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六、求助信
求助信是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助的信件。因此整篇文章应用一般
现在时，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下：
1．开头句
(1)I’m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favour.我写信是想问你能否帮我一个忙。
(2)I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.我写信是希望你能帮
我一个忙。
(3)I have some difficulty in doing...，which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you
for help.我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
(4)I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with...我想知道你是否能费心帮
我……
(5)I’m sorry to bother you，but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.很抱歉打扰你，
但我有些困难需要你的帮助。
2．中间句
(1)I am encountering some problems in...，which troubles me a lot.我在……方面遇到一些问题，
这很困扰我。
(2)What bothers me is that...困扰我的事是……
(3)I’ve found that my problem lies mainly in two aspects.For one thing，...; for another，...我发
现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面，……；另一方面，……
(4)I have some difficulty not only in...but also in...我不仅在……而且在……方面也有问题。
3．结尾句
(1)I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.我相信你的宝贵而及时的建
议会使我受益匪浅。
(2)I’m sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进
步。(3)I’m eager to get your timely help./I’m eager for your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
(4)I would be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour
and...如果你能帮助我……我会非常感激。
(5)I’d appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account.如果你能考虑我的请
求，我将不胜感激。
(6)I would be grateful if you could give/lend me a hand.如果你能帮助我，我将十分感激。
(2024·湘豫名校联考)
假定你是李华，准备参加你校举办的以“快乐阅读，健康视力”为主题的书签设计活动。
请你给你的留学生朋友Alick写一封邮件，寻求他的建议和帮助。内容包括：
1．写信目的；2.设计要求(包含绿色、阅读、健康视力三个元素)。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：快乐阅读，健康视力Happy Reading and Maintain Good Vision；书签 bookmark
满分佳作 名师点评
1.文章开篇表明写信意图，
Dear Alick， 随后说明求助的具体内
I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do 容，最后表达希望和感
me a favor.Our school is planning a bookmark designing activity 激。
this week.Knowing that you’re quite experienced in 2.书信中使用了高级词汇：
designing，I wonder if you could give me some help and advice. be experienced in，
Since the theme of the activity is Happy Reading and wonder，theme，
Maintain Good Vision，the bookmark should contain such key valuable，timely等；求助
elements as greenness，reading and healthy vision，and it should 信的套语：I am writing in
be nice to look at.Besides ， the bookmark should carry both the hope that you will be
Chinese and English messages. kind enough to do me a
I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely favor.和 I believe I will
advice.I would be very grateful if you are kind enough to lend me a benefit a lot from your
hand.Please let me know as soon as possible. valuable and timely
Yours sincerely， advice.；还使用了复杂结
Li Hua 构：since引导的原因状语
从句。
假定你是李华，为参加英语之夜(English Evening)，你和同学将北魏时期(the NorthernWei Dynasty)花木兰代父从军的故事改编成了一个英文短剧。请给学校外教Mr Green写封邮
件，请他帮忙修改所附的剧本(script)。邮件内容包括：
1．故事简介；
2．请求帮忙；
3．商定碰面的时间及地点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Green，
How is everything going?
Yours truly，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mr Green ，
How is everything going? I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we
adapted for the upcoming English Evening.
The play is based on the story of Hua Mulan who，after disguising herself as a man，joined
the army instead of her father in the Northern Wei Dynasty.To us，however，the adaption of such
an epic is quite challenging and we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So would
you please spare some time to revise the draft script attached to this email? If possible，may I pay
you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Any of your professional advice would be highly appreciated.Best wishes.
Yours truly ，
Li Hua
