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写作规范练(十七)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(图表类写作)
学校英文报正在开展以“Protecting Our Eyes to Enjoy a Bright World”为题的讨论。请使
用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．学生近视率状况描述；
2．简单评论；
3．你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Protecting Our Eyes to Enjoy a Bright World
Ⅱ.读后续写(动物救人)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in about 40 feet of water all by myself.I knew I should not have gone alone，but I was
rather competent and just took a chance.There was not much current，and the water was so
warm，clear and attractive.When I got a cramp(抽筋)，I realized at once how foolish I was.I was
not too alarmed，but was completely doubled up with stomach cramps.I tried to remove my weight
belt，but I was so doubled up that I could not get to the catch.I was sinking and began to feel more
frightened，unable to move.I could see my watch and knew there was only a little more time on
the oxygen tank before I would be out of air.I tried to massage(按摩) my stomach.I wasn’t
wearing a wet suit，but couldn’t straighten out and couldn’t get to the cramped muscles with
my hands.I thought，“I can’t go like this! I have things to do！” I just couldn’t die this way
with no one to even know what happened to me.I called out in my mind ，“Somebody，
something，help me！”
I was not prepared for what happened.Suddenly I felt a push from behind me under the arm.I
thought，“Oh no，sharks！” I felt real fear and desperation.But my arm was being lifted
forcefully.Around into my field of vision came an eye—the most extraordinary eye I could everimagine.It was smiling.It was the eye of a big dolphin.Looking into that eye，I knew I was safe.I
was flooded with relief.I felt that the animal was comforting me as well as lifting me toward the
surface.My stomach cramps went away and I relaxed with security.
At the surface it drew me all the way into shore.It took me into water so shallow that I began
to be concerned that it might be beached，and I pushed it back a little deeper，where it waited，
watching me，I guess to see if I was all right.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
When I took off the weight belt and oxygen tank，I went back into the ocean to the dolphin.
After a while it brought me back to shore.
