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写作规范练(十六)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(人物简介)
假定你是李华,你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会,介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。
请你写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.做出的贡献;
3.你的感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文
Tu Youyou
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese medical scientist.Determined to help those suffering from
malaria,Tu Youyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure.Luckily,her efforts paid off.In
2015,she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering artemisinin,
which is the key to the treatment of malaria.Behind her success were numerous failures and
setbacks,but never did she give up.
So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people,
including me.Inspired by her story,I decide to study harder so as to realize my dream.
Ⅱ.读后续写(动物获救)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One spring morning many years ago,I had been searching for gold along Coho Creek on
southeastern Alaska’s Kuprean of Island,and as I emerged from a forest of spruce(云杉) and
hemlock tree,I froze in my tracks.No more than 20 paces in the bog(沼泽) was a huge Alaskan
timber wolf—caught in one of Trapper George’s traps.
Old George had died the previous week of a heart attack,so the wolf was lucky.Confused and
frightened at my approach,the wolf backed away.Then I noticed something else: It was a
female,and her teats were full of milk.Somewhere there was a den of hungry pups(小狼) waiting
for their mother.
From her appearance,I guessed that she had been trapped only a few days.That meant her
pups were probably still alive.But I suspected that if I tried to release the wolf,she would turn
aggressive and try to tear me to pieces.
So I decided to search for her pups instead and began to look for tracks that might lead me to
her den.Fortunately,there were still a few remaining patches of snow.After several moments,I
spotted pups’ marks on a trail.
The tracks led a half mile through the forest,then up a slope covered with many rocks.Ifinally spotted the den at the base of an enormous spruce.There wasn’t a sound inside.Wolf pups
are shy and cautious,and I didn’t have much hope of inviting them outside,but I had to try.So I
began imitating the highpitched(声音很尖锐的) sound of a mother wolf calling her young.No
response.A few moments later,after I tried another call,four tiny pups appeared.They couldn’t
have been more than a few weeks old.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
I extended my hands.__________________________________________________________
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With her young to protect , she was becoming
aggressive._______________________________________________________________________
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参考范文
I extended my hands.They tentatively sucked at my fingers.Perhaps hunger had helped
overcome their natural fear.Then one by one,I placed them in a fur bag and headed back down the
slope.When the mother wolf spotted me,she stood up right.Possibly picking up the smell of her
young,she let out a highpitched,plaintive whine.I released the pups,and they raced to
her.Within seconds,they were sucking at her belly.
With her young to protect,she was becoming aggressive.What next? I wondered.So tender
were the pups that it was impossible for them to survive without their mother’s
protection.Hence,I had to release her.I fetched an iron bar.Using a rock as the supporting point I
unlocked the chain.After gaining freedom , she howled at me with her head low showing
gratitude.Watching the mother and her pups disappear in the forest,I let out a sigh of relief.