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写作规范练(十)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(投诉信)
假如你是中学生李华，最近在某个购物网站上购买了一双运动鞋，但收到货后发现了一
些问题，请给该网站写一封投诉信，投诉信主要内容如下：
1．写信目的；
2．不满之处；
3．表达期望(调换或退款)。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右(投诉信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
Yours，
Li Hua
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Dear Sir or Madam ，
I’m writing to complain about the sports shoes which I bought from your website.This
morning I received the shoes on time，but I regret to say that there’s something wrong with
them.
Firstly，I’m pretty sure I asked you to send me a white pair.The moment the mail box
arrived，I couldn’t wait to open it，only to find a red pair.To make things worse，I need a size
40 while you sent me a size 39，which is too small for me.Were I in it，I would get aching
feet.And it is of such bad quality—one of them even gets loose thread.
My concern is whether you will return me the money or have the shoes replaced and I wonder
who will pay the postage.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours ，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写(家庭亲情)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I still remember the day when we decorated the house.I was ten and it was two weeks before
Christmas.I was looking forward to my presents.Since I was the youngest in the family，all of the
family members would give me a gift one way or another.Sometimes it was a cookie or a hug but it
was always there.I was the only center of attention and I was feeling good.My uncles usually would ask me what I wanted before Christmas and that year I knew what I
wanted.It was the spaceship I saw in the ads.I was dreaming of opening a big gift box，and it was
there.But that year it came in a way that I wasn’t expecting.
It was two weeks before Christmas.Just two weeks.She couldn’t wait.My dear mother told
my father that it was time，and then we went to the hospital.After an hour，they told me that I had
a sister now.But I didn’t want a sister.I wanted a spaceship.The next few days went so fast.No one
was caring about me.Everyone was talking about her and I knew that my life was never going to be
the same ever again.I wasn’t ready to grow up，to be a big brother.But it just happened in an
instant.
On the day before Christmas，everyone was in our home，talking only about my newborn
sister.My family was becoming hers.Even my uncles didn’t ask me anything about the gift.She
stole everything I’d ever had，my life and my presents.Thinking about this，I cried to sleep.I
had a nightmare(噩梦) and woke up at the middle of the night.Shadows were all around me，and I
was defenseless and so weak.I ran into my parents’ bedroom but couldn’t wake up my poor
parents who were just too worn out.I was standing near their bed，trying not to cry when I saw
her.She was awake and looking at me with her big eyes in her small bed.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying.
After having comforted her，something slowly changed inside me.
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Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying.Panic at first，I then
realized that it was just a car passing by.But she felt uneasy，her mouth wide open，arms waving
and legs kicking.I thought she might be scared too，so I held out my hand to hold hers，patting
her on the back with the other.I even moved a bit closer to her little bed，whispering my favorite
song to her ears，just as my mum did when I got scared.Surprisingly，she seemed to understand
me and stopped crying.Looking into her big eyes，I breathed a sigh of relief.
After having comforted her，something slowly changed inside me.The sense of loneliness
was replaced by the responsibility of being an elder brother.Even though her arrival took over the
center of the whole family initially，she started to become the center of my attention too.With her
cute round face and sparkling eyes，she also won my love and care for her.I looked around and
found my parents，awake，smiling at me.With a shadow of a happy family cast on the window，I
felt my little sister was the best gift I’d ever got.
