望学校八年级的学生。下面所提供的题目请任选一个。
1.目前你校正在组织一次难忘的助人经历主题活动，你对此感兴趣。请结合自己或班内其他同学的亲身经
历，以“An Experience of helping ...”为题，用英语写一篇短文，为此次活动做准备。
2.请你给老师或家长写一封信，表达你对课后辅导班(after-school classes for children)的意见或看法。
提示词语：
agree with...., because, although, in my opinion, children/parents should
书写要求：
1．书写工整，语言规范，不少于80个单词。
2．文中不得出现本人及学校的真实名字。
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【答案】范文
An Experience of helping others
Two years ago, I helped a 9-year-old boy to learn English. He came from a poor family. His parents had no
money to pay for after-school English classes. I told him not to worry about the money and that I would help him
for free. I practiced speaking English with him twice a week, gave him lots of free English books and taught him
how to make good use of them.
After a year of practicing, he told me that he got an A in an English test and he loved English. What touched
me wasn’t that good result, but that he understood why he should learn hard—nothing comes easily. Because of his
hard work and my kindness, his English improved a lot.
From that experience of helping him, I also learned: Never stop doing little things for others. Sometimes those
little things will have a big place in their hearts.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是给出了两个话题，第一个是半命题作文，以“An Experience of helping ...”
为题，谈谈自己或其他同学帮助他人的亲生经历和感受；第二个话题是一个书信作文，要求谈谈你对课后
辅导班的看法。
2.写作指导：如果选择第一个话题，写作时应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述细节时，细节应符合文章要求，可以有适当的补充；如果选择第二个话题，应用第一、三人称和一般现在时来
行文，描述时应注意逻辑，保证思路清晰。完成之后，注意检查文中是否有单词、标点和语法的错误。
假如你是一名警察，昨晚11点住在Blue Sky旅馆208房间的李先生外出时，他的一些财物被偷了。你
询问了入住其他房间的几个邻居当时在干什么。请根据下面提示写一则调查报告。
注意：
（1）以警察的身份来写；
（2）可以适当发挥，时态以过去进行时为主；
（3）不少于80词。
Room 102 Miss Liu chat online with friends
Room 205 Mr. Huang take a shower
Room 227 Ms. Li read newspapers
Room 308 Mr. Luo watch TV
Room 115 old Tommy sleep
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【答案】例文
Mr. Li in Room 208 of Blue Sky Hotel called to say he was stolen at 11 o’clock last night when he was out.
We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here are the results.
Miss Liu in Room 102 said she was chatting online with friends. Mr. Huang in Room 205 was taking a
shower. Ms. Li in Room 227 was reading newspapers. Mr. Luo in Room 308 said he was watching TV. Old Tommy
in Room 115 said he was sleeping.
We will keep on doing some other surveys and try to find the thief.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为调查报告；
②时态：时态为“过去进行时”；
③提示：注意以警察的身份来写；不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语
法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据所给的材料，以警察的身份写一则调查报告；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先交代调查的背景；其次具体介绍调查的内容；
第三步：书写结语。表示“我们将继续做一些其他调查，试图找到小偷。”
[亮点词汇]
①be out不在家
②take a shower洗个淋浴③at that time在那时
[高分句型]
①Mr. Li in Room 208 of Blue Sky Hotel called to say he was stolen at 11 o’clock last night when he was out.
（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Miss Liu in Room 102 said she was chatting online with friends.（省略that的宾语从句）
在我们成长的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难
忘的回忆! 某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一
篇文章参赛。
要求：
1. 故事必须原创；
2. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
1. 分享故事(起因，经过，结果……)；
2. 表达感受(幸福，感动，思考……)；
3. ……A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.
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【答案】There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One
thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to
stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me.
When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more.
From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s
help. I thanked him a lot.
In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.
【详解】试题分析：本书面表达以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题，根据题目要求知道应该写一
篇记叙文，同时必须完成相应的要点内容，作文的关键是回忆，因此它的基准时态应该以过去时态为主，
即一、二要点，而第三点发表自己对朋友的看法或观点，应该用一般现在时来叙述。写作中注意连词、固
定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最
好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中had a deep influence on, fell down, worried about, help me with my
study，fall behind，in my opinion，no matter, and, so等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采
用了丰富的句型，比如：宾语从句、时间状语从句、No matter引导的让步状语从句等，大大增加了信息的
容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
生活中总有一些事情令人难忘，点点滴滴，历久弥新。不管是开心，还是忧伤，都会给我们启示，伴我们成长。假如你校将组织以“一次难忘的经历”为话题的英语演讲比赛。请根据内容提示，用英语写
一篇短文参赛。
提示：
1. 你的经历；
2. 你的感受；
3. 你从中学到了什么。
参考词汇：unforgettable 难忘的
要求：
①短文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
②词数80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
③文中不能出现真实姓名、地名等信息。
An Unforgettable Experience
I had an unforgettable experience. I’m sure you’ve had some unforgettable experiences like me.
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Experience
I had an unforgettable experience. I’m sure you’ve had some unforgettable experiences like me.
Last summer, I went hiking with my friends in the mountains. It was a sunny day, and we were all excited.
However, halfway through our hike, it started to rain heavily. We were unprepared and got soaked. We had to find
shelter and wait for the rain to stop. Despite the discomfort, we sang songs and shared stories to keep our spirits up.
When the rain finally stopped, we continued our hike and reached the top of the mountain. The view was
breathtaking, and we felt a great sense of achievement.
From this experience, I learned the importance of being prepared and staying positive in difficult situations.
It also taught me the value of teamwork and perseverance. This experience will always remind me that challenges
can be overcome with a positive attitude and the support of friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量
多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己有一次难忘的经历；
第二步，具体阐述自己所经历的事情和感受；
第三步，最后表达自己从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①go hiking with sb和某人一起去远足
②a great sense of achievement巨大的成就感③start to do sth开始做某事
[高分句型]
①When the rain finally stopped, we continued our hike and reached the top of the mountain.（时间状语从句）
②This experience will always remind me that challenges can be overcome with a positive attitude and the support
of friends.（宾语从句）
