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写作规范练(三)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(建议信)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack来信说最近他想在周末出去打工,但又怕影响学习,
因此他很苦恼,想要询问你的建议。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to know you’re unhappy at the moment.It’s difficult for us teenagers to keep a
balance between a part-time job and our study,so you don’t have to worry too much.Here are
my suggestions.
Firstly,think about the purpose of your finding a part-time job.I think it’s more important
to learn some life skills instead of only making some extra money at present.Secondly,try to find
a job that can fit in with your hobbies,which will make your work less boring.Last but not least,
make sure you set aside enough time for your study.
I hope you will soon feel happy and carry on as usual and that my suggestions will be of some
help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写(同学友情)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I looked up from my desk to see the teacher writing on the board:“Battle of the Books!”
She smiled and said,“This time it’s a team work.You’re going to be in teams of two,and set
a reading goal.Every team that meets their goal by the end of the month will get a prize!” The
lunch bell sounded before she could explain any more rules.
As I gathered my things,Liya passed my desk and said,“Teammates?” Since Liya and
I shared the same interest in graphic novel(漫画小说),and we took Hindi language class
together,we teamed up automatically.I was both relieved and excited to have my team.Then we
got to the cafeteria and quickly threw out a bunch of ideas of what to do at our table.
I looked to our third friend Kash , with whom the three of us always do stuff
together,“Kash,do you have ideas for us?” “Why would I give you guys ideas?” he
said gloomily(阴沉地).“I’ll save that for my team...whoever that is.Now I see how I rank inthe friendship lineup.” Kash replied in an angry tone.
I knew he was mad for a reason.If I were him,not only would I think that I ranked last in that
group,but I’d also be panicking about what team I could join.But now,I was on the inside and
Kash wasn’t.I felt like the only way to fix this would be three people on a team.So,as the
teacher walked by our table,I asked for her permission.What surprised me was that she had
intended to draw names to assign random groups,but didn’t get a chance to say it before lunch.
Awkward and frustrated,we were stuck in this dilemma.Having first teamed up without Kash
didn’t mean we didn’t like him.I knew we—especially I—wouldn’t be able to enjoy any prize
if our friend felt bad about being left out.So,I decided to do something to make it up for him and
convince Kash he was an equal friend.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that all three of us liked.
The next day,I handed my pages of apology to Kash.
参考范文
That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that all three of us liked.Thrilled
and inspired,I sprang in front of my desk,racked my brains and started drawing a few scenes of
three of us giggling,chattering and enjoying each other’s company like we usually did.On the
last page,I wrote,“Dear Kash,you are not the one left behind.Liya and I are so sorry about
the way we messed things up.” Pierced to the heart with guilt,I gingerly tucked the paintings
into an envelope,hoping this would be an icebreaker.
The next day,I handed my pages of apology to Kash.He took it,looking surprised at the
first sight.After he read it,an expression of intense joy illuminated his eyes.Blushed,I broke the
silence,“I’m sorry,dude.We should have talked to you.” With her eyes fixed on the floor,
Liya came over and apologized in a low voice,“You mean a lot to us.” Hearing her words,
Kash shook his head and beamed,“I was way too sensitive.” We exchanged a knowing
smile,realizing that sincerity,trust and communication were always the key to clearing up the
misunderstanding between friends.